The Official Migrant Fleet of Tali'Zorah fans
#219601
Posté 04 juillet 2010 - 11:59
#219602
Posté 04 juillet 2010 - 11:59
Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Thirded, though I will remain out of the scenario.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Seriously.Lividity Jones wrote...
Yes.epoch_ wrote...
You'd base whether you live or die on what tali decides?
Is that even a question?
I admit I'm not surprised, but damn. Ok... then...
#219603
Posté 04 juillet 2010 - 11:59
RiptideX1090 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
epoch_ wrote...
You'd base whether you live or die on what tali decides?
Yes.
Is that even a question?
Seriously.
I've done it with her life. It's just fair for her to do the same.
#219604
Guest_phonypapercut_*
Posté 04 juillet 2010 - 11:59
Guest_phonypapercut_*
Day after second helping and a long night of sleep would make more sense.Lividity Jones wrote...
Someone With Mass wrote...
A little cheesy, but I liked it. As I said before. Breakfast the day after...their moment.
Breakfast the day after?
As in the day after Omega 4?
#219605
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:00
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Tali's arms wrap around Shepard as they sit together on a vast plain of grass, fireworks dazzling the night sky of Earth.*
Tali: Why fireworks?
*Shepard shrugs.*
Shepard: Not sure. They've been used in celebrations for years.
*Tali sighs as a loud burst of purple light scatters across the sky.*
Tali: We don't have celebrations like this on the Flotilla... It's beautiful.
*Shepard turns to her, pulling her body closer to his as they both lay on the grass.*
Shepard: Get used to it, Tali. We're going to see everything. The galaxy is a big place. I always dreamed about travelling across the stars when I was a kid... I can't think of anyone I'd rather have with me.
Weak, I know. Next?
Shepard teaching Tali to brush her teeth, bear with me on this one Dr Jones. I imagine that nutrient paste is pretty easy on the old enamel but if at somepoint Tali no longer needs to wear her suit or simply starts eating more 'proper food' she is going to need to look after her teeth which are likely very sensitive. Cue opportunity for epic d'awwwwwww.
#219606
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:00
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Tali's arms wrap around Shepard as they sit together on a vast plain of grass, fireworks dazzling the night sky of Earth.*
Tali: Why fireworks?
*Shepard shrugs.*
Shepard: Not sure. They've been used in celebrations for years.
*Tali sighs as a loud burst of purple light scatters across the sky.*
Tali: We don't have celebrations like this on the Flotilla... It's beautiful.
*Shepard turns to her, pulling her body closer to his as they both lay on the grass.*
Shepard: Get used to it, Tali. We're going to see everything. The galaxy is a big place. I always dreamed about travelling across the stars when I was a kid... I can't think of anyone I'd rather have with me.
Weak, I know. Next?
I fail to see the weakness of Shep holding Tali in his arms watching a celebration personally
#219607
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:00
Lividity Jones wrote...
Someone With Mass wrote...
A little cheesy, but I liked it. As I said before. Breakfast the day after...their moment.
Breakfast the day after?
As in the day after Omega 4?
Sure.
You can remove the whole attack on the Collector base part if you want to.
Just make it look believable.
Modifié par Someone With Mass, 05 juillet 2010 - 12:02 .
#219608
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:00
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Keelah se'lai. AWOY.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Right, I'm out for a few hours. Will be back later. Reckoning Chapter 4 should be up tonight, I hope.
#219609
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:01
Someone With Mass wrote...
Sure.
You can remove the whole attack on the Collector base part if you want to.
Alright... Give me a few.
I'll handle Sharpe's after.
#219610
Guest_phonypapercut_*
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:01
Guest_phonypapercut_*
Damn I really need to get my stuff out quicker. I already have a rough version of this written out.Leftnt Sharpe wrote...
Shepard teaching Tali to brush her teeth, bear with me on this one Dr Jones. I imagine that nutrient paste is pretty easy on the old enamel but if at somepoint Tali no longer needs to wear her suit or simply starts eating more 'proper food' she is going to need to look after her teeth which are likely very sensitive. Cue opportunity for epic d'awwwwwww.
Modifié par phonypapercut, 05 juillet 2010 - 12:02 .
#219611
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:02
Lividity Jones wrote...
Someone With Mass wrote...
Sure.
You can remove the whole attack on the Collector base part if you want to.
Alright... Give me a few.
I'll handle Sharpe's after.
I still say my idea was better.
#219612
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:05
hey, i'll play the devil's advocate and say if its between going against what tali wants and me dying, i live every time.Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Thirded, though I will remain out of the scenario.RiptideX1090 wrote...
Seriously.Lividity Jones wrote...
Yes.epoch_ wrote...
You'd base whether you live or die on what tali decides?
Is that even a question?
#219613
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:09
epoch_ wrote...
You'd base whether you live or die on what tali decides?
If I was as close to someone as Shepard is to Tali - yes. Without hesitation.
#219614
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:10
Tali: Shepard?
Shepard: Morning. I... uhh... I made you something.
*Shepard walks around to the side of the bed, setting down the tray to reveal a collection of exotic turian food.*
Shepard: I hope you like it... I had to do a whole lot of research before I found a few things that wouldn't wreak havoc on your digestion. Had to clear out the Mess Hall and disinfect the whole place as well as the elevator. Even cooked wearing my armor.
Tali: Shepard... You really didn't have to do all of... this.
Shepard: I wanted to. I want this to be the best hours of our lives before we hit that Relay. C'mon, try it.
*Tali picks up a spoon, reveling in the feel of the metal utensil on her bare flesh, before gingerly taking a spoonful of a spicy red soup. Her eye's widen at the bitter taste.*
Shepard: Is it good?
