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Parchment from a Tevinter ruin

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Posté 05 avril 2010 - 03:03

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 Parchment from a Tevinter Ruin 
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Forgive me brothers for I write with trembling hand...
That posterity may know that we...yes even we once were mortal

In these final hours before we open the gate, 
Let it be known that this knowledge derived from Dumat's very flesh
Turned mortal men into gods

To breach the Golden City with blood...
And with blood the promise of liberation
I cannot tell what we shall find when we enter
But to secure this knowledge, Intaku's liberation is now bound to Dumat and his kin...


Estatis Horume...

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Apocryphal fragment ends suddenly

Modifié par vilnii, 05 avril 2010 - 03:09 .

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Posté 05 avril 2010 - 03:12

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very nice. Lore as FF is always fun, I'm struggling with a prophesy for my FF now.

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Posté 05 avril 2010 - 03:57

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Thanks Tanith...much appreciated

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Posté 06 avril 2010 - 02:35

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Second Parchment from Chantry Archives in Denerim



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The reward raised by Dumat called for great sacrifices



Sacrifices required for great achievement



And ah! The deeds we performed to come to this place...the

massacre of elves, the harvesting of blood...



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Posté 06 avril 2010 - 12:23

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Those dastardly magisters have no scruples!! So far awesome Vilnii

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Posté 09 avril 2010 - 10:26

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Third parchment, harvested from the carcass of Urthemiel at the end of the fifth Blight.

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Saratas came to me in the last hour, seeking to know if I would withdraw,

"Lord Intaku" he says " I sense the touch of doubt in your disposition, the signs of a wavering will..."

His concern touches me, I am moved.

"Alas my apprentice, a strange foreboding hews close to my chest and gnaws away like a cankerworm. I do indeed fear the unknown"

"Will you tell the others?" Saratas asks

"To what end?" I inquire "There is no glory in withdrawal, along that path lies old age, decay and regret. While the golden city holds a promise of immortality."

Estatis Horume

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http://social.biowar...6378/blog/4003/

Modifié par vilnii, 09 avril 2010 - 10:33 .

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Posté 10 avril 2010 - 10:00

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Fourth parchment. Purchased from a Dragon Cult in Haven
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Ah, hear, hear... the secret sign. Our call to assembly.

Oh seed of infernal doubt

Why pass your excrement upon my soul?

Have my eyes not seen the works that Dumat has wrought

Have we not tested his counsel again and again?

Why persist in tormenting me?

Fear and doubt separate men from glorious destinies.

I shall not fall to this weakness , I must go to my destiny

http://social.biowar...6378/blog/4003/
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Modifié par vilnii, 10 avril 2010 - 10:44 .

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Posté 10 avril 2010 - 11:59

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 This record of the early Magisters continues...

http://social.biowar...6378/blog/4003/

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Posté 11 avril 2010 - 07:22

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Scattered Fragments

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We departed Minrathous in dead of night, accompanied by trusted captains for protection

Onward to the old encampment where two nights prior, we had massacred elves, women and children alike.
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Modifié par vilnii, 11 avril 2010 - 07:23 .

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Posté 11 avril 2010 - 07:29

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In the words of George Takai (Sulu) OH MY! This is wonderful stuff vilnii! I love it! I got chills down my spine. Please keep up the great work! : D

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Posté 11 avril 2010 - 12:21

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Gilgamesh1138 wrote...

In the words of George Takai (Sulu) OH MY! This is wonderful stuff vilnii! I love it! I got chills down my spine. Please keep up the great work! : D



Thanks Gila...it means a lot to get this kind of feedback. There is indeed more to come... 

http://social.biowar...6378/blog/4003/

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Posté 11 avril 2010 - 08:03

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Scattered Fragments II



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We departed Minrathous in dead of night, accompanied by trusted captains for protection



Onward to the old encampment where two nights prior, we had massacred elves, women and children alike.



There were soldiers everywhere and with them the foul odor of battle



Vile acts took place here, evils without a name. Rape, plunder, torture, murder.



A multitude of souls torn from the world by force



Dumat revealed no other way, we were to cause a tear in the veil by any means we could.

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Posté 15 avril 2010 - 07:48

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Excerpt from Scattered Fragments III

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Word travelled fast around the camp that Tevinter lords had come in person to boost the troops, after such a great battle had been fought and won.

The soldiers swarmed around our party filled with drunken mirth.

"We want a speech , and blessings to crown this victory" they cried, their cheers filling the air with a ghoulish din.
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http://social.biowar...6378/blog/4003/

Modifié par vilnii, 15 avril 2010 - 07:55 .

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Posté 16 avril 2010 - 02:15

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Fantastic! Are you posting on FF too? I would love to give a shout out on my chapter for you on FF. I don't do the shout outs here, as I don't get as much traffic on the forum. If you don't post there, I will just direct people to the forum.

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Posté 16 avril 2010 - 02:07

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@ Gilamesh...


I am not familiar with Fan Fiction, what is it all about, and how does it work??


Ah...I just did some digging, I'll sign up!


Thanks again Gila!

Modifié par vilnii, 16 avril 2010 - 02:15 .

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Posté 17 avril 2010 - 02:04

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Hey no worries, I just thought you might like it. It is another way to get feedback, and there is a stats table which will tell you the hits on your story and visits. I warn you, watching the bar graph go up is like a crack addiction.



I gave a shout out on my latest chapter directing people here, but when and if you get signed up on FF, and if you use a different pen name there, let me know and I will give another shout out for where to find you on FF. : D I know a lot of people read there.

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Posté 29 avril 2010 - 11:51

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 Scattered Fragments III

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Word travelled fast around the camp that Tevinter lords had come in person to boost the troops, after such a great battle had been fought and won.

The soldiers swarmed around our party filled with drunken mirth. 

"We want a speech , and blessings to crown this victory"  they cried, their cheers filling the air with a ghoulish din. 

And so the Archon gave a speech to great effect

He told the gathered men that they had vanquished the scourge of Elven filth, and as compensation for their service to Tevinter the land so liberated was to be divided among all soldiers who risked life and limb.

The camp erupted with rejoicing at this news, but the Archon raised his hand, 

"There is but one more thing."
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Scattered Fragments IV


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"This piece of earth, the very soil upon which you all now stand, still bears the burden of foul Magic. 

The crowd recoiled with a collective gasp

"Yes indeed" the Archon bellowed in a voice that belied his age "did you assume your enemies  will leave a parting gift?"

"Elven enchantments exist here, concealed within this soil to curse, possess and to plague your inheritance..."

Modifié par vilnii, 29 avril 2010 - 11:51 .

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Posté 29 avril 2010 - 05:03

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Oh nice again Vilnii! I love this. More please? *bats lashes at Vil*

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Posté 29 avril 2010 - 05:10

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Joins Gil in batting eyelashes for more. Adds puppy dog eyes. Please? Also a FF link when (or if) you post there. Then I can favorite your story.

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Posté 29 avril 2010 - 05:27

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Oh what Tanith said. And when and if you post on FF, I can do another shout out to direct everyone to it. : D
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