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[Lividity Jones]

mikethor007 wrote...

<_<

That's what happens when you let the space-vampire aboard.

Your quarian lover gets brain-raped to death.

[mikethor007]

Lividity Jones wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

<_<

That's what happens when you let the space-vampire aboard.

Your quarian lover gets brain-raped to death.

Please. Stop it. It ruins your mojo.

[RiptideX1090]

YAY!



Chapter 3 of Reckoning is undergoing it's final editing!

[Titanium Man]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YAY!

Chapter 3 of Reckoning is undergoing it's final editing!

Man, you must marathon this or something to get stuff out this quickly.  I'm chugging away in contrast.

[Zarcanada]

Lividity Jones wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

<_<

That's what happens when you let the space-vampire aboard.

Your quarian lover gets brain-raped to death.

now that is disturbing way of saying what happens....

[RiptideX1090]

mikethor007 wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

<_<

That's what happens when you let the space-vampire aboard.

Your quarian lover gets brain-raped to death.

Please. Stop it. It ruins your mojo.

This is why Morinth dies. <_<

[Calculatrice]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

 Ah, Calc skips a meal time again. Dammit Jones, go get me someone to feed on.

An offering, Mighty Calculatrice, to appease your hunger...


*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

That must take one hell of a condom to prevent. 

[RiptideX1090]

Titanium Man wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YAY!

Chapter 3 of Reckoning is undergoing it's final editing!

Man, you must marathon this or something to get stuff out this quickly.  I'm chugging away in contrast.

Yeah.

This chapter is also pretty long... lots of dialogue...

[Kira Shepard]

Lividity Jones wrote...



*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

[nickFury]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

 Ah, Calc skips a meal time again. Dammit Jones, go get me someone to feed on.

An offering, Mighty Calculatrice, to appease your hunger...


*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

Im sorry but this is necessary

[Calculatrice]

Kira Shepard wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...



*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

I agree. Continue with my offering.

[nickFury]

So when is reckoning part 3 going to be up?

[Titanium Man]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Titanium Man wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YAY!

Chapter 3 of Reckoning is undergoing it's final editing!

Man, you must marathon this or something to get stuff out this quickly.  I'm chugging away in contrast.

Yeah.

This chapter is also pretty long... lots of dialogue...

I'd like to know your process.  How you approach a chapter step by step.

[RiptideX1090]

nickFury wrote...

So when is reckoning part 3 going to be up?

DEFINITELY tonight. I did a section of it, so Jones is going over everything to make sure it's all good. It's over twice as long as the first chapter, so there's a lot for him to do. Once he's satisfied. we'll post.

[mikethor007]

Kira Shepard wrote...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

That's just it for now. It's a repost from earlier.

[Kira Shepard]

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

That's just it for now. It's a repost from earlier.

So...I could continue it. maybe?

[mikethor007]

Kira Shepard wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

That's just it for now. It's a repost from earlier.

So...I could continue it. maybe?

Bleh, no. Had bad reactions all around.

[NuclearBuddha]

Lividity Jones wrote...
*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

WHITE WHALE

HOLY GRAIL

[Calculatrice]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

WHITE WHALE

HOLY GRAIL

"Oh Keelah... Keelah, M-- M-- M--" *drops dead*

[NuclearBuddha]

Kira Shepard wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

That's just it for now. It's a repost from earlier.

So...I could continue it. maybe?

Didn't CC or somebody continue it?  By putting a bullet in Morinth's skull.  With his bare hands.

[Lividity Jones]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
*Shepard enters the Starboard Obdervation Deck, the woman impersonating Samara smirking slyly at the Commander.*

Morinth: So... The quarian.

*Shepard says nothing, his face stern and passive. Morinth's smug smirk turns to a predatory grin, her eyes gleaming with vicious lust.*

Morinth: I had a quarian once. She was young. On her Pilgrimage. A romantic concept, to brave the galaxy's dangers for the sake of your people. But she was always so... reserved. Selfless. She didn't put much thought into her own pleasures. Aha... I can still remember watching her peel that suit off of her skin... Maybe a trip down memory lane is called for...

WHITE WHALE

HOLY GRAIL

There we go...

I have Buddha's Berserk Button.

[nickFury]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

nickFury wrote...

So when is reckoning part 3 going to be up?

DEFINITELY tonight. I did a section of it, so Jones is going over everything to make sure it's all good. It's over twice as long as the first chapter, so there's a lot for him to do. Once he's satisfied. we'll post.

NEED STORY NOW!! *proceeds to tackle RIp and jones to the ground attaching neural probes to their heads downloads all of Reckoning directly into his brain*

30 seconds later
nickFury: *curled up in a foetal position weeping uncontolably* why?!

Rip and Jones: *simultaneously* told you dumb ass

[RiptideX1090]

Titanium Man wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Titanium Man wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YAY!

Chapter 3 of Reckoning is undergoing it's final editing!

Man, you must marathon this or something to get stuff out this quickly.  I'm chugging away in contrast.

Yeah.

This chapter is also pretty long... lots of dialogue...

I'd like to know your process.  How you approach a chapter step by step.

Well. We have a basic outline of the story. We know which chapters are going to be about what. We start a new chapter, Jones writes it. Every once in a while he sends updates, and we discuss the plot, dialogue, things to change, that thing. When he's done, he sends it to me. I go back and add things or change things to my liking, adding up to or over a page of stuff. I make corrections and the such as well. I give it back to Jones, who goes over it a final time, then we post.

For three, Jones wrote about eight pages worth, I did a little over two. We were going to do a time skip at some point, but Jones felt uncomfortable with it, so I took over for a bit. We ended up holding it off until chapter four, but we're keeping what I added anyway, provided he likes it.

As for plot and character development, we have a string of messages that would EASILY take up over a hundred pages of Word discussing it. We just bounce ideas off eachother until we get what we want. He's a very agreeable guy.

[Lividity Jones]

Calculatrice wrote...

"Oh Keelah... Keelah, M-- M-- M--" *drops dead*

Okay... Now I'm mad.