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Finally read all of it. Took me almost my entire work week to pull it off in between working on my own piece and... uhh... actually working. I must say Chapter 25 had me rolling, I love Isabela's crew, Puy is GREAT! Lawler is a real champ and a softie (as Lel would say). And Chapter 27 had me in tears. Fiona's tale has to be the best backstory in all of Dragon Age's lore, I do sorely miss her and thus any piece that expounds upon her life is always good times, even if they do have me scarying the cleaning ladies with my unexpected sobby-facedness.



I even went out of my way to hook my broke ass PC up to my Xbox's tv so I could keep reading this at home because I had a tendency to be mid chapter when shift change would come.



Well done, Maria. well done.



Hardened Alistair actually bothers me, I guess I'm really used to consoling him with his Goldanna reunion, that I just can't help but try to protect him from the world. So yes, its really rough reading about his hard drinking, and flings *sad puppy dog eyes* but it really works well for the story. He never really had a life before Blight and his true love leaves him to his own devices with the weight of his (rather absent) crown on his shoulders, so he is forging his own identity.



Again Lawler is great. I <3 him in the most heterosexual way possible. I do enjoy how so much of the little things from the game, the impact of their decisions, are being fleshed out and are just not out and out shoved in our faces but rather some of them as Easter Eggs that dawn on the reader. This story is good times.



So keep it up, I thoroughly enjoy it, and I'm sure to gush about it once the next new installment arrives.

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Esbatty... Wow, what can I say? I'm extremely flattered...

I've been having some tough times in RL but I found writing this a great coping mechanism but that some people actually like it is really icing on the cake. So perhaps Alistair to some extent reflects my own confusion... I keep on saying this but one day he'll grow up...

I've signed up to attend a creative writing course next year in my local Further Education [community?] college...  and I'll probably be looking for a new job...

I'm glad you like Lawler, new Alistair needed a new friend so he came to be...

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I can't bring myself to take a CW course. I don't think I want to see a numerical value assigned to the quality of what I love doing. My love is a 42? *weeps* But its great that you want to explore and learn more about this craft that allows you to express yourself so well. I'm not artist so words are all I got so I'm totally with you on the coping qualities of the written word.



But yes, keep it up, it is awesome and I love having things to look forward to... especially if I can read them. I really miss reading (damn siren call of DAO and ME)

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Maria13 wrote...
I've signed up to attend a creative writing course next year in my local Further Education [community?] college...  and I'll probably be looking for a new job...

Don't let them ruin you!  Those things can be good and bad.

So glad that writing has been therapeutic (*hugs*).  It could have gone the other way, muses are such fragile things.

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Chapter 37

Dragon 9:34            Umbralis/Firstfall-Cassus/Haring                       Orzammar                      [Present]
Alistair was pleased with his farewell, it was touching when people expressed their feelings for you be it as friends or lovers, or a bit of both, and it was something, truth be told, he did not think he would ever get enough of, however long he lived: Affection. He bent down smiling to allow Adal to adjust the scarf round his neck, embraced Oswyn and told him he would be fine and pried off Dean with an friendly clap on the back when he threw himself at him, wondering briefly how many friends Dean must have lost in his years as a Templar, because judging by his emotionality it could be a few.

The dwarves were also dismissed with fondness, Dolgan’s niece casting a meaningful look in Alistair’s direction as she embraced him, which he pretended not to notice.

The only one who seemed to have no-one was Marcus who stood very straight and somewhat apart from the rest of them, fussily inspecting his bow and his arrows and his leather armour, although Alistair knew for sure that it had all already been checked because he had made a point of ensuring everyone had buddied up to do just that.

So they set through the archway down the steps through the gallery that opened up into the Deep Roads. They deviated slightly so Khegst could pick up his bronto. A beautifully ugly hulk of an animal called Mabya who lowed gently when she saw Khegst and started to nuzzle the redheaded, miner caste dwarf in search of lichen while he clapped her cheerfully on the back asking her how she had been.

Although he had been charged several times by enraged brontos in his previous foray into the Deep Roads, not an experience he particularly wanted to repeat, Alistair had never had time to study a bronto from close up. She looked as though she had been born with her own armour, her very tough hide actually seemed to lay at certain points like plates over her bulk, her horn at its root was as thick as a tree trunk, her top lip appeared to be split and she had deep dark brown eyes.

“She’s harmless” Khegst who was beardless assured him finally feeding her some green stuff that he extracted from a pocket, “she’s actually a lovely gentle beast… Aren’t we Mabya, baby?” He exclaimed stroking her ungainly horned nose as she made satisfied chomping noises.

Alistair put his hand out to her palm upwards, and to his surprise Mabya opened her big mouth revealing a long black pointed tongue and licked it. Her tongue was very rough but fortunately for his skin, also very wet. Khegst who was putting a complicated leather harness on Mabya laughed at Alistair’s appalled and surprised expression and then pretended not to watch as Alistair attempted to dry his hand on the cavern wall.

“She does seem charming…”

“She definitely likes you Topsider, what can I say? You must smell good to her or something… She’s making all sorts of noises…”

“Really?” Said Alistair, “I can’t hear any noises…”

“Yes…” Replied Khegst looking up at him puzzled from where he was kneeling to adjust the harness over Mabya’s immense stomach, “She’s making these sort of huffing noises…”

“I don’t…”

“Lay your hand against her throat, Topsider.”

Alistair did and sure enough he could feel some deep rolling vibrations from the creature’s gullet but he still could not hear anything… “How strange…”

“Tell you what, Topsider, this is really interesting, bring the other one, Marcus, here and one of my brothers… Let’s see what they have to say…”

Therefore, Alistair persuaded Volkur and Marcus to have a closer look at Mabya. Marcus looked at her somewhat timorously and kept his distance, whereas Volkur simply went up to her and thumped her on the side.

“For luck,” he explained. Mabya lifted her head and bellowed approvingly at him.

“Well I heard that…” Said Alistair.

“But you don’t hear anything now…” Said Khegst, standing having secured the harness.

“No… Do you hear anything Marcus?”

“Not after that bellow, no…” Said Marcus, his forehead wrinkling…

“Volkur?” asked Khegst.

“Definitely,” Replied the other dwarf, “It is a typical ‘bronto’s song’, a sort of deep rumbling within the rock…”

“But neither of the Topsiders can hear it…” said Khegst “By the stone! That is…” He appeared to be lost for words.

“No wonder the brontos that attacked us last time seemed to me to come out of nowhere, but Oghren was never caught unawares… It just never struck either of us that he was hearing something I couldn’t…”

“Intriguing.” Finished Khegst.

“There seems to be a real stone sense, after all,” Alistair nodded in agreement.

In any event, since Mabya had now been harnessed they began to load her up with such things as potions spare weapons and armour and food supplies.

“She can easily carry far more than your average ox…” Boasted Khegst, “This is as nothing to her… We used to use her for bearing boulders, gems and ore…” and he patted the beast’s vast side.

Mabya was many things but she was not fast so the party found itself adapting to her steady swaying gait as she and Khegst brought up the rear.

“They are very valuable, worth the yearly income of many families, and rare now, unfortunately,” Dolgan murmured to Alistair.

Since Alistair had gotten to know somewhat about Dolgan and Khegst he thought now perhaps, it was Marcus’ turn, so he matched his steps to those of the rogue. “No-one back there to say goodbye to you…” he commented, perhaps he noted as the words left his mouth, a little insensitively.

Marcus did not seem to mind, “Oh,” He replied, “I have folks and no doubt I’ll be seeing them soon,” he looked tired and drawn and had a slight Orlesian accent.

“Good to know.”

“Surprised to meet you here, though…” added Marcus, I would have loved to assist with the Blight but the call never came…”

“So you were one of the Wardens poised to…”

“Indeed I was.”

“I see.”

“You are not as I imagined you would be…,” remarked Marcus.

“And how did you imagine me?”

“Older, more serious, less quirky… More… Tormented. Please don’t take offence.”

“None taken. I am as I am… and I do have my dark days,” Said Alistair smiling.

“Don’t we all,” murmured Marcus, “don’t we all…?”

                                                                                           ~~...~~

After saying goodbye to Alistair Oswyn was tempted to go back to the Shaperate but somehow he felt that would be running away from what he had been commissioned to do so instead he turned to Dean and said, “Let’s go back to that hiding place of ours and talk, shall we?”

They sat facing each other across the table, Oswyn had got himself some water, “Alistair was plying me yesterday.” He explained, while Dean helped himself from the cask.

“I need to get a new one soon,” He said.

