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[Miri1984]

 Chapter 4 up.

Disturbing imagery at the end, just to warn people..

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 5 up.

[LadyDamodred]

You are a machine. *shakes head* Very nice. Keep it up.

[Miri1984]

I know, I'm sorry. As I said before, it's an addiction.



I need a new DA expansion to slow me down (and give me more material!)

[LadyDamodred]

lol, don't apologize!



>.>

<.<



Just gimme chapter 6.

[Miri1984]

Hehe. Working on it. Busy day today though. The influx of chapters over the weekend was because it was ANZAC day here and hubby took four days off - it's amazing how much writing you can get done when the toddler's out at the aquarium . Mind you she's been pretty tolerant of me lately - I think she thinks the laptop is just another limb.

[Gilgamesh1138]

Oh, oh Chapter 6? Did I hear that *perks ears like Scooby Doo* HUZZAH!

LOL and writing when the toddler is at the aquarium, I can see that. If my hubby would just go out by himself, I could write so much more. And I write more when he goes and takes a nap. I guess what I am saying is that husbands are like big more articulate toddlers? ROFL!

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 27 avril 2010 - 10:50 .

[Miri1984]

More articulate that SOME toddlers .

[Gilgamesh1138]

LOL but not by much, even then! : D

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 6 up.

Again, disturbing stuff here. Might have to put a general disclaimer on at least the next few chapters actually.

[LadyDamodred]

Good chapter. I'm beginning to suspect Miranda is going to have a flashback during her first time with Alistair. >.> Hopefully he's good at comforting.



My only comment is to be careful on some of your transitions. There were two areas that were kind of abrupt and it was a bit jarring an confusing. Otherwise, very much enjoying the characters!

[Miri1984]

Ah, the dreaded transitions again . Thanks for the input - I'll try to watch them. I actually know exactly which two bits you mean as well. This chapter took me a lot longer to write than the others - it seems whenever I have to deal with actual in-game events my muse runs off and hides in a corner. Choices and Beginnings were HELL in some places to write - I don't think I'll ever do an in-game story again!

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 7 up.

[Demetra11]

He was adorable in this chapter

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 8 up.

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 9 up.

[LadyDamodred]

Hooray! *dashes off to read* This is a nice diversion from my clusterf*ck of a chapter that I'm trying to get through.

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 10 up.

Finally worked out why my transitions weren't working by reading this chapter on FF net rather than just posting it. I'm an evil, lazy woman. I'd been using * * * as a POV breaker and it turns out that FF doesn't recognise that symbol. Doh!

Should be more clear now when the changes come!

[Gilgamesh1138]

Miri you are so awesome!!! And you are kilin' me woman! So much talent, so much drive, so many wonderful tales! ARGH! But, if I have to die from something, then your works are well worth it. Oh sweet sting of death, to badly paraphrase Shakespeare. The bard is going to smite me now. LOL!

[Miri1984]

Awww, Gil, I love you too .

[Gilgamesh1138]

*blush* : D *HUGS*

[Miri1984]

 Caged Chapter 11 up

[Gilgamesh1138]

ARGGHHH! It is bloody well 2:51 here in the sodding US and I have to go to bed, but I want to click on the link! 

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 01 mai 2010 - 07:52 .

[Miri1984]

Hehe. Sorry. Usually it would have been up earlier but I spent today asleep .

[Gilgamesh1138]

ROFL well you are a mamma to be. so sleep is important!