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[SirEmilCrane]

Simon9one wrote...

Working on another chapter right now for mine
Later tonight I'm going to read all the chapters of yours to get the full story.

Please do...
I like your story, I wish your chapters were longer

[SirEmilCrane]

videowiz186 wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Is alright. Happens to myself all the time.

Ignoring STG is a bad idea

As are Quarian marines.

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

[GuardianAngel470]

Azint wrote...

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Azint wrote...

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

To clarify, I can't change society, but I can change individuals.  I've done it before multiple times.

It is a very rewarding feeling.

It is.  Knowing that you made a difference is very rewarding.  What's even more rewarding though is knowing you made a difference when trained medical and psychological professionals didn't.  I love that feeling.

Now I regret not charging them.

Yeah, but getting paid to do it cheapens the good you do.  Doing it out of the kindness of your heart is what makes it so worthwhile.

[Alphyn]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

The geth here don't want to kill; they want to love.

Especially Tali.

[SirEmilCrane]

Alphyn wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

The geth here don't want to kill; they want to love.

Especially Tali.

Damn geth, stealing our women, stealing our jobs, stealing our... pride

[GuardianAngel470]

Alphyn wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

The geth here don't want to kill; they want to love.

Especially Tali.

Bow chicka bow wow.

[videowiz186]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Is alright. Happens to myself all the time.

Ignoring STG is a bad idea

As are Quarian marines.

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

Alright. STG unit ready.

[Azint]

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Yeah, but getting paid to do it cheapens the good you do.  Doing it out of the kindness of your heart is what makes it so worthwhile.

Nothing bad about being rewarded for good works.

[videowiz186]

runescapeguy9 wrote...

GuardianAngel470 wrote...
Who's Kilmor?

Ahhh....not really important. Him and video had a talk with me

Is past, Rune. And attitude was odd. Thought was under Thorian influence.

Modifié par videowiz186, 08 avril 2010 - 10:03 .

[GuardianAngel470]

Azint wrote...

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Yeah, but getting paid to do it cheapens the good you do.  Doing it out of the kindness of your heart is what makes it so worthwhile.

Nothing bad about being rewarded for good works.

True, but as long as you didn't do it for the reward.

[Simon9one]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Simon9one wrote...

Working on another chapter right now for mine
Later tonight I'm going to read all the chapters of yours to get the full story.

Please do...
I like your story, I wish your chapters were longer

I'll work on that.  The last few were definitely shorter than I would have liked them to be.
I usually write in big chunks, then break them up wherever I can find a good stopping point.

[Alphyn]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Damn geth, stealing our women, stealing our jobs, stealing our... pride

:happy:

[NuclearBuddha]

Place:  Normandy mess hall.
Time:  The day after the suicide mission.

The crew sits for their evening meal.  More are there than usual, the shared hardship having brought them all together.  Thane sits uncomfortably at the corner of a table, trying to maintain a least some distance from everyone else.  Jack kicks her legs irreverantly while she sits on the food prep counter, ignoring Mess Sergeant Gardner's dirty looks as she shovels in spoonfuls of gumbo.  Though exhausted from the fight and the ongoing repairs, the crew's chatter is animated and almost euphoric.

Tali sits next to Shepard, hands folded demurely across her lap, having finished her tube of paste long before anyone else had cleared their tray.  She's feeling a little out of sorts, suddenly self-conscious of sitting so close to Shepard.  The fever and sinus problems aren't helping. 

The assembled crew laughs and Tali with them, as Goldstein finishes his hilarious retelling of Matthews stumbling all over himself when he met with the Consort.  As the laugher starts to die down, her irritated throat and lungs start to seize and Tali is struck by a coughing fit.

Tali:  * cough cough, hack!  cough! *

Shepard:  Tali, are you alright?

The crew has fallen silent, surprised by the obvious concern in Shepard's voice.

Tali:  No, I'm fine, just a little...

Crewman Hadley giggles, then abruptly falls silent, placing her hand over her mouth.  Everyone turns to look at her.

Tali:  * Ah ah ACHOO! * 

More nervous laughter ripples through the seated crew members.  Crewman Rolston starts clapping.  The assembly dissolves into applause, laughter and catcalls as Shepard puts an arm around the quarian's thin shoulders and pulls her a little closer.

[SirEmilCrane]

Simon9one wrote...


I'll work on that.  The last few were definitely shorter than I would have liked them to be.
I usually write in big chunks, then break them up wherever I can find a good stopping point.

I usuall write until I think I've written too much, then wrap it up

[Azint]

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Azint wrote...

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Yeah, but getting paid to do it cheapens the good you do.  Doing it out of the kindness of your heart is what makes it so worthwhile.

Nothing bad about being rewarded for good works.

True, but as long as you didn't do it for the reward.

Obligatory Futurama reference;
"When you do things right, people won't be sure you've done anything at all."

[Simon9one]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Alphyn wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

You remembered!
I feel like killing some geth, any here?

The geth here don't want to kill; they want to love.

Especially Tali.

Damn geth, stealing our women, stealing our jobs, stealing our... pride

Dey tuk er Jobs!

[chool77]

hello every one....



whats every one talking about... geth taking women?

[SirEmilCrane]

chool77 wrote...

hello every one....

whats every one talking about... geth taking women?

DEY TUK ER JOBS!

[Alphyn]

GuardianAngel470 wrote...

Bow chicka bow wow.

Let just say that Tali wants to do more than "experiment" the geth.