“So you were hooked on the stuff?” He asked Dean, “What’s that like?”

“Miserable.” Said Dean, “Not at first of course, at first it feels as if your feet have wings and you are the strongest most powerful most intelligent man in Thedas… Mages are nothing to you. Suddenly all those hours of meditation that it takes to master some of the Templar skills seem unnecessary, because on the blue-eyed beauty, it takes you barely a minute. You can almost do a cleanse area, an incredibly powerful spell, at whim. Then the next day you wake up… And you’re just you again, and being just you is suddenly hard work, harder than before… So then you begin looking forward to the time you can take the stuff again and feel all those positive things and powers flowing through you…”

As he said this Oswyn observed that Dean embraced himself, “Yes,” said Dean noticing he had noticed, “It makes you feel that good. And you really begin to dread coming down and loosing it all, then you actually start hating you, hating yourself as you are, without the beauty. That’s when you are really getting hooked…”

“What does lyrium taste like?”

“Sweet, sickly sweet, sweeter than anything in creation has a right to be…”

“Bring me one of the bottles that you are certain is lyrium…”

“Alright.”

Dean was gone a few moments, then came back, and put a flask containing a bright crystalline blue liquid on the table between them.

“So how do you know this is lyrium?” Asked Oswyn.

Dean picked up so the light from the sconce fell directly on it and shook it gently, “It shines, see? Great colour, sparkling blue but not too deep, too deep and it’s either not lyrium or it’s turning… No sparkle, it’s not lyrium.”

“How long does lyrium keep?”

“If the bottle is well sealed and properly stored, for about five years”

“And it changes colour when it starts to loose its power, you say?”

“That’s right,” Replied Dean, “It starts going turbid and dull, gets darker…”

“Can it be dangerous like that?”

“It can but it becomes virtually undrinkable, so…”

“Right. Do any of the bottles we have have dates on them?”

“If they do, I’ve never noticed…”

“Okay, so we will just have to judge by the colour…”

“Correct.”

“Tell me about strength…”

“What do you mean?”

“I think I mean the amount of lyrium to water.”

“Well, anything less than a tenth is useless. To me anyway, some say they’re hypersensitive… I really dunno.” Dean shrugged.

“Can it be too strong?”

“Yes, for non-mages anything over half could be risky. It just takes so long to wear off, you become confused rather than in control… You could stay like that. Permanently.”

“And for mages?”

“My understanding is that most of them can tolerate about up to two thirds… It does vary from person to person…”
“And how can you tell the strength?”

“Apart from opening it and trying it? Colour. Not very accurate but it’s all we have to go on. Never buy ‘lyrium’ in anything but a clear flask… It’s not gonna be lyrium… I only bothered to store clear flasks here, the rest I just left…”
“Did you make any record of when and where the lyrium was confiscated?”

Dean shook his head, clearly uncomfortable, “I can read and write, just about, but I’m not a literate man, really, it didn’t occur to me… The flasks are more of less in order of when I and the guards confiscated them, so the oldest, according to that date are in room one.”

Oswyn laced his hands together and stretched them palm outwards, “No problem, Dean, no-one is perfect but it means we’ve got a lot of work in front of us. I suggest we use some flasks against a pale background as a gauge for purity. Therefore, we set them out in a row and can use them as a reference to classify the others. Is it possible for you to…? Ah, we could use a sheet over that old shop counter… So this bottle you brought me here, from its appearance how strong would you say it was?”

                                                                                       ~~...~~

For what remained of the first day, they had kept to the main thoroughfare of the Deep Roads and had no real encounters of any significance save for a small group of spiders that they swiftly dispatched and from which they salvaged some venom for possible later use.

After walking for some six hours Dolgan determined that, it was time to set camp and they lit a small fire and prepared to settle down for the night and consume the freshest rations leaving the more austere salted nug meat, fish, and dried fruits for the latter parts of their journey. Not to forget the cheese wheel, though, he was quite looking forward to starting that. Alistair had some bread with a lick of butter, a boiled egg and a few apples he had sent the soldiers to the surface market to buy for him.

He offered one of the apples to Marcus who, distractedly, said “Merci”, and who when Alistair replied, “Pas du tout…” suddenly smiled and then looked away.

After their improvised meal, Dolgan summoned Alistair and spread out a parchment map on the dry ground before the fire. Alistair was impressed but Dolgan just grunted and said that Volkur’s Shaperate training had been put to good use. Sitting back on his knees, Volkur smiled happily.

Raising his eyes to him from where he was squatting, Alistair noticed for the first time that neither he nor Khegst were so-called dusters but they both seemed to interact quite amicably with Dolgan who was, and had no problem accepting his authority. Alistair felt that this was a definite plus for the Wardens, that they could bring people together like this. Unexpectedly, he felt a little of the pride he used to have in belonging to the order returning.

“Now, young Surfacer, since you’re somewhat of a late joiner to the team I’ll go over our plans with you. The rest of you might just want to listen in to refresh your knowledge. Anyway, here’s where we are, and here’s where we’re hoping to join up with the legion. That should be no later than around this time the day after tomorrow.” Dolgan pointed at the two locations on the map. Alistair nodded.

“Once we get there our mission’s to assist the Legion in retaking Glogar’s Passage which leads off from Ortan Thaig to the north east. There’s not enough detail on Volkur’s map here, not his fault no-one has taken care to survey it, as far as we know, but, my contact in the Legion informs me that there are three main cavern system branching off from the Passage, two to the left and one to the right as you exit from the Thaig.

The idea’s that once we join with the Legion they’ll split off into four groups, one to guard the entrance to the Passage from the Thaig, the other three to take each of the three branches. We in turn’ll split up into three groups, two of two and one alone, each group of two wardens’ll go with one of two Legion parties, the solitary will be the only Warden in the third party… We’re to act as glorified scouts to alert them of Darkspawn presence and help them flush every last of one of those nug humping sons of a plague-ridden brood mother out…” he growled, “I guess we’ll have further details once we meet up with the Legion. Any questions so far?”

Khegst asked whether Dolgan had determined the pairs yet, Dolgan shook his head. “I haven’t come to any final decisions thus far… I won’t be putting the Surfacers together, I probably won’t pair you with Volkur, and I won’t be in the same group as Alistair, for obvious reasons, but that’s it… I’m open to suggestions.”

Khegst opened his mouth but Dolgan interjected, “As far as Mabya’s concerned we’ll be leaving her with the fourth Legion group where she should be safe.” Khegst nodded satisfied.

Alistair had been allocated the fourth watch so he bundled up his cape to act as a pillow on a dry bit of surface took off his gauntlets, sabatons, and most of his leg and arm armour and tried to settle down for what he had of the night on the hard ground.

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Oswyn and Dean spent most of the remainder of the day carting lyrium flasks back and forth. After a good few hours effort they had discarded about two dozen bottles and had established on the sheet a purity reference scale composed five bottles of different lyrium concentrations that they used to classify the flasks they retained into five rough groups.

Oswyn was quite happy with what they had achieved that day because he was sure they had made a solid start even if limping from room to room carrying flasks was very tiring for him and becoming painful. He was also grateful for Dean’s continued good humour and his banter, unsurprisingly, he had a lot of Templar and low life yarns to spin some of them pretty bawdy. Therefore, when evening came he took him to the place where he had previously dined with Alistair and they shared an excellent tasting stuffed nug, garnished with some really savoury mushrooms.

“Ya know,” said Dean between licking his fingers, “You should get a stick. To help you along I mean, help your balance…”

Oswyn looked over at him, “I’ve really been trying to avoid that…,” he said somewhat frigidly.

“Yes, I get what you say but there is no advantage in hobbling, you just get tired more quickly and your overall posture is affected and not in a good way.”

Oswyn thought this over, it made some sense.

“Plus,” added the Templar, “a good stick is not just a stick, it’s a staff, which wielded properly can be a formidable weapon…”

“That’s…”

“Never done any stave fighting? With your upper body strength that could be a winner.” Said Dean looking up at him from his meal, “I could give you the basics and when you get back to Denerim, you could find someone that would help you develop further… I used to know a few names. Chantry types mostly, brothers and sisters… Pretty nifty with a stick some of those.”

“Sounds… Interesting…”

“Oh, I can see you like a challenge, Oswyn, and that’s why he chose you… Me, I’m good at what I do and that’s why he’s using me. Quite a good judge of character, our prince.”

