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[Lividity Jones]

SpatFieya wrote...

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...
*Shepard & Tali sleeping in the Normandy's cabin*

Tali: *Resting her head against Shepard's chest, listening to his heart beat* 
Shepard: You give this heart something to beat for...
Tali: *Hugs tightly* :')

My heart has joy.

Glad to hear. A little line I dabbled with in the FF I'm writing. Shepard realizes why Tali always rests her head on his chest.

To listen to his heart.

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

[nitefyre410]

SpatFieya wrote...

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

nitefyre410 wrote...
But to do that Bioware has to answer  on simple question...

What is Shepherd really fighting for?  

/end rant 

I can tell you right now mine is fighting for Tali.
Hm...maybe if I actually published my writing you would know what I'm talking about...
Anyhow, she is all he has, and the other way around. Without the other, there's nothing worth fighting for.

*Shepard & Tali sleeping in the Normandy's cabin*

Tali: *Resting her head against Shepard's chest, listening to his heart beat* 
Shepard: You give this heart something to beat for...
Tali: *Hugs tightly* :')

  


Exactly we need scenes like this to give ME the emotional punch that it needs at least from the player stand point. see what i am saying.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Of the random Tali related songs I saw online this one was oddly catchy: www.youtube.com/watch

[SpatFieya]

Lividity Jones wrote...

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

Mmmhmm, will admit, when I read that I dawww'd pretty hard. I always liked the idea of her doing that, but I also like the idea of Shepard realizing that she's doing it, and finding it incredibly dawww as well.

Modifié par SpatFieya, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:12 .

[Skadhi1]

nitefyre410 wrote...

Someone With Mass wrote...

NCLanceman wrote...

Of course it's an improvement. Walking out of earshot of Ken and Gabby makes the conversation personal. Whereas having the talk within several feet of Engineer Adams just wouldn't have been the same.

Also, under what set of circumstances would she not be working her sweet ass off all the time? That's what that switch in Shepard's Cabin is for: when she isn't working her ass off.

Well, I was thinking of taking her to more places on the Normandy than just the cabin, the AI Core and deck 4. Like the mess hall.Wouldn't it be a nice little detail if we could watch (and hear) Tali and Shepard having lunch, while talking about past events like missions or...personal things?

  

You know what I want for ME 3 is  feel like that the Reapers are the big bad that is coming... i want  them bring back the entire crew  Miranda included.. i want to see some bonds form between the  Characters  Garrus and Shepherd  and Jacob  ribbing each other... Miranda,  smacking them all  for being the big dumb idiots  that  despite the fact that they drive her nuts she would lost with out them. I want to see  Jack get past her demons  and find some peace and realize that she does have people she can trust  To see Kasumi grab Tali  and get her into  mischief  Thane make peace with Koylat  and  let Mordin and shepherd help him.   Grunt be that rock you know no matter what is  always going be there because he is just too crazy not be.    I want to Samara and Zaead   give you that advice you look for  from someone who seen as much as they have.     I want  to  invested in ME 3, I want to the crew that Shpeherd bust ass to make sure came home become some  then people on the ship. IF  ME 3 did that then at least in my book it  will a  Epic Win...   But to do that Bioware has to answer  on simple question...

What is Shepherd really fighting for?  

/end rant 

^^^ What he said! ^^^

[Lividity Jones]

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

Mmmhmm, will admit, when I read that I dawww'd pretty hard. I always liked the idea of her doing that, but I also like the idea of Shepard realizing that she's doing it, and finding it incredibly dawww as well.

Oh, he knows.

He also enjoys that slight metallic sound that she makes with her voice modulator when she sleeps, not exactly snoring, just breathing lightly.

[knight5923]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Of the random Tali related songs I saw online this one was oddly catchy: www.youtube.com/watch

Ya, that is a good one. What a talented individual:innocent:

[SpatFieya]

Lividity Jones wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

Mmmhmm, will admit, when I read that I dawww'd pretty hard. I always liked the idea of her doing that, but I also like the idea of Shepard realizing that she's doing it, and finding it incredibly dawww as well.

Oh, he knows.

He also enjoys that slight metallic sound that she makes with her voice modulator when she sleeps, not exactly snoring, just breathing lightly.

Damnit, Jones! You're gonna...make me..

HNNNNNNNNNG!

Modifié par SpatFieya, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:25 .

[nitefyre410]

Lividity Jones wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...
*Shepard & Tali sleeping in the Normandy's cabin*

Tali: *Resting her head against Shepard's chest, listening to his heart beat* 
Shepard: You give this heart something to beat for...
Tali: *Hugs tightly* :')

My heart has joy.

