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[RiptideX1090]

Godur wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Need to work on your sentence structure and grammer mate.

Poor structure and the like makes it hard to read...

Yes I agree. I need to get better at proofreading my stuff too, I think it might be related.

Possibly.

Proof reading your own work is very difficult, though it can be done. If you DO prefer to proofread on your own though, ALWAYS wait a day or two after finishing to do it. You need fresh eyes to do it properly.

[Someone With Mass]

Oh, man. Am I going to waste money when ME3 comes out or what...



I'm going to own both versions of ME1 & 2 soon. (PC & 360. I couldn't decide, so I picked both. Getting the DLC for both is going to be sooo fun.)



And I'm not so sure if I want to do the same thing with ME3.

[RiptideX1090]

Someone With Mass wrote...

Oh, man. Am I going to waste money when ME3 comes out or what...

I'm going to own both versions of ME1 & 2 soon. (PC & 360. I couldn't decide, so I picked both. Getting the DLC for both is going to be sooo fun.)

And I'm not so sure if I want to do the same thing with ME3.

Random post is random.

Why get both? Why not one? What the hell is the point?

[Someone With Mass]

RiptideX1090 wrote...


Random post is random.

Why get both? Why not one? What the hell is the point?

Í ask myself that sometimes.

I simply don't know.

[RiptideX1090]

Someone With Mass wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...


Random post is random.

Why get both? Why not one? What the hell is the point?

Í ask myself that sometimes.

I simply don't know.

That's wasteful. Why waste the money?

[Godur]

Decided to check out my first chapter, see if there was anything I could improve.

The format is messed up for some reason.

[RiptideX1090]

Godur wrote...

Decided to check out my first chapter, see if there was anything I could improve.
The format is messed up for some reason.

Indeed.

From what I understand that happens sometimes here.

[Godur]

I'm going to lurk mode while I work on clearing it up.

[RiptideX1090]

Godur wrote...

I'm going to lurk mode while I work on clearing it up.

Good luck.

[Someone With Mass]

RiptideX1090 wrote...


That's wasteful. Why waste the money?

I guess I did it because I went with the 360 at first. And now when I have a good computer, I want to see what version I should stick with.

Either that, or I'm just a sucker for impulses.

[RiptideX1090]

Someone With Mass wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...


That's wasteful. Why waste the money?

I guess I did it because I went with the 360 at first. And now when I have a good computer, I want to see what version I should stick with.

Either that, or I'm just a sucker for impulses.

I see...

[Talimancer]

Morning Everyone!

How is it going?

[RiptideX1090]

Talimancer wrote...

Morning Everyone!
How is it going?

It's deader than Sovereign in here.

[Godur]

Done with fixing the format now, hopefully it's easier to read. Grammar issues and similar I figured would be best if I worked on in later parts, else I would end up rewriting the entire chapter.

Modifié par Godur, 22 avril 2010 - 09:45 .

[Talimancer]

FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.................................
*throws televesion out the window*

Modifié par Talimancer, 22 avril 2010 - 09:58 .

[Godur]

A little quiet in here isn't it?

[Someone With Mass]

The pace will kick up in a few hours. Too bad it's almost always about the same thing. Just "Why should Tali be in ME3?" or "My fanfic is almost done!" with a few "I wonder if the quarians have (Insert part of body here)." And some few pics.



Well, I'm going to take a shower and head out. Can't rot on the internet all day.



Keelah se'lai.

[RiptideX1090]

Rakia_Time wrote...

 

This pic is SO fake.

Everyone knows Tali uses a shotgun. <_<

[RiptideX1090]

*sigh*



Tough crowd...

[RiptideX1090]

So, Riptide, how about that there Tali? Quite a gal isn't she?



Indeed Riptide, I think she has a cool accent and an awesome personality.



That's interesting Riptide, but I prefer her for her tech powers and the awesome that is her hips.



That's not very nice Riptide, you shouldn't objectify Tali's body that way, it's disrespectful!



But Dude! Have you seen the body that girl has?



Actually Riptide... I'm afraid not... damn enviromental suit...



That's the best part though in my opinion Riptide... even with the suit, you know she's a total bombshell.



Indeed Riptide... Indeed...



Great... the conversation here has gotten so slow I'm talking to myself...

[RiptideX1090]

Well. Guess that means I'm the last man standing. I'm the Sole Survivor. The last Talimancer standing between fandom and abandonment. I shall not falter!

[Kami102]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Rakia_Time wrote...

 

This pic is SO fake.

Everyone knows Tali uses a shotgun. <_<

EPIC!

It should have Shepard and M.C too though

or...

Shepard is... Master Chief?


CONSPIRACY!

[Talimancer]

HOLD THE LINE!

[FatherNestor]

I'm here. For now.

Need to reach 2500 pages ASAP. At least just to ruin haters' attempts to ruin that page.