Oswyn was in fact in such a good mood that he later took Dean to Tapsters and drank too much. Although he had been in Orzammar for far longer than Oswyn Dean had never previously ventured into Tapsters, “Too dwarven, know what I mean?” but he found that drinking created a universal sense of brotherhood and took to the overall atmosphere like a fish to a pond… A pond full of alcohol. Moreover, once he had discovered that they stocked some Surfacer brews, there was no turning back.

And so it was that when someone knocked on the door of their little den the next morning and Oswyn stumbled/limped to open it, almost tripping over the sheet as he went and clutching the flasks so they didn’t break, mumbling rather incoherently “I’m coming, coming…” because Dean was way too far gone in a stupor, it was with much less than his usual clear head.

He was surprised therefore; when he got to the door and finally unlatched it, that nobody appeared to be there. “What the…”

It was then that he felt a tug on his surcoat and thought to look down. Only to see a pretty round face with rosy cheeks and deep blue eyes gazing straight at him from just over waist-height. “Good morning,” said a very wide mouth in the round face, “You must be Oswyn, I’m Zinthal Harrak, Alistair sent me to help you… Pleased to meet you.” And she thrust a little hand up towards him.

                                                                                   ~~...~~

The next day they encountered some Darkspawn, who must have thought they were safe wandering along the ancient dwarven thorough fare. Surprisingly the first one to detect them was Mabya who started whinnying and tugging at Khegst in alarm but soon the group of Wardens were flooded with the stifling sensations of Darkspawn proximity and something Alistair seemed not to have felt in a long, long time, righteous rage. It was exhilarating and refreshing, flooding all his senses with scarlet… Suddenly, the small party became a blur of activity.

Marcus started firing his bow to deadly effect. Dolgan gestured to the rest of them, when Alistair approached him he barked, “the emissary, Surfacer, get him…” and Alistair then saw nothing but the rather small genlock with a weird hat standing in a pool of green iridescence. Something in his head clicked smartly into place, and with a deep yell, he made for the creature, blind to anything else.

Most of the Darkspawn party were genlocks, and he found it relatively easy to run them down, knock them out of the way or leap over them if necessary, two however were hurlocks and one seemed to be protecting the emissary. Alistair managed to side step him by seeming heading in one direction and then switching in a matter of seconds to another, just as he had thought he had gained on the emissary however, it let out an agonised howl and an arrow seemed to sprout from its left eye socket, what the ****…

But the creature wasn’t dead yet was it? Therefore, he swung Starfang in a wild arc and dealt it a fatal blow to the side of the neck, feeling a satisfying thud as the blade bit into its flesh and its blood sprayed over him in a warm shower. The hurlock he had dodged was almost on top of him but he hit out blindly at it with his shield turning quickly and side swiped it so it staggered back. Then he went for it with all the savagery he had been saving for the emissary…

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Yay, Wardening! It sounds like he took an arrow to the eye? Image IPB

And, Alistair the Bronto Whisperer.. I love it.

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And, Alistair the Bronto Whisperer.. I love it.



This is exactly what I thought Addai. :happy:

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Well I've always said I'm dying to see Alistair as a Regulator. But the screen might melt, especially if lydlyd does it.

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Yep, it would be total meltdown. *pant*

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I really enjoy Dean's story, his little girl held in the tower. I got teary eyed with him.



And Oswyn has grown on me, In game he was a means to an end but now I gotta revisit him in my current playthrough.

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@Addai, regulator?



@Tegai glad you enjoyed, I liked the picture too...



@Esbatty Oswyn in the game is a cipher... I just wondered what would happen to him if he recovered... In any event he seems in a better position than Irminric who is hallucinating...

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Maria13 wrote...

@Addai, regulator?

@Tegai glad you enjoyed, I liked the picture too...

@Esbatty Oswyn in the game is a cipher... I just wondered what would happen to him if he recovered... In any event he seems in a better position than Irminric who is hallucinating...

How in the blue blazes do you remember all their names?!? I'd forget Goldanna's name if it wasn't pasted above her damn door everytime I took Alistair into Denerim.Image IPB

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Well, I took a special interest in everybody who's confined in Howe's dungeon because I wanted to know what their backstories were. Also I wrote a short story about Irminric, so... I guess I cheated...

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Maria13 wrote...

Well, I took a special interest in everybody who's confined in Howe's dungeon because I wanted to know what their backstories were. Also I wrote a short story about Irminric, so... I guess I cheated...

Pfft, thats not cheating. *bites fist*

I'm impressed by the homework you've done for your story. I'm more of a from the hip kinda guy. *applauds*

I literally cannot wait for the next chapter. Bronto-whisperer indeed!Image IPB

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Chapter 38

Dragon 9:34
                            
Cassus/Haring                                               Orzammar                                                          [Present]

Oswyn did not know what to do with the proffered hand but since its owner was female, appeared to be wearing lots of jewellery and claimed to have been sent by Alistair, he decided to kiss it.

The hand's owner giggled and then asked, "Do all Topsiders have such exquisite manners?"

Oswyn guessed then that he had been expected to shake rather than kiss but there was no reason why he should not come over as very smooth so he bowed slightly which made her giggle again and said. "Only the best of us…"

"Oh," she said and she actually seemed to squee, "You are so like Alistair, KING Alistair, I mean…"

"I think you better come in, milady, so we can talk…" Even through the fog of his hangover, he had realised that it was not the most discreet thing in Orzammar to be nattering with a very excitable lady dwarf right on the doorstep of your 'secret' hideout.

She entered fearlessly. "Ah" she said turning about in the passageway, her blue eyes darting everywhere, "I remember this place…"

"You do?" Oswyn asked somewhat surprised.

"Jarvia's old hideout… You do know I'm a brand, right?" Moreover, she pointed to the scar on her left cheek just below the eye. "Quite a few of my family members had ties to her carta… When you are a duster sometimes your only choice is between collaborating with crime lords or dying slowly of starvation…"

"I've seen Dust Town… That must be a horrible situation to be in.," said Oswyn and he meant it, yes, people were poor in Ferelden and many lived hard lives but there were none beyond the ken… Why even a bastard could become a king. Ah! He was forgetting the elves…

He took her into the makeshift kitchen and offered her a human sized chair she did her best to clamber on to it. He noticed that she did not remark on or even seem to notice his limp. Briefed, he thought.

"Sorry," He said, "Can I get you some water, or would you want a beer?"

"Oh Oswyn, it is even too early for a dwarf to start drinking…" She said clasping her hands on the table in front of her, she wore several gold bangles and they clanged pleasingly.

"Water then?"

"No need." She shrugged. "Now how can Zinthal assist you?" Se said looking directly at him.

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After the fight, Alistair had volunteered to go and look for Mabya. Apparently, the strategy regarding the bronto was that as soon as they were attacked she would be let loose and allowed to follow her natural instincts and hide. She would then have to be fetched back.

"Legend has it, Surfacer," Khegst had told him, "that they can become invisible when evading foes…" Well, that might be stretching his credibility a bit far but after their observations on her lowing, he could not write anything off, he guessed.

He had volunteered because, although he was tired after the fight, he was also feeling a little shaky and jumpy. This was quite normal for him, and in the circumstances, he did not usually make very good company. He thought a walk alone would allow him to calm down and gather his wits as well as get away from the others for a bit; he always felt crowded after a battle and needed space.

The fight had also brought back all sorts of memories of when he was down here before with Neriya and in particular how she used to help him relax after this kind of encounter. They were all fairly creeped out then, except for Oghren who was too drunk, usually, to be creeped, but who provided some very welcome comic relief.

Of course they didn't have the intimacy of a tent while in the Deep Roads but when they found what they thought was a safe area, Neriya and he would sit apart from the others for a time and he used to put his head in her lap while she stroked his hair, sometimes they would talk, sometimes there wasn't much to say… Often he would fall asleep. He really missed that so much. Being with someone whom he knew and trusted every day… Women like Adal and Isabela were fine and he enjoyed their company as well as the rest of it, but he suspected he was a bit of a trophy for them, what would happen, as he got older and less desirable?

There did not appear to be any sign of Mabya at the moment, he decided to whistle quietly. After a few minutes and a few more steps, he thought he saw a shape detach itself from one of the shady cavern walls. Sure enough as he drew nearer it was her, he held out some of the moss he had gathered from the rock walls as he went, Khegst had shown him which type she preferred.

Mabya's strange top lip split, her black tongue came out and she licked the moss from his hand and then nuzzled his shoulder, whinnying gently. She could make all sorts of different sounds, he had noticed. He ran his hand over her nose, noting even there how rough her hide was while she chomped and told her she was the prettiest bronto he had ever seen, which was, of course, very true.

