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[Lividity Jones]

*Shepard sits up from the table in the Medical Bay, slipping his shirt on over his head as Doctor Chakwas enters. Chakwas quickly examines his now scarless face.*

Chakwas: It looks as though the procedure was a success, Commander. Complete dermal reconstruction.

*Shepard picks up a mirror, proding and pulling at his reconstructed face.*

Chakwas: Commander, if you don't mind me asking... Why did you opt for the procedure? Your scars would have healed in time.

*Shepard slowly turns his head to look out into the Mess Hall, seeing Tali standing with Garrus, the two friends laughing and joking about old times. Shepard sighs.*

Shepard: I want things to go back to the way the were. I don't want to look into a mirror and see how I failed everyone... How I failed her...

[solazz]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YES!

Finally some ****ing progress on my art!

I finally got the damn face looking half way human...

What are you working on?

[Tairis Deamhan]

Lividity Jones wrote...

*Shepard sits up from the table in the Medical Bay, slipping his shirt on over his head as Doctor Chakwas enters. Chakwas quickly examines his now scarless face.*

Chakwas: It looks as though the procedure was a success, Commander. Complete dermal reconstruction.

*Shepard picks up a mirror, proding and pulling at his reconstructed face.*

Chakwas: Commander, if you don't mind me asking... Why did you opt for the procedure? Your scars would have healed in time.

*Shepard slowly turns his head to look out into the Mess Hall, seeing Tali standing with Garrus, the two friends laughing and joking about old times. Shepard sighs.*

Shepard: I want things to go back to the way the were. I don't want to look into a mirror and see how I failed everyone... How I failed her...

Ooh I like. Kinda the opposite of my Shep who choses not to get rid of the scars out of a sense of... I guess, duty?

[Lividity Jones]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Ooh I like. Kinda the opposite of my Shep who choses not to get rid of the scars out of a sense of... I guess, duty?

In my eyes...

He blames himself for the Alarei. He blames himself for Alchera. He blames himself for Virmire. He blames himself for Elysium. He blames himself for Mindoir.

I tried to get that sense of guilt across in Last Son. How, because of his failures, he strives to do better and always finds himself coming up short and that terrifies him. The idea that he can't save everyone. The idea that he could fail.

That's why he chooses to remove those scars.

Modifié par Lividity Jones, 04 juillet 2010 - 12:01 .

[RiptideX1090]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

*Shepard sits up from the table in the Medical Bay, slipping his shirt on over his head as Doctor Chakwas enters. Chakwas quickly examines his now scarless face.*

Chakwas: It looks as though the procedure was a success, Commander. Complete dermal reconstruction.

*Shepard picks up a mirror, proding and pulling at his reconstructed face.*

Chakwas: Commander, if you don't mind me asking... Why did you opt for the procedure? Your scars would have healed in time.

*Shepard slowly turns his head to look out into the Mess Hall, seeing Tali standing with Garrus, the two friends laughing and joking about old times. Shepard sighs.*

Shepard: I want things to go back to the way the were. I don't want to look into a mirror and see how I failed everyone... How I failed her...

Ooh I like. Kinda the opposite of my Shep who choses not to get rid of the scars out of a sense of... I guess, duty?

very nice, Jones.

I always let my scars heal, they're usually done WAY before Haestrom anyway.

As for my renegon Femshep... she keeps the scars... she needs to be able to look into the mirror and see the monster that she is... and hate it.

Cool how something like that can add all kinds of new meaning...

[RiptideX1090]

solazz wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

YES!

Finally some ****ing progress on my art!

I finally got the damn face looking half way human...

What are you working on?

Chapter 4 of Reckoning.

[RiptideX1090]

SenHai wrote...

Thanks guys I wanna "**** Tali sideways" now.


Must remain a gentlemen....*struggles internally*

I do great work.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Ooh I like. Kinda the opposite of my Shep who choses not to get rid of the scars out of a sense of... I guess, duty?

In my eyes...

He blames himself for the Alarei. He blames himself for Alchera. He blames himself for Virmire. He blames himself for Elysium. He blames himself for Mindoir.

