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[Someone With Mass]

TTTX wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

I don't know, I'm pretty curious...

curiousty killed the cat.
and if we got an answerer I don't think that we befelling so well afterwards.

Curiousity killed the man too...

Modifié par Someone With Mass, 29 juin 2010 - 02:33 .

[uhdnrt]

For the morning crew: Both Brawling and Uncomfortable Conversations have updated.

This page needs a Tali Image, which I am happy to provide!

Modifié par uhdnrt, 29 juin 2010 - 02:35 .

[TTTX]

Repost.

TTTX wrote...

Ladies and gentle men.

her is the latststed chapter in Symbol of Shepard.

finally got it done.

I really need comment's on this one I'm trying to be very emitonal in this one so opions on it if I succed or failed at it.

remember I can't improve if you don't tell where I was wrong.

now I have to go eat.

[Titanium Man]

uhdnrt wrote...

For the morning crew: Both Brawling and Uncomfortable Conversations have updated.

I'm not sure why Shepard has to be so violent to that reporter lady.  It seems to be a recurring theme :V  I mean, I know she's annoying, but geez.

[Thundertactics]

Someone With Mass wrote...

Curiousity killed the man too...

Indeed it did, indeed it did.

[Titanium Man]

TTTX wrote...
remember I can't improve if you don't tell where I was wrong.

now I have to go eat.

I read some of that, by the way.  Off the top of my head, the dialogue seems stilted and the narrative feels choppy.  Also, spelling and grammatical errors which I won't get into deeply here.  There's a great series of articles online by a guy called Alex Keegan, a British short story writer.  He shares a lot of great insights into writing.  I recommend you check them out.

[Someone With Mass]

Red Hot Tali is good eye candy...

[Tairis Deamhan]

Titanium Man wrote...

I'm not sure why Shepard has to be so violent to that reporter lady.  It seems to be a recurring theme :V  I mean, I know she's annoying, but geez.

Well think of it this way. You have now saved the galaxy (second time). This woman shows up (again), to try and pry some comment out of you she can use to slander your name. Except this time she's trying to hurt someone you love AND who you know is already vulnerable due to her race.
This is like Bill O'Reilly showing up at your house and calling your girlfriend a dirty ****.
So yea, I'd punch her so hard her grandchildern were born retarded.

[uhdnrt]

Titanium Man wrote...

uhdnrt wrote...

For the morning crew: Both Brawling and Uncomfortable Conversations have updated.

I'm not sure why Shepard has to be so violent to that reporter lady.  It seems to be a recurring theme :V  I mean, I know she's annoying, but geez.

Sensitive subject to broach, and he just got done with 10 hours of dealing with the Council.  That means jackass turian and possibley Udina as well.

Shep should have a frayed temper by the time the reporter shows up. ~_^

[uhdnrt]

Huh. SWM and I seem to have posted Paragon and Renegade Tali on the same page......

[Someone With Mass]

uhdnrt wrote...

Huh. SWM and I seem to have posted Paragon and Renegade Tali on the same page......

I have the Paragon version of that picture too.


If it wasn't for that space station or whatever in the background, this picture would reach perfection. Tali looks better when she stands like that, without a gun in her hands.

[Cydrone]

uhdnrt wrote...

Huh. SWM and I seem to have posted Paragon and Renegade Tali on the same page......

Hmm impending Tali-AntiTali detonation in 3...2...

[Titanium Man]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...
Well think of it this way. You have now saved the galaxy (second time). This woman shows up (again), to try and pry some comment out of you she can use to slander your name. Except this time she's trying to hurt someone you love AND who you know is already vulnerable due to her race.
This is like Bill O'Reilly showing up at your house and calling your girlfriend a dirty ****.
So yea, I'd punch her so hard her grandchildern were born retarded.

Actually, this reminds me...I want the dialogue where the captain of the Rayya badmouths Tali after she gets exiled.  I had a good scene idea I wanted to write.

[uhdnrt]

Someone With Mass wrote...
I have the Paragon version of that picture too.

If it wasn't for that space station or whatever in the background, this picture would reach perfection. Tali looks better when she stands like that, without a gun in her hands.

