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[NuclearBuddha]

Landline wrote...

Don't shoot! Here are the next three paragraphs to proove it!

...and when she opened them again she found herself in a very
different place. She looked around the room quickly trying to place
where she way. She quickly identified her surroundings as Shepards
cabin.What? What am I doing here? What happened... Oh... Her
line of thought was cut short when her eyes came resting on Shepard
sleeping next to her, and the events of the past two came back to her.
She guessed that she rolled away from him when she was asleep, she
quickly corrected this by pressing her body up to his and by laying her
arm across his chest.It was just a dream. He chose me, not her. I'm the one that can make him happy... I'm so lucky... As
she finished her thought she realized just how lucky she was. It was
harder to find a woman that didn't want Shepard then it was to find one
that wanted him. He could literally have any woman he wanted of any
race he wanted, there was even a krogan that put out a breeding request
for him. If he wanted he could probably even find a group of women who
would be willing to share him. With all of his options he chose her.
She wasn't one of the millions that wanted him, she was the one that
had him, she was the only one that he wanted.

LOL.

[Scalpels]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Landline wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
I takes a very special kind of cruelty for a person to do what Miranda did.

I'm pretty sure it would look something like this:


Tali wasn't an idiot, she knew the score. They were
two hours out from the Omega 4 relay. A few minutes ago, Miranda had
come down and kicked her out of engineering. A few seconds ago she saw
Shepard follow her in. She didn't need to guess what they were doing in
there, and why Miranda had chosen that spot to do it. She was rubbing
her face in her victory, she was taking Shepard in her domain. Making
the simple act a personal message. "I won" She leaned on the console
outside of the elevator overlooking the garage. She told herself that
she wanted Shepard to be happy, that she didn't care who he was with as
long as he was happy. It didn't work. She
shuddered struggling to hold in her tears, she heard footsteps
approaching but took no notice of them until she felt a light tap on
her shoulder. She looked up into the face of Zaeed.
"Hey," he said, the normally gruff mercenary had a look of compassion
on his face that looked completely out of place on him. "you look like
you could use some rest, you can use my cot if you want, I wont be
needing it anyways, got some things to take care of up in the armory." "Th-Thank you." Tali's grief was replaced by surprise. There is probably a story behind that... She
thought as she began to make her way for the starboard cargo bay. As
she walked she couldn't help but wish that she was going to Shepards
cabin. As she lay down on the cot she couldn't help but wish that that
cot was Shepards bed. She tried to push the thoughts out of her mind as
she closed her eyes...



Don't worry, it's all a dream and she wakes up in Shepards bed....

You rock for using Zaeed.

Seconded! Good choice. Fic does cultivate feeling.

[sergio71785]

I'm the same age as Tali'Zorah.

You could say, I'm like the Tali of this thread...

<3:blush:

Modifié par sergio71785, 09 avril 2010 - 06:30 .

[NuclearBuddha]

Scalpels wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Scalpels wrote...
Popular among adults too. Attended Steampunk panels at Comic Con San Diego 3 consecutive years. Current age: 33. Mate also into Steampunk. Enjoy victorian aesthetic. Fantastic SCIENCE! as opposed to practical science. Good to work with hands too. Missing "hand crafted" feel in modern electronics.

Finally!  Now I know I'm not the oldest person here.

Am happy to take title. Used to being oldest.

The feeling is new to me.  They just keep getting younger, don't they.

[pvt fc jenkins]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

It damn well better be!

There is nothing I would enjoy more than ejecting Miranda out of the airlock and into the nearest star.

"Derelict" Collector Ship mission - End scene - Shepard, Tali, and Miranda fleeing towards shuttle - Right at the end Shepard trips Miranda and closes the shuttle door behind him.

"What the FFFFFUUUUU"

"OMG I ALMOST DIDN'T DO IT, I ALMOST DIDN'T DO IT!" *half five*

I kid, I kid this is actually my squad

The Collector Ship was an obvious trap. There was no way in hell I was bringing Tali in there.

Yeah, I took Mordin (for scientific opinion) and Grunt (for muscle)

[FsDxRAGE]

lololol

[Lividity Jones]

Landline wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Landline wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
I takes a very special kind of cruelty for a person to do what Miranda did.

