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#35676
Simon9one

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.


putrid
foul
stinking
stench
odorous
rotten
ripe
reeking
sulfur
vomit-inducing (or vomitous, if you're feeling fancy).

Could think of more if you need them.

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Levi va Normandy

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.

Vile stench, aroma, sent....err 

#35678
MrBoomba

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Simon9one wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...

Bloodhuman1 wrote...
And there's your proof.

She left for good reasons.

You didn't call her Tali...did you?


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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.

"A pungent odor wafted through the air, bringing tears to Shepard's eyes and forcing Tali to turn off her olfactory filters."

Obviously could be better written, but that's my $0.02

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.


rotten
repugnant

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.


Pungeant, foul, repugnant...

#35682
Simon9one

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CamoBadger wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

What happened to the traditional relationship? In ways Tali and Shepard's relationship is more moralistic than several real life relationships I personally know of. My mom and dad splitting up cuz he cheated on her, now my mom is having an affair with a married man. My sister can't NOT be with someone, some women NEED and NEED, and what does Tali say? "You deserve... to be happy with someone." "I understand if you need to
find something... someone... else...."

:crying:

-snip-


That was my favorite line in the game. It is so touching, it made me like Tali even more.



I wanted to hug her right there.  But I couldn't.:crying:

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YOU GUYS ARE ****ING AWSOME!!!!! I thank you all. Thank you!!!!



I would give you all a hug. But im not Tali...unless you want me to ...dress up as Tali. Eh Eh?? :D :D



Thanks for the help guys.

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Jake71887 wrote...

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Waiting :wub:

#35686
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knight5923 wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

lol what?! I mean playing with their feet under the table or something with your feet. You never did that? Turns some women on :whistle:

Course, just saying, I've got pretty nimble toes;) I play This little piggy:D

LOL thanks for that I thought I already had my lol moment of the day but looks like this is gunna be a good knight (pun intended)

Jake71887 wrote...

TMI

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And here I thought you were bored [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/grin.png[/smilie]

Modifié par Goat_Shepard, 15 avril 2010 - 12:34 .


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Shazzammer2 wrote...

YOU GUYS ARE ****ING AWSOME!!!!! I thank you all. Thank you!!!!

I would give you all a hug. But im not Tali...unless you want me to ...dress up as Tali. Eh Eh?? :D :D

Thanks for the help guys.


Any time Shazz

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Lividity Jones

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Simon9one wrote...

CamoBadger wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

What happened to the traditional relationship? In ways Tali and Shepard's relationship is more moralistic than several real life relationships I personally know of. My mom and dad splitting up cuz he cheated on her, now my mom is having an affair with a married man. My sister can't NOT be with someone, some women NEED and NEED, and what does Tali say? "You deserve... to be happy with someone." "I understand if you need to
find something... someone... else...."

:crying:

-snip-


That was my favorite line in the game. It is so touching, it made me like Tali even more.



I wanted to hug her right there.  But I couldn't.:crying:


I remember when I heard her refer to herself as "something" for a moment there I felt angry. That she thought so low of herself...

#35689
MrBoomba

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

hi guys im stuck in my fanfic again and need some assistance.

How would you describe a 'disgusting' smell? Could you please list some words that are associated with smell. Doesn't have to comprehensive just need to get the gears in my head turning.


Grotesk if spell right i doubt it is
Grousomely vile
putrid
Demoralizing.

#35690
Jake71887

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Goat_Shepard wrote...

And here I thought you were bored [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/grin.png[/smilie]



Bored isn't something you can fix by being more boring :wizard:

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So I heard there was some more tali action we even had some Morrigan postages over here

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runescapeguy9 wrote...

Jake71887 wrote...


Waiting :wub:


For?

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Andaius20 wrote...

So I heard there was some more tali action we even had some Morrigan postages over here

And Sten as well. Really put a dampener on things. I'd prefer if the DA crew stayed in their own universe.

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Simon9one

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Lividity Jones wrote...

Simon9one wrote...

CamoBadger wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

What happened to the traditional relationship? In ways Tali and Shepard's relationship is more moralistic than several real life relationships I personally know of. My mom and dad splitting up cuz he cheated on her, now my mom is having an affair with a married man. My sister can't NOT be with someone, some women NEED and NEED, and what does Tali say? "You deserve... to be happy with someone." "I understand if you need to
find something... someone... else...."

:crying:

-snip-


That was my favorite line in the game. It is so touching, it made me like Tali even more.



I wanted to hug her right there.  But I couldn't.:crying:


I remember when I heard her refer to herself as "something" for a moment there I felt angry. That she thought so low of herself...


Oh gods...:crying: 

The words were just so perfectly chosen and delivered.

This is why we love Tali.:wub:

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Levi va Normandy

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Gah!! NEW UNSEEN TALI DIOLAGE!

BRAND NEW FROM BIOWARE!!!! NOT JOKING!!!



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Strawberry Kiwi wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...
Waiting :wub:

For?

What do you mean "for"...
You know who I am?

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Goat_Shepard

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Lividity Jones wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...
 and what does Tali say? "You deserve... to be happy with someone." "I understand if you need to
find something... someone... else...."

:crying:


I remember when I heard her refer to herself as "something" for a moment there I felt angry. That she thought so low of herself...


Damnit Lividity why did you have to point that out to me?

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*heart attack....dies...waits for TIM to start another Lazerus Project*


#35698
MrBoomba

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Levi va Normandy wrote...

Gah!! NEW UNSEEN TALI DIOLAGE!
BRAND NEW FROM BIOWARE!!!! NOT JOKING!!!


Make it linkable nub

#35699
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runescapeguy9 wrote...

knight5923 wrote...
Bah, she doesn't deserve you then;)
If women truly knew how romantically inclined we Talimancers are ........... well, I'll just leave the rest to your imagination^_^

She knew.

well, you still deserve someone who understands and accepts you for who you are:)
You're accepted here, bro;)
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Jake71887 wrote...

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