You know, that is the same space station that Shepard wakes up on in ME2 right? I don't know why they re-used the still, but they did.

[uhdnrt]

Oh, and I don't remember seeing this picture, so I am posting it.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...
Well think of it this way. You have now saved the galaxy (second time). This woman shows up (again), to try and pry some comment out of you she can use to slander your name. Except this time she's trying to hurt someone you love AND who you know is already vulnerable due to her race.
This is like Bill O'Reilly showing up at your house and calling your girlfriend a dirty ****.
So yea, I'd punch her so hard her grandchildern were born retarded.

Actually, this reminds me...I want the dialogue where the captain of the Rayya badmouths Tali after she gets exiled.  I had a good scene idea I wanted to write.

I've never actually gotten her exiled. What does he say?

[Titanium Man]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...
I've never actually gotten her exiled. What does he say?

She got exiled on my game but I didn't bother to talk to everyone afterwards.  Also, there doesn't seem to be a video of it on YouTube.  Also don't have any saves from there remaining.  (I constantly overwrite.)

[Someone With Mass]

Titanium Man wrote...

Actually, this reminds me...I want the dialogue where the captain of the Rayya badmouths Tali after she gets exiled.  I had a good scene idea I wanted to write.

So much for being there if she needs to talk and show his support to her, as she was born on his ship.
I guess his switch is flipped to "Douchebag" if Tali's exiled.

[Thundertactics]

uhdnrt wrote...

Oh, and I don't remember seeing this picture, so I am posting it.
-snip-

Nope, tried saving it in my Tali folder, and it said I already had it.

Also, dA finally allows me to see the newest Mass Effect fanart properly again. (It wouldn't go past 29 May earlier, but now I can see the latest work again)

[Someone With Mass]

Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...
I've never actually gotten her exiled. What does he say?

She got exiled on my game but I didn't bother to talk to everyone afterwards.  Also, there doesn't seem to be a video of it on YouTube.  Also don't have any saves from there remaining.  (I constantly overwrite.)

Well, I don't think it's a bad thing that it's not on YouTube.

[Thundertactics]

Someone With Mass wrote...

Well, I don't think it's a bad thing that it's not on YouTube.

Her exile is on Youtube, just not the dialogue with the other people afterwards, which is a damn shame. (Apparantly, Shala really hates Shepard for allowing it to happen)
I might do it on this playthrough and do a quick reload afterwards.

EDIT:
Actually, I'm gonna reload an ealier playthrough and record it with FRAPS, then post it on Youtube, see y'all later.

Modifié par Thundertactics, 29 juin 2010 - 03:12 .

[uhdnrt]

This is relevant to our interests!

[TTTX]

Titanium Man wrote...

TTTX wrote...
remember I can't improve if you don't tell where I was wrong.

now I have to go eat.

I read some of that, by the way.  Off the top of my head, the dialogue seems stilted and the narrative feels choppy.  Also, spelling and grammatical errors which I won't get into deeply here.  There's a great series of articles online by a guy called Alex Keegan, a British short story writer.  He shares a lot of great insights into writing.  I recommend you check them out.

I'm trying my best and that is some of the best I've ever writing.

I might check that out, but I doubt it will affect my writing.

maybe I should have a partner to help me writ it.

[Titanium Man]

Thundertactics wrote...
Her exile is on Youtube, just not the dialogue with the other people afterwards, which is a damn shame. (Apparantly, Shala really hates Shepard for allowing it to happen)
I might do it on this playthrough and do a quick reload afterwards.

EDIT:
Actually, I'm gonna reload an ealier playthrough and record it with FRAPS, then post it on Youtube, see y'all later.

Sounds good.  The results might be delicious for me.

Anyway, will be back later, Tali thread.  Gonna write on Smile for at least an hour.

[Titanium Man]

TTTX wrote...
I'm trying my best and that is some of the best I've ever writing.

I might check that out, but I doubt it will affect my writing.

maybe I should have a partner to help me writ it.

It takes time.  I'm only good at it because I liked to write all my life and read fiction.  Doing that a lot DOES help.  But you gotta have fun with it.  Only way you'll really improve.

NOW I'm gone.  See ya in a bit, Tali thread.