I'm pretty sure it would look something like this:


Tali wasn't an idiot, she knew the score. They were
two hours out from the Omega 4 relay. A few minutes ago, Miranda had
come down and kicked her out of engineering. A few seconds ago she saw
Shepard follow her in. She didn't need to guess what they were doing in
there, and why Miranda had chosen that spot to do it. She was rubbing
her face in her victory, she was taking Shepard in her domain. Making
the simple act a personal message. "I won" She leaned on the console
outside of the elevator overlooking the garage. She told herself that
she wanted Shepard to be happy, that she didn't care who he was with as
long as he was happy. It didn't work. She
shuddered struggling to hold in her tears, she heard footsteps
approaching but took no notice of them until she felt a light tap on
her shoulder. She looked up into the face of Zaeed.
"Hey," he said, the normally gruff mercenary had a look of compassion
on his face that looked completely out of place on him. "you look like
you could use some rest, you can use my cot if you want, I wont be
needing it anyways, got some things to take care of up in the armory." "Th-Thank you." Tali's grief was replaced by surprise. There is probably a story behind that... She
thought as she began to make her way for the starboard cargo bay. As
she walked she couldn't help but wish that she was going to Shepards
cabin. As she lay down on the cot she couldn't help but wish that that
cot was Shepards bed. She tried to push the thoughts out of her mind as
she closed her eyes...



Don't worry, it's all a dream and she wakes up in Shepards bed....

It damn well better be!

There is nothing I would enjoy more than ejecting Miranda out of the airlock and into the nearest star.

Don't shoot! Here are the next three paragraphs to proove it!

...and when she opened them again she found herself in a very
different place. She looked around the room quickly trying to place
where she way. She quickly identified her surroundings as Shepards
cabin.What? What am I doing here? What happened... Oh... Her
line of thought was cut short when her eyes came resting on Shepard
sleeping next to her, and the events of the past two came back to her.
She guessed that she rolled away from him when she was asleep, she
quickly corrected this by pressing her body up to his and by laying her
arm across his chest.It was just a dream. He chose me, not her. I'm the one that can make him happy... I'm so lucky... As
she finished her thought she realized just how lucky she was. It was
harder to find a woman that didn't want Shepard then it was to find one
that wanted him. He could literally have any woman he wanted of any
race he wanted, there was even a krogan that put out a breeding request
for him. If he wanted he could probably even find a group of women who
would be willing to share him. With all of his options he chose her.
She wasn't one of the millions that wanted him, she was the one that
had him, she was the only one that he wanted.

The definitive summary of why this romance is the best.

[chool77]

Gawd damn... i just did a word count on the question I'm making.... 517





.... i don't think its a question any more

[Goat_Shepard]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

Did you take this?  That is a great shot.

I prefer sending her into the vents, though.  Then they look at each other across that distance just before the mission starts and it's very poignant.

Edit:  and I just realized we're talking about the derelict ship...

Screenshot courtesy of epoch at the peak of his greatness

And a lot of good moments that Sergio is missing by not sending Tali through the vents. "I won't let you down" and her pose is dawful

@Lividy, I take Tali on the Derelict Collector Ship. She kicked ass throwin Chiktikka in the Praetorian's face and making the Scorn's do a 180.

[NuclearBuddha]

Scalpels wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Landline wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
I takes a very special kind of cruelty for a person to do what Miranda did.

I'm pretty sure it would look something like this:


Tali wasn't an idiot, she knew the score. They were
two hours out from the Omega 4 relay. A few minutes ago, Miranda had
come down and kicked her out of engineering. A few seconds ago she saw
Shepard follow her in. She didn't need to guess what they were doing in
there, and why Miranda had chosen that spot to do it. She was rubbing
her face in her victory, she was taking Shepard in her domain. Making
the simple act a personal message. "I won" She leaned on the console
outside of the elevator overlooking the garage. She told herself that
she wanted Shepard to be happy, that she didn't care who he was with as
long as he was happy. It didn't work. She
shuddered struggling to hold in her tears, she heard footsteps
approaching but took no notice of them until she felt a light tap on
her shoulder. She looked up into the face of Zaeed.
"Hey," he said, the normally gruff mercenary had a look of compassion
on his face that looked completely out of place on him. "you look like
you could use some rest, you can use my cot if you want, I wont be
needing it anyways, got some things to take care of up in the armory." "Th-Thank you." Tali's grief was replaced by surprise. There is probably a story behind that... She
thought as she began to make her way for the starboard cargo bay. As
she walked she couldn't help but wish that she was going to Shepards
cabin. As she lay down on the cot she couldn't help but wish that that
cot was Shepards bed. She tried to push the thoughts out of her mind as
she closed her eyes...



