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Lividity Jones

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Thundertactics wrote...

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I need to hurt something.

I'd suggest planning ahead on what horrorible vengeance Xen intends to inflict upon her captors once she breaks loose. :)


There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.

#211127
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Someone With Mass wrote...

Wow. That's beyond creepiness.


You're in the Tali thread and you think thats creepy?

#211128
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Just_mike wrote...

So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.

I know that feeling.

#211129
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Lividity Jones wrote...

There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.

Don't they have that fringe too, can't you do something interesting with that? (Also, I had to watch through Garrus' romance scene for that word, freaking hilarious)

#211130
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Lividity Jones wrote...

Thundertactics wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

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I need to hurt something.

I'd suggest planning ahead on what horrorible vengeance Xen intends to inflict upon her captors once she breaks loose. :)


There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.


Talk about the thumbs and how they grip the mandible and the sound and smells that come from the now heavily vented Turian carcass.

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Lividity Jones wrote...


There are only so many ways you can describe tearing off a turian's mandibles and stabbing him with them.


And then there are some effective ways she can use a special hammer.Image IPB

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TTTX wrote...

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So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.

I know that feeling.


I tried writing stuff before, but nobody was ever interested in them, I thought I was bad so I tried harder, then I realized, nobody cared. :mellow:

Although Im pretty sure some college kid was ripping off of me.

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And then there are some effective ways she can use a special hammer.Image IPB

"Humans have this special tool called a "claw hammer", it's usually used to insert and remove "nails". But I found it works just as effectively on turian scales..."

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Thundertactics wrote...

Someone With Mass wrote...

And then there are some effective ways she can use a special hammer.Image IPB

"Humans have this special tool called a "claw hammer", it's usually used to insert and remove "nails". But I found it works just as effectively on turian scales..."


Why use a claw hammer when you have a precision saw?

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Thundertactics

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Just_mike wrote...

Why use a claw hammer when you have a precision saw?

I like your thinking.
Though a drill through the eyesocket stopping just short of the brain would be effective too.

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Just_mike wrote...

TTTX wrote...

Just_mike wrote...

So Im guessing nobody is interested if I wrote something?...Well, looks like Im still in my writer's rut then.

I know that feeling.


I tried writing stuff before, but nobody was ever interested in them, I thought I was bad so I tried harder, then I realized, nobody cared. :mellow:

Although Im pretty sure some college kid was ripping off of me.

I try to the bitter end, I,m going to finsh my story.

but since it's not as good as Rip and Joneses story I guess I,m not going to get many comment's good or bad.

but then again thats the story of my life.

Modifié par TTTX, 29 juin 2010 - 10:18 .


#211137
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Oh yeah, Liv - I have a new chapter of Brawling up. I know you liked the first, lemme know what you think of the second. Also, check your mail here.


that's ... niiiicccceeee.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Glad you approve!

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 Teaser from chapter three.

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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.

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#211139
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uhdnrt wrote...

Glad you approve!

Yep, I approve as well, normally I wouldn't even think of putting Garrus and Jack in the same room (no, not because of the danger, but because I wouldn't think about it), but you've succesfully managed to turn them into an epic pair bound for awesomeness and hilarity. :)

#211140
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Thelacan wrote...

 Teaser from chapter three.

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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.

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Ah yes, "hurdles", the supposed difficulties the main characters have to endure so the eventual ending will seem that much more statisfying. I like where this is going.

#211141
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Thelacan wrote...

 Teaser from chapter three.

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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.

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you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.

have to ask you what did think of my chapter 6?

#211142
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Thelacan wrote...

 Teaser from chapter three.

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”You're right... Sorry, I'm just a little bit sleepdeprived. Thank you Tali” he said and lifted his gaze to meet her shining eyes. He glanced over his shoulder again.
”Guess I didn't have that reach what needed to get that done” he chuckled. ”Nor the flexibilty” she quipped. Shepard allowed himself to smile a little bit, but her eyes revealed that she wasn't amused.

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OH SNAP SON! SHEPARD BE IN THE DAAWWWGG HOUSE!

#211143
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Haha, nice touch with that picture!

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TTTX wrote...

you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.

have to ask you what did think of my chapter 6?


It is a teaser. :P

Your chap 6 was nice, everyone remembering how Shep had helped them was a good idea.

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I should go.

Image IPB

#211146
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Thelacan wrote...

TTTX wrote...

you just know to keep me on egde of my seet.

have to ask you what did think of my chapter 6?


It is a teaser. :P

Your chap 6 was nice, everyone remembering how Shep had helped them was a good idea.

still missing a few characters but I catch up in the next chapter.

I'm so looking forward to your next chapter I almost can't wait.Image IPB

I hope you also look forward to mine.

Modifié par TTTX, 29 juin 2010 - 10:40 .


#211147
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one hour and no post.

#211148
Thelacan

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Watching the Miranda's lovescene I got this brilliant idea for a minific. But damnit it hampers my work on the third chapter.

#211149
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Thelacan wrote...

Watching the Miranda's lovescene I got this brilliant idea for a minific. But damnit it hampers my work on the third chapter.

as long as the third chapter comes out.

#211150
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Oh, the third chapter will come out tomorrow, no worries about that.