The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
#252151
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:50
#252152
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:50
nickFury wrote...
Part of me feels like an idiot driving down a road with signs warning that the bridge is out and I see these and just keep goingwhy o why do I not just stop?
Because that road is paved with the bodies of her tormenters.
#252153
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:51
because you have badass rockets on the back of your car and you know someone set up a ramp at the end of the broken bridge?nickFury wrote...
Part of me feels like an idiot driving down a road with signs warning that the bridge is out and I see these and just keep goingLividity Jones wrote...
nickFury wrote...
Manly tears of disgust and pure unbridled hatred.kingcharles1337 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
kingcharles1337 wrote...
Actually I lied i am reading Reckoning much better.
Get some tissues.
You'll need them.
Manly tears will be shed.
Damn I want to kill something just thinking about it.
Yeah... It's going to get worse.
Fair warning.why o why do I not just stop?
#252154
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:53
Titanium Man wrote...
I haven't been reading Reckoning. I tried to finish The Handmaid's Tale but it was so depressing that it beat me. I need my depression fueled with vengeance and Roaring Rampages of Revenge.
Oh, there will be plenty of that.
#252155
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:55
Lividity Jones wrote...
Titanium Man wrote...
I haven't been reading Reckoning. I tried to finish The Handmaid's Tale but it was so depressing that it beat me. I need my depression fueled with vengeance and Roaring Rampages of Revenge.
Oh, there will be plenty of that.
Well, I need mine sooner, I can't hold that long without it :V
#252156
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:55
#252157
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:59
kingcharles1337 wrote...
This is so awesome.
Give it a minute.
#252158
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 12:59
I wish I saw a tunnel on my FF. XPFsDxRAGE wrote...
I am finally seeing the light at the end of the tunnel for the first time on my FF.
What a relief
#252159
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:00
Lividity Jones wrote...
kingcharles1337 wrote...
This is so awesome.
Give it a minute.
I am going to take it a chapter at a time.
#252160
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:00
YESLividity Jones wrote...
nickFury wrote...
Part of me feels like an idiot driving down a road with signs warning that the bridge is out and I see these and just keep goingwhy o why do I not just stop?
Because that road is paved with the bodies of her tormenters.

and another
#252161
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:02
the thing is, I am 65,000 words into it and just hoped over the 5/6 point.SpatFieya wrote...
I wish I saw a tunnel on my FF. XPFsDxRAGE wrote...
I am finally seeing the light at the end of the tunnel for the first time on my FF.
What a relief
This beast is going to be more of a novel
*facepalm*
Poor Jean Luc, he is going to have a fun time editing it... that is if he still wants to
#252162
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:03
nickFury wrote...
Another way my Shepard works - he's created some fearsome battle armor. When he goes into a fight, he wants to scare the hell out of his enemies. He obscures his eyes, uses dark colors...he wants to be that violent warrior priest. Of course, his mother created fear simply by having a reputation as a warrior maiden who was a skilled blademaster. My Shep has to work a bit harder at it :V
#252163
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:04
#252164
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:04
#252165
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:06
#252166
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:06
nickFury wrote...
Ok now that im filled with fury gona go run a couple miles before it gets dark but heres some Tali to lighten the mood.
I see Shep explaining the concept of Valentines Day (the glorified, nice part, not the corporate money grab part,) before giving her that heart, saying something nice and giving her visor a kiss
#252167
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:07
#252168
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:07
#252169
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:07
*brofist*kingcharles1337 wrote...
Dose fingers.
#252170
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:07
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Phil725 wrote...
giving her visor a kiss
#252171
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:08
#252172
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:08
Hah!FsDxRAGE wrote...
the thing is, I am 65,000 words into it and just hoped over the 5/6 point.
This beast is going to be more of a novel
*facepalm*
Poor Jean Luc, he is going to have a fun time editing it... that is if he still wants to
Yeah, Nuke helped me with the beginning of my FF SoH. When I got it back all I saw was red ink. A lot of people would hate to get a bunch of red ink back on a paper, but in reality, it's good. It helps you make what your writing all that much better. Plus it gives you better ideas on how to write in the future.
Looking forward to your FF. Might hop on my laptop and add some more to mine here in a bit. Need to take advantage of my vacation.
#252173
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:08
#252174
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:10
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
That image inspired this little tidbit...
*Shepard sits up from the table in the Medical Bay, slipping his shirt on over his head as Doctor Chakwas enters. Chakwas quickly examines his now scarless face.*
Chakwas: It looks as though the procedure was a success, Commander. Complete dermal reconstruction.
*Shepard picks up a mirror, proding and pulling at his reconstructed face.*
Chakwas: Commander, if you don't mind me asking... Why did you opt for the procedure? Your scars would have healed in time.
*Shepard slowly turns his head to look out into the Mess Hall, seeing Tali standing with Garrus, the two friends laughing and joking about old times. Shepard sighs.*
Shepard: I want things to go back to the way the were. I don't want to look into a mirror and see how I failed everyone... How I failed her...
Modifié par Lividity Jones, 26 juillet 2010 - 01:10 .
#252175
Posté 26 juillet 2010 - 01:10
red ink is a good thing, you learn from it.SpatFieya wrote...
Hah!FsDxRAGE wrote...
the thing is, I am 65,000 words into it and just hoped over the 5/6 point.
This beast is going to be more of a novel
*facepalm*
Poor Jean Luc, he is going to have a fun time editing it... that is if he still wants to
Yeah, Nuke helped me with the beginning of my FF SoH. When I got it back all I saw was red ink. A lot of people would hate to get a bunch of red ink back on a paper, but in reality, it's good. It helps you make what your writing all that much better. Plus it gives you better ideas on how to write in the future.
Looking forward to your FF. Might hop on my laptop and add some more to mine here in a bit. Need to take advantage of my vacation.




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