Don't worry, it's all a dream and she wakes up in Shepards bed....

You rock for using Zaeed.

Seconded! Good choice. Fic does cultivate feeling.

Zaeed is awesome.

Most of his mission dialogue is great.  The bit on Samara's recruitment with Elnora the mercenary:

"That's an Eclipse uniform.  Turn and face the wall."

[sergio71785]

Damn, that thing minific about Tali/Zaeed has me depressed now.

This is no way to start a morning!

EDIT: Oh wait, nevermind, I read the follow-up. That's better! 

Modifié par sergio71785, 09 avril 2010 - 06:35 .

[FsDxRAGE]

im off for a bit

Keep it classy

[valttu]

*takes out a merc boss with a perfect sniper shot from a mile away*

Yo! Whaddup, G's?

[Lividity Jones]

sergio71785 wrote...

Damn, that thing minific about Tali/Zaeed has me depressed now.

This is no way to start a morning!

Quick, read the rest!

[chool77]

valttu wrote...

*takes out a merc boss with a perfect sniper shot from a mile away*

Yo! Whaddup, G's?

what up dawg!!

[Commander Marrek S]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Commander Marrek S wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Scalpels wrote...

Popular among adults too. Attended Steampunk panels at Comic Con San Diego 3 consecutive years. Current age: 33. Mate also into Steampunk. Enjoy victorian aesthetic. Fantastic SCIENCE! as opposed to practical science. Good to work with hands too. Missing "hand crafted" feel in modern electronics.

Finally!  Now I know I'm not the oldest person here.

Most people who play BioWare games are 18+...>.>

And most are <28, brainiac.

Well genius, most people over 28 have a job, a life, a mate, and have no time for a Candian-made video game.

[Scalpels]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Scalpels wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Finally!  Now I know I'm not the oldest person here.

Am happy to take title. Used to being oldest.

The feeling is new to me.  They just keep getting younger, don't they.

Indeed. Do miss my 20s. Good years.

[Levi va Normandy]

Hey.

Do you guys like that one Tali chick on that Mass effect game?

I know i do.

[Landline]

sergio71785 wrote...

Damn, that thing minific about Tali/Zaeed has me depressed now.

This is no way to start a morning!

It's not a minific! It's an expert from a full fanfiction I've been working on!

I just included that thing as a jumping board for the next part, which you should read.

[valttu]

chool77 wrote...

valttu wrote...

*takes out a merc boss with a perfect sniper shot from a mile away*

Yo! Whaddup, G's?

what up dawg!!

Nothing much, gonna start writing chapter 3 of my fanfic. Would like to get more comments on chapter 2, though...

[NuclearBuddha]

Commander Marrek S wrote...
Well genius, most people over 28 have a job, a life, a mate, and have no time for a Candian-made video game.

It's okay.  When you're older, you'll understand.

[valttu]

Scalpels wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Scalpels wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Finally!  Now I know I'm not the oldest person here.

Am happy to take title. Used to being oldest.

The feeling is new to me.  They just keep getting younger, don't they.

Indeed. Do miss my 20s. Good years.

Hey Scalpels! I'm not sure if you have read the second chapter of my fanfic yet. I would appreciate if you did.

[chool77]

Commander Marrek S wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Commander Marrek S wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Scalpels wrote...

Popular among adults too. Attended Steampunk panels at Comic Con San Diego 3 consecutive years. Current age: 33. Mate also into Steampunk. Enjoy victorian aesthetic. Fantastic SCIENCE! as opposed to practical science. Good to work with hands too. Missing "hand crafted" feel in modern electronics.

Finally!  Now I know I'm not the oldest person here.

Most people who play BioWare games are 18+...>.>

And most are <28, brainiac.

Well genius, most people over 28 have a job, a life, a mate, and have no time for a Candian-made video game.

hahaha i love how "Candian-made" is part of your argument lol

[Lividity Jones]

Landline wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

Damn, that thing minific about Tali/Zaeed has me depressed now.

This is no way to start a morning!

It's not a minific! It's an expert from a full fanfiction I've been working on!

I just included that thing as a jumping board for the next part, which you should read.

We actually had a really awesome string of minifics last night.