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[Tairis Deamhan]

Titanium Man wrote...

Good.  That's kinda tough for me right now, though, so I'm keeping it on Tali's level.

Yea I'd definitely at the very least keep one perspective through a whole chapter. I just can't quite get the scenes to develop correctly writing JUST from Shep's or Tali's POV.

[Titanium Man]

I'm debating whether to finish the rest of "Smile"'s draft as a stream of conciousness kind of thing. Edit the rest out later. If it keeps me in-character...

[Tairis Deamhan]

I hate re-reading my own stuff, so I try to avoid heavy rewrites.

[Titanium Man]

I headed into this project expecting rewrites. Only way I know to make my writing good. My first drafts usually stink, but I don't let that bother me so much.

[Titanium Man]

yorkj86 wrote...



I like how vulnerable Tali looks when she walks in to Shepard's quarters during her final romance scene.   She looks just as vulnerable as Jack does when she walks in to Shepard's quarters during her final romance scene.

I edited some expletives out of the picture, to avoid the banhammer.

Also the part where spiders leak out of her face.

Why, yes, you're correct.  DeviantArt IS weird.

(Also, it's a parody, might as well live with the fact that they're out there!)

[mikethor007]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

yorkj86 wrote...



I like how sweet and vulnerable Tali looks when she walks in to Shepard's quarters during her final romance scene.   She looks just as vulnerable as Jack does when she walks in to Shepard's quarters during her final romance scene.

I edited some expletives out of the picture, to avoid the banhammer.

It takes a lot of trust and love to risk what she did for Shepard.

"And it was totally worth it."

[Titanium Man]

yorkj86 wrote...

Titanium Man wrote...

Also the part where spiders leak out of her face.

EDIT:  Formatting woes.

I warned ya!

[RiptideX1090]

I have returned from the dark ash of misery.



How do?

[Titanium Man]

Hey, Riptide, how do you like to approach your draft? Just blather it on paper, clean it up later? Or more slower and methodical?

[mikethor007]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I have returned from the dark ash of misery.

How do?

Welcome to the Valley of Death.

[nickFury]

I leave for three hours and only two more pages are up, what gives guys?

[Arhka]

Yeah, some idiot just necroed a Romance DLC thread, and it's still going. I don't know about you guys, but I feel that would take away from the plot. And plus, I'd rather see the development more in ME3 than a DLC.

[RiptideX1090]

mikethor007 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I have returned from the dark ash of misery.

How do?

Welcome to the Valley of Death.

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil.

For I am the baddest motha****a in the valley.

And I has a quarian.

[RiptideX1090]

Titanium Man wrote...

Hey, Riptide, how do you like to approach your draft? Just blather it on paper, clean it up later? Or more slower and methodical?

Uh... what do you mean? Art? Writing? I don't use paper for either... do you mean for MY writing or for Reckoning?

[RiptideX1090]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I have returned from the dark ash of misery.

How do?

Hello. Things aren't all that great here right now either.

Hey, hey, come here.

Shhhh.... it's okay. I'm here now. It's going to be okay.

[mikethor007]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I have returned from the dark ash of misery.

How do?

Welcome to the Valley of Death.

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil.

For I am the baddest motha****a in the valley.

And I has a quarian.

Excellent response.

[RiptideX1090]

Alright Rune, I won't go pervy on you for the next hour. Promise.