Oh THOSE. yes those are one shots. you should put them in a collection on FF.net. there's been something of a deficit in Talimancing lately.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Kira Shepard wrote...
if you're talking about your brilliant collection of minifics I'd more than likely call them viginettes. Oneshots are usually a minimum of 1000 to 3000 words depending on writer preferance.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Kira Shepard wrote...
most are romance one chapter works others are the beginings of stories purposly left unfinished for other writers to take over if they feel up to it though they fall more under challenges then oneshots.RiptideX1090 wrote...
One shots, aren't those one chapter stories, not specifically romance? Or am I mistaken?
In that case, I've got several, and it seems to be my prefered writing style.
I'm talking about the ones in my Blog. Tali's Butterfly. Rain. Healing. And Monster.
The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
#254326
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:43
#254327
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:45
look up morinth romance. you should find it no problem. most will be femsheps because youtube is pervertnickFury wrote...
couldnt find itKira Shepard wrote...
it's called youtube. use it.nickFury wrote...
has any one actually done the deed with morinth does it end up killing you?
Edit: and really no desire to watch it any way just curious as to the answer.
#254328
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:45
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
I don't think he's planning on selling it....RiptideX1090 wrote...
Oh.
In that case, I am substantially not impressed. His color saturation is wrong. He messed up multiple details, and the lighting is boring. Many mistakes for someone who makes a living making art.
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
#254329
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:45
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Hm.... I like.
mmmmm
This picture gives me funny feelings.
#254330
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:46
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
#254331
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:47
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
Please.
I can do better. given the time.
#254332
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:47
#254333
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:48
He's got a pointRunescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
#254334
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:48
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
You're not very bright, are you....?Kira Shepard wrote...
where'd your icon come from rune? with the cut away it looks like shep is stealing tali away from the camera cartoon style

@Rip I know you can do better. You're definitely a good artist and I'm sad you probably won't be able to fill my commission.
#254335
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:48
Miss anything?
#254336
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:49
suck up <_<Runescapeguy9 wrote...
You're not very bright, are you....?Kira Shepard wrote...
where'd your icon come from rune? with the cut away it looks like shep is stealing tali away from the camera cartoon style
*snip*
@Rip I know you can do better. You're definitely a good artist and I'm sad you probably won't be able to fill my commission.
#254337
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:50
Purification- wrote...
He's got a pointRunescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
I assumed it was an amature's work, like myself. If so, it's fairly impressive, despite the details being incorrect and the lighting and ect.
But if it's from a pro, then it's actually fairly dissapointing.
#254338
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:50
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
New guys have to be present for a week before giving insults to veterans.Kalashnikov wrote...
suck up <_<
#254339
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:50
brighter than you closet sadist.Runescapeguy9 wrote...
You're not very bright, are you....?Kira Shepard wrote...
where'd your icon come from rune? with the cut away it looks like shep is stealing tali away from the camera cartoon style
snip
@Rip I know you can do better. You're definitely a good artist and I'm sad you probably won't be able to fill my commission.
#254340
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:50
sorry, i humbly apologizeRunescapeguy9 wrote...
New guys have to be present for a week before giving insults to veterans.Kalashnikov wrote...
suck up <_<
#254341
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:51
Now Rip you can talk the talk, you can handle the ball, but ask yourself are you funky enough to be a globetrotter?RiptideX1090 wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
Please.
I can do better. given the time.
Well ARE YOU?
#254342
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:51
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
I'm just joking. I don't care what anyone says about me anymore. I've gotten enough **** not to care.Kalashnikov wrote...
sorry, i humbly apologize
#254343
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:51
Kira Shepard wrote...
brighter than you closet sadist.Runescapeguy9 wrote...
You're not very bright, are you....?Kira Shepard wrote...
where'd your icon come from rune? with the cut away it looks like shep is stealing tali away from the camera cartoon style
snip
@Rip I know you can do better. You're definitely a good artist and I'm sad you probably won't be able to fill my commission.
Knock it off Dante, I have had it up to here with people in this thread picking on one another. Please, don't.
#254344
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:52
whys it say u joined yesterday?Runescapeguy9 wrote...
I'm just joking. I don't care what anyone says about me anymore. I've gotten enough **** not to care.Kalashnikov wrote...
sorry, i humbly apologize
#254345
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:52
ignore rune he's a prude. ask him about the time he thought about burning tali alive.Kalashnikov wrote...
sorry, i humbly apologizeRunescapeguy9 wrote...
New guys have to be present for a week before giving insults to veterans.Kalashnikov wrote...
suck up <_<
#254346
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:52
nickFury wrote...
Now Rip you can talk the talk, you can handle the ball, but ask yourself are you funky enough to be a globetrotter?RiptideX1090 wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
Please.
I can do better. given the time.
Well ARE YOU?
I'm freaky enough to be your father.
How's that?
#254347
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:52
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Kalashnikov wrote...
whys it say u joined yesterday?
#254348
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:53
i'm scarred for life X_XRiptideX1090 wrote...
nickFury wrote...
Now Rip you can talk the talk, you can handle the ball, but ask yourself are you funky enough to be a globetrotter?RiptideX1090 wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
3 seconds ago you were complaining that you couldn't do this lolRiptideX1090 wrote...
He still got the details wrong. Look at her glove. He didn't even get the little details on it correct. And the armguard... and the shinguards, and her head is too big.
And this is why I never critique or leave comments on other people's art... <_<
Please.
I can do better. given the time.
Well ARE YOU?
I'm freaky enough to be your father.
How's that?
#254349
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:53
Kira Shepard wrote...
ignore rune he's a prude. ask him about the time he thought about burning tali alive.Kalashnikov wrote...
sorry, i humbly apologizeRunescapeguy9 wrote...
New guys have to be present for a week before giving insults to veterans.Kalashnikov wrote...
suck up <_<
And maybe we'll ask you about that time you let it go...
Oh. Wait.
Nevermind.
#254350
Posté 27 juillet 2010 - 12:53
he started it. I just asked a question.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Knock it off Dante, I have had it up to here with people in this thread picking on one another. Please, don't.




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