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[Tairis Deamhan]

Gre3nham wrote...

Sweet, I look forward to it. But please, don't make shep/tali get married... It just feels so cheap.

I haven't really even planned anything for beyond the end of the game. *shrugs*
Some sort of marriage or bonding ceremony could be in their future, but if it is I can't forsee it being soon. It seems like something that would wait until afte r the universe was saved.
I will say if its done well it can be an emotional moment, done poorly it just doesn't make sense.

[TTTX]

Gre3nham wrote...

Sweet, I look forward to it. But please, don't make shep/tali get married... It just feels so cheap.

what do you mean?

Cheap how?

[Thelacan]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

I thought it ended well enough. The last person responsible for Rin's death was gone, Shepard prevented David from giving into a need for revenge and to find some sort of peace.
It's really the best you can hope for in that story.

QFT.

It was the best outcome that story could have. As in with the plot and with the writing. Some sappy, happy ending with everyone living happily ever after would have been just so... yeah.

[Gre3nham]

It was hardly a happy ending, especially with the whole 'rin got raped and died' thing... It would have been a better ending if David died, and their was a scene like in 'ghosts of onyx' the halo novel. Sorry for not using quote box's, but I can't use the standard form on my phone.

[Someone With Mass]

TTTX wrote...

Gre3nham wrote...

Sweet, I look forward to it. But please, don't make shep/tali get married... It just feels so cheap.

what do you mean?

Cheap how?

I have to agree. It feels...I don't know a good word to describe it with, so I'm going to go with cliché. A bad cliché.

Modifié par Someone With Mass, 06 juillet 2010 - 01:27 .

[nitefyre410]

Someone With Mass wrote...

nitefyre410 wrote...

Can some give me the link so i can read this piece of work... its hard as hell finding good stories in the masses of the crap on  FF.net 

Here you go.

But I'll warn ya.

Read at your own risk.

Nah, who am I kidding. Have fun!

  


I watched  the whole   Neon Genesis Evanglelion  Saga  all at once no breaks... I can handle tragedy... That show breaks that strongest of people... 

Viewer: Wait the world ended but  the hero, the  hero always saves day .... this does not compute * Brain breaks* 

[Tairis Deamhan]

TTTX wrote...

Gre3nham wrote...

Sweet, I look forward to it. But please, don't make shep/tali get married... It just feels so cheap.

what do you mean?

Cheap how?

I think he means if its just a throwaway plot device. Just a 'hey, they're in love so they go and get married because Shep proposes'.
I think Calin dealt with this well. In his fic Shepard does in depth research on quarian practices instead of just going about it human style, and there is an extremely large lead up to him actually taking action on the desire. It added a great deal of weight to the whole situation.

[Gre3nham]

@TTTX I feel that whenever someone writes a happy marriage into a story it kind of kills it, in the same way that a happy ending would have killed drifting (no matter how much I want it to).



Obviouy there's a way to insert a marriage into a story without it feeling overly perfect, but it's hard to do.



Out of curiosity, how many of you want bioware to write a Tali/Shep marriage into the plot of ME3?

[TTTX]

Someone With Mass wrote...

TTTX wrote...

Gre3nham wrote...

Sweet, I look forward to it. But please, don't make shep/tali get married... It just feels so cheap.

what do you mean?

C.heap how?

I have to agree. It feels...I don't know a good word to describe it with, so I'm going to go with cliché. A bad cliché.

hmmm I can see the point but if it is done right it could work

[TTTX]

Modifié par TTTX, 06 juillet 2010 - 01:33 .

[Tairis Deamhan]

I trust Bioware to do a good job of writing, so I wouldn't have a problem with it. But its not something I'd actively want.



It would only make sense if there was a very strong social structure to the quarians that made marriage extremely significant and important part of their culture. We've seen no evidence of this, so it seems unnecessary.





I see no problem with them simply being lovers. Honestly the one love interest that makes the MOST sense for a wedding is Ashley Williams. She seemed to be fairly traditional.

[nitefyre410]

Gre3nham wrote...

@TTTX I feel that whenever someone writes a happy marriage into a story it kind of kills it, in the same way that a happy ending would have killed drifting (no matter how much I want it to).