*Tali nods slowly, holding the mouthful of soup in her mouth before swallowing it around her tongue.*
Tali: It's... good.
#219615
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:11
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Tali nods slowly, holding the mouthful of soup in her mouth before swallowing it around her tongue.*
Tali: It's... good.
You're getting better at these.
#219616
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:14
yeah that one was pretty cute.Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Tali nods slowly, holding the mouthful of soup in her mouth before swallowing it around her tongue.*
Tali: It's... good.:wub:
You're getting better at these.
#219617
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:15
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Tali stirs from her blissful sleep, the exertions of last night leaving her the happiest she has ever felt. A soft hiss is heard as the door to the Cabin opens, Shepard carrying a tray and wearing full armor. Tali sits up on the bed, still without her suit.*
Tali: Shepard?
Shepard: Morning. I... uhh... I made you something.
*Shepard walks around to the side of the bed, setting down the tray to reveal a collection of exotic turian food.*
Shepard: I hope you like it... I had to do a whole lot of research before I found a few things that wouldn't wreak havoc on your digestion. Had to clear out the Mess Hall and disinfect the whole place as well as the elevator. Even cooked wearing my armor.
Tali: Shepard... You really didn't have to do all of... this.
Shepard: I wanted to. I want this to be the best hours of our lives before we hit that Relay. C'mon, try it.
*Tali picks up a spoon, reveling in the feel of the metal utensil on her bare flesh, before gingerly taking a spoonful of a spicy red soup. Her eye's widen at the bitter taste.*
Shepard: Is it good?
*Tali nods slowly, holding the mouthful of soup in her mouth before swallowing it around her tongue.*
Tali: It's... good.
Hehe. Shepard isn't exactly a Iron Chef.
#219618
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:18
Tali: Bosh'tet...
*Tali sees Shepard enter the bathroom, coming up behind her to look in the mirror.*
Shepard: Problem?
*Tali grunts in frustration.*
Tali: I don't know how... I just end up hurting myself...
*Shepard smiles as his hand drifts to her, his five fingers overlapping her three as he guides the brush into her mouth, moving it slowly and gently across the surface of her teeth.*
Shepard: For someone as cleanly as you...
*Tali's silver eyes glare at Shepard.*
Shepard: Right. Sorry.
Modifié par Lividity Jones, 05 juillet 2010 - 12:20 .
#219619
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:21
glad I made it back befor 9000.
so what's going on?
#219620
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:22
Guest_Runescapeguy9_*
Welcome back Orma.Ormagodenator wrote...
I have been gone from this place for to long,
glad I made it back befor 9000.
so what's going on?
#219621
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:22
maybe someone needs to switch to sensodyneLividity Jones wrote...
*Tali stands in the bathroom of the Captain's Cabin, running a toothbrush along her teeth, irritated at the chore she had lived without her suited life. Leaning forward and examining her gums, Tali can see the sensitive flesh bleeding.*
Tali: Bosh'tet...
*Tali sees Shepard enter the bathroom, coming up behind her to look in the mirror.*
Shepard: Problem?
*Tali grunts in frustration.*
Tali: I don't know how... I just end up hurting myself...
*Shepard smiles as his hand drifts to her, his five fingers overlapping her three as he guides the brush into her mouth, moving it slowly and gently across the surface of her teeth.*
Shepard: For someone as cleanly as you...
*Tali's silver eyes glare at Shepard.*
Shepard: Right. Sorry.
#219622
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:23
According to our records before Shepherd left of the Omega 4 Relay he was reactivated his Specter Status” Board member number 3 stated sitting quietly the Illusive Man made no indication that where this line of the thought was going bothered him. Turning Shepherd into another Saeren just rubbed him the wrong way but still the first rule of hunting was when you quarry goes to ground give no ground. Shepherd was using his Specter status hide himself from Cerberus eyes turning him into a Rogue Specter is dangerous it could very well damage humanities standing on the Council. The upside was that is all did go right the Alliance and Humans look like heroes hunting down one of their own.
“What are you suggesting Three?” Board member number 7 asked.
“Commander Shepherd has gone Rogue attacking human and Council interest alike, the Alliance will hunt him down to ends of the galaxy in a sign of good faith we will hold a trail and kill our greatest hero to protect Council.” The Illusive Man sometimes but not always does hate being right.
*End Preview*
The People TIM is speak with are the Board Members of the 12 major backers of Cerberus they are some if not the most power Men and Women in the Alliance and TIM answers to them. Still working but that just the prologue next is a snip from Chapter 1 some Early Shep Tali for ya
Chapter 1: Precious Moments Preview
:”Come in.”
“Shepherd I know you're probably tired but... Oh Keelah you stubborn man why didn't go see Doctor Chakwas.” Tali chided looking at the just how injured he really was she could see blood seeping through cracks and holes in his armor, terrible cut over his right eye that had stopped bleeding but there was still a lot of blood and dirt caked on his face.
“She needed to look after crew my injuries are not the bad.” He said wincing as he finished wrapping his arm, that she noticed there was small hole burnt clean through his armor. It was a shot he took while fight off the Drones as the made their escape he took the bullet for her.
“Bosh'tet stop it a let me look at your wounds if you don't want to see the Chakwas ”
“Tali it..”
“Nathaniel hush.”
Modifié par nitefyre410, 05 juillet 2010 - 12:23 .
#219623
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:23
Lividity Jones wrote...
*Shepard smiles as his hand drifts to her, his five fingers overlapping her three as he guides the brush into her mouth, moving it slowly and gently across the surface of her teeth.*
That sounds...so relaxing.
#219624
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:26
#219625
Posté 05 juillet 2010 - 12:31
tali, shepard, and the friendly collector!Lividity Jones wrote...
Alright, any more requests?




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