Her packs seemed intact but he checked anyway, just in case. He picked up her leash and she seemed happy to follow him so they made their way slowly back.

                                                                                       ~~...~~

"Well," said Oswyn, "One of the things Alistair asked me to do was to ensure that when he returns to Orzammar in future his visits are treated discreetly… He enjoyed that proving the day before yesterday very much, but, essentially, he is a simple man and he would like to come and go without too much fuss and no more provings… I don't know whether you could assist me with that? He will always be happy to meet with Harrowmont but would prefer such meetings to take place in private… Alistair, of course, would like this to be arranged without giving offence to anyone. I think this could benefit Orzammar, too, discretion is always helpful in relations between states and sovereigns..."

Zinthal's little fingers played on the wood of the table. "Seems simple enough, Oswyn. You know councillor Dulin, Dulin Forender?"

"Yes we were introduced the other day…"

"He's your man. Harrowmont likes to make much of your King's visits because it makes him look more powerful and influential, but I think there could be a compromise here… I mean Dulin might suggest some discretion in exchange for the occasional 'official' visit but I can't see that they would be opposed to this… They'll probably just want something back. It would just be a question of making an agreement that makes both sides happy…"

Oswyn nodded. He could have reached this conclusion himself, of course, so he wondered what use Zinthal was going to really be. Then she said.

"Oswyn, one of Dulin's favourite mistresses loves furs… She occasionally walks around in a fur coat, and rumour has it that's all she's wearing, that's unnecessary of course really, but it does attract attention. The kind she wants. They say her bed is covered in furs, and she likes to entertain on them… "

"What kind of furs?"

"The type you can't get down here… Almost anything, fox, bear, ermine… Are there ermines in Ferelden? Ermine usually comes from Orlais, they say…"

"Oh, there are ermines in Ferelden for sure…" Sometimes being a country boy came in handy; there were quite a few stoats or ermines (stoats in their winter coat) around Dragons Peak. Oswyn had been unaware before now that fur was a commodity in Orzammar, it certainly wasn't in Ferelden, and stoats were practically considered vermin there.

"So" said Zinthal, "If you give him some furs you might get a better deal from him than you otherwise would. I would suggest you invite him to a friendly supper one evening, indulge in some banter, he really is a nice enough guy, give him a pressie and then press your case. And don't drink too much, Oswyn…" She said eyeing him, "It is obviously not for you…"

Oswyn nodded, he had changed his opinion about Zinthal.

Zinthal cleared her throat, "You can take me along, if you wish… I could smooth things over, a little," she said.

"But how could I justify taking you to such a meeting…"

"There is only one way a man can justify taking a woman like me anywhere, Oswyn"

He thought he might have detected a touch of sadness in her voice."Can I think about it?" he asked.

"Of course you can, I would suggest you arrange the meeting for a few days' time…"

                                                                                          ~~...~~

"Comment avez-vous apprendre l'Orlais?" Asked Marcus.

"Grâce à ma chérie belle-mère…"

"Ah oui?" Asked Marcus.

"Wonderful woman, Isolde, gave me a perfect appreciation of the language, especially terms like 'le petit bâtard' or 'le fils de p***'**… and I had to call her belle-mère. My stay in the Chantry helped improve on it, if not on the irony."

"Surfacers…" Snarled Dolgan from behind them, "Stop twittering in that unholy language…"

Alistair laughed and Marcus grunted.

"Oh well, so much for further practice…" Alistair turned round briefly and mock saluted Dolgan who growled at him again.

"Don't try my patience Surfacer…"

"And that mark on your neck?" Marcus seemed to be very much in a questioning mood today, thought Alistair.

His scarf had obviously slipped a little, "Battle injury. Got in a fight with a lady, on a mattress… She started it…"

Marcus grinned. "I trust the lady was all right…"

"She is perfect, in all possible meanings of that term, if a little tiring."

"Those are the best ones," Said Marcus, "The ones that tire you out… So you don't have to think…" His eyes glazed over for a moment, then he added quietly, "The taint makes wh***s of us all…"

"What did you say?"

"That the taint…" Marcus cleared his throat, "makes wh***s of all of us…"

"Meaning?"

"It increases all our appetites…"

"But surely we should be able to resist…"

"Like yourself, you mean?"

"I am a bad example, I am a very weak man, I have never pretended to be anything else, but…"

"I think it's fairly certain that we all feel the compulsion."

"But compulsion is one thing… Surrendering to it, quite another."

"You were with Neriya were you not?"

"I was, yes."

"You were… Together."

"Yes."

"Would you take my word for it that the strength of attraction between wardens of different genders is virtually irresistible? I obviously mean where their sexual preferences are compatible."

"No. I wouldn't."

"But you don't know…"

"Well, I've only ever met two female wardens and I wasn't in any position to widen my acquaintance with the second one… Marcus, why are you asking this?"

"I…" Marcus suddenly looked incredibly sad.

"Do you feel guilty about something? I don't know you very well but you seem a good man to me."

"It is nothing." Said Marcus sighing.

As he settled down to sleep that night, Alistair ran through their conversation again. Marcus seemed very down, very melancholy as if he, like Alistair were visiting places in the past to which he could never return. The Deep Roads themselves were depressing, of course, Alistair thought back to what Lady Hel… Adal had said about finding them disturbing, she had the right of it, he guessed. There was too much past here and not enough future, not a human or a dwarven future, it seemed anyway.

Also he was beginning to feel dirty, after a few years of being able to wash and shave and wear clean clothes every day, he realised he had grown used to it. Now, he was acutely aware that every minute he spent down here he was being covered by more grime and filth: it was incrusted under his nails and in his hair, in his ears, even the corners of his eyes felt gritty. They had barely enough water for him to wipe off the gore after the battle, it was needed for drinking. Yes, there were water sources particularly around most of the Thaigs but not really, on the roads themselves and they needed to make haste, not stop off to clean up. His face was covered with stubble. He knew he smelt, they all did…

Mabya did not seem to mind, though, shortly after he laid down and when he still in the tossing and turning stage she plonked, there was no better word for it, herself down right behind him with a huff, and soon she bowed her head and closed her eyes this time he could hear the occasional rumble from her throat as well as bronto snores. It helped him sleep sooner.

                                                                                    ~~...~~

The next day Dolgan called him aside, "Alistair," he said, then he paused for a while all hunched over, his mouth moving, then he looked up at him, "You're going to go with Stone Orchid and her squad."

"Stone—"

"The name's a nick, only female squad commander in the Legion, she's a cruel b****, even by the standards of the legion, but incredibly effective… And before you ask why you… I can't do that to Marcus, he's at a delicate stage, Khegst and Volkur are too young she'd pull'em to pieces and then ****** on 'em. I'd do it I really would but, I… I have a relative in the Legion and she already hates his guts and he has to fight with her…"

"And why do you think I could cope with her…"

"Apart from the fact you're the only one left? You've been through a lot, a hell of a lot, which must mean that somewhere you're tough, as well as pretty. You fought well yesterday, by the way, but you already know that, don't you? You're sarky, probably drive her to nug pegging, catch her off guard… Most of the others are just too afraid of her, insofar as I can make out. AND you volunteered for this, never forget that, Surfacer. Finally, she's a woman, Alistair, and even our damn bronto likes you… So what do you say?"

"Oh, now I get a choice, Dolgan?"

"Not as such: You say, 'Yes, Dolgan,' Alistair… Thank you so very much for introducing new and interesting experiences into my life, Dolgan. I am now overjoyed at having volunteered to go with you, Dolgan…"

Alistair sighed, "Any advice?"

"It's difficult, but look after yourself, don't let her put you down, no stupid stuff… don't forget, you're probably better than she is in many ways and definitely more tricky to replace. By the way, the Legion have no interest in surface politics so though some of them may know you, they'll have no idea of your status. Probably better to keep it like that."

Alistair nodded.

"…and thank me…"

"Why?"

"I just praised you…"

                                                                                                  ~~...~~

They arrived later that day at the rendezvous point without further incident. It immediately became clear who Dolgan's contact was, as soon as they entered the enormous cavern where they were due to meet up with the Legion there was a loud roar and a figure detached itself from the serried ranks and ran towards them. Alistair almost drew but Dolgan who was standing next to him, grinning widely, stayed him by putting his hand on this arm. Only Volkur seemed entirely relaxed, smiling knowingly.

When the figure reached halfway across a bridge that spanned the chasm in the centre of the cavern, Dolgan gave a matching roar, which sounded almost identical to the first one and in turn, broke into a run. The two figures met half way across the bridge and there was much enthusiastic thumping, fist bumping and growling when they did so.

