soignee wrote...
Emerald Melios wrote...
So I'm wondering....when using Dwarf Commoner, do you use the default brand or one of the other kinds?
the brand is the brand, then you get other facial tattoos if you want to look grrrr scary or OOH pretty.
There were whole sentences in there at points saying things like 'they quickly managed to kill them and got back to the more interesting parts.' Although I did have, what, two paragraphs on killing that Dace kid.Costin_Razvan wrote...
Fighting, in your fiction? Have i misread it, cause I certain it had nil.
Emerald Melios wrote...
soignee wrote...
Emerald Melios wrote...
So I'm wondering....when using Dwarf Commoner, do you use the default brand or one of the other kinds?
the brand is the brand, then you get other facial tattoos if you want to look grrrr scary or OOH pretty.
Oh...so that's it. Intereresting.
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Fighting, in your fiction? Have i misread it, cause I certain it had nil.
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Well, at least he made it dwarf friendly. Though I can't imagine my DC ever romancing Loghain over Zevran.
I mean he is just PERFECT for her.
Modifié par ejoslin, 28 mai 2010 - 12:48 .
You'd think they would at least wipe the blood off first.ejoslin wrote...
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Well, at least he made it dwarf friendly. Though I can't imagine my DC ever romancing Loghain over Zevran.
I mean he is just PERFECT for her.
For you!
Edit: Just realized this is an Aeducan. Ah well, I'm being lazy and you can just pretend she has a brand!
Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 28 mai 2010 - 12:49 .
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Sarah's...you people post too much, dammit!
See? Fighting! Granted it was mostly 'God, why am I writing about stupid action sequences when I could be writing about more interesting things' but still!From Chapter Two...
Aunn allowed a small smile to flicker across her face. "Let's give them a show, Mandar."
Mandar didn't respond, probably taking this a lot more seriously than she was. Aunn knew that since both of them would not be leaving the arena alive she really should be more concerned but this was fighting. This was what she was good at. Her winning streak had been completely unbroken for seven years and so it was difficult to imaging losing here. Needless to say that if she died in the next few minutes – or even fell in battle at any point in the near future – it would be a terrible surprise to her.
Her opponent interrupted her musings just then by swinging his maul at her head. Aunn dodged the blow with ease and pulled out her beloved new dagger. She'd had great fun with it during the Proving and she'd most likely continue to enjoy it until the next shiny new weapon came along. Raising her shield to block yet another blow, she stabbed him. First blood was hers. This wasn't one of those soft contests, though, and so they kept going.
Aunn had a few seconds of uninterrupted attack time after bashing her shield on Mandar's head left him disoriented and she took advantage on it to land a few more blows. She wasn't fast enough to dodge his next blow completely but it only landed on her shoulder and the armor absorbed most of it. After a few more parries and dodges from both sides, Mandar tried to catch her off guard by spinning around behind her but he mistimed it as he struggled to regain his footing Aunn slit his throat.
She had won.
Modifié par Sarah1281, 28 mai 2010 - 12:51 .
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Urgh....Aeducan and Zevran...well that brings back images from when I romanced my male Aeducan with Zevran...
Not that I have a problem with gay people, just am not one myself....what can I say my Aeducan lost his mind for a bit!
See? Fighting!
soignee wrote...
wip of morrigan:
http://pics.livejour...oe/pic/0008xh2g
(pretend it has a dwarf in it)
But...but I don't like fight scenes. They're boring and whenever I read about them I'm tempted to just skip them and get to the interesting parts.Costin_Razvan wrote...
See? Fighting!
Out of your entire fanfiction you only have ONE lousy fighting scene? Pathetic.
I want to see armies. I want to read about the clashing of steel, the spilling of blood, the beheading of darkspawn as thousands die at the feet of the Wardens.
I love fight scenes. They're fun. They can really set the pace if you do it right. This short story I wrote is one of my favourite fighting things I've written: http://community.liv...476.html#cutid1
Modifié par soignee, 28 mai 2010 - 01:22 .
Gilsa wrote...
@soignee -- That's awesome. Looks intense.
@Sarah -- yeah, taking a picture of your TV is better than nothing. It's just reference for her to work with. I thought this was a pretty good shot: http://shinya-san.de...ducan-165505363
Costin_Razvan wrote...
Maker's breath...From the Dirt is simply insane.
I can't stand it in all honestly, it's very OOC for a lot of the companions.
The end really frustrated me but...well, he probably hasn't gotten that far.
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