the truth? It's an insta scroll. You need to do at least one only, like a quote. Or else it gets lost, really. You've changed the story of Astyth as well, I do believe, but I like your version better.
I suppose so. Will remember that for future chapters. My question was if it was good or not, but I guess I will take your answer as the middle ground.
What was the original story for Astyth though? I can't remember and wiki only says she was a Paragon from the Warrior caste.
Edit: If cutting her tongue in defiance was her story...Then that is pathetic.
I couldn't decide if it was awe-inspiring or depressing.
'Tis both. It was meant to show both the glory of the dwarven empire, Their bravery against overwhelming odds, and their victory. How Aeducan saved them in that critical hour and how heroes rise from the dust.
At the same time it was meant to show the dwarves lost everything in time against the never ending onslaught of the Spawn and how politics led to the downfall of Orzammar.
Lastly it was meant to show how Blood Magic was all that stopped the Darkspawn from taking Orzammar, and the surface by result.
Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 17 mai 2010 - 03:04 .