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[LadyDamodred]

*chuckles* Poor Alistair. I take it it'll be awhile before he utters the line "I'll be in my bunk" huh?

[Miri1984]

Oh, poor Alistair indeed. I've been having long chats with my husband who went to a Catholic boarding school - the things people do to children, it's just awful. There should be an age of consent for religion .

[Demetra11]

I am looking forward for more. Everytime a chapter ends i am like... oh no - more please, please?

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 7 up.

I keep meaning to say stuff at the beginning of my chapters but forgetting - so I'll do it here first and say thank you to everyone who has reviewed so far, and also thank you to those who have added my stories to their alerts and their favourites list. It's incredibly flattering and spurs me onto greater heights of motivation (not that I need huge amounts of motivation, but every little bit helps)!

So, thank you! You all ROCK!

[LadyDamodred]

Nice. The only thing I would be careful of is to make sure transitions are clear. When I got to this part:



"But I thought you might benefit from hearing exactly what the other boys saw."



Alistair could hardly believe it. He walked back to the dormitory with Ewan and Yuri beside him.



It was like I walked off a cliff. I had to go back and reread b/c the cut was so abrupt that I wasn't sure what happened. But other than that, very good. Thank you.

[Miri1984]

Yes, I had trouble with that transition. I'll play with it a bit and upload again if I can get it right.

Edited to add: I've changed it a bit. For some reason last night it wouldn't work, but this morning the words were right there. Obviously need to make sure I sleep on a chapter more often .

Modifié par Miri1984, 21 avril 2010 - 09:30 .

[Demetra11]

Thank you so much! It´s 1:15 in the night( pm?) in middle europe,

but i had to read this chapter before i go to bed.

It was well worth it.

It is some kind of: finally justice against this thugs, feeling i take with me.

And a smile

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 8 up.

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 9 up. 

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 10 up.

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 11 up. 

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 12 up.

After a couple of days of almost writers block, am on a complete roll here. This was going to be the last chapter but I'm considering going all the way up to Ostagar... Or at least doing an Ostagar chapter since I didn't do that from Alistair's point of view in Beginnings. There's at least one more coming though .

[Demetra11]

So, i had done my chores this morning, i went to my computer.



First thing ( and thats the truth) i went here to look if there was a new chapter.

Three!!!!!!!! You have written a lot while i was sleeping, i am the cat in the cream



Loved them, and yes i would really like to see the circle close once more in Ostagar.

" Unholy desire for cheese" has a new meaning now for me aaww.



*flying away fangirling all over*

[Lintanis]

Consequences
Set twenty-five years after the blight. Miranda and Alistair leave for the deep roads with their son, Duncan taking over as king.

 Just read it all fantastic story. Characters all spot on, could picture all what was going on in my head.  If Bioware need writers they dont need to look very far .

[Miri1984]

Lintanis wrote...

Consequences
Set twenty-five years after the blight. Miranda and Alistair leave for the deep roads with their son, Duncan taking over as king.

 Just read it all fantastic story. Characters all spot on, could picture all what was going on in my head.  If Bioware need writers they dont need to look very far .

Wow, thanks so much! It's always good to know people are still reading the old ones. I have a real soft spot for Consequences, because it was my first EPIC epic and it really set the stage for all my favourite universe characters. Always marvelous to get feedback .

[Lintanis]

have to echo what other people have said about how you wrote morrigan in that story in that shes not evil just a different view on the world :happy:. Think morrigan is my favourite out of them al,l although it is a close call.  still laugh when morrigan says the line thats in my sig when you get to the mage tower  Now i will get back to reading all the other stories you wrote busy busy busy .

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 13 up. 

'Tis finished!

Now onto other things.... what to write... what to write... 

[Miri1984]

 I really wanted to do some Anders one-shots but this one grabbed me by the neck last night and demanded to be written. Sorry! Anders one shots will follow - this won't be quite as epic as some of my others!

Caged Chapter 1 is up.

[LadyDamodred]

*returns and catches up eagerly*



Hooray!

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 2 is up.

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 3 is up.

[LadyDamodred]

Very nice. I'm torn between trying to decide if Miranda would be very practical about it or react in absolute horror. Leaning towards the former with a touch of the latter.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 26 avril 2010 - 08:37 .

[Miri1984]

I'm trying to make her the same character but with a different history - so yes, it's hard to separate what her reaction would be. I have a horrible feeling I may have pushed her too far, actually. This was meant to be a Cousland Alistair romance but I think all the romance is going to be on Alistair's side for a good while yet .

[LadyDamodred]

Haha, indeed. From what her character seems to be, I think she would accept it, but Alistair would have to be oh-so-careful with her. You know, showing her men aren't all bad, that he really is good and only wants what's best for her...



*coughMaricandFionacough*

[Miri1984]

Hehe. Let's hope he's his father's son. But not in every way. We don't want him disappearing at sea.