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Laurel Leaves: Amell Shorts - Denerim Days 2 (ARTWORK ADDED 4/12/10)


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As some of you already know, I draw a lot of fan art related to my male Amell Warden, Legam, and his love interest, Leliana. I decided a little while ago to write some short stories on him, some involving Leliana and the events of Origins, others not. Like my first fiction with him - Seasons of Love - these shorts will have accompanying art to go with them.

You do not need to have read Seasons to understand these, though they may give you a better understanding of Legam's character. I will add updates and chapter links to this post and edit the topic title accordingly.

The collective title for these short is "Laurel Leaves" but is subject to change, as it's still a WIP.

Story 1: Denerim Days
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3 ADDED 4/11/10

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Note: As little is currently known in canon lore about the Rivaini people, I am taking several liberties on their culture, names, and language for these stories when pertinent. Legam's parents are Rivaini immigrants, so the way they think and live is different from typical Fereldens.

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Palwen heard the scrunch of small feet pounding against dirt seconds before the impact against his thigh.

Swearing in Elven, the vegetable merchant rubbed his leg before scanning his surroundings for the source of his discomfort. His search did not take long, spotting a small, russet skinned child by his feet. The boy rubbed his head, ruffling his dark, short hair. He looked up, emerald eyes locking with Palwen’s own hazel orbs, an apology already forming across the youth’s lips.

Recognizing the young human, Palwen grabbed the collar of the boy’s shirt, lifting him to his feet. The child sputtered a stream of several, “Sorry, so sorry ser!” before the elf managed to question him. Palwen smacked the top of the boy’s head – gently, but with enough force to startle the child into silence.

“Legam! Lad, where are you off to in such a hurry? And where is your mother?” Palwen folded his arms, looking down at the Rivaini human sternly.

“At home, ser.” The boy whimpered, rubbing the top of his head. Palwen sighed, his expression softening. Sometimes he forgot how timid the poor child was sometimes.

“I see. What are you doing in the market district, then? I’m fairly certain your mother doesn’t like you leaving the docks without supervision.”

“She doesn’t. I didn’t mean, but – ” Legam fumbled with his fingers, trying to find the right words. Palwen waited patiently, rearranging a few carrots in his cart while the boy tripped over his words. His awkwardness made the elf chuckle, shaking his head. It was hard to remain irritated at the lad, especially since the elf knew he never caused any mischief intentionally. One of the better behaved young ones in Denerim, and one of the few humans Palwen genuinely liked, along with the youth’s parents. Then again, the Rivaini were known for forming better relationships with nonhumans than other groups of their kind.

Shouts down the street yanked Palwen out of his musings, and sent Legam’s head jerking to the side.

A ruddy, mud-encrusted boy skid to a stop in the distance. He looked around the merchant square, until his gaze reached their corner of the bazaar. The filthy boy pointed, calling to his equally dirty comrades. “There’s the bugger!”

 Legam’s pupils shrank, his oversized front teeth biting into his bottom lip, “Billy’s beard,” he muttered. Palwen arched an eyebrow at the Rivaini goat-referencing mild curse, but the boy dashed down into a nearby alleyway before the elf could question him further.

“Don’t let ‘im git away!” One of the boys from the crowd – a dirty-blond ruffian – screeched as he rushed past Palwen’s cart, half a dozen of his fellow troublemakers in tow.

“Andraste’s flaming knickers,” Palwen grumbled, watching them pursue the Rivaini boy. The elf checked an old, cracked pocket watch he kept in the back of his cart. Late afternoon. Most customers came in the early morning or midday. He frowned, scratching at his auburn locks. Finally, the merchant turned to his sister, a fruit vendor situated next to his stall.

“Watch the cart for me,” Palwen barked, reluctantly backpedaling from his wares. He caught his sister’s terse nod before turning about, running towards the docks district.

