remember Nilus words "I put your name forward" there was more but Shepard was the best of them.NuclearBuddha wrote...
It's a little scary that humanity has even a couple people they considered about equal to Shepard.TTTX wrote...
Shepard was probaly one of many possoblities as a candat to the spectres maybe som of the others had a close pscykology profil to Shepards.Thelacan wrote...
Isn't it weird, how ME1 starts? Udina asks if Shepard is that kind of people they want to protect the galaxy.
Also, kinda makes a person wonder how awesome Anderson was in his day.
The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
#211326
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:02
#211327
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:03
#211328
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:04
Shepard walked towards the elevator with determined step, passing abandoned consoles as he made his way through the empty CIC. His whole shipcrew abducted by the Collector's.
And as his hand was over the door's hologram, it opened and revealed his XO in the elevator. Without a word he tried to get past her, but she kept getting in his way, raising her hand to rest on his chest. He raised his brown at her.
"Oh, pardon me, commander" she said and pushed him back. Then she leaned closer to his ear, whispering. "I've cleared the engine room. Be there in five minutes"
She leaned back, away from him, smiling.
Alright, two can play this game..
"Should've known you wouldn't settle for the captain's quarters" he replied with a smirk.
"I settle for nothing but the best" she responded quietly and stepped back into the elevator, winking her eye as the doors closed.
Shepard looked like he was going to throw up.
The lift returned and he stepped inside, pressing the panel on the backwall, doors closing behind him.
Miranda started to pace around, frustrated. It was already 5.07 minutes passed when she had told him to come down there.
"Edi" she started.
"Yes, miss Lawson" the blue orb replied.
"Where the commander is?"
*silence*
"EDI! Where the commander is?!"
"One second" it replied.
"Oh, Miranda, hey" Shepard replied over the ships comms.
"Commander" she stated, angry and confused.
"Aren't you going to come down to engineer"
"Why would I?" he asked
"I mean Tali is already up here" he chuckled. "So there is no reason to come down there, now is it... Or was there something else you wanted?" he sneered.
"I.. I thought" Miranda started, but was cut off.
"Oh hey Miranda, It's Tali. Listen, I- Keelah, Shepard! Your hand doesn't belong there" she giggled at the end. "Ah, um, sorry for that, but we should talk later, I'm a little busy now... I do hope you find the perfect solitude to be... soothing" Tali spoke with the usual cheer she possessed.
"Connection terminated" Edi spoke suddenly. Miranda couldn't understand what she had just heard.
"Owww, punk'd!" Jack shouted loudly from below the deck.
Modifié par Thelacan, 29 juin 2010 - 05:12 .
#211329
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:05
NuclearBuddha wrote...
It's a little scary that humanity has even a couple people they considered about equal to Shepard.
Also, kinda makes a person wonder how awesome Anderson was in his day.
One of the things I want to see in Mass Effect 3:
*The Citadel is under attack. Again*
Shepard: Hurry! We've got to save the Council!
*Squad Member Slot #1*: Why?
*Beat*
Shepard: Okay, aside from that, we've got to save the Council!
*Shepard and company race halfway across the station to the Presideum Tower. At the top, Councilor Anderson and the Turian Councilor hold off waves of Husks, almost as older, supposedly wiser versions of Shepard and Garrus. Both even found their old battle armor, Anderson wearing older model N7 armor and the Turian in blue military armor.*
Anderson: *over comms* What kept you, Shepard?
Shepard: Knew you still had it in you, sir.
Turian Councilor: For once I'm glad you recommended Anderson, Shepard. I'd hate to have to do this all by myself. It is kind of amazing the geth managed to make this many husks, though...
Anderson: Don't mind him, just get us out of here!
*Mission continues*
#211330
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:05
Hard to watch, but no choice.Thundertactics wrote...
Done, video is being processed, so HD will come later:
#211331
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:05
and everone else on the Normandy + Shala.RiptideX1090 wrote...
TTTX wrote...
bare with her, she acts like a lioness that protect her cub and lioness will die trying to protect her cub. She is afterall the only real family Tali has left.RiptideX1090 wrote...
NuclearBuddha wrote...
No kidding.Someone With Mass wrote...
Woah. Unexpected words from an admiral...Thundertactics wrote...
By the way, Shala's comment is hilarious: "I don't give a vorcha's ass about the fleet!"
