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AtreiyaN7
wonders if this horror novel she has to format will suck or will actually be a step above what she usually gets.
juin 06 2015 11:44
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AtreiyaN7
Checked some more of it, and I just found two lines of dialogue that had this giant gap of five blank lines in between them. It makes no sense and is totally wrong, so I just had to yank every single blank line in the manuscript. GG, author!
juin 07 2015 12:20 -
AtreiyaN7
DIALOGUE (totally take it back about his writing NOT being totally horrible): The odor of exposed intestines burst open was bad enough, but the alcohol in this fart added an extra poignant punch to the air.
juin 07 2015 12:23 -
AtreiyaN7
No, dear author, a fart does NOT add "an extra poignant punch" to the air (do you know what "poignant" means????). It adds pungency, buddy, pungency - that's the word you were probably reaching for. *sigh*
juin 07 2015 12:25
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