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says today's new manuscript is dumber than that other one: it's a romance novel about...(lesbian/bi) hookers who somehow end up buying a yacht and sailing to South America...
sept. 30 2015 02:49
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    AtreiyaN7
    Well, the genre SAID "Romance" in the database. This is actually more like a bad porn video in text form - and yes, one of the characters talks about buying a boat/yacht to reward themselves for, uh, good business? Whatever - it's not helping that the writing, punctuation, grammar, dialogue, and sex scenes are all bad.
    sept. 30 2015 02:50
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    AtreiyaN7
    If they're not hookers, then oops - unfortunately, I can't be arsed to actually read more of it than I did due to the dialogue in the sex scenes being so bad that I wanted to vomit.
    sept. 30 2015 02:58