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michaelrsa wrote...
Tairis, read Razor's Edge last night. I like how you are handling the Talimance in it. I like how you've slowed it down and let it build.
Love Garrus' ability to know exactly what Shepard is going to do. Reminds me of a minific I wrote about Shepard just laying around when Garrus starts talking to him through his mind and Shepard is not the least bit surprised by this.
Giving Grunt that uncontrollable urge to fight was also something they should have done in the game. Interstitium did this well and I like how you did it, though a bit more rage might have been appropriate.
Glad you liked it. Trying to gives things a more logical progression instead of the game which really throws things together very quickly.
And I didn't want to make Grunt rage crazy... just more uncontrolled.
Lastly, I only see one small issue. Adams lived
Yea on the Adams thing I've actually been leaving it up in the air. After all, Shepard's info hasnt exactly come from the best sources.
(IE 'Most the crew got out' yet you collect 20 dog tags from the wreckage)
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