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Thundertactics wrote...
I'd suggest planning ahead on what horrorible vengeance Xen intends to inflict upon her captors once she breaks loose.Lividity Jones wrote...
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I need to hurt something.
Someone With Mass wrote...
Wow. That's beyond creepiness.
I know that feeling.Just_mike wrote...
So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.
Don't they have that fringe too, can't you do something interesting with that? (Also, I had to watch through Garrus' romance scene for that word, freaking hilarious)Lividity Jones wrote...
There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.
Lividity Jones wrote...
Thundertactics wrote...
I'd suggest planning ahead on what horrorible vengeance Xen intends to inflict upon her captors once she breaks loose.Lividity Jones wrote...
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I need to hurt something.
There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.
Lividity Jones wrote...
There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.
TTTX wrote...
I know that feeling.Just_mike wrote...
So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.
"Humans have this special tool called a "claw hammer", it's usually used to insert and remove "nails". But I found it works just as effectively on turian scales..."Someone With Mass wrote...
And then there are some effective ways she can use a special hammer.
Thundertactics wrote...
"Humans have this special tool called a "claw hammer", it's usually used to insert and remove "nails". But I found it works just as effectively on turian scales..."Someone With Mass wrote...
And then there are some effective ways she can use a special hammer.
I like your thinking.Just_mike wrote...
Why use a claw hammer when you have a precision saw?
I try to the bitter end, I,m going to finsh my story.Just_mike wrote...
TTTX wrote...
I know that feeling.Just_mike wrote...
So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.
I tried writing stuff before, but nobody was ever interested in them, I thought I was bad so I tried harder, then I realized, nobody cared.
Although Im pretty sure some college kid was ripping off of me.
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Glad you approve!Troodon80 wrote...
uhdnrt wrote...
Oh yeah, Liv - I have a new chapter of Brawling up. I know you liked the first, lemme know what you think of the second. Also, check your mail here.
that's ... niiiicccceeee. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Yep, I approve as well, normally I wouldn't even think of putting Garrus and Jack in the same room (no, not because of the danger, but because I wouldn't think about it), but you've succesfully managed to turn them into an epic pair bound for awesomeness and hilarity.uhdnrt wrote...
Glad you approve!
Ah yes, "hurdles", the supposed difficulties the main characters have to endure so the eventual ending will seem that much more statisfying. I like where this is going.Thelacan wrote...
Teaser from chapter three.
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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.
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you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.Thelacan wrote...
Teaser from chapter three.
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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.
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Thelacan wrote...
Teaser from chapter three.
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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.
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TTTX wrote...
you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.
have to ask you what did think of my chapter 6?
still missing a few characters but I catch up in the next chapter.Thelacan wrote...
TTTX wrote...
you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.
have to ask you what did think of my chapter 6?
It is a teaser.
Your chap 6 was nice, everyone remembering how Shep had helped them was a good idea.
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as long as the third chapter comes out.Thelacan wrote...
Watching the Miranda's lovescene I got this brilliant idea for a minific. But damnit it hampers my work on the third chapter.
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