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[Azint]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Azint wrote...

Read the fic, damnit.

I did.

...And?

[RiptideX1090]

Azint wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Azint wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Right. That's enough for tonight.

That's fine. I didn't want to keep you.

That's not it.

You did say you would stay tonight for our AoD session...

So I did.

Frankly?

I simply don't know what to do from here.

[RiptideX1090]

Someone With Mass wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

BigKahuna25 wrote...

andrew jackson was a true badass. my favorite president. and on that note i for real leave you.

He was also a monster.

Many great men are.

Usually happens when they get more power.

Power is a state of mind.

You don't need much to be a monster.

[SpatFieya]

Someone With Mass wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

BigKahuna25 wrote...

andrew jackson was a true badass. my favorite president. and on that note i for real leave you.

He was also a monster.

Many great men are.

Usually happens when they get more power.

Nah, Jackson came out of the womb a bad ass, heard he tried to strangle the doctor with his own umbilical cord.

[cannedcream]

Someone With Mass wrote...

Usually happens when they get more power.

"Absolute power corrupts absolutely"

Of course, there are some that can't even handle a tiny bit of power. . .

[Someone With Mass]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Power is a state of mind.

You don't need much to be a monster.

True.

But it helps sometimes.

[Azint]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I simply don't know what to do from here.

With the project? Well, I was hoping that Pallin would last a bit longer because I had a few ideas. You did present the data for them to determine any connections, we can try from there.

[Lividity Jones]

Azint wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Azint wrote...

Read the fic, damnit.

I did.

...And?

And Tali should grow a pair and dump the douchebag.

Seriously.

How Renegade-

Y'know what? **** it.

This isn't an arguement I or anybody can win.

[SpatFieya]

cannedcream wrote...

Someone With Mass wrote...

Usually happens when they get more power.

"Absolute power corrupts absolutely"

Of course, there are some that can't even handle a tiny bit of power. . .

Like those treacherous mall cops.

[Someone With Mass]

cannedcream wrote...

Someone With Mass wrote...

Usually happens when they get more power.

"Absolute power corrupts absolutely"

Of course, there are some that can't even handle a tiny bit of power. . .

Like those who starts wars over a spoon of oil?

[RiptideX1090]

Azint wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I simply don't know what to do from here.

With the project? Well, I was hoping that Pallin would last a bit longer because I had a few ideas. You did present the data for them to determine any connections, we can try from there.

That's just it. I don't know what to try.

Our entire plot is a mess, and I'm trying to find a way to make it make sense, while giving it meaning to the nature of the story.

[Azint]

Lividity Jones wrote...

And Tali should grow a pair and dump the douchebag.

Seriously.

How Renegade-

Y'know what? **** it.

This isn't an arguement I or anybody can win.

Well, it appears the audience is beginning to feel as how I intended them to...

[SpatFieya]

Lividity Jones wrote...
And Tali should grow a pair and dump the douchebag.

Seriously.

How Renegade-

Y'know what? **** it.

This isn't an arguement I or anybody can win.

Hey, I'm not a fan of douche canoe renegades either. 

But a good story is a good story non the less. 

[Azint]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

That's just it. I don't know what to try.

Our entire plot is a mess, and I'm trying to find a way to make it make sense, while giving it meaning to the nature of the story.

You know, I am willing to work off of your ideas. This entire thing started because we wanted to entertain ourselves, we can add more to it of course.

What do you want to do with it?

[cannedcream]

SpatFieya wrote...

Like those treacherous mall cops.

Ha.  Yes!
You're not a real cop. Chill.

There are just certain jobs that should never, EVER be taken seriously by those who work them.

[cannedcream]

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...
And Tali should grow a pair and dump the douchebag.

Seriously.

How Renegade-

Y'know what? **** it.

This isn't an arguement I or anybody can win.

Hey, I'm not a fan of douche canoe renegades either. 

But a good story is a good story non the less. 

[monocle]Indubitably. [/monocle]

[Someone With Mass]

I like Renegade Shep to a specific level in fics, because I never really got the chance to play or expereience his style myself. (Thanks mostly to Tali )

[SpatFieya]

cannedcream wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

Like those treacherous mall cops.

