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[Kikaimegami]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Well its all 3rd person, but its still focused on one persons perspective as it were the way I write it. You'll generally get the internal dialogue of whomever's POV is the focus, but not the other characters.

Oh, okay. I'd go with Tali, then.

EDIT: Top of the page, my old friend!

Modifié par Kikaimegami, 03 juillet 2010 - 09:38 .

[Someone With Mass]

Slave Girl Quarian wrote...

My contract states I can't go offworld.

That's funny. Last time I checked, you were freed from that slave broker and hired by Synthetic Insights. Unless they're working by the same rules.

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Okay, random advice sought from the masses:
Am currently working on a fic chapter in which Shepard gets some info that pushes him a little over the edge on Illium and winds up in a bar, slugging back extremely large amounts of very potent alcohol. Garrus and Tali have to show up to extricate him.

Who's POV do you think this would be better told from? Shepard's drunken state or Tali's having to drag him somewhere before the cops show?

3rd person

Well its all 3rd person, but its still focused on one persons perspective as it were the way I write it. You'll generally get the internal dialogue of whomever's POV is the focus, but not the other characters.

And my vote is still Tali.

[Tairis Deamhan]

mikethor007 wrote...

And my vote is still Tali.

That seems to be the way the wind is blowing lol

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

And my vote is still Tali.

That seems to be the way the wind is blowing lol

I'm still waiting for Tali's loyalty mission.

[Kikaimegami]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

*Highfive*

Used to watch Voyager when I was like... ten.

Good memories.

Hell yeah! *highfive*

And you just made me feel suddenly old.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Tali's loyalty mission will be coming soon *nod nod*

Also, this is damn good for writing angsty stuff:

www.youtube.com/watch

[mikethor007]

Kikaimegami wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

*Highfive*

Used to watch Voyager when I was like... ten.

Good memories.

Hell yeah! *highfive*

And you just made me feel suddenly old.

Not only you.

[Someone With Mass]

Kikaimegami wrote...

Hell yeah! *highfive*

And you just made me feel suddenly old.

They're showing Voyager around 6 am where I live, so I've watched maybe two three episodes.

[RiptideX1090]

mikethor007 wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

*Highfive*

Used to watch Voyager when I was like... ten.

Good memories.

Hell yeah! *highfive*

And you just made me feel suddenly old.

Not only you.

I'm only 19...

Voyager came out in like... 2000 or 2001 or something...

[Tairis Deamhan]

Eh... Voyager was alright, had some great episodes. But they went alittle crazy with the 'tech the tech' solution to every problem in later seasons.

[mikethor007]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

*Highfive*

Used to watch Voyager when I was like... ten.

Good memories.

Hell yeah! *highfive*

And you just made me feel suddenly old.

Not only you.

I'm only 19...

Voyager came out in like... 2000 or 2001 or something...

And I'm older than you at least half your age. In 2000 I had barely got out of the University.

[Kikaimegami]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Eh... Voyager was alright, had some great episodes. But they went alittle crazy with the 'tech the tech' solution to every problem in later seasons.

Yeah, I liked the early seasons of it. The later ones, not so much.

[Azint]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I'm only 19...

Voyager came out in like... 2000 or 2001 or something...

Remember that night where we all revealed our ages? There were quite a lot of  I thought you were older!

[Kikaimegami]

Azint wrote...

Remember that night where we all revealed our ages? There were quite a lot of  I thought you were older!

I have no recollection of these festivies.

[Shadowomega23]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

*Highfive*

Used to watch Voyager when I was like... ten.

Good memories.

Hell yeah! *highfive*


And you just made me feel suddenly old.

Not only you.

I'm only 19...

Voyager came out in like... 2000 or 2001 or something...

Voyager Came out in 1995 I remember watching every season untill it ended in 2001.

Modifié par Shadowomega23, 03 juillet 2010 - 09:50 .

[Azint]

Kikaimegami wrote...

Azint wrote...

Remember that night where we all revealed our ages? There were quite a lot of  I thought you were older!

I have no recollection of these festivies.

Because you weren't there.

[Kikaimegami]

Azint wrote...

Because you weren't there.

Why does fun stuff always happen when I'm not here?

[Tairis Deamhan]

Doesn't mean it can't happen again.



Age: 26

[Kikaimegami]

29!

[RiptideX1090]

Azint wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

Azint wrote...

Remember that night where we all revealed our ages? There were quite a lot of  I thought you were older!

I have no recollection of these festivies.

Because you weren't there.

Lol. Everyone thought you, me, and Jean were older. Jones too, if I recall.

[Lividity Jones]

Azint wrote...

Remember that night where we all revealed our ages? There were quite a lot of  I thought you were older!

Oh yeah... That was fun.

[Kikaimegami]

Welp.. age check killed the thread.

[mikethor007]

Kikaimegami wrote...

29!

almost 33.

[Tairis Deamhan]

*defib paddles the thread*