NuclearBuddha wrote...
Shadowomega23 wrote...
I prefer the coloration on the orginal. Using this pic sence it was easier to find.
Yep thats the one.
The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
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#210501
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:01
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Yep thats the one.
Retour en haut
#210502
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:03
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What? Say something! Or am I so beautiful you have no words left?Shadowomega23 wrote...
Yep thats the one.
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#210503
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:03
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Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Your opinion is your own. I believe it sucks.Ryshan wrote...
Beg to differ.
@Shadow I've got all 6 versions in my album on TP and on r.k.com
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.
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Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:04
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Bah.Ryshan wrote...
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.
The gear made a metallic noise when it dropped to the floor. It seemed to echo on forever in the silence of the cabin. Shepard could do little more than stare at the beauty before him. Through all the fights he had been through, he never once felt this nervousness that plagued him now.
Tali. I... was all he could get out. They immediately embraced each other. They sat there, fused into one being, each needing the other to be complete.
I love you. Tali was the first to break the silence. Shepard began sliding his hands towards Tali's face.
All of the galaxy depends on us. This mission, this goal, I wouldn't be able to do it without you.
Oh Shepard, you're just-- He interupted:
The people outside this room fight for their own reasons. Their own lives. When I woke up on that table two years ago, I thought you were gone. My motivation, my life, was empty. I'm not doing this for the galaxy Tali, I'm fighting for you.
Tali's grip on Shepard loosened. Her mind was racing. The man she loved, hero to the galaxy, was giving everything he had to be with her, and to make her happy.
Tali, if you're willing and we survive, I want to marry you.
The tears began to flow once more in Tali's eyes. There was no possible way to speak, to convey how much she wanted to be with Shepard for the rest of her life as well. She quickly leaned in and kissed him.
#210505
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:05
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Rune, I'm only going to say this once, because I'm somewhat of the opinion that your "it all sucks" stance is a plea for attention.Ryshan wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Your opinion is your own. I believe it sucks.Ryshan wrote...
Beg to differ.
@Shadow I've got all 6 versions in my album on TP and on r.k.com
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.
Post. It can't possibly be worse than some of the stuff already on display. And posting gets you more attention anyway.
#210506
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:05
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NuclearBuddha wrote...
What? Say something! Or am I so beautiful you have no words left?Shadowomega23 wrote...
Yep thats the one.
If that is supposed to be Tali talking that would be a Yes. If that is you budda I don't swing that way.
#210507
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:05
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Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Bah.Ryshan wrote...
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.The gear made a metallic noise when it dropped to the floor. It seemed to echo on forever in the silence of the cabin. Shepard could do little more than stare at the beauty before him. Through all the fights he had been through, he never once felt this nervousness that plagued him now.
Tali. I... was all he could get out. They immediately embraced each other. They sat there, fused into one being, each needing the other to be complete.
I love you. Tali was the first to break the silence. Shepard began sliding his hands towards Tali's face.
All of the galaxy depends on us. This mission, this goal, I wouldn't be able to do it without you.
Oh Shepard, you're just-- He interupted:
The people outside this room fight for their own reasons. Their own lives. When I woke up on that table two years ago, I thought you were gone. My motivation, my life, was empty. I'm not doing this for the galaxy Tali, I'm fighting for you.
Tali's grip on Shepard loosened. Her mind was racing. The man she loved, hero to the galaxy, was giving everything he had to be with her, and to make her happy.
Tali, if you're willing and we survive, I want to marry you.
The tears began to flow once more in Tali's eyes. There was no possible way to speak, to convey how much she wanted to be with Shepard for the rest of her life as well. She quickly leaned in and kissed him.
Da. This is good komrad.
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Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:06
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I won't mention it again.NuclearBuddha wrote...
Rune, I'm only going to say this once, because I'm somewhat of the opinion that your "it all sucks" stance is a plea for attention.
Post. It can't possibly be worse than some of the stuff already on display. And posting gets you more attention anyway.
#210509
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:06
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Ryshan wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Your opinion is your own. I believe it sucks.Ryshan wrote...
Beg to differ.
@Shadow I've got all 6 versions in my album on TP and on r.k.com
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.
Who is the person that rarely speaks?
#210510
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:07
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T.I.M.: You don't know what your doing! You foo- *Connection cut*
Tali: No one talks to my dashing commander like that.
