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NuclearBuddha wrote...
It was storming like a motherf-er over here about an hour ago. I was worried I was going to lose power and look like a big jerk.
Again you slipped more into observation rather than describing the narator's own thoughts of the events. You had a fair balance of both, but not a fair balance for a Lovecraftian story. The idea is to have thee characters appear that they are thinking about everything around them, not necesarrily describe what is happening.NuclearBuddha wrote...
Is Azint still around? He was promising to find fault with me tonight.
NuclearBuddha wrote...
It's either that or 'shipping, I guess.Lividity Jones wrote...
Honestly, I am cool with either outcome.
I'm weird like that.
But that won't stop my endless speculation.
...Which is why I told you that you have written it quite well.NuclearBuddha wrote...
It's f-ing hard to describe any kind of romantic attraction since HPL left no examples to go by. I've read Thing on the Doorstep like 10 times now.Azint wrote...
This was very well-put.
The next section will hopefully be a treat since I'm planning one of those horrifically long monologues that HPL sometimes did. You know, where half the story is one character speaking in extravagantly long paragraphs? HPL was so wacky about dialogue.Azint wrote...
Again you slipped more into observation rather than describing the narator's own thoughts of the events. You had a fair balance of both, but not a fair balance for a Lovecraftian story. The idea is to have thee characters appear that they are thinking about everything around them, not necesarrily describe what is happening.NuclearBuddha wrote...
Is Azint still around? He was promising to find fault with me tonight.
And I am appreciative of the praise. It's just a little difficult. I'm concerned about what I'm going to do when/if I get to the consummation in Shadow Over Alarei.Azint wrote...
...Which is why I told you that you have written it quite well.
NuclearBuddha wrote...
Lovely!
Though I'm surpised you chose that quote over the obvious "fear is the oldest and strongest emotion of
mankind..." one.
And thank you very much, BTW.
It produces salivation and uncontrollable shuddering?cannedcream wrote...
It would be like your own Pavlov experiment.
Only instead of dogs and bells it's Talimancers and a photo of Lovecraft.
That is one of the cornerstones to any story of his. You should be careful with what you write.NuclearBuddha wrote...
The next section will hopefully be a treat since I'm planning one of those horrifically long monologues that HPL sometimes did. You know, where half the story is one character speaking in extravagantly long paragraphs? HPL was so wacky about dialogue.
NuclearBuddha wrote...
It produces salivation and uncontrollable shuddering?cannedcream wrote...
It would be like your own Pavlov experiment.
Only instead of dogs and bells it's Talimancers and a photo of Lovecraft.
I'm going through my "OHGODWHAT" folder at an alarming rate myself.RedTracer7 wrote...
I've had that picture of a forest in my "spooky pictures" folder for awhile now. It just seemed to fit your tale.
Before or after Shepard gets over the madness of the revelation?NuclearBuddha wrote...
And I am appreciative of the praise. It's just a little difficult. I'm concerned about what I'm going to do when/if I get to the consummation in Shadow Over Alarei.Azint wrote...
...Which is why I told you that you have written it quite well.
I have a similar folder...NuclearBuddha wrote...
I'm going through my "OHGODWHAT" folder at an alarming rate myself.RedTracer7 wrote...
I've had that picture of a forest in my "spooky pictures" folder for awhile now. It just seemed to fit your tale.
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NuclearBuddha wrote...
I'm going through my "OHGODWHAT" folder at an alarming rate myself.RedTracer7 wrote...
I've had that picture of a forest in my "spooky pictures" folder for awhile now. It just seemed to fit your tale.
NuclearBuddha wrote...
It produces salivation and uncontrollable shuddering?cannedcream wrote...
It would be like your own Pavlov experiment.
Only instead of dogs and bells it's Talimancers and a photo of Lovecraft.
During, maybe?Azint wrote...
Before or after Shepard gets over the madness of the revelation?NuclearBuddha wrote...
And I am appreciative of the praise. It's just a little difficult. I'm concerned about what I'm going to do when/if I get to the consummation in Shadow Over Alarei.Azint wrote...
...Which is why I told you that you have written it quite well.
Pretty much everything I've posted for CotEM has come from that folder. But yeah, some of it is more OHGODWHAT than others.RedTracer7 wrote...
I'm assuming your referring to that "corpse-orgy" from the last post? Yeah... that fits OHGODWHAT perfectly.
Heck yeah. I can always use more abandoned buildings.Azint wrote...
http://www.opacity.us/
You may get some use out of this website. Photos of abandoned buildings, source of inspiration for details maybe?
And I would like to hear it.NuclearBuddha wrote...
During, maybe?
I've got some great ideas for the Call of the Elder Machines/Shadow Over Alarei divide.
NuclearBuddha wrote...
During, maybe?
I've got some great ideas for the Call of the Elder Machines/Shadow Over Alarei divide.
Some of these are definitely the buildings Lovecraft was writing about. There are some absolute gems in that archive.NuclearBuddha wrote...
Heck yeah. I can always use more abandoned buildings.Azint wrote...
http://www.opacity.us/
You may get some use out of this website. Photos of abandoned buildings, source of inspiration for details maybe?
Yeah, I noticed that Danvers was in the list. You've seen Session 9, right?Azint wrote...
Some of these are definitely the buildings Lovecraft was writing about. There are some absolute gems in that archive.
Hilarity ensues...Lividity Jones wrote...
During? Oh wow.
That's going to be a rough one to get over.
Not exactly something you can just bring up over a quiet brunch.
Miss Zorah: By the way...
NuclearBuddha wrote...
Heck yeah. I can always use more abandoned buildings.Azint wrote...
http://www.opacity.us/
You may get some use out of this website. Photos of abandoned buildings, source of inspiration for details maybe?
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