If it wasn't for the stunt she pulls before the trial, she'd be like the anti-Rael.
Agreed.
That, however... earned her a place on my **** list.
Shepard is the only family Tali has left. The ONLY family.
Garrus too.
Mmmmaybe Joker.
#211332
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:09
#211333
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:11
Seems like Shepard would be an excellent example of that.
#211334
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:13
Thundertactics wrote...
Done, video is being processed, so HD will come later:
Tali: It showed me where I'm supposed to be. On the Normandy, helping you.
And that makes the option to not turn in the edvidence kind of pointless, since she pretty much says the same thing if Shepard is doing his little speech.
Even if she can go back to the fleet , she knows that she can do so much more for her people and everyone else if she's with Shepard on the Normandy.
#211335
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:14
No chance to punch that Captain in the end?Thundertactics wrote...
Done, video is being processed, so HD will come later:
#211336
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:15
Shepard is the only family Tali has left. The ONLY family.
Garrus too.
Mmmmaybe Joker.
[/quote]
and everone else on the Normandy + Shala.[/quote]
Maybe...
Zaeed = Cranky Uncle who talks about the good old days of love and love lost. She was a turian. Buddha.
Samara = Grandma who wants to see everything work out between the two.
Mordin = Doctor/Grandad who makes sure it works and keep the mood light.
Garrus = Big bro. Shepard better not **** it up.
Grunt = Sworn to protect Battlemaster's female. Shepard REALLY better not **** it up.
Thane = Uncle who wants Shepard and Tali to enjoy eachother while possible. Also, extra points if he calls her Shepard's "Siha".
This list does not include Shala.
#211337
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:18
There is so much wrong here I don't know where to begin...NCLanceman wrote...
Meanwhile, back on the Normandy
EDI: *voiceover* He's really a fascinating subject all these conflicting emotions, sarcasm, innuendo... He's just so... unpredictable. And through all this, he's still a top-tier pilot. I wonder if he thinks about flying as much as I do... oh, it'd be so wonderful to have wings!
Joker: *voiceover* ...Seventeen bottles of beer on the wall. Sixteen bottles of- wait, what the hell am I doing? I've got other things to do, don't I?
*Joker makes a quick check of all the systems for flashing lights, pressing none of them, then goes back to his thoughts.*
Joker: *voiceover* I wonder if my subscription to Fornax has run out yet...
*Joker looks around the bridge for others, then checks the extranet site for it.*
Joker: Huh. *voiceover* It looks like it's been paid already. But... I haven't been on this page in a month an a half... *looks over at EDI's platform* ...nah. She couldn't have...
Kasumi: *sitting in the Co-pilots chair, feet on console, cloaked; voiceover* I give them a month.
#211338
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:19
there is three ways' not to get her exiled whith out geeting her mad at you.Someone With Mass wrote...
Thundertactics wrote...
Done, video is being processed, so HD will come later:
Tali: It showed me where I'm supposed to be. On the Normandy, helping you.
And that makes the option to not turn in the edvidence kind of pointless, since she pretty much says the same thing if Shepard is doing his little speech.
Even if she can go back to the fleet , she knows that she can do so much more for her people and everyone else if she's with Shepard on the Normandy.
one where you ****** her off.
last option is to exil her.
picking one of these might have great concucveses for ME3.
#211339
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:20
Well... For the more inattentive of us...uhdnrt wrote...
Huh. The note at the begining does indicate chapter 2 is now up. Does it need to be mroe explicit than that?huntrrz wrote...
I suggest that when you update a previous post you include the date of last update at the top. That way readers can tell there is new material instead of assuming it hasn't changed since they originally read it.uhdnrt wrote...
I just wanted to insert a (hopefully) large helping of D'awwww into today. Chapter 2 of Uncomfortable Conversations is now live. Enjoy!
Here's the deal. I pull up several writer's blog pages, and the most obvious bits of information are the titles and original posting dates. The first couple of sentences of the post are shown, but it's really easy for the eye to just slide over them unless something explicitly says, "HEY, THIS THING I POSTED 2 MONTHS AGO NOW HAS NEW STUFF!"
And for the... more inattentive of us, that needs to be pretty explicit. I've got the memory of a steel sieve, so I'm not gonna remember when I read chapter 2. Something unsubtle like a date of last update works - for me.