Obviouy there's a way to insert a marriage into a story without it feeling overly perfect, but it's hard to do.

Out of curiosity, how many of you want bioware to write a Tali/Shep marriage into the plot of ME3?

  


I would not mind but i would have to be done correctly  and not just a throw away plot devise.  I would like too see some more  Quarian costumes than  human tradition... 

[Aesaar]

Personally, I found Sensations to be far, far worse (as in sad) than Drifting.

[Someone With Mass]

Gre3nham wrote...

@TTTX I feel that whenever someone writes a happy marriage into a story it kind of kills it, in the same way that a happy ending would have killed drifting (no matter how much I want it to).

Obviouy there's a way to insert a marriage into a story without it feeling overly perfect, but it's hard to do.

Out of curiosity, how many of you want bioware to write a Tali/Shep marriage into the plot of ME3?

Even if I want it to happen, I doubt it's going to, because if Tali can get married, but the other LIs can't, there will be blood.

It's just unfair to the rest of them.

I'm not against it, though. If BW can write it in a good and believable way, but still make it so the other LIs aren't left behind in the shadows (again) then I think it's okay. But just that. Okay.

Modifié par Someone With Mass, 06 juillet 2010 - 01:39 .

[Formis_Sage]

Gre3nham wrote...

@TTTX I feel that whenever someone writes a happy marriage into a story it kind of kills it, in the same way that a happy ending would have killed drifting (no matter how much I want it to).

Obviouy there's a way to insert a marriage into a story without it feeling overly perfect, but it's hard to do.

Out of curiosity, how many of you want bioware to write a Tali/Shep marriage into the plot of ME3?

I want good ending but not a marriage, it's everywhere. "They got married and live a happy life..."
I want something unusual :innocent:

[Gre3nham]

It could, but because of the rather bias view of the writer, the whole marriage thing will be... I dunno, sickly sweet is probably the best way to describe it.

[TTTX]

Gre3nham wrote...

@TTTX I feel that whenever someone writes a happy marriage into a story it kind of kills it, in the same way that a happy ending would have killed drifting (no matter how much I want it to).

Obviouy there's a way to insert a marriage into a story without it feeling overly perfect, but it's hard to do.

Out of curiosity, how many of you want bioware to write a Tali/Shep marriage into the plot of ME3?

I imange that you get some epilog that Shepard married his/her love interst.

I don't think we'll see it.

[Someone With Mass]

Gre3nham wrote...

It could, but because of the rather bias view of the writer, the whole marriage thing will be... I dunno, sickly sweet is probably the best way to describe it.

Like something that would only happen in a bad Hollywood-flick.

It's a little too much happiness at once.

[Gre3nham]

Pls link this 'sensation' story, I want to know how you can get sadder than 'Mu girlfriend got raped and killed'.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Gre3nham wrote...

It could, but because of the rather bias view of the writer, the whole marriage thing will be... I dunno, sickly sweet is probably the best way to describe it.

I honestly don't have a huge problem with some highly 'sweet' scenes in a story like this, simply because the amount of violence and tragedy that occur.
Too often I think people get into one rut or the other. Everything is too perfect or every moment is a struggle against adversity.
Give the characters a moment of honest happiness. It makes their motivation to keep going when things goto hell all the more believable.

[Gre3nham]

Yeah, the way your going in Razors edge is good, when are u posting the next chapter?

[Tairis Deamhan]

Gre3nham wrote...

Yeah, the way your going in Razors edge is good, when are u posting the next chapter?

Hopefully tonight. It's about 1/3 done atm, then I just have to edit it (which I am terrible at) so there aren't too many stupid errors.

[TTTX]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Gre3nham wrote...

Yeah, the way your going in Razors edge is good, when are u posting the next chapter?

Hopefully tonight. It's about 1/3 done atm, then I just have to edit it (which I am terrible at) so there aren't too many stupid errors.

someone is always worse than you.

[Gre3nham]

Hmmmm... Well I'm in Australia, so that will be early tomorrow morning for me. I'll probably get the email from fanfiction.net. Look forward to it

[badrobot2]

Gre3nham wrote...

Hmmmm... Well I'm in Australia

Yay, another aussie Tali fan. Finally.

Modifié par badrobot2, 06 juillet 2010 - 01:51 .