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[Kira Shepard]

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

ignoring the others do continue. you have my interest.

That's just it for now. It's a repost from earlier.

So...I could continue it. maybe?

Bleh, no. Had bad reactions all around.

And I care about other people's opinions because...

[mikethor007]

Calculatrice wrote...

"Oh Keelah... Keelah, M-- M-- M--" *drops dead*

Over the line.

[NuclearBuddha]

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

[mikethor007]

Kira Shepard wrote...

And I care about other people's opinions because...

I don't know, I'm not you.

[Lividity Jones]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

**** closing it.

I'm breaking the bastard and shredding the pieces and spacing them into a star.

Morinth is dead. Dead as Dillinger.

[Calculatrice]

mikethor007 wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

"Oh Keelah... Keelah, M-- M-- M--" *drops dead*

Over the line.

Over the line is what I specialize in, Mike. You should know that. 

[Kira Shepard]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

I am happily assuming that this is not tali and is infact some jerk quarian, maybe koris. or that twofaced captian danna.

[nickFury]

Kira Shepard wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

I am happily assuming that this is not tali and is infact some jerk quarian, maybe koris. or that twofaced captian danna.

nah its Golo

[mikethor007]

Kira Shepard wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

I am happily assuming that this is not tali and is infact some jerk quarian, maybe koris. or that twofaced captian danna.

Said Quarian is female and selfless.

[mikethor007]

Calculatrice wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

"Oh Keelah... Keelah, M-- M-- M--" *drops dead*

Over the line.

Over the line is what I specialize in, Mike. You should know that. 

I guess I'll have to specialize in siege weapons...

[Titanium Man]

RiptideX1090 wrote...
Well. We have a basic outline of the story. We know which chapters are going to be about what. We start a new chapter, Jones writes it. Every once in a while he sends updates, and we discuss the plot, dialogue, things to change, that thing. When he's done, he sends it to me. I go back and add things or change things to my liking, adding up to or over a page of stuff. I make corrections and the such as well. I give it back to Jones, who goes over it a final time, then we post.

For three, Jones wrote about eight pages worth, I did a little over two. We were going to do a time skip at some point, but Jones felt uncomfortable with it, so I took over for a bit. We ended up holding it off until chapter four, but we're keeping what I added anyway, provided he likes it.

As for plot and character development, we have a string of messages that would EASILY take up over a hundred pages of Word discussing it. We just bounce ideas off eachother until we get what we want. He's a very agreeable guy.

You sound like a light OP (outline person).  I am approaching "Smile" differently.  I'm in the middle between an OP/NOP (no outline person).  That is, I have my little "plot islands", or scene ideas.  But I don't know if they'll stay in.  Right now I'm just writing from Tali'Zorah's viewpoint, trying to stay in character, trying to keep everyone else in character, letting the story take it where I may.  (To those who want to attempt this, make sure you know your characters well first.  I'm taking a risk by not doing as much homework on them as I could.)

But this doesn't mean I don't plan.  I let me mind wander on possible scene ideas at certain junctures and I run with the one I like.  And I go from there.  In a way, this first draft is basically a big, random outline.  Some parts will stay, some won't.  I'm writing scenes that come to mind and scenes I dwell on when I'm doing other stuff.  I write this because I am extremely interested in letting the storyline flow from the characters and how they react.  I'm trying not to pin as many external factors on them as possible.  Once the draft is done, I'll go in and organize the mess into something coherent.

Neither way, OP or NOP, is the definite way to go..  Gotta choose your own style, I believe.

[Calculatrice]

mikethor007 wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
Okay... Now I'm mad.

Hard to close the box after you opened it, eh?

I am happily assuming that this is not tali and is infact some jerk quarian, maybe koris. or that twofaced captian danna.

Said Quarian is female and selfless.

Guess it was Lia, love.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Well I'm crashing again, and in my usual form leaving my last chapter behind. Apologies for any poor editing mistakes, I fail at self editing:

social.bioware.com/511958/blog/6360/

Love, Hate, Comment, Burn.

Gnite Mancers.

[mikethor007]

Calculatrice wrote...
 Guess it was Lia, love.

You're trying too hard. It's not working well.

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Well I'm crashing again, and in my usual form leaving my last chapter behind. Apologies for any poor editing mistakes, I fail at self editing:

social.bioware.com/511958/blog/6360/

Love, Hate, Comment, Burn.

Gnite Mancers.

Wowsers. Gonna go read it.

[nickFury]

all that is left of Morinth after Shepard, or maybe this guy, gets through with her

[mikethor007]

nickFury wrote... gets through with her

Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

[nickFury]

mikethor007 wrote...

nickFury wrote... gets through with her

Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

[NuclearBuddha]

nickFury wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...
Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

My Shep didn't have a mom.  Far be it from me to deprive Morinth of hers.

[mikethor007]

nickFury wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

nickFury wrote... gets through with her

Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

Implies you let Samara die. Unless you're a badass biotic mofo and you clobber her in her apartment even before Samara gets there.

[nickFury]

NuclearBuddha wrote...

nickFury wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...
Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

My Shep didn't have a mom.  Far be it from me to deprive Morinth of hers.

I think I may have misunderstood but I was taliking a bout offing Moriinth not Samara

[nickFury]

mikethor007 wrote...

nickFury wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

nickFury wrote... gets through with her

Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

Implies you let Samara die. Unless you're a badass biotic mofo and you clobber her in her apartment even before Samara gets there.

Canon shep is Insane adept

[NuclearBuddha]

nickFury wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

nickFury wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...
Don't even need that. We just have to let Samara do her job.

I think Shepard, mine anyway, would like to do it himself.

My Shep didn't have a mom.  Far be it from me to deprive Morinth of hers.

I think I may have misunderstood but I was taliking a bout offing Morinth not Samara

So was I.

[mikethor007]

nickFury wrote...

Canon shep is Insane adept

Insane...?

[RiptideX1090]

social.bioware.com/318855/blog/6361/

Reckoning. Chapter 3. Enjoy.