I don't mean to be obnoxious, so I'm sorry if this comes across that way. (As you might have guessed, I am not a writer.) This would help me and hopefully others, encouraging more people to read your work. Win/Win!
#211340
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:20
Yep. I agree 100 %
Modifié par Someone With Mass, 29 juin 2010 - 05:21 .
#211341
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:21
Someone With Mass wrote...
"I'm a big girl, Shala. You don't have to protect me any longer."
Yep. I agree 100 %
That line wins so hard.
#211342
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:22
[quote]TTTX wrote...
Shepard is the only family Tali has left. The ONLY family.
Garrus too.
Mmmmaybe Joker.
[/quote]
and everone else on the Normandy + Shala.[/quote]
Maybe...
Zaeed = Cranky Uncle who talks about the good old days of love and love lost. She was a turian. Buddha.
Samara = Grandma who wants to see everything work out between the two.
Mordin = Doctor/Grandad who makes sure it works and keep the mood light.
Garrus = Big bro. Shepard better not **** it up.
Grunt = Sworn to protect Battlemaster's female. Shepard REALLY better not **** it up.
Thane = Uncle who wants Shepard and Tali to enjoy eachother while possible. Also, extra points if he calls her Shepard's "Siha".
This list does not include Shala.
[/quote]
you forgot Kasumi jack Legion and EDI
Shala is a importen part of Tali's life She has to be a part of it.
#211343
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:23
TheAwesomologist wrote...
There is so much wrong here I don't know where to begin...NCLanceman wrote...
Meanwhile, back on the Normandy
*snip*
Yeah. I ship Joker and EDI hard. And while we're at it, Kasumi and Jacob, Jack and Zaeed, and depending on my level of sobriety, Miranda and Grunt.
But that's neither here nor there.
#211344
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:23
Shows how Tali has grown the last two years.Someone With Mass wrote...
"I'm a big girl, Shala. You don't have to protect me any longer."
Yep. I agree 100 %
#211345
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:24
#211346
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:26
I like more Kasumi/Garrus getting together like in my story.NCLanceman wrote...
TheAwesomologist wrote...
There is so much wrong here I don't know where to begin...NCLanceman wrote...
Meanwhile, back on the Normandy
*snip*
Yeah. I ship Joker and EDI hard. And while we're at it, Kasumi and Jacob, Jack and Zaeed, and depending on my level of sobriety, Miranda and Grunt.
But that's neither here nor there.
#211347
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:26
Yes, I would like that.Thelacan wrote...
Would you guys like another teaser bit from chapter three? I promise it has rainbows!
#211348
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:26
give me ,give me, give meThelacan wrote...
Would you guys like another teaser bit from chapter three? I promise it has rainbows!
#211349
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:27
Sure, Why not?Thelacan wrote...
Would you guys like another teaser bit from chapter three? I promise it has rainbows!
#211350
Posté 29 juin 2010 - 05:27
TTTX wrote...
you forgot Kasumi jack Legion and EDIRiptideX1090 wrote...
Maybe...
Zaeed = Cranky Uncle who talks about the good old days of love and love lost. She was a turian. Buddha.
Samara = Grandma who wants to see everything work out between the two.
Mordin = Doctor/Grandad who makes sure it works and keep the mood light.
Garrus = Big bro. Shepard better not **** it up.
Grunt = Sworn to protect Battlemaster's female. Shepard REALLY better not **** it up.
Thane = Uncle who wants Shepard and Tali to enjoy eachother while possible. Also, extra points if he calls her Shepard's "Siha".
This list does not include Shala.
Shala is a importen part of Tali's life She has to be a part of it.
Right. Don't know if Jack cares. We all know Kasumi is like Tali's little sister. Legion... I unno.
As for Shala...
She can go suck on the business end of a flamethrower for all I care. She was just like Rael, only in reverse. Didn't give a damn about what Tali wanted, it was all about what she wanted. She was content to tear apart the fleet, against Tali's wishes even.
Gerrel was a hypocrit. Saying he wanted to help Tali, when in truth, he just wanted to cover up the experiments.
Don't even get me started on Korris and Rael...
As for Xen, she's bat **** insane. I don't think I need to go into detail about her. Oddly enough though... she's the only one of the bunch who is actually honest about anything. I like that.




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