As Alistair and the rest of the group drew near, he suddenly had the sensation of seeing double, although both dwarves looked exactly the same, their tattoos, weapons and armours were quite distinct and Dolgan, of course, was wearing his Grey Warden pendent. Alistair's confusion was such that he turned towards Marcus who was also looking stunned.

The one that was Dolgan clapped the other on the back once again and shouted in their direction, "Meet Durgan, my little brother…"

"Twins…" Alistair had only seen a few in his lifetime.

"Yes." Said Volkur, "and identical, extremely rare among us dwarva… For that, alone their names were entered into the Memories upon their birth even though they were born dusters… Of course, now further achievements have been entered for both of them. And Dolgan elected to become a warden when Durgan was drafted into the Legion, he wanted to follow him but Durgan suggested there was another way he could help the fight against the Darkspawn…"

The wardens were greeted heartily by the legionnaires, but Alistair could not help but notice that there was one group that stood warily apart. He thought it would be better to get it over with sooner rather than later, so he waded through the throng of enthused dwarvenhood and patted Dolgan on the shoulder. Dolgan looked up at him, without saying anything, Alistair tilted his head in the direction of the isolated group…

"Yeah," said Dolgan, "That's her… and her squad… The b****."

"Might as well get this over with…" Replied Alistair.

"As you wish, Surfacer, luck…"

Putting on his most easygoing smile and adopting the least threatening demeanour he could, Alistair loped towards the small gathering.

She was lolling in front of it, leaning on a large fearsome looking blade.

"Greetings," said Alistair, in the politest tone he could muster, "I believe I have been assigned to work with you…"

She swivelled her one remaining eye up at him, then cleared her throat noisily and spat, narrowly missing him. Her voice was like rough gravel.

"Surfacer… If you all look alike, which you do…" she said, "Why do you look familiar?"

Alistair studied her carefully for a few quiet moments, for the second time in the last few hours not quite believing what he was seeing. He thought it appropriate to retain an air of calm detachment.

"Good evening, Jarvia." He replied.

Modifié par Maria13, 27 novembre 2010 - 03:25 .


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I reviewed on ffnet. Loved the chapter! See, it was a good thing Alistair got to do some Wardening. :D I especially love that even female Brontos go for him. LOL classic.

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"I just praised you..." Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! Nice chapter, great pacing! But sad Alistair makes me sad. Now to mistreat him in-game later in the morning when I harden him at Goldanna's.

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@Addai, you (and Ali) were right, I'm having fun here... And thanks everso for the comment of FF.net



@Ali is not so sad ATM, he's beginning to have a good time, discover better ways of doing things, making new friends, having new experiences- with lady dwarves and brontos...

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Chapter 39

Dragon 9:34

Cassus/Haring                                                                Orzammar                     [Present]

Following Zinthal's departure Oswyn tidied himself up, dressed properly and, after breakfast, and consulting a somewhat dozy Dean went along to the Diamond Quarter to commandeer the two guards they had brought with them to Orz to assist in the sorting of the lyrium.

Then for the first time in a week the went out to the surface, this was just basic recognisance really, sizing up the merchants and traders and seeing if any of them could procure him some decent furs in the next few days. Alistair had given him 150 sovereigns and he hoped to spend them well.

He was pleased to discover it was a sunny day if very cold. The ground was covered in frost, which the watery sunlight did not melt for the few hours he was outside. It was a relief to be able to take a lungful of air and find it fresh and unsullied.

He bought some cooked beef which he quickly devoured, there was nothing wrong with nug but it got tedious eating the same meat all the time no matter how diversely prepared, a loaf of wheaten bread and a small keg of ale to replace Dean's which was running low.

One of the traders seemed game to provide a selection of furs the next day in exchange for an advance of 25 gold, that seemed a bit hefty but he was determined to succeed so he decided to commit himself and arrange for the meeting with Dulin in two days' time.

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"Nice sword," said Alistair, its appearance against his neck while he was sitting in the water pool was not wholly unexpected. If there was one thing, he recollected about Jarvia it was her extremely highly developed stealth abilities.

He had had an appalling night's sleep mainly because Jarvia had been very active with one of the members of her squad. He had really missed Mabya's relatively quiet comforting presence. Tonight he, told himself, should try to sleep as far away as possibly from Jarvia because, frankly, it was disturbing.

In the morning, he had noticed one of the squad bringing up some fresh water to prepare breakfast, when he asked him for the water source he had been directed to a grotto that was quite nearby. He had decided to forsake breakfast for cleanliness and so had been sitting despondently in the coldish pool for about ten minutes after scrubbing himself down.

"Surfacer—"

What was it with some women him and bloody swords? "Actually I prefer Alistair…"

"I could cut your neck…"

"Well you could… Still a nice sword though, Jarvia…" He said looking down over it at her squat nose and scarred face and scalp. Burns, he guessed, mostly, he recalled that at the end of the fight some three years ago they had driven her towards her own explosive booby traps.

"Or something else…" the sword wavered suggestively.

"Now, that's just vicious…" He hoped he sounded calmer than he felt.

"Jarvia is dead…" She added.

"Sorry about that. But it really wasn't personal…" He was beginning to feel uncomfortable just sitting there in the water on a rocky ledge, "Look, do you mind, it's getting cold in here…" He stood up and started wading out of the greyish water.

"There wouldn't be much to miss…" She added.

"As I said, the water was cold…" Attempting to recover a little dignity, he picked up the blanket he had decided to use as a towel earlier and started rubbing himself dry. "What do you want?"

"What are you doing in the Deep Roads?"

As he stepped into his smallclothes, he gestured towards the pendent, the only thing he was wearing, "Same as last time. See this? Grey Warden here. It's what we do… I didn't even choose your squad, just following orders."

"Dolgan?"

"Dolgan."

"Nug plugger's idea of a joke…" She said bitterly.

"In all fairness, he didn't know that you and I had met previously… Can I have a look at that sword?"

"Why so obsessed with swords, Surfacer?" she said scornfully but to his astonishment, she actually handed it to him.

"You may have noticed I'm a boy…" He reached out for it, as soon as he touched it the blade glinted for a very brief moment, a bright crimson as if bathed in blood. "Maker!" he exclaimed in surprise almost dropping it. Jarvia had taken a step back.

"What was that?" she asked, she seemed rattled. "Why did I…"

"I really have no idea…" He mumbled, he looked at the sword carefully, it was clearly too big for a dwarf and when he had first seen it he had thought it might be human, now handling it, however, it seemed far too light to have been birthed in a human forge. He was also getting a strange feeling from it as if the thing were alive, or had come to life when handed to him… He tried to shrug that off, it was simply too irrational. "I think…" He said cautiously, "It may be Dalish… Ironbark."

"Dalish?"

"Elven" He explained. "They are surface elves who live apart from humans seeking to retain their own customs and language…"

He held it up straight against his eye line attempting to see if it bore any traces of Elvish script, there was none that he could discern, but then the light in the cave was very dim. Instinctively he ran a finger along the flat of the blade, attempting to feel for any etchings and as he did so, it lit up again, different colours following the track of his hand, an intricate tracery of script that he recognised as Dalish. His mouth went dry.

"How much would you want for this, Jarvia?" He asked. He must be going mad; he could almost swear that the sword gave an excited leap in his grip.

"More than you could ever pay, Surfacer…" Jarvia seemed to have recovered from her initial surprise and held out her hand.

"What do you know what I could pay, Jarvia?" She sneered; he guessed he did not look over-impressive or prosperous clad only in his smalls. However, he returned it to her with a resigned sigh. The sword seemed to still and die in his grasp as he did so. "Peace?" He asked, hopefully, "In exchange for not disclosing your former identity?" He added as an afterthought.

"Peace, for the time being Surfacer," she snarled in reply. "And be ready we depart in an hour…"

                                                                                  ~~...~~

Jarvia's squad of twelve, not including Alistair, had been allocated to clear the farthest branch of Glogar's Passage the one that went off to the right. Alistair was not very surprised at this, it seemed obvious by now that the other squadrons and their leaders wanted the least possible to do with theirs. He exchanged serene waves with his former Warden companions as they marched past.

"Do we know how long this corridor is?" He inquired of Jarvia; in response, she simply shook her head.

He had studied the composition of Jarvia's squad and had noted that she was emphasising distance combat over melee, composed as it was of seven archers/crossbow dwarves and five melee fighters including the Orchid herself.

Recalling the difficulty Neriya, he and the companions had had taking her down in the first place, given a similar composition, Alistair thought she showed good strategic awareness since she obviously had experience in commanding a similar squad.