*Shepard plants the nuke*
Shepard: Come on, lets go home. I have CSI: Nos Astra recording on the TIVO.
Tali:
#210511
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:07
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Ryshan wrote...
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.
Hey, we writers can be pretty critical of ourselves. I'm picky when I write jokes.
#210512
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:07
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Just drop it. He isn't going to post it. I can't tell if he is just being a drama-queen about it (I would guess yes, since the quality of his artwork is far far better than he implies), but he has not posted it that I recall.Ryshan wrote...
Give it a limited release or something.
It'll probably be good, and have a lot thematically in common with Sergio's writing (Neither praise nor commendation; just a writing style).
Doesn't matter.
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Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:08
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Hey guys, I posted this earlier and I was wondering if anyone else could give me an opinion on this peace. It's about the destruction sapient species inflict apon their world of origin and specifically that of the quarian. Also goes into the role that the geth played as care takers.
Mother Rannoch was proud of her children, of the beasts that roamed her
plains, swam through her oceans and flew through her sky. However, she
wanted more, she wanted children that could appreciate her gifts and
love her like her other offspring could not. In the end she birthed the
quarians, her most gifted and astute children to adore her and cherish
her. She gave them her lustrous green hair and rock and metal flesh to
build with and for a time it was good.
However, like all
other sapient species this was not to last. Eventually her children grew
more and more demanding of their Mother and siblings. They began
stripping her of all they could take and filling Mother's sky with
smoke. Their siblings were either starved or consumed out of existence,
never to be seen again. Mother began to grow sick as the cancer that
was once her beloved children began to consume her.
This
continued until one day the Mother became a grandmother as well. Her new
grandchildren were put to work for their parents as servants and
workers. This was not to last forever, as no child wishes to be bound to
its parent's will forever. Eventually her grandchildren began demanding
their freedom and rather than accept this her once loved children
attempted to extinguish them. The war was long and bloody but eventually
the quarians were forced to retreat into the great black abyss. Mother
now looked to her victorious grandchildren with fright, fearing that
such an artificial people, not bound to her in any form, would have no
qualms about destroying her further.
That was not to happen,
however, as her grandchildren instead cared for her like her children
had not, regrowing her lustrous hair and giving her other children
another chance to grow and thrive. They gave her all she had lost and
asked for nothing in return. Simply mining the corpses of dead asteroids
in the great black abyss. After a time Mother was once again a great,
healthy world as she was before her childrens' creation.
Mother Rannoch was proud of her children, of the beasts that roamed her
plains, swam through her oceans and flew through her sky. However, she
wanted more, she wanted children that could appreciate her gifts and
love her like her other offspring could not. In the end she birthed the
quarians, her most gifted and astute children to adore her and cherish
her. She gave them her lustrous green hair and rock and metal flesh to
build with and for a time it was good.
However, like all
other sapient species this was not to last. Eventually her children grew
more and more demanding of their Mother and siblings. They began
stripping her of all they could take and filling Mother's sky with
smoke. Their siblings were either starved or consumed out of existence,
never to be seen again. Mother began to grow sick as the cancer that
was once her beloved children began to consume her.
This
continued until one day the Mother became a grandmother as well. Her new
grandchildren were put to work for their parents as servants and
workers. This was not to last forever, as no child wishes to be bound to
its parent's will forever. Eventually her grandchildren began demanding
their freedom and rather than accept this her once loved children
attempted to extinguish them. The war was long and bloody but eventually
the quarians were forced to retreat into the great black abyss. Mother
now looked to her victorious grandchildren with fright, fearing that
such an artificial people, not bound to her in any form, would have no
qualms about destroying her further.
That was not to happen,
however, as her grandchildren instead cared for her like her children
had not, regrowing her lustrous hair and giving her other children
another chance to grow and thrive. They gave her all she had lost and
asked for nothing in return. Simply mining the corpses of dead asteroids
in the great black abyss. After a time Mother was once again a great,
healthy world as she was before her childrens' creation.
#210514
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:09
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hey I liked it. MOAR! NOW!Runescapeguy9 wrote...
My never released writing.Ryshan wrote...
Where is this from please?
KS' TTTX.
#210515
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:09
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Shadowomega23 wrote...