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Legam wove through the back alleys, skirting around crates, ducking under barrels, and hopping over sacks of sundries. Though perhaps not as well versed in Denerim’s back allies as the local waifs, he knew them well enough by now to avoid most unwanted company.

Unfortunately, his body, already exhausted from his earlier sprinting into the market, barely met up with the demands required to flee his pursuers. Already his lungs burned for more air, his feet throbbed through his boots with each impact against the hard, unforgiving earth, and his legs tingled in agony – unable to hold even his feeble weight up much longer.

His toes caught on the corner of a box. Legam tripped, falling face first into the dirt. His endurance finally caved, legs and feet refusing to bring him further. Spitting the small amount of soil out of his mouth, Legam grunted, using his arms to shakily pull his exhausted form behind nearby barrels. The frightened child curled up into a ball, heat radiating from his flushed face, heart pounding so hard he felt his ears throb. Legam wiped the sweat from his brow, panting to regain his breath.

 The muffled cries of his hunters grew louder, clearer. Legam felt his body tense, and he inhaled deeply before forcing his mouth closed, his wheezing breaths slipping quietly in and out through his nose.

Footsteps crunched against the stone and dirt, accompanied by frustrated, threatening voices. Their noise increased, until Legam easily caught the faint whispers of their own ragged breathing. They drew so close now that Legam suspected if he dared peek above his temporary shelter, he could count the freckles on the red haired leader’s face.

He didn’t dare risk such a fancy. Instead, he squeezed his nostrils shut, hoping the other boys would leave before he needed air again.

“Come out, you bat-eared chicken!” One of the boys taunted – he didn’t know who. All their voices sounded the same to him – shrill, malicious, mocking. A cacophony of unpleasantness. Ignoring the taunt, chest heaving painfully, and head swimming from early asphyxiation, the Rivaini child clamped his eyes shut. Just wait a few moments, they’ll leave. He repeated in his head over and over, until his thoughts grew cluttered, his body begging for sweet oxygen.

Finally, the shuffling of steps faded. Legam waited several moments then finally relaxed his face, expelling his breath with a painful gasp. He leaned back against the barrels, panting softly once more, his vision adjusting to the light and shifting back into focus.

Legam hated days like these. Days when his mother insisted he go out and play with the other children. Unfortunately, though there were a few friendly faces on his street, inevitably the less agreeable sorts found their way out onto the docks district. They made sport out of bullying him, though Legam never gave them cause to trouble him so. The boy knew he and his parents were different than most Fereldens – the only other Rivaini he knew lived in the run-down apartments his family also resided in. Most other Denerimians, save perhaps the alienage elves, treated his kind with mild distain to outright contempt. At eight years old, Legam still pondered why on many occasions.

Suddenly, Legam felt the barrel behind him slide away, his source of support gone. He fell backwards with a startled yelp, slamming his back into the dusty, cracked patch of cobblestone. Before pain fully registered, a shadow loomed over Legam’s prostrated form. He blinked, squinting to first see a gaped-tooth grin, then the rest of the freckled boy’s sneering face.

The red head grabbed Legam’s shoulders, pulling him up into a headlock while the Rivaini boy squirmed weakly in protest, “Guys! I got ‘im!”

The rest of the gang scrambled back into the alley, cackling congratulations and expressions of glee amongst themselves.

Legam felt a fist contact with his cheek. His head jerked with the blow, the faint taste of copper seeping into his mouth.

“Give it back, Rivi.” he heard one of the other boys growl.

Legam licked the trickle of blood off his lip, “I didn’t take anything!”

Another punch, to the gut, forcing air out of his already sore lungs. Legam gasped in pain.

“Don’t lie. Rivi always steal stuff.” another boy – at least, he thought it was another boy – accused. “Me mum says yer all liars, heathens an’ cheats.”

“Yeah!” a third boy agreed, “And we know you stole my coin purse! Give it back!”

