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Lividity Jones wrote...
kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
Found your problem.
You place no meaning on those words.
I do.
We are finished here.
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
I'm going to...RiptideX1090 wrote...
It is...
He can't feel her skin... nor she his... but it doesn't matter... he WANTS to feel it... and she knows he does... she knows he cares... that someone cares at all... that someone loves her...
It's so goddamn beautiful...
cannedcream wrote...
Also, I'm just going to go drag my bunk to the computer now. . .
RiptideX1090 wrote...
It is...
He can't feel her skin... nor she his... but it doesn't matter... he WANTS to feel it... and she knows he does... she knows he cares... that someone cares at all... that someone loves her...
It's so goddamn beautiful...
kraidy1117 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
Found your problem.
You place no meaning on those words.
I do.
We are finished here.
So you want Tali's romance to be clitche? I don't. I want it to be unque, complex and well-done.
RiptideX1090 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
Also, I'm just going to go drag my bunk to the computer now. . .
I haven't even started yet.
cannedcream wrote...
I have something in my eye.
And my other eye.
. . . and in my heart.
cannedcream wrote...
RiptideX1090 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
Also, I'm just going to go drag my bunk to the computer now. . .
I haven't even started yet.
Goddammit, Rip, I'm chafing!
RedTracer7 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
I have something in my eye.
And my other eye.
. . . and in my heart.
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
kraidy1117 wrote...
I need that pic on hand at times like this <_<
kraidy1117 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
Found your problem.
You place no meaning on those words.
I do.
We are finished here.
So you want Tali's romance to be clitche? I don't. I want it to be unque, complex and well-done.
Guest_SenHai_*
Lividity Jones wrote...
Found your problem.
You place no meaning on those words.
I do.
We are finished here.
With a smile, he replied, "I have a question for you, miss vas Normandy."kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
RedTracer7 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
I have something in my eye.
And my other eye.
. . . and in my heart.
cannedcream wrote...
RiptideX1090 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
Also, I'm just going to go drag my bunk to the computer now. . .
I haven't even started yet.
Goddammit, Rip, I'm chafing!
RiptideX1090 wrote...
kraidy1117 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
Found your problem.
You place no meaning on those words.
I do.
We are finished here.
So you want Tali's romance to be clitche? I don't. I want it to be unque, complex and well-done.
I want him to tell her he loves her.
But I want it done right, like you're saying. I want it to have context and meaning.
If Shepard has to sacrifice himself to end the war, I want him to tell her he loves her before he dies.
If she can take off her mask on Rannoch at the end, and never has to wear the suit again, I want him to say it.
If they have a massive fight, with Tali breaking down and telling Shepard that he'd be happier with Williams, or Liara, because they can give him children, because he can touch their skin whenever he wants, I want him to tell her he loves her.
Just... don't do it at dinner or during sex...
Modifié par kraidy1117, 02 juillet 2010 - 05:25 .
RiptideX1090 wrote...
I want him to tell her he loves her.
But I want it done right, like you're saying. I want it to have context and meaning.
If Shepard has to sacrifice himself to end the war, I want him to tell her he loves her before he dies.
If she can take off her mask on Rannoch at the end, and never has to wear the suit again, I want him to say it.
If they have a massive fight, with Tali breaking down and telling Shepard that he'd be happier with Williams, or Liara, because they can give him children, because he can touch their skin whenever he wants, I want him to tell her he loves her.
Just... don't do it at dinner or during sex...
Guest_SenHai_*
RedTracer7 wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
I have something in my eye.
And my other eye.
. . . and in my heart.
Lividity Jones wrote...
RiptideX1090 wrote...
I want him to tell her he loves her.
But I want it done right, like you're saying. I want it to have context and meaning.
If Shepard has to sacrifice himself to end the war, I want him to tell her he loves her before he dies.
If she can take off her mask on Rannoch at the end, and never has to wear the suit again, I want him to say it.
If they have a massive fight, with Tali breaking down and telling Shepard that he'd be happier with Williams, or Liara, because they can give him children, because he can touch their skin whenever he wants, I want him to tell her he loves her.
Just... don't do it at dinner or during sex...
Well then... I can see my choice was not the popular one.
Still, I agree. It needs meaning.
RiptideX1090 wrote...
I want him to tell her he loves her.
But I want it done right, like you're saying. I want it to have context and meaning.
If Shepard has to sacrifice himself to end the war, I want him to tell her he loves her before he dies.
If she can take off her mask on Rannoch at the end, and never has to wear the suit again, I want him to say it.
If they have a massive fight, with Tali breaking down and telling Shepard that he'd be happier with Williams, or Liara, because they can give him children, because he can touch their skin whenever he wants, I want him to tell her he loves her.
Just... don't do it at dinner or during sex...
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
I stand with you. Nothing says both can't be done.Lividity Jones wrote...
Well then... I can see my choice was not the popular one.
Still, I agree. It needs meaning.
Guest_SenHai_*
uhdnrt wrote...
With a smile, he replied, "I have a question for you, miss vas Normandy."kraidy1117 wrote...
That did not move me at all. Love you is two words that if been thrown around way to much, it has no meaning at all. You can make a romance scene without using those two words and still have a touching scene.
"Y..yes?"
He stood, pulling her to her feet as well. He looked at her lovingly, before he placed his hand over her heart and put one of her hands over his. She started to shake, realizing the significance of what he was doing.
"Stars may come and go, but hearts, hearts are eternal," he began softly. "If you'll have it, mine belongs to you, Tali'Zorah vas Normandy nar Rayya."
Tears fell down her face as she listened to the words. She nodded and said in a quavering voice, "And mine is yours, until the stars themselves fade." Reaching up, she removed her mask, letting fall to the table.
Silver streams fell unabashedly from her eyes. She reached up with her free hand and brought his face down to hers. "One heart, now and forever," she whispered against his lips, before claiming them in a passionate kiss. A kiss Shepard returned equally fervently.
Tali pushed him down onto the couch, refusing to relinquish her grip. When they stopped moving, she broke the kiss. "I love you John. Always."
"I love you too Tali. Every day."
.............Better?
cannedcream wrote...
RiptideX1090 wrote...
I want him to tell her he loves her.
But I want it done right, like you're saying. I want it to have context and meaning.
If Shepard has to sacrifice himself to end the war, I want him to tell her he loves her before he dies.
If she can take off her mask on Rannoch at the end, and never has to wear the suit again, I want him to say it.
If they have a massive fight, with Tali breaking down and telling Shepard that he'd be happier with Williams, or Liara, because they can give him children, because he can touch their skin whenever he wants, I want him to tell her he loves her.
Just... don't do it at dinner or during sex...
Agreed.
If and when it does happen, it needs to be right before or right after something big and dramatic. It needs that extra UMPH to really make the moment shine.
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