The entrance to the corridor they had been allocated was fairly low and Alistair was slightly taken aback by feeling the roof skimming the tips of his hair. However, this was just the preliminary stage and the squad found itself on a path descending steeply downwards into a much higher vault, which was darkish, hot and dusty and filled with an appalling stench.

Alistair gagged and so did several squad members. Not Jarvia. She must be used to the stench of carrion, he thought. "Surfacer?" she said seemingly smiling in amusement.

Alistair did his best to compose himself. "Can't sense anything yet," He said his voice hoarse.

"Onwards, then." They advanced into the gloom checking all the time that the walls around them were continuous, that there were no significant cracks or tunnels through which Dark spawn could emerge.

Eventually he tapped on Jarvia's shoulder as they had agreed he pointed in the direction from which he was picking up the vibrations that felt as if they were scraping at the inside of his skull and held up six fingers. Jarvia nodded her mouth set and straight.

Barely before, they had time to adjust their formation they were under attack. The seven bow dwarves forming a line and beginning to fire. With a tart "Stay" to Alistair as if her were an errant dog, Jarvia faded into the shadows.

Alistair pulled his own crossbow from his back thanking Andraste that he had thought to bring it and, using his height to his advantage, took a place behind the other seven firing quarrels into the melee.

It was not his preferred mode of combat or even one in which he had developed any particular skill, but he felt obliged to do something. In the darkness ahead, he saw a momentary flash and thought he recognised Jarvia's blade. He imagined, since she had not troubled to brief him, that Jarvia and the other skirmishers had performed a flanking movement and that the bodies of the Dark spawn were now placed between the arrows and the blades, hammers and axes.

It was over quite abruptly, Jarvia returning with blood in her sparse hair and a ferocious grin. The legionnaires proceeded to strip the Dark spawn corpses of anything usable or valuable with great alacrity.

There were several such encounters in quick succession but still Jarvia urged them onwards, until even the strongest were beginning to falter. Alistair wondered at the wisdom of this but thought to bite his tongue.

In what turned out to be the final confrontation of that day they were fighting in the usual formation when one of the dwarves standing next to Alistair uttered a guttural cry, it seemed a genlock had outflanked the flankers and had driven a sword into his side. Despite his fatigue, Alistair drew quickly at the same time aiming a hard kick in the genlock's general direction and meeting armour. Catching the creature off-balance, he dispatched it rapidly, feeling, for a brief moment as he delivered the final blow, a shard of satisfaction leapt through him, something no amount of quarrel shooting could give him.

Checking either side of the line archers' line and the flanks, he returned to where the dwarf lay. That particular fight now appeared to be at an end so sheathing Starfang; he bent down to check the state of the injured dwarf. He was in a bad way, the wound seemed deep there was a lot of blood and he appeared to be in great pain but was biting his lips to avoid making any sound. He still clutched his bow.

Quietly asking him to forgive him, Alistair turned him on his side to carry out a more thorough examination, not that he had any expertise but no one else seemed to be doing it. A few minutes later one of the other archers whom Alistair now realised was female knelt beside her companion and, having removed her helmet, embraced him weeping silently, her tears making clean tracks down the dirt on her face. The injured dwarf mumbled something and, with an effort, put out a hand to touch her hair.

Suddenly he realised Jarvia was behind them so he stood up and shook his head at her. Jarvia smiled and remarked, "We can use him…"

Before he could grasp what she was saying, she turned and started delivering curt orders to other squad members who approached the injured dwarf. The grieving female stood up and confronting Jarvia shouted: "No you are not going to use Nallond like that, no, I won't let you…"

Jarvia pushed the female's shoulder so she staggered back and said in her gravally voice, "You will do as I say…"

"He served well, faithfully, is this what you are going to do to him? Doesn't he deserve better?"

"We are all dead anyway, as well you know, Yenla, that's your name, isn't it, little nug ****?"

Meanwhile four of the other dwarves grabbed Nallond who moaned piteously, at last loosing his self-control, by his arms and legs and started to drag him away.

"What…" said Alistair, confused by what was happening.

Yenla abruptly turned to face him, Alistair noticed that her nose was bent and twisted from having previously been broken.

"Our commander is going to use him as bait for an ambush, while he still lives…" She said very clearly despite there being a whistle in her voice, probably caused by the nose Alistair thought. Nallond started to scream in agony and the four carrying him just dropped him on the cavern floor a few metres away.

Alistair turned to Jarvia. "That is not appropriate…" He said to her.

"None of your business, Surfacer," she replied, "You are just a scout… You have no authority here."

Yenla launched herself at Jarvia's face but was caught and restrained by one of the dwarves who had just dumped Nallond.

Amidst the ensuing confusion, Alistair took a few quick steps towards where he lay.

Behind him, Jarvia laughed and touching the struggling Yenla's cheek said to her, "I'll teach you your lesson later…"

With great effort, Nallond had managed to turn himself on his back, looking up at Alistair he mouthed, "Do it."

Alistair drew Starfang from over his shoulder with a smooth hiss and asked, "Are you sure?"

"Yes," said Nallond very loudly, "yes."

Selecting a gap in his cheap splint mail Alistair drove Starfang through the centre of his chest with a single blow. At his back Yenla screamed and started weeping hysterically.

Alistair stopped to wipe Starfang on some rags he tore from a Hurlock corpse and made his way back to the dwarves sheathing his blade for the second time within an hour. "I am sorry." He said to the still hysterical Yenla.

"My sword slipped." He told Jarvia meeting her inquiring stare full on.

Alistair was pretty much left to his own devices that evening when they made camp. Even Yenla seemed to look at him reproachfully. Surprisingly he found he had an appetite and gnawed savagely at the hunk of dried meat and lye bread he was given. Turning his back on the campfire, he also slumbered deeply until he was kicked awake to take his turn on watch.

                                                                                  ~~...~~

The following day Oswyn repaired to the market to collect his furs but found no trace of the man to whom he had spoken. Nor did the other traders seem particularly interested in helping him with his polite enquiries responding with bland indifference.

For the first time in years, realising he had been duped, Oswyn felt a wave of rage surge through him. Following his confinement in Howe's dungeon he had struggled for a long time to control his anger aware that in the circumstances if he let it run lose it may end up consuming him entire.

When Zinthal came by to see him that afternoon she therefore found him in a very confused state.

"Oh, Oswyn." she said when he angrily told her what had happened. He had not asked her to sit down, she noticed, "In that case perhaps you should take me along."

"And how in Thedas—"

"We flirt." She said opening her eyes very wide, "Behave as if we were lovers…"

Oswyn was silent for quite a long time. "I—"

Zinthal reached out and touched his hand, her bracelets clanking, "Darling…"

"… Can't do that." Concluded Oswyn.

"Why not?"

"Because…"

"Well, as you are going to be Alistair's fixer, Oswyn, it might be good for you to learn how to improvise… Unless you prefer your own gender…" she added quietly.

"I do not…" He spluttered "and I am not Alistair's 'fixer'!"

Zinthal beamed at him, "Of course not, you are his friend who just wants to help… and I, Oswyn, am a noble hunter and not a ****…"

He shook his head avoiding her eyes, "I didn't…"

She took his hand, "It's easy, Oswyn, let me show you how…"

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The second day transpired much the same; there were only a few minor injuries and no perceptible difference in Jarvia's behaviour towards him. However, that night he was woken by her raucous cries of sexual pleasure. Her partner barely emitted a few soft whimpers as if she were in pain.

Shortly afterwards Yenla returned to her sleeping spot near him. Alistair was sure some of the others must have been awakened too but they gave no sign of it. Yenla was only wearing what appeared to be a coarse sack and sat down cross-legged with her back to him. Her arms were thin and white and her shoulders were trembling despite the heat in the tunnel. After a while, she turned around and met his gaze.

He noticed for the first time that her brown mid-length hair was streaked with grey and she wore a large-linked clunky silverite chain around her neck.

"Cloudhead," she said softly, "Nallond was not… No, he wasn't… He was my salroka, only that…"

Not knowing fully why, he nodded and after looking at him for a while more, Yenla turned away with a sigh and let herself drop on to her bedroll.

About an hour later, her breathing had become very regular but Alistair was still awake. His hands were clenching almost convulsively.

                                                                                       ~~...~~

They practised holding hands, they practised looking into each other's eyes and smiling at each other, they practised whispering sweet nothings in each other's ears, they practiced embracing, and they practised kissing.

It wasn't that Oswyn didn't know how to do these things, indeed a few years before the Blight, before Howe, he had been quite the lady-killer… Then things had changed, or rather turned upside down and soured.

