Well said. I haven't read the rest of the story yet, however.Lividity Jones wrote...
Didn't feel the need to pretty it up very much.
He loves her.
It's a fact.
The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
#202176
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:16
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
#202177
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:17
RiptideX1090 wrote...
Shall I comment then?
Feel free.
#202178
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:17
adios, mes amis.
#202179
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:17
RiptideX1090 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
RiptideX1090 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
Gentlemen.
It's finished.
Chapter seven, the conclusion of Last Son, is up.
http://social.biowar...7003/blog/6081/
Read and please comment.
Short.
Sweet.
To the point.
I respect that.
Didn't feel the need to pretty it up very much.
He loves her.
It's a fact.
Shall I comment then?
Am I proud of myself? No.
Do I think I do the devil's work? Absolutely.
I posted first.
#202180
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:17
Just_mike wrote...
BigKahuna25 wrote...
Just_mike wrote...
BigKahuna25 wrote...
oooo! Me next! Me next!Dark_Helmet wrote...
40's?Just_mike wrote...
Helmet, you give me the impression of a New Orleans, Chain-smoking, con-man in his early 40's who is known for his white business suit.
You ask, there it is.I accept that I could be wrong.
Really?
A 275-pound, Samoan man.i am disappoint.
rey19.unblog.fr/files/2010/03/umaga.jpg
.....*makes a new squad-member thread*
#202181
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:18
Just_mike wrote...
Am I proud of myself? No.
Do I think I do the devil's work? Absolutely.
I posted first.
Indeed you did.
I'm considering removing it.
#202182
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:20
#202183
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:23
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Well said. I haven't read the rest of the story yet, however.Lividity Jones wrote...
Didn't feel the need to pretty it up very much.
He loves her.
It's a fact.
By all means, take your time.
The ending is really only satisfying if you've read the rest.
#202184
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:24
DFTBA
#202185
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:27
#202186
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:31

Pencil sketch for the work in progress I'm doing for Canned Cream. "Drifting Together" is my take on the holo that David carries around with him of himself and Rin all those years ago...a happier and more innocent time.
Suggestions, comments and concerns please! Outside eyes are the best at finding problems!
Thanks for the help here is a larger res version
#202187
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:32
Wolf Warden wrote...
Pencil sketch for the work in progress I'm doing for Canned Cream. "Drifting Together" is my take on the holo that David carries around with him of himself and Rin all those years ago...a happier and more innocent time.
Suggestions, comments and concerns please! Outside eyes are the best at finding problems!
Thanks for the help here is a larger res version
Oh God... I'm already crying...
#202188
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:32
Which leads me to ask, what is your favorite line, spoken by Tali?
#202189
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:32
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
I expected something...Lividity Jones wrote...
Oh God... I'm already crying...
different.
#202190
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:33
#202191
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:33
#202192
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:33
samjc3 wrote...
One more line and you've got the absolute best.
Which leads me to ask, what is your favorite line, spoken by Tali?
I have to choose?
Oh man... I don't even know...
There are so many gems we have to thank the lovely Miss Sroka for.
#202193
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:33
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
I honestly can't choose. Liz did a great jobsamjc3 wrote...
Which leads me to ask, what is your favorite line, spoken by Tali?
#202194
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:33
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
I expected something...Lividity Jones wrote...
Oh God... I'm already crying...
different.
Suggestions? Did you not like something or was it just hitting a sour yellow note?
#202195
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:34
#202196
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:34
#202197
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:35
Wolf Warden wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
I expected something...Lividity Jones wrote...
Oh God... I'm already crying...
different.
Suggestions? Did you not like something or was it just hitting a sour yellow note?
They look happy.
Better days...
You're doing very well. I look forward to the finished product.
#202198
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:35
Andaius20 wrote...
I must have missed it. Whats going on?
I was hoping for suggestions on my work in progress for canned cream...
if its something else then I'm out of it too.
#202199
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:35
Calculatrice wrote...
Hello brethren. How is the empire?
You wanted sweet Tali lovings?
http://social.biowar...7003/blog/6081/
You got it.
#202200
Posté 23 juin 2010 - 03:36
Lividity Jones wrote...
Wolf Warden wrote...
Pencil sketch for the work in progress I'm doing for Canned Cream. "Drifting Together" is my take on the holo that David carries around with him of himself and Rin all those years ago...a happier and more innocent time.
Suggestions, comments and concerns please! Outside eyes are the best at finding problems!
Thanks for the help here is a larger res version
Oh God... I'm already crying...
Oh... this is just fantastic... wonderful...
NOW I CAN SEE WHAT THEY LOOKED LIKE IN MY HEAD... the images...
DAMN YOU CREAM!!!
Ugh... Now I feel like seriously hurting someone...




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