I tried to get that sense of guilt across in Last Son. How, because of his failures, he strives to do better and always finds himself coming up short and that terrifies him. The idea that he can't save everyone. The idea that he could fail.

That's why he chooses to remove those scars.

*nods* I'm actually dealing with something similar in the chapter I'm almost done with. Effectively ultimate survivor's guilt, having lived through Akuze, Virmire, even coming back when he actually does finally die. Of course I'm using a healthy does of surprise and alcohol to mess him up more in this chapter

[Lividity Jones]

Anyone else like the idea of Shepard's translator shorting out and Tali trying to speak to him in Khelish while she sits in the Cabin trying to fix it with her omni-tool?

[Tairis Deamhan]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Anyone else like the idea of Shepard's translator shorting out and Tali trying to speak to him in Khelish while she sits in the Cabin trying to fix it with her omni-tool?

I highly approve.

I've actually taken to inventing quarian words on a whim. BUt I'm no linguist so might not make sense.

[Ryshan]

Does anyone know if there has been an attempted fan-fiction of the First Contact War yet?

[RiptideX1090]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Anyone else like the idea of Shepard's translator shorting out and Tali trying to speak to him in Khelish while she sits in the Cabin trying to fix it with her omni-tool?

I'm sure Tali has a built in one what can change her output.

[epoch_]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
I simply have a lack of options.

You could always do what I did and just make an option.

I still don't understand what you intend to do. Working for Bioware doesn't make a whole lot of sense, as the only Bioware game you even like is ME. And in 5 years they won't even be making Mass Effect games.

Unless I misunderstood you yesterday

[Lividity Jones]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Anyone else like the idea of Shepard's translator shorting out and Tali trying to speak to him in Khelish while she sits in the Cabin trying to fix it with her omni-tool?

I highly approve.

I've actually taken to inventing quarian words on a whim. BUt I'm no linguist so might not make sense.

Tali: Khalad se ray ruoten ma... (This is alot harder than it looks...)

Shepard: What?

Tali: Nedas. (Nothing.)

Yes, I just invented that first part. Just needs to sound good.

Modifié par Lividity Jones, 04 juillet 2010 - 12:13 .

[Lividity Jones]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Anyone else like the idea of Shepard's translator shorting out and Tali trying to speak to him in Khelish while she sits in the Cabin trying to fix it with her omni-tool?

I'm sure Tali has a built in one what can change her output.

I wouldn't be surprised.

Still, it would be kind of funny. Plus, you'd get to hear her own language.

[Shadowomega23]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I do great work.

I work and let history be the judge.
History says I don't do very well.

"He who controls the past commands the Future.
He who commands the future, Conquers the Past."

If someone figures this out you all get a prize.

Modifié par Shadowomega23, 04 juillet 2010 - 12:16 .

[Tairis Deamhan]

Only ones I've pulled out of my ass so far have stuck with the contraction/apostrophe structure since I think of them as 'complex' words

gen'ro'sa - Son of a ****
hesh'alan - honorary/formal of captain
hesh'la - slang term for captain but with more familiar connotation

Modifié par Tairis Deamhan, 04 juillet 2010 - 12:17 .

[RiptideX1090]

Shadowomega23 wrote...

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I do great work.

I work and let history be the judge.
History says I don't do very well.

"He who controls the past commands the Future.
He who commands the future, Conquers the Past."

If someone figures this out you all get a prize.

He who writes the past, determines what will happen in the future because he determines the world that was, giving precedent for the world that is.

He who takes control of his own destiny, needs not live by the shackles of a future determined by the past.

Heh... shackles... <3

Modifié par RiptideX1090, 04 juillet 2010 - 12:20 .

[Lividity Jones]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Only ones I've pulled out of my ass so far have stuck with the contraction/apostrophe structure since I think of them as 'complex' words

gen'ro'sa - Son of a ****
hesh'alan - honorary/formal of captain
hesh'la - slang term for captain but with more familiar connotation

As far as we can tell, they seem to draw out their vowels often.

Keelah.

Zaal.

Reegar.

Beyond that, it's speculation.