“I didn’t go near you until you started chasing me!” Legam grunted. A third punch, slamming into his nose. His vision exploded with white and yellow spots, warm and wet blood splattering across his face. More threats and wild claims assaulted his ears, but they were lost on the young boy, his ears ringing from the blows to his face. Their questions and threats fell on temporarily deaf ears.

Legam’s silence only goaded the boys on, fists and feet striking him again and again. His vision clouded again, then everything faded to black.

~*~*~

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He woke to muttering voices and dull, aching pain all over. Legam groaned, blinking as his sight slowly returned. Belatedly, he felt the sensation of movement, and slowly realized someone was carrying him.

“Good, you are waking up,” a familiar, accented voice greeted him warmly.

“… Dad?”

“I’m sorry it took so long to find him, Brishan.” Palwen’s higher voice apologized from somewhere in the background, “I knew I should have followed the boys, instead of getting you first.”

“No, no… It is good, coming to me first.” Legam’s father placated. “An elf chasing human boys, in dark alley? Not looking good to guards. You get in a lot of trouble. Me coming in not much better, true… But safer than you alone.”

“I suppose…” Palwen sighed. “Still, I wish I could have done more…”

Legam felt his father’s arm move, likely patting Palwen’s shoulder reassuringly. “Do not blame yourself, friend. Much appreciation for your help. I can get Legam home from here.”

Palwen sighed, “Are you certain?”

“Yes, of course. You did good, now go back. Don’t want your sister to worry, no?”

“This is true. Be safe, Brishan. You too, Legam.” The boy felt a small pat on the top of his head. Though soft, the impact still made him wince, his entire body aching.

Brishan continued walking, his footsteps clopping against wood instead of stone or dirt, indicating to Legam they drew close to the docks. The distant drone of seagulls further affirmed his assessment. Legam felt his father sigh.

“You can’t let boys keep beating you up. Must start defending yourself, son.” He berated lightly. Legam felt his insides shrink with shame.

“But they’re bigger than me. It’s scary.” He protested.

“Fear is human. Not shameful to be scared,” his father reassured him, “But must not let it control you. Should stand up, bullies will not last if you do.”

“I don’t like hurting anybody,” Legam whimpered, still resistant. His father sighed again.

“Ah, you have much of your mother’s soft heart. Is not always a bad thing, but must learn to be tougher eventually.” He stroked Legam’s hair gently. “But nevermind. Your mother is worried. Always upset when you get hurt. We clean you up at Fordel’s place first. Quick, but get rid of blood and dirt, so your mom worry less when she sees you. Okay?”

Legam nodded slowly again Brishan’s chest, closing his eyes again. He felt drained in every conceivable manner. “Can we eat soon?” he muttered. His father’s chest rumbled in a soft chuckle.

“Yes, yes… You need food, but bath first.”

Legam felt his father’s lips lovingly brush against his forehead. Despite himself, the boy allowed a small smile to tug on the corners of his lips before succumbing to exhaustion once more.

~*~*~

This hasn't been fully proofread yet and it's late, so apologies in advance for any errors. I'll try to hammer out the kinks later.

If you couldn't tell, Legam's father doesn't have the strongest grasp of Ferelden language. As you'll see in the next parts, his mother speaks it far better.

Modifié par DalishRanger, 01 avril 2010 - 08:50 .


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Sisimka

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So EARLY life, before the tower even. Interesting! He's endearing. :)

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Not much quirks to be found.

Good readings once more, nice introduction to Legam's early life, but after all the indignity you put him through in his adult life you could have spare him the backstreets bullies for a chapter or two :)

Born under a bad sign I guess ;)

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@Sisimka: Well, I did say early life in Denerim/how his magical abilities were discovered, so yes. Very early life. And he's always been a softie. XD

@Olwaye: Heh, well... He IS a Rivaini living in Ferelden. Regardless of the fact he was born there, he'd be considered an outsider. What little I've learned from his people from the Stolen Throne, I can tell Fereldens (and other human groups) don't like them very much, especially since they're usually not Andrasteans and Rivain is friendly to the quanari and Dalish.