Glad to hear. A little line I dabbled with in the FF I'm writing. Shepard realizes why Tali always rests her head on his chest.

To listen to his heart.

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

  

Mass Effect: Precipice : Will of  the Heart 

Picking up the torn piece  of purple fabric  the  pattern painful familiar  a reminder of the thought that tore through him.  Too late , always too late .    Clenching the ripped piece  in his fist he read the  note on the ground     

We Have Her   

-  the Twelve     

Garrus bacedk up  as a growl that would have made a  Krogan ****** his pants rumbled from Shepherds throat.  The deadly hum of  Dark Energy  filling his ears as the mans body glowed  with a deadly blue energy.   Walking past Garrus there was no words shared between the two there was no need. The only sound that was heard was the echo of Shepherds fist  destroying the door frame as he left.  

a little  of whats to come in Mass Effect : Precipice 

Modifié par nitefyre410, 07 juillet 2010 - 12:24 .

[Formis_Sage]

knight5923 wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Of the random Tali related songs I saw online this one was oddly catchy: www.youtube.com/watch

Ya, that is a good one. What a talented individual:innocent:

Hey, Knight!!!
Good to see you again buddy

[Titanium Man]

SpatFieya wrote...
Damnit, Jones! Your gonna...make me..

HNNNNNNNNNG!

What was that?  Did you make a mess?  I hope not.

Anyway...whew, this fiction writing business is tough!  But I'm looking at it like a game...what's the best way to go about this?  I'm still discovering my style...preferably one that lets me finish a draft.  I, uh, made the mistake of looking back at what I written.  There are several plotholes and now I'm shaken :V  And I don't know where to go next.  I had a general idea, but the specifics escape me at the moment.

[Lividity Jones]

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

SpatFieya wrote...

Lividity Jones wrote...

Tali enjoyed laying in bed with Shepard like this. Placing her head against his chest, the audio enhancers of her helmet could clearly pick up his heart beat, a deep rhythm Tali had found soothing her to sleep more than once. Even though Tali could not kiss him whenever she wished or run her fingers through his short hair, she could always listen. That was a pleasure all on it's own.

From chapter two of Last Son.

Mmmhmm, will admit, when I read that I dawww'd pretty hard. I always liked the idea of her doing that, but I also like the idea of Shepard realizing that she's doing it, and finding it incredibly dawww as well.

Oh, he knows.

He also enjoys that slight metallic sound that she makes with her voice modulator when she sleeps, not exactly snoring, just breathing lightly.

Damnit, Jones! Your gonna...make me..

HNNNNNNNNNG!

She wakes up, realizing she forgot mute her voice modulator before falling asleep and apologizes to Shepard.

He tells her that she shouldn't apologize and he enjoys hearing her.

[knight5923]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...
Knight! How have ya been

good, but busy:)
Haven't been able to pay my dues to the fleet recently. Hoping maybe by the end of this week to be able to throw a whole bunch of new Tali content out there;)

[knight5923]

Formis_Sage wrote...
Hey, Knight!!!
Good to see you again buddy

Hey, long-time-no-see my good sir:lol:

[Formis_Sage]

knight5923 wrote...

Formis_Sage wrote...
Hey, Knight!!!
Good to see you again buddy

Hey, long-time-no-see my good sir:lol:

Indeed, I read that you are working on your own story, looking forward to it.

[SpatFieya]

Lividity Jones wrote...
She wakes up, realizing she forgot mute her voice modulator before falling asleep and apologizes to Shepard.

He tells her that she shouldn't apologize and he enjoys hearing her.

I wonder if she fidgets or talks in her sleep...

Damnit, all this daww is make me soft. I'll be back later, gonna go cut down mile high trees via karate chops.

[Formis_Sage]

Damn, I'm going to play the Suicide Mission again, I'm in mood for it now so it won't bother me
Four words I need for life: Tali, Mass Effect and Epic :innocent:
Keelah se'lai (For at least half an hour)

[Titanium Man]

Right, that's it. Time for a minific sequel to the one I wrote featuring GalaxyHack.

[nitefyre410]

Sweet I found a  song   that gives a  grown and sexy feel to the Tali/Shepherd romance 

www.youtube.com/watch   Elisa Fiorillo   Don't Be Afraid 

[Mozer121]

nitefyre410 wrote...

Sweet I found a  song   that gives a  grown and sexy feel to the Tali/Shepherd romance 

www.youtube.com/watch   Elisa Fiorillo   Don't Be Afraid 

*slow dances*