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AtreiyaN7
says oh joy - the author with the bizarre d--- transplant thriller approved print!
juil. 28 2015 08:22
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AtreiyaN7
As to what to do with the original version: dessert whose name he didn't know.
juil. 28 2015 09:03 -
SporkFu
Thank you, both for the clarification, that/which I've never been able to keep straight, and for the rewrite ;)
juil. 28 2015 09:08 -
AtreiyaN7
Personally, I would further improve the revision by deleting "wine." It's unnecessary because most reasonably intelligent people know that port is generally a dessert wine.
juil. 28 2015 10:27
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