He'll catch somewhat of a break in the next part though, don't worry. :)

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Great stuff again dalish, keep up the good work

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Enjoyed the this. Love the way you've done the Rivaini accent :)

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Thanks guys. :D Am currently out of the house on a laptop, but I brought my Word document for the short stories with me, so I'm going to try writing more while I'm sitting around waiting for my brother's class to end.

@MireliA: Heh, it's better than throwing some cheesy stereotypical spellings to show accent like "Zis iz so eeziting" or somesuch. But in his father's case, the writing has more to do with the fact that his Ferelden is a bit broken; vocabulary is pretty good, but he messes up the grammar. Legam's mother, as you'll see in the next part, speaks it far more eloquently.

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Very nicely done, DR. I especially love how you handled Legam's father's speech. And you have a far better ability to describe things than me, you know that?

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Aw, thank you. I wasn't sure if his speech sounded too cheesy or not.

Taiyama wrote...
And you have a far better ability to describe things than me, you know that?


I keep telling you, keep practicing and you'll improve. =]

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Oh, I know. I'm just pointing it out, though.

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Note to readers/lurkers: I will be posting up a second image tonight for the first part. Decided I wanted to get Legam's dad in here too. Dunno if I'll get part 2 up before I go to bed or not, but I will work on it.

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Is that some scars on Palwen skin? Another story to tell perhaps?

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Good eye, Olwaye! Yes, those are scars. No particular story to them though, beyond the typical human mistreatment of alienage elves.

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DalishRanger wrote...

Good eye, Olwaye! Yes, those are scars. No particular story to them though, beyond the typical human mistreatment of alienage elves.


Still a story in itself though, and a large one at that. A nice touch in your canon, tells a lot about  Palwen without actually saying much.

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I do try to add in the subtle details. Part of the fun of drawing characters, really.

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It does add to your work and pleases the nerdy like myself, indulge as much as you like.

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Will do! :D There's actually a little detail or two on Legam's father in the drawing I'm doing that you might find amusing if you notice it. Harder to see than the scars, though.

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Bumping just to note: Second image has been added to about the third section of Part 1's post.

@Olwaye: See if you can spot a certain subtle detail about Legam's father that might prove amusing. And I don't mean his ear. Yes, it's also big and goofy, but I don't think that's particularly subtle. :lol:

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Lovely pics, as always! Need more words now... ;)

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Other than some chest hair I can't spot anything particular on Legam's father

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The chest hair was what I was talking about. It's hard to tell with his shirt on, but it goes in the exact same direction as adult Legam's chest hair. Ah, genetics. xD

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Again, I'm posting this before I finish the artwork. I need to go out in a few minutes, so I figured before I drag my feet more on this, best to post up part 2. I'm not entirely sure I'm satisfied with his parents' talk at the end, so I might tweak it later.

It's been proofread a little, but I wouldn't be surprised if something slipped through the cracks. Something always does.

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Legam wiggled in his mother’s grasp as she fussed over his numerous bruises and scrapes. Though still quite sore, the bath refreshed the boy somewhat, and all he wished to do at the moment was sit down and put some food in his stomach.

“Oh, my poor sweet boy,” Tsura murmured, kissing a particularly dark lump above his left eyebrow, pulling her son to her protectively. Legam squirmed more.

“Mooom…” he whined.

“I never should have told you to go out today,” she berated herself, hugging her child closer. “It isn’t safe for you outside alone. We should make sure an adult is always on hand to watch you…”

Legam heard this speech several times in the past; always she blamed herself for his bully troubles, but in the end her desire to let her son enjoy the same relative freedom to roam outside as Denerim’s other youths always won out over her overprotective streak.

He wriggled in her grasp again, “Moooooom…” he heightened his pitch, growing more impatient.

