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[Alphyn]

sergio71785 wrote...

I have considered ending my Reunion fic with something... not T rated. I'm pretty sure I won't do that though, although the thought of writing the stuff that proceeds and succeeds the consummation of their love is somewhat appealing (rather than the actual scene itself).

It almost looked like it was going there at one point though!

So you're thinking of ending it with a love scene?

[this isnt my name]

chool77 wrote...

this isnt my name wrote...

chool77 wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

chool77 wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

Simon9one wrote...

chool77 wrote...

ok ... um


shep and tali go out on a date... TO KARAOKE!!!!


how would it go?

Hilarity would ensue.

So who wrote "Next time"? I shall personally vomit on them.

what?..... im lost, make me aware=]

Eugh....
http://www.fanfictio...765/1/Next_Time

im not going to read all of that to get you joke..

so..... have a nice day;)

...Well I skipped to the middle part because I never heared of it either... I regret it, this is the stuff that creeps me out, never reading anything linked here again, andwhoever wrote that needs a life.

really..?  what was it about?!

Skip to the middle read about 2 sentences and you will know, but I would advise forgetting about it.

[Collider]

CamoBadger wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

CamoBadger wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Collider wrote...

We had this discussion some time ago, but I'd like to discuss it further. How do you all think of a wedding between Shepard and Tali? Not the priority, but I think it could be nice if done correctly. Some think it's too sappy, though.

I wedding would be lovely, but I'd be fine without it. Their relaionship has really only just begun growing into real love and it needs time to blossom.

And there will be plenty of time for that between games, I can't see ME3 happening any less than 3-5 years after ME2

You really want their relationship to develop off-screen? Really? Just so ME3 can end in marriage?

Actually, im against the wedding idea.  But, no i don't want it to develop off screen.  The thing is that for the most part it will have to, unless the Reapers magically teleport to the edge of the galaxy in one week.

It's not really magically. The Reapers have extremely advanced technology, if they can't get to the Milky Way within a year I doubt they could within 3-5 years. The ME2 ending gives the impression that ME3 will start shortly afterwards, and so have the interviews I've read.

[Lividity Jones]

sergio71785 wrote...

I have considered ending my Reunion fic with something... not T rated. I'm pretty sure I won't do that though, although the thought of writing the stuff that proceeds and succeeds the consummation of their love is somewhat appealing (rather than the actual scene itself).

It almost looked like it was going there at one point though!

In my opinion, they are all equaly important in really selling the depth of the character's feelings for each other. But, again, this is just my opinion.

[sergio71785]

Alphyn wrote...

So you're thinking of ending it with a love scene?

No. I've considered it, but I don't think I'll do that. Maybe I'll end it just as they begin or something like that, and narrate that they made love. 

[chool77]

this isnt my name wrote...

chool77 wrote...







really..?  what was it about?!

Skip to the middle read about 2 sentences and you will know, but I would advise forgetting about it.

i only read one thing!!........"Tali felt a pressure in her loins"

and that was enough

[Calculatrice]

I'm back. Was checking out Fanfic.net. Holy crap, compared to some of those, "next time" is nothing o_0

[Goat_Shepard]

Rakia_Time wrote...

So, other than talking about fapfics, is there any intelligent discussion going on right now  

Considering there's a serious discussion going on right now, I find this post insulting.

Read more.

[uhdnrt]

Collider wrote...
I don't think she'll be bewilered at all (she's very intelligent), at most just thinking the formality is excessive. But really, we have no insight on how weddings are conducted in Quarian culture, besides the fact that they have marriages.

They have a primarily military culture based on the info from ME1.  So ship weddings by the captain - who is also the equivelant to a magistrate - is probably the norm. 
  Tali would likely have a different headwrap, Though I am unsure what color would be a good symbol for commitment for Quarians.  I am thinking it would be colors similar to whatever heraldry/symbol is used for the ship she serves on - so she would probably white, black and gold (or blue and gray if back to the oldschool colors).
  Also, I could see a symbolic Enviroment Syncing being the crowning moment of the ceremony.
  It would be cool if, in Quarian culture, the couples had a part of their suits that was identical - likely one of the arms.  So having Tali get the Red and White N7 stripe after marryning Shep would be cool.  Then  Shep could wear a uniform(when not in armor) with the same stripe.

[Alphyn]

sergio71785 wrote...
No. I've considered it, but I don't think I'll do that. Maybe I'll end it just as they begin or something like that, and narrate that they made love. 

Fair enough.

[Alphyn]

Calculatrice wrote...

I'm back. Was checking out Fanfic.net. Holy crap, compared to some of those, "next time" is nothing o_0

Oh really? Give us a line.

[this isnt my name]

chool77 wrote...

this isnt my name wrote...

chool77 wrote...







really..?  what was it about?!

Skip to the middle read about 2 sentences and you will know, but I would advise forgetting about it.

i only read one thing!!........"Tali felt a pressure in her loins"

and that was enough

Well yeah you dont need 2, but hey atleast you know what its about now... Not much of a silver lining.

[RogueWriter3201]

sergio71785 wrote...

I have considered ending my Reunion fic with something... not T rated. I'm pretty sure I won't do that though, although the thought of writing the stuff that proceeds and succeeds the consummation of their love is somewhat appealing (rather than the actual scene itself).

It almost looked like it was going there at one point though!

Hey folks, just chimming in on this beautiful rainy Sunday. I've never so much minded the depiction of Love Making or Sex between Tali and Shep in Fiction. The only problem with it is that most FF is, well, frankly quite bad. Maybe it's due to the fact that I've spoiled myself on great *Mature* writers like R.R. Martin, but my view is that if you're going to attempt Erotica of one type or another in your respective fiction, be sure you can acutally *Write*.

