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Tali was stirring on the bed as Chakwas approached, Shepard behind her. She hadn't spoken, instead looking around as if confused. He saw her muscles tense.
"Tali?" Chakwas asked.
The quarian's hands shot up to grab at her visor. A moment later her actions became more frantic, finger tips clawing at the smooth surface of the plastic as if trying to tear it off. In a moment the doctor was at her side, checking vitals.
"Tali, you're okay. Calm down," she tried to soothe the woman, only to narrowly dodge aside as the quarian's leg kicked out at her when she came into range.
"What the hell?" Shepard muttered.
"Shepard, help me! I have to sedate her, I think she's trying to get the suit off and this is most definitely not a clean room!"
Her breathing could be heard through the modulator on the visor, shallow and quick. She seemed to alternate between trying to pull off the mask over her head and kicking out at Chakwas to keep her away. The only thing Shepard could think of was a frightened animal. Gritting his teeth he closed the distance to the bedside.
Tali's first kick caught him in the stomach. He had time to contemplate just how strong her legs were despite her slim build as he felt the air leave his lungs. The fact that he was wearing his armor was quite possibly the only reason he didn't feel ribs cracking. Still, he was able to get closer than Chakwas, reaching forward to grasp her wrists, pulling them away from her visor. He could almost swear he heard a low pitched growl come from her voice box.
"Tali, please, listen... you have to calm down. Calm down," he repeated, even as she strained against him. Her legs still kicked outwards, keeping the doctor away.
"Tali!" he barked. His voice was firm and deep, the same tone he'd used when issue orders in the heat of battle. The quarian's head snapped around to focus on him, silver eyes wide beneath her visor.
"Look at me, Tali. You're safe. Everyone is safe," Shepard said, voice lower but keeping the firm and level tone. He kept a light grip on her wrists as she raised a hand, one fingertip touching the scar on his face, the same one he remembered she'd touched that evening the car patching him up.
With her focus on him Chakwas was able to approach and quickly activated a control on the medical unit. There was a faint hiss and Tali's muscles tensed once more, straining for a moment, before immediately relaxing. Silver eyes fluttered and then closed, letting him ease her form back down to the bed.
Since Calin and Buddha are both around, tell me how this excerpt looks for some Tali-primalness.
Edit: Edit: Not sure if its violent enough. But also going off the idea that her blow to the head was only moderate on the scale of 'complete loss of faculties'.
Modifié par Tairis Deamhan, 09 juillet 2010 - 07:19 .
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