Brishan observed the scene between his wife and child with folded arms and a crooked smile. He straightened from his post against the wall, stepping forward to clap a hand on Tsura’s shoulder.

“Okay, fuss no more at the boy,” he chuckled. “Must be starving after his ordeal, yes?”

Legam’s mother reluctantly loosened her hold, sighing, “You’re right. Come Legam, I already have a stew ready.” She picked up her son, kissing his cheek as they walked towards the small corner of their apartment that served as their dining area. Legam scowled at the maternal affection, but still wrapped his arms around his mother’s neck, sulking into her shoulder as she walked. He inhaled the faint scent of cinnamon on her – likely from her burning incense. Legam relaxed some, the familiar smell comforting him. His thoughts soon turned back to the  upcoming meal.

“It’s not lamb and pea stew, is it?” queried the boy warily. Tsura arched an eyebrow at him, a small smile tugging at the corner of her lip.

“No, it’s not lamb and pea stew. Why do you ask?”

“Pelwan’s sister gave me some once. It tasted weird.” Legam’s face scrunched up again, this time at the memory of the Ferelden dish, if it could be called such.

Brishan laughed behind them, reaching over to carefully ruffle Legam’s hair. “Ha! Born Ferelden might be our boy, but has palate of true Rivaini!”

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Soon after sating his hunger with a hot meal, Legam found himself in his bedclothes – an old, faded tunic and a pair of worn, but clean socks. He settled himself between the sheets of his bed, tired yet wide awake all at once. The child fidgeted at this contrasting pull of energy, rolling over to look at his amused parents. Part of him wanted to complain that he wasn’t tired, but after the day’s events, he preferred not to trouble his parents with his antics. The boy already felt guilty enough for worrying them yet again, and so instead Legam diverted his excess energy into a simple question.

“Why did you guys leave Rivain?”

The inquiry caught the two adults by surprise, evidenced by their widened eyes and slightly slackened jaws. Quickly, they recomposed themselves.

“What brings this on?” Brishan replied, clearing his throat.

Legam merely shrugged. “I dunno. Curiosity?”

Brishan smirked, rubbing his hairy chin, “What is Ferelden saying? ‘Curious cat dies’?”

“It’s ‘curiosity killed the cat,’ Dear,” Tsura corrected, smiling. Brishan nodded, snapping his fingers.

“Yes, that one!”

Legam furrowed his eyebrows, small spikes of pain streaking across his bruised forehead at the movement. He  ignored it. “What do cats got to do with Rivain?”

His parents laughed, shaking their heads as they smiled in amusement.

“Nothing, Sweetie, we’re just teasing you,” his mother assured. Legam pouted his puffy lower lip at her, “Oh, don’t sulk like that. We’ll tell you if you really want to know.” She looked to her husband expectantly.

Brishan shrugged. “Not much to tell. I cut wood, sell to towns. We farm to eat and sell extras.” He waved his hand in front of him, as if gesturing to a place far from their current location. “Rain, it does not fall for long, long time. Crops die, some trees wither. Very difficult to survive with little we have. We hear Ferelden very rainy, lots of crops. Much more important, there is many jobs available – Orlais just leave country a few years before. Ferelden need help rebuilding. So, we come to work in city, get paid so we can eat.”

“Why Denerim? Weren’t other places closer to Rivain? Like Highever?”

Tsura smiled, proud of her son’s sense of geography, especially at his age. Perhaps there were certain advantages to Legam’s indoor preferences. At least he put his time to productive use, reading every book and scroll he could get his small hands on. Which, with their salary, was not much, but the lad found ways to compensate – trading old books for new ones, doing small errands and tasks for merchants in exchange for some of their wares – which were always more books. She hoped this love of education brought her child to better opportunities when he matured than those open to her and her husband. That hope led her to encourage Legam’s bookish inclinations. Brishan shared her support, despite not sharing his son’s enthusiasm for the written word.