Ha.  Yes!
You're not a real cop. Chill.

There are just certain jobs that should never, EVER be taken seriously by those who work them.

Indeed. This also reminds me of a funny story...


Me: *Sitting on the tail gate of a friends truck while he's driving through the mall parking lot to my vehicle*

Mall Cop: *Speeds up to us in his golf cart AFTER I reach my vehicle* Don't ride around in my parking lot like that!

Me: Your parking lot? You own this entire property? 

Mall Cop: Don't get smart with me, son.

Me: ...Would you rather me be dumb with you?

Mall Cop: *Sigh* ...Just get out of here.

Modifié par SpatFieya, 06 juillet 2010 - 06:59 .

[Lividity Jones]

Hmm...

We have another sit-in on our hands, I think.

http://social.biowar...697/polls/7672/

[Someone With Mass]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Hmm...

We have another sit-in on our hands, I think.

http://social.biowar...697/polls/7672/

I'll add Tali. In my mind. She won in my mind. I like my mind.

[Azint]

SpatFieya wrote...

Indeed. This also reminds me of a funny story...


Me: *Sitting on the tail gate of a friends truck while he's driving through the mall parking lot to my vehicle*

Mall Cop: *Speeds up to us in his golf cart AFTER I reach my vehicle* Don't ride around in my parking lot like that!

Me: Your parking lot? You own this entire property? 

Mall Cop: Don't get smart with me, son.

Me: ...Would you rather me be dumb with you?

Mall Cop: *Sigh* ...Just get out of here.

About two years ago, my friend and I decided to dress up as Jay and Silent Bob, I was Jay. We hung out at a mall and we caused a fair amount of hijinks.

[Lividity Jones]

Azint wrote...

About two years ago, my friend and I decided to dress up as Jay and Silent Bob, I was Jay. We hung out at a mall and we caused a fair amount of hijinks.

Lividity approves (+10)

[SpatFieya]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Hmm...

We have another sit-in on our hands, I think.

http://social.biowar...697/polls/7672/

ps i win not add tali because she will win i don`t no way but she would win

Hardy, har, har!

[Lividity Jones]

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Hmm...

We have another sit-in on our hands, I think.

http://social.biowar...697/polls/7672/

ps i win not add tali because she will win i don`t no way but she would win

Hardy, har, har!

He lists Liara twice, but doesn't have Tali or Garrus.

Wow.

[RiptideX1090]

Azint wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

That's just it. I don't know what to try.

Our entire plot is a mess, and I'm trying to find a way to make it make sense, while giving it meaning to the nature of the story.

You know, I am willing to work off of your ideas. This entire thing started because we wanted to entertain ourselves, we can add more to it of course.

What do you want to do with it?

I have absolutely no idea.

Original idea seemed nice enough. Shepard is hunting down some missing colonists taken by the batarians. Something that could fit into the main story as DLC or something...

Somehow, we got the quarians, the Hierarchy, C-Sec, the Human Council, and the Blue Suns all in on something, with no real explanation as to why. Blue Suns are working for the Slavers? Or is it vice versa? Are they taking the ships for themelves? Are they selling the passengers to the Hegemony? Why are the quarians involved? Their ships are hard to get. What is the point? Who is behind it? Why should we care? At some point, we went from wanting to get Shepard to Camala, to doing a serious 180 and going to some Blue Suns station. The flow here makes no sense. I assumed you were going somewhere with it when you introduced the idea with Chellick and Pallin, but every chance I've given you to expand on it has turned up nothing. We have ALL of these things happening, but it doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. Shepard is doing jobs for Chellick? Why? What does he need Chellick for? He's a Spectre. He's the same level, if not higher, than Chellick. The quarians he might care a LITTLE bit about, only to keep Tali appeased. Beyond that, what's the big deal? We know we're going to Camala, but if he's just going to blow up all of the prisoners, quarian include, what was the point of entering the base at all? Just hit it with the Thannix Cannon, or have someone else take care of it. Shepard's only real concern should be the human colonists and the batarians he hates so much.

I simply can't figure out how to tie all this together in a meaningful way... it feels like we got sidetracked somwhere.