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AtreiyaN7

Compounding the already incredibly annoying problem are the following two things: 1) She UNINDENTS the first line (which should be indented) and 2) she then INDENTS the second broken line (and makes me ten million times more angry by actually entering tabs).
avril 09 2015 07:32

AtreiyaN7

EXAMPLE OF TERRIBLE DIALOGUE:
“I am instructing you to tone down your line of questioning. It is obvious that it is undesired and unappreciated by this young woman. She has been through a great deal of opposition so far. We don’t know who she is, where she has come from and/or why she is here? In order to retrieve this information, you mustn’t be so aggressive in your questioning. We don’t know what makes her tick or explode. We don’t even now if she is aware of her powers within her mou...
avril 09 2015 07:53

AtreiyaN7

Which should give you a good idea about this author's writing skills (or lack thereof *shoots withering look at author*). That is so incredibly stilted and doesn't sound like anything a real cop would say - or even fake cops on tv shows. Also, it doesn't really make any kind of sense to me, and there are typos.
avril 09 2015 08:19