She set aside her rambling thoughts, addressing her son’s question, “Most Rivaini came to Denerim. There is strength in traveling in numbers. Besides, Denerim is Ferelden’s largest city – your father and I had the best chance at finding work here.”

“Especially work that requires little talk,” Brishan chuckled. “When we move here, my Ferelden not very clear. Hard to understand. It get better over the years.”

“… This is an improvement?” Legam eyed his father skeptically. The man glowered at him for a moment before bursting into a bout of self-depreciative laughter.

“Is a good thing for me your mother is so smart with words, eh?” Brishan grinned, amused by the boy’s emerging wit.

“So, is this interrogation going on much longer? Some boys need to rest after rough days,” Tsura reminded, winking at her son. Though she jested, Legam kept a somber façade.

“Do you ever miss Rivain?”

Taken aback by the question, his parents paused before answering, exchanging a glance between each other.

“Well… Of course there are things we miss about it,” his mother finally answered, blinking. “It was our homeland, and it will always hold a special place in our hearts. Why do you ask?”

Legam shrugged, “Things here just get bad sometimes.”

“Life in Ferelden hard, yes,” Brishan nodded, “But Rivain not perfect, Legam.”

“You’ll find wonderful people and horrible people everywhere, my boy,” Tsura added. “And no matter where you go, life will bring hardships your way. Pain is just as much a part of life as joy.”

Legam muttered incoherently, looking away. His mother smiled gently, tenderly lifting Legam’s chin with her fingers to bring his eyes more level with hers. “Have we ever told you what your name means, Legam?”

He shook his head.

Brishan rubbed his goatee once more, “‘Legam’ – is Rivaini for… What is Ferelden word? Laurel. Yes, that is it. Laurel.”

Legam arched an eyebrow slowly, careful not to strain his still swollen forehead, “… You named me after a plant?” His father chuckled.

“Nature-inspired names very common in Rivain. And you have very nice eyes – like color of laurel leaves.”

Legam felt his cheeks flush in embarrassment, and he grumbled once more. Tsura chuckled, cutting in.

“That isn’t the only reason we named you ‘Legam,’ though. Do you know what laurel leaves symbolize in Rivain?”

The boy shook his head again, though his eyes gleamed with curiosity.

“Laurel leaves mean many things to Rivaini,” she began, her soft smile spreading, “peace, victory, triumph, fame – sometimes they are given as a trophy to winners of competitions. But the meaning of triumph they carry entails it is a victory well earned after a long, inner struggle.”

Legam blinked, her words starting to sink a little.

“My child, when you were born, your father and I knew life would not always treat you kindly,” Tsura hugged him gently, “but we hoped such struggles would only strengthen you, to make you a better person.”

“Trials of life can embitter, my boy,” Brishan nodded sagely, “or they make you appreciate good things better. Make you strong. You must be like gift of laurel – earn it after growing through struggle.”

His mother gently ran the back of her fingers against his beaten face, “These wounds hurt now, but they will heal. Don’t let them discourage you. Learn from them.”

The boy pondered their words for several moments, “I… guess…” was the only answer he managed to gather. Both adults chuckled.

“All right, enough questions and sage advice for tonight,” Tsura kissed his cheek. “Get some sleep.” She rose from his bedside, making room for her husband.

Brishan squatted down, ruffling Legam’s hair, “Tomorrow, I teach you better dodging, yes?” He grinned as his son rolled his eyes. Straightening back up, he blew the candle by Legam’s beside out, then joined his wife at the room’s entrance.

“Sleep well, Legam.”

The door closed behind his parents, leaving Legam to his musings and soon, to his dreams.

Modifié par DalishRanger, 03 avril 2010 - 06:27 .


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That was a touching scene with the parents at the end. I especially liked the story of where his name came from. Love the 'Curious cat dies' :lol:.

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Too cute! I also liked the curious cat dies line. :)