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AtreiyaN7

Also, my f---ing ass if what he wrote about a "major motion picture conglomerate" expressing interest in his completely idiotic novel is actually true (I'm 99% sure that it's a bald-faced lie).
mai 28 2015 11:45

AtreiyaN7

EXAMPLE OF BAD WRITING: ITs 10:30 p.m. After waiting patiently at Los Angeles Airports International arrival concourse, Milford returns from baggage claim with designer travel bags. During the meantime, his employer Paul Levitovich is involved in a cellphone conversation and has settled comfortably in the rear of the Maybach’s interior. Milford’s employer ends the call hushed, just as Milford arrives with the luggage. “Donte! Enjoy the cab ride home, we’ll talk later”…. “Ah! Milford,...
mai 29 2015 12:10

AtreiyaN7

Instead of "During the meantime," you could have used EITHER "In the meantime," or "Meanwhile," instead. Oh, and don't get me started on the "ITs" (that should have been "It's" with a fraking apostrophe, because it's a CONTRACTION). This author completely fails at apostrophe placement (and writing in general).
mai 29 2015 12:21