Dean came into the kitchen while they were practising a kissing embrace, Zinthal standing on a chair and stretching up with her arms around Oswyn's neck, their lips were moving against each other's he noticed. He cleared his throat so they knew he was there, took a good look noticing that Oswyn's hand was neatly perched on Zinthal's attractive backside, just where his would be if… He poured himself a beer from the new barrel, took a sip, looked some more and then left.

Oswyn pulled away once he was out of sight, he was sure his cheeks were flushed.

"As I said," said Zinthal twirling her hair and appearing to ignore his embarrassment, "it was good practice to do that in front of somebody."

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The next morning Jarvia seemed happier than usual and Yenla was completely subdued. Alistair tried to exchange some friendly words with her but received only monosyllables in reply. Although he saw some of the other dwarves thumping Yenla on the back in a friendly manner and punching her arm, overall the squad's mood seemed to be very morose despite Jarvia's merriment.

The reached the end of the main cavern and were confronted with three further branches.

Jarvia turned to Alistair: "Surfacer…"

He gave her a dumb smile and rubbed his face. "Let me see…"

Alistair went to the entrance to the first passageway and leaned against the living rock, tilting his head against it, crossing his legs, closing his eyes, listening carefully to the sounds in his head. He did the same at the second one and then at the third. He felt the sweat slowly trickle from his messy hair, to his neck, then under his armour and down his back. He sensed the dwarves and Jarvia especially getting impatient. He realised he didn't give a ****.

Therefore, he ambled back over to Jarvia, "You want to fight lots of Darkspawn? Seems to me they're all chocker… I can't tell how many from this distance; I can't tell if the tunnels are joined at some point. If I were you I'd just take my pick and run with it."

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Okay you've definitetly made the Dwarves alot more interesting to me. I really need to try a commoner run as I can barely get a Noble out of Ostagar before giving up.

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Ooh, nice twist there about "the Orchid."

Oh, and I almost forgot- Oswyn making out with DC is too sweet for words.  I hope they do it for reals.  :happy:

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@ Esbatty, great!



@Addai, thanks, not sayin' nothin' on the other thing!

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Chapter 40

Dragon 9:34

Cassus/Haring                                         Orzammar                                                                          [Present]

"Is it me or is he a little late?" Asked Oswyn. They were in a reserved part of the Stone Grill, one of the best eateries in Orzammar.

"He's late, but it's his privilege…"

"So you've seen a fish…" Said Oswyn resuming their previous conversation.

"Yes occasionally we get some down here. They're such a rarity, Oswyn, though, that only nobles eat them and they say they taste is like nothing else in Orzammar…"

"Cats and dogs?"

"Oh yes there are cats here, feral all of them, wherever there are rats, there are cats… And dogs are quite popular as pets, you know those big ugly ones and I've also seen small ones…"

"Birds…"

"One of my friend's children had one once, Oswyn, she showed it to me, it was a tiny small brown thing… It just huddled in the corner of its cage trembling… Apparently Orzammar is cruel to birds, they all die here…" There was an unexpected note of sadness in her voice.

Oswyn took advantage of that to pick up her hand and kiss it. "Just practicing" he said, in case she got the wrong idea.

She smiled, "have you—?"

Dulin came bustling in, "So sorry, Oswyn, the King had some last minute busi— Oh, and who do we have here?" He said gazing at Zinthal who was looking extraordinarily beautiful that evening in a pale blue gown that matched the hue of her eyes covered by a really shiny silverite chain mail, was custom made for her figure, clinging to her breasts and wide thighs. A matching silverite chain was also draped artfully in her long golden blond hair and dipped in the centre of her forehead ending with a teardrop shaped sapphire.

"I am Zinthal Harrak, sire…" She said ducking her head modestly and then quickly glancing sideways at Oswyn. He noticed that the jewel swayed alluringly in front of her lowered face at approximately the same level as her well-presented cleavage.

"Ah… I have heard of you…," said Dulin embracing her shoulders lightly.

"Only good things, I hope, sire…" She said raising her head and smiling at him.

"Very good things indeed…" Replied Dulin grinning widely. Then he turned to Oswyn, "Oswyn, you old rogue, first the porridge and now this… You are acclimatising far too well for a Topsider, you know, I am truly impressed… We better watch out or you Fereldans will take the best of Orzammar and be away with it before us natives even realise it's gone..."

Oswyn smiled, attempting to look as though he was taking all this suavely in his stride. "Shall we order chancellor Dulin?"

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Jarvia picked the middle corridor, despite his words had it been left to Alistair that was the last one he would have chosen. He thought it was preferable to have at least the possibility of one solid wall on either side.

Notwithstanding his reservations, it actually turned out to be a good choice. There was one group of Darkspawn there in the tunnel and they were quickly dispatched. In half an hour, they came to a mossy ledge overlooking a much larger cavern the air of which was surprisingly fresh compared to the foulness of the main corridor. There was an underground stream running through it, perhaps that was the source of the freshness, Alistair speculated.

The only thing that really spoilt the view was that there were a few dozen Darkspawn roaming down below. Therefore, the archers placed themselves at the sides hiding behind what outcrops they could find and the crossbow people including Alistair dropped down on their bellies and at Jarvia's command, they began to shoot.

After a while, the ancient dwarf lying next to Alistair said "Topsider" and looking at him appraisingly, added "The wimmin are sayin' ye're good lookin'… to me you look 'bout as appetising as a nug's hairy ballock… A nug's dirty hairy ballock, actually" The dwarf was white-haired, well he would have been if his hair wasn't full of filth as everybody's was, and had a long whitish plaited beard and a beaky nose, he was nodding. Alistair guessed the beard was plaited to avoid it being caught in the crossbow.

"Thanks…" said Alistair somewhat vaguely because he was trying to concentrate on his shooting, the old timer beside him seemed to be the kind that could aim, fire and hit in his sleep.

"But that's na the worst of it, Topsider…"

"Really…"

"Ye shoot like a nug's dirty hairy ballock would shoot if a nug's dirty hairy ballock could shoot…"

Alistair shook his head. Coping with the old timer's sarcasm, the mental irritation caused by the Darkspawn presence and the knowledge of his own shortcomings as a crossbowman was getting a bit too much…

"So when are ye doin' it?" The old-timer whisper.

"Doing what?" He asked.

"Ye knows." Said the dwarf wiggling his bushy eyebrows most suggestively.

"No, I don't know…"

"Taking ha down…" Said the dwarf in an urgent spittle-filled whisper.

"I'm…"

"Yeah, ye're I've seen how ye look at ha and it ain't love for sure… Anyways ye can count on ald Whurrin t'assist ye…"

Alistair shook his head again, "You are mistaken…," he said primly.

"Incoming" said Jarvia's voice behind them, at this cue the brawlers started charging down the tunnel; it was not until then that Alistair who had been so distracted noticed that the grotto below them was empty save for numerous dead and seriously injured Darkspawn.

"Well, let's see how ye performs with that fancy sword of ye,'" said Whurrin.

Alistair jumped up and drew Starfang, but rather than follow Jarvia and the others down the tunnel he stationed himself at its exit onto the ledge. He heard shouts and screams lower down it and the churning grinding sounds of swords and other weapons being used in a confined space. To his surprise, Whurrin got up somewhat more slowly and drawing a rusted curved, ancient blade stood opposite him winking.

Yenla and the other bow dwarves also stood to the sides. Those that had them and not all did, unsheathed their melee weapons. Suddenly there was a yell and a scream and Jarvia emerged backwards from the tunnel falling on the moss hard on her rump. The large Hurlock responsible charged from the tunnel only to be quickly sliced and diced by Alistair and Whurrin from either side. The old timer finished him off by running his chest through where he had collapsed.

By that time, Jarvia was on her feet and with a quick nod to Alistair and Whurrin and a blood-curdling cry plunged back into the darkness again. She has guts, Alistair thought, he would give her that.

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Oswyn very authoritatively ordered a fish starter for himself and Zinthal. It was worth the inordinate expense just to see her roll her eyes and smack her lips at him when Dulin was not looking. Dulin had deepstalker pate and then they all had the nug for main. Each dish was served with a different kind of ale, lighter for the fish, richer for the pate and heavier for the nug but Oswyn could not help missing fruit, milk and wine from the surface.

"So how did you two meet, then?" Asked Dulin.

They had practiced for this Oswyn smiled shyly and Zinthal batted her eyelids. "In Tapsters, I was there with some friends and Oswyn—" …

"I offered to buy her a drink." He said

"I'd never met a human before…" Added Zinthal.

