Lividity Jones wrote...
Not to derail the thread again, but I'd like to test the waters.
Daro'Xen nar Khalos had never experienced the desert. The sand beating against her visor was a new sensation, if an unwated one; one of many she had learned to endure on her Pilgrimage. Caleston was, without doubt, the most unpleasant world she had visited. Entire plains of molten sulfur, sandstorms that blocked out a distant sun, towering foundries populated by dirt-crusted miners. If it wasn't for the unusual abundance of raw materials, she would not have bothered. The capital of Syneu was home to the very foundries that made this world the largest source of drive core material in the Traverse. Just a small shipment to bring home to the Flotilla would be enough for any captain to offer her a place in their crew. Walking through the streets of the capital, volcanic air carrying more heat than even her suit could compensate for, she could see the looks of disdain she received from these humans. She had heard of them. Newcomers to the galaxy after their war with the turians. Apparently, it didn't take much for an entire race to choose to hate her own.
What do you think? Comments? Concerns?
Sounds very good.
When is it taking place? Fifteen years or so after FCW?




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