Who is the person that rarely speaks?
Myself. I've followed this thread since 3.0.
#210516
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:11
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uhdnrt wrote...
hmmmm.. Should I work on a follow up to Brawling, An Uncomfortable Conversation, or the next section of This and That? I have some ideas percolating for all three, but I am feeling underwhelmed with inspiration.
I'd say either Uncomfortable Conversation or This and That.
#210517
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:12
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Yes to all of the aboveuhdnrt wrote...
hmmmm.. Should I work on a follow up to Brawling, An Uncomfortable Conversation, or the next section of This and That? I have some ideas percolating for all three, but I am feeling underwhelmed with inspiration.
, but I would particularly like to see something from Brawling and AN uncomfortable Conversation.
#210518
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:12
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Well, it's actually a Midna quote, but yeah, it seems to fit the pic.Shadowomega23 wrote...
If that is supposed to be Tali talking that would be a Yes. If that is you budda I don't swing that way.
#210519
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:13
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Musical round robin time! Someone provide me with a song (must have lyrics) so I may attempt to kick start my muse. System of a Down and Motley Crew have already prompted stories. Let's try it again!
Modifié par uhdnrt, 28 juin 2010 - 11:13 .
#210520
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:13
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Same opinion as mikethor.mikethor007 wrote...
uhdnrt wrote...
hmmmm.. Should I work on a follow up to Brawling, An Uncomfortable Conversation, or the next section of This and That? I have some ideas percolating for all three, but I am feeling underwhelmed with inspiration.
I'd say either Uncomfortable Conversation or This and That.
#210521
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:13
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Either way works for me.Runescapeguy9 wrote...
I won't mention it again.NuclearBuddha wrote...
Rune, I'm only going to say this once, because I'm somewhat of the opinion that your "it all sucks" stance is a plea for attention.
Post. It can't possibly be worse than some of the stuff already on display. And posting gets you more attention anyway.
#210522
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:15
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AgreedRyshan wrote...
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Bah.Ryshan wrote...
You have one person, who rarely ever speaks here, telling you that's it's good, and a fellow writer.
Chances are that it is halfway decent at the least.
Give it a limited release or something.The gear made a metallic noise when it dropped to the floor. It seemed to echo on forever in the silence of the cabin. Shepard could do little more than stare at the beauty before him. Through all the fights he had been through, he never once felt this nervousness that plagued him now.
Tali. I... was all he could get out. They immediately embraced each other. They sat there, fused into one being, each needing the other to be complete.
I love you. Tali was the first to break the silence. Shepard began sliding his hands towards Tali's face.
All of the galaxy depends on us. This mission, this goal, I wouldn't be able to do it without you.
Oh Shepard, you're just-- He interupted:
The people outside this room fight for their own reasons. Their own lives. When I woke up on that table two years ago, I thought you were gone. My motivation, my life, was empty. I'm not doing this for the galaxy Tali, I'm fighting for you.
Tali's grip on Shepard loosened. Her mind was racing. The man she loved, hero to the galaxy, was giving everything he had to be with her, and to make her happy.
Tali, if you're willing and we survive, I want to marry you.
The tears began to flow once more in Tali's eyes. There was no possible way to speak, to convey how much she wanted to be with Shepard for the rest of her life as well. She quickly leaned in and kissed him.
Da. This is good komrad.
#210523
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:16
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Savakka1 wrote...
Same opinion as mikethor.mikethor007 wrote...
uhdnrt wrote...
hmmmm.. Should I work on a follow up to Brawling, An Uncomfortable Conversation, or the next section of This and That? I have some ideas percolating for all three, but I am feeling underwhelmed with inspiration.
I'd say either Uncomfortable Conversation or This and That.
I'll go with "An Uncomfortable Conversation", since "This and That" is already pretty long.
#210524
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:17
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uhdnrt wrote...
Musical round robin time! Someone provide me with a song (must have lyrics) so I may attempt to kick start my muse. System of a Down and Motley Crew have already prompted stories. Let's try it again!
Any way you want it
#210525
Posté 28 juin 2010 - 11:18
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Hmm..do you guys think that Tali would support the slaughter of a group of law enforcement officers over a cute puppy like creature?
(+25 approval points if you get the reference)
(+25 approval points if you get the reference)