"Well this human," Said Dulin nodding amiably at Oswyn, "is almost an honorary dwarf… Do you know that on his first morning here he actually finished a bowl of moss porridge? Remarkable…"

"Wow…" said Zinthal.

Halfway through the nug course Dulin looked at Oswyn and said, "So how can I help you salroka?"

Dwarven cuisine did not extend to dessert but they had a sampling of different mushrooms on lightly toasted lye bread as a finisher.
                    
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They were skirmishing for about half an hour more and Alistair and Whurrin killed several more darkspawn with some help from the other dwarves. Once a genlock fell out of the narrow passageway flat on its face and Yenla buried a small sharp dagger in its neck before it even knew where it was.

Jarvia appeared to be extremely tired when she dragged herself out again. "I think we should make camp…" Alistair suggested but she looked at him with disdain. They went out back through the tunnel and entered the one to the left, which was almost blocked with darkspawn corpses and led directly to the cavern with the stream they had been overlooking.

As they emerged, Alistair looked uneasily up at the ledge where they had recently been standing. "I don't like this," he muttered to Whurrin.

"What are you saying Topsider?" demanded Jarvia.

"Have you cleared the tunnel to the right?" Asked Alistair.

"What is that to you?"

"Because if you haven't and if it goes somewhere else we could be trapped in the same way these dead Darkspawn down here were trapped by us… I would suggest…"

"It is not your place to sugg—"

"I know I am just a scout, just some bloody useless Grey Warden, but with all due respect, it's not my first time down here, and it's not my first fight, it's not even my hundredth fight!" He felt himself getting angry, "Thick human though I may be, even I can see you are leaving us exposed to an attack from the rear and above..." He was shouting now and his words were echoing throughout the cavern.

Whurrin cleared his throat and said in a low voice, "He's right, you know, Ma'm… Topsider though he is…"

"And who asked you anything? You shrivelled waste of dwarven hide… your ******'s so limp and wrinkled you couldn't even please me for half a minute…"

It was quiet for a moment then Whurrin laughed heartily, a deep rumbling sound. "As if I'd care to pleasure an insolent, leaky, loose-fannied chit like ya even at my age…"

Jarvia lunged for him and he barely had time to step aside. Alistair interposed himself between them.

"Get out of my way you oversized freak…" snarled Jarvia.

"Slag heap ****!" Shouted Whurrin from behind Alistair.

"Look, this isn't helping any…" Alistair said trying to be reasonable but drawing at the same time.

"You dare to—"

"We're all tired… Today's been a long day, I say we go outside make camp and get some rest…" He suggested in what he hoped was a friendly tone.

"And I say I should have skewered you like a nug the moment I clapped eyes on you…" screamed Jarvia attacking him. Alistair blocked her blade with Starfang.

"Stop it, stop it, don't make me…"

"And used your danglers for earrings…" she turned quickly and attempted a low stab that Alistair barely managed to knock away.

"Oh now you play the submissive Topsider! Want to warm my bedroll tonight in exchange for your miserable life?" she cried and went for his throat.

Still attempting to be passive and struggling to detach his shield Alistair took some hurried steps back and slipped… moving into a squat he was able to use it to block her strike just in the nick of time. As the clang of her stroke jarred his left arm, he launched himself off his toes and, in a rather unorthodox manoeuvre, hit her heavily on the side of the face with his shield.

Jarvia went flying with a yelp. He thought he heard her cheekbone crunch.

Standing over her breathing deeply Alistair said, "Give me your sword…" He hardly expected her to comply, but comply she did, although she seemed to be bodily struggling against an overwhelming impulse… suddenly he understood something about that sword.

Naturally, it briefly glinted scarlet again as he took it and a murmur went through the congregated dwarves.

He sighed, relaxed for a brief moment but then because Jarvia appeared to be reaching for something in her boot, gave her a quick sharp kick in the kidneys.

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After the supper and the leisurely follow-up conversation having secured Dulin's agreement for a fair amount of discretion for Alistair in exchange for a few high-profile appearances, as Zinthal had anticipated, Oswyn, Zinthal, and the dwarven chancellor parted ways.

Oswyn was feeling particularly happy because he felt he had achieved something, he had also enjoyed the play-acting with Zinthal and he was finding her ever more attractive.

That not only she looked sweet and beautiful, but also it had occurred to him this evening that it was within his gift to offer her a dazzling array of new experiences. The thought was empowering. The taste of fish was just a starting point; he wondered how many more things he could introduce her to, what would she say of a meadow in flower? How would she react to snow? Wine? Honey?

It occurred to him that her cultural differences and personality offered an almost ideal combination: She would react with the innocence of a child to so many things that he took for granted in his world yet at the same time she was an adult and an affectionate, intelligent and astute one at that… and, of course, good-looking.

It was entertaining those thoughts that caused him to look down at her and smile. Zinthal smiled back, was she blushing? Oswyn put out his hand intending that she should take it, but, to his surprise, she shook her head…

"I have to go now, Oswyn," she said.

"Go, where?" He said the surprise showing in his voice.

"Why… To meet Dulin of course…" She replied blinking hard her eyes looking up at him brighter than the jewel on her forehead. "We arranged it when you excused yourself to go to the privy…"

"Du—"

"I… Oh by the ancestors and paragons, Oswyn… I thought that was what I was meant to do… we pretend to be friendly, we flirt, so Dulin is impressed by your amorous success and then feels that much better about getting one over you… Business."

"Business..." Echoed Oswyn helplessly.

"Business." Said Zinthal gravely. Then she added. "Business calls."

Before he could voice any concern or objection, she had turned on her heels and was heading in the opposite direction. Speechless he stood rooted to the spot, watching her go, feeling empty.

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Alistair made clear that it was up to the squad to determine what to do with Jarvia. Having taken her down he felt that he had exhausted any legitimate right he may have had to intervene further in the legion's affairs. It was up to them now.

Therefore, he sat apart and away from them where he could neither see nor hear their deliberations. He trusted any decision they took would be sensible and fair, the little he had been able to appreciate of the squad members had indicated they were tough but practical people, typical dwarva in other words.

He wondered what he would do if they decided to re-instate her… Desert? No, that was out of the question, he was committed to this. He had volunteered for this as a Grey Warden and had to honourably abide by that decision whatever course events took. He pondered whether he regretted coming to the Deep Roads again and decided he did not. For all the bad things that had happened there was much good, he had found himself as a Warden again, reconnected to the order at the most elementary and significant level, had proved to himself he could do it…

He must have fallen asleep because he was with Bregeth and Niamh and they were going on a picnic somewhere and packing things in a hamper when he was woken up by Whurrin shaking him.

"Topsider… Come with me."

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Three days later their squad was the last to return to the meeting place at Ortan's Thaig and the most depleted. They were smothered in gore and slowed by fatigue, their faces pale as ashes and their steps hesitant even as they approached the rest of the units.

Durgan stood in front of the thronged ranks of the legion with Dolgan at his side, Alistair limped up to him with a tense expression on his face. "That passageway…" He croaked making brief eye contact "Cleared… There was a brood mother, her head…" He said extracting it from a leather bag one of the squad's dwarves proffered to him. Durgan's bushy eyebrows lowered as he grimaced but he took the trophy, passed it to one of his subordinates, and then crossed his arms over his chest again.

Alistair pulled himself up a little straighter, "Casualties: Nallond Garadun, duster, Cadas Reiast, duster, Kalir Faderg, servant caste," He paused before the last name, "Whurrin Garkarin, smith class. They all served with honour and fell in battle. I therefore accordingly request that their names be entered into the Memories and included among the Legion's glorious dead who have returned with nobility to the Stone."

Durgan nodded curtly.

"Finally, I would request to be relieved of my temporary command…"

Durgan, after exchanging a surprised glance with Dolgan, cleared his throat, "You are relieved."

Alistair's features relaxed and he stepped aside, then Yenla scurried forward with her pack and dropped what remained of Jarvia's head at Durgan's feet and all hell broke loose.

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Aww, poor Oswyn! He's got to get his chance for a little dwarf lovin'.

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Damn, Oswyn - I know that pain all too well. *pours out 40 for his homie*

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Great chapter. Its been a banner work week with The Arrrangement yesterday and today's Deep Roads conclusion. Man I didn't see the Jarvia business going that way, not at all. And damn it all I liked Whurrin, and then he up and - oy. I gotta stop gettin' attached to characters. Maria you're really puttin' emphasis on the "Dark" in Dark Ritual. Image IPB

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