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AtreiyaN7

I am almost stunned at how totally stupid this story is now. In Chapter 14, Rasputin gets judged by the Romanovs and these heavenly beings/whatever called "Elders" (actually, I guess it's mostly the Elders doing the judging). The judgment involves illegal immigrant Porro okaying a ridiculous plan to have Rasputin's soul share his body. Why is Porro in Heaven? He had an accident in the desert and is having some sort of near-death experience.
juin 23 2015 01:40

AtreiyaN7

I have now come to the conclusion that this author should've burned the notebooks in which she wrote down her dreams and all her notes and totally given up on writing. You want to write some history-based flight of fancy about the Romanovs in Heaven? Do that in a separate book. You want to write about illegal immigration and two guys in Mexico trying to get to America? Do that in a DIFFERENT novel.
juin 23 2015 01:41

AtreiyaN7

P.S. Don't capitalize "Coyote" when you're using the slang term for human traffickers who smuggle illegal immigrants across the border (at first, I thought the author had some character nicknamed Coyote due to the improper capitalization).
juin 23 2015 01:41