I know alot of FF writers put thier heart, soul, and passion for the content and characters into thier work, however sometimes that just isn't enough. So, simply put, I think Sex or Sexual themes in FF are great, and sometimes really help flush out character relationships; the only downside is when they are implented or worded poorly.

[GuardianAngel470]

Collider wrote...

CamoBadger wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

CamoBadger wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Collider wrote...

We had this discussion some time ago, but I'd like to discuss it further. How do you all think of a wedding between Shepard and Tali? Not the priority, but I think it could be nice if done correctly. Some think it's too sappy, though.

I wedding would be lovely, but I'd be fine without it. Their relaionship has really only just begun growing into real love and it needs time to blossom.

And there will be plenty of time for that between games, I can't see ME3 happening any less than 3-5 years after ME2

You really want their relationship to develop off-screen? Really? Just so ME3 can end in marriage?

Actually, im against the wedding idea.  But, no i don't want it to develop off screen.  The thing is that for the most part it will have to, unless the Reapers magically teleport to the edge of the galaxy in one week.

It's not really magically. The Reapers have extremely advanced technology, if they can't get to the Milky Way within a year I doubt they could within 3-5 years. The ME2 ending gives the impression that ME3 will start shortly afterwards, and so have the interviews I've read.

I think they should have time gaps during the war.  Not the typical time gaps that are a result of gameplay, but time gaps that give you a sense of how long and hard the characters have been fighting.  Something that shows the changes the characters go through, new scars, sunken eyes, that type of thing.  Something like what happened in Battlestar Galactica when they settled that one colony.  Kara grew out her hair, Pres. Roselin became a teacher again, stuff happened that you could see.

That would be a perfect way to do such a marriage.

[Collider]

uhdnrt wrote...
They have a primarily military culture based on the info from ME1.  So ship weddings by the captain - who is also the equivelant to a magistrate - is probably the norm. 
  Tali would likely have a different headwrap, Though I am unsure what color would be a good symbol for commitment for Quarians.  I am thinking it would be colors similar to whatever heraldry/symbol is used for the ship she serves on - so she would probably white, black and gold (or blue and gray if back to the oldschool colors).
  Also, I could see a symbolic Enviroment Syncing being the crowning moment of the ceremony.
  It would be cool if, in Quarian culture, the couples had a part of their suits that was identical - likely one of the arms.  So having Tali get the Red and White N7 stripe after marryning Shep would be cool.  Then  Shep could wear a uniform(when not in armor) with the same stripe.

I'd also be interested in seeing what the wedding get ups would be. I saw this picture (drawn by a Tali fan I talk to sometimes) that I really liked.

[Goat_Shepard]

uhdnrt wrote...

Collider wrote...
I don't think she'll be bewilered at all (she's very intelligent), at most just thinking the formality is excessive. But really, we have no insight on how weddings are conducted in Quarian culture, besides the fact that they have marriages.

They have a primarily military culture based on the info from ME1.  So ship weddings by the captain - who is also the equivelant to a magistrate - is probably the norm. 
  Tali would likely have a different headwrap, Though I am unsure what color would be a good symbol for commitment for Quarians.  I am thinking it would be colors similar to whatever heraldry/symbol is used for the ship she serves on - so she would probably white, black and gold (or blue and gray if back to the oldschool colors).
  Also, I could see a symbolic Enviroment Syncing being the crowning moment of the ceremony.
  It would be cool if, in Quarian culture, the couples had a part of their suits that was identical - likely one of the arms.  So having Tali get the Red and White N7 stripe after marryning Shep would be cool.  Then  Shep could wear a uniform(when not in armor) with the same stripe.

All that info can't be in ME1, did you read Ascension or something?

Maybe I need to read the codexes finally. Plan on reading Ascension as well.

And I like the N7 stripe idea, only the vice versa: Shepard wears that pretty violet cloth Tali has on his arm

[Calculatrice]

Alphyn wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

I'm back. Was checking out Fanfic.net. Holy crap, compared to some of those, "next time" is nothing o_0

Oh really? Give us a line.

"I let him pull away from me as his pants melted off, leaving our naked bodied pressing..."
DO I NEED GO ON?

[this isnt my name]

Collider wrote...

uhdnrt wrote...
They have a primarily military culture based on the info from ME1.  So ship weddings by the captain - who is also the equivelant to a magistrate - is probably the norm. 
  Tali would likely have a different headwrap, Though I am unsure what color would be a good symbol for commitment for Quarians.  I am thinking it would be colors similar to whatever heraldry/symbol is used for the ship she serves on - so she would probably white, black and gold (or blue and gray if back to the oldschool colors).
  Also, I could see a symbolic Enviroment Syncing being the crowning moment of the ceremony.
  It would be cool if, in Quarian culture, the couples had a part of their suits that was identical - likely one of the arms.  So having Tali get the Red and White N7 stripe after marryning Shep would be cool.  Then  Shep could wear a uniform(when not in armor) with the same stripe.

I'd also be interested in seeing what the wedding get ups would be. I saw this picture (drawn by a Tali fan I talk to sometimes) that I really liked.

"You may now kiss the bride"
*Shepard removes Talis mask... She dies*

[Lividity Jones]

Calculatrice wrote...

Alphyn wrote...

Calculatrice wrote...

I'm back. Was checking out Fanfic.net. Holy crap, compared to some of those, "next time" is nothing o_0

Oh really? Give us a line.

"I let him pull away from me as his pants melted off, leaving our naked bodied pressing..."
DO I NEED GO ON?

I will admit, a better analogy could have been used.