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[Formis_Sage]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Formis_Sage wrote...
Being paranoic isn't bad in some way (I know it from my own experience ) but everything has some edge that shouldn't be exeeded.

Agreed.

I'll shut up about it now, I think.

I don't mind, you can continue

*Top*

Modifié par Formis_Sage, 13 juillet 2010 - 01:08 .

[RiptideX1090]

Runescapeguy9 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
However... I'm still interested in seeing how you respond to the ending... for exactly that reason...
Huh...

And suddenly I am worried.

Don't be.

[RiptideX1090]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Anger I can do. Rage takes abit more work. But then I'm also of the opinion some people just need kill'n.

It will DEFINATELY be interesting to see how YOU react then...

Especially some of the twists we have planned...

Hmmm...

*nods* Already mentioned to Jones I think that I'm going to wait until you're done and read it in one go. Then I guess we'll see.

I look forward to your review with GREAT anticipation...

[Tairis Deamhan]

mikethor007 wrote...

Be wary of the monster you create...

You could end up dreadfully surprised.

Making monsters is always damned entertaining though. Until it tries to eat you.

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Be wary of the monster you create...

You could end up dreadfully surprised.

Making monsters is always damned entertaining though. Until it tries to eat you.

Which is what I'm referring to.

[Tairis Deamhan]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I look forward to your review with GREAT anticipation...

I'll make sure to give it a through one then when the time comes.

Just remember if you do something bizarre like retcon Tali's birth out of existence, well... you're not the only one around that qualifies sharpshooter

[Titanium Man]

And the adventure continues.

***

"Shepard," Joker warned over the intercom as Shepard was walking to the main battery to speak with Garrus.  "You might want to get to Engineering.  Tall, Dark and Annoying found out where Jack's staying."

Oh, crap.  "I'll be there in a moment!" Shepard said, turning around on his heel and bolting for the elevator.

He could hear Jack's profanities thundering just as he was let off on Engineering.  He bolted through the door, passed a concerned Tali, and stomped down the stairs into the deep parts of the ship, exposed metal and machinery revealed against the red-tinged walls.

"Do not use gravity on me!" the Grand Galactic Inquisitor intoned, facing off against a very mad and very biotically charged Jack.  "This will interfere with my observation!"

"Get the F*** outta here!" Jack snapped, seizing the Inquisitor in the biotic aura and flinging him against a metal bar.

"I'm okay," the Inquisitor gasped as Shepard stormed into the scene.

"Calm down, Jack!" Shepard snapped.  "That's an order!"

Jack swirled around to face Shepard.  "This freak was SPYING on me!"

"I am here only to observe human behavior!" the Inquisitor said.  Even for getting tossed into metal bars, his speaker never lost its strength.  "Do not assault me!  Or kill me!  Pretend I am not a shootable target!"

"Shepard, if you don't get him off this f***in' ship, I'm gonna ram his head into that damn speaker on his chest!"

Shepard raised his hands.  Reasoning with Jack when she was furious was pointless.  Unless she used her biotics to throw nails at you.  Then she was getting to the point once too many.  "Okay, Jack.  Calm down.  I'll get him out of here."

Jack pointed at the Inquisitor.  "I'd better not see him ever again, Shepard.  Or I'll kick your ass.  Got it?"

"Don't worry," Shepard said.  "He won't get in the way anymore."

***

"This place is a mess," the Inquisitor noticed, glancing at a large blood stain splattered on the walls.  Outside of the Pragia facility, the rain never stopped, never became quiet.  "I know what can get this out."  He pointed at Jack.  "Do not take my cleaning advice!"

Jack folded her arms and gave Shepard the most hateful, sin-filled look imaginable.

"If it makes you feel better," Shepard said, "he makes me feel like I want to kick my own ass."

[RiptideX1090]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...

Be wary of the monster you create...

You could end up dreadfully surprised.

Making monsters is always damned entertaining though. Until it tries to eat you.

Indeed.

[Formis_Sage]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

mikethor007 wrote...
Be wary of the monster you create...

You could end up dreadfully surprised.

Making monsters is always damned entertaining though. Until it tries to eat you.

In the end every monster will try that.

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I look forward to your review with GREAT anticipation...

I'll make sure to give it a through one then when the time comes.

Just remember if you do something bizarre like retcon Tali's birth out of existence, well... you're not the only one around that qualifies sharpshooter

We wouldn't need a sniper rifle in that situation. Just a spoon would do.

[RiptideX1090]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

I look forward to your review with GREAT anticipation...

I'll make sure to give it a through one then when the time comes.

Just remember if you do something bizarre like retcon Tali's birth out of existence, well... you're not the only one around that qualifies sharpshooter

I don't want to do ANYTHING that screws with cannon. I want this story to hit people exaclty because it's PLAUSIBLE.

[Tairis Deamhan]

RiptideX1090 wrote...


I don't want to do ANYTHING that screws with cannon. I want this story to hit people exaclty because it's PLAUSIBLE.

Then I eagerly anticipate its conclusion so I can absorb it all at once

[RiptideX1090]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...


I don't want to do ANYTHING that screws with cannon. I want this story to hit people exaclty because it's PLAUSIBLE.

Then I eagerly anticipate its conclusion so I can absorb it all at once

Indeed.

Looking forward to it.

[mikethor007]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...


I don't want to do ANYTHING that screws with cannon. I want this story to hit people exaclty because it's PLAUSIBLE.

Then I eagerly anticipate its conclusion so I can absorb it all at once

Indeed.

Looking forward to it.

Will take a bit of time though. LJ's internet is on the fritz.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Yes. It makes me sad. I also miss the mini-fic swarm.

[RiptideX1090]

mikethor007 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...


I don't want to do ANYTHING that screws with cannon. I want this story to hit people exaclty because it's PLAUSIBLE.

Then I eagerly anticipate its conclusion so I can absorb it all at once

Indeed.

Looking forward to it.

Will take a bit of time though. LJ's internet is on the fritz.

Should be fixed in the next day or two.

[Titanium Man]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Yes. It makes me sad. I also miss the mini-fic swarm.

I'll fill the gap as best as I can.  IGNORE ME and all that.

[Formis_Sage]

Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...
Yes. It makes me sad. I also miss the mini-fic swarm.

I'll fill the gap as best as I can.  IGNORE ME and all that.

Nice one with Jack

[Formis_Sage]

I have to go, will be back tommorow... Well, actually today

Keelah se'lai

[mikethor007]

Formis_Sage wrote...

I have to go, will be back tommorow... Well, actually today

Keelah se'lai

Keelah Se'lai. Thanks for the music links.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Yes. It makes me sad. I also miss the mini-fic swarm.

I'll fill the gap as best as I can.  IGNORE ME and all that.

You're doing quite well. The Venture Brothers crossover is definitely one the best pure humor bits I've read in some time.

[Formis_Sage]

mikethor007 wrote...

Formis_Sage wrote...
I have to go, will be back tommorow... Well, actually today
Keelah se'lai

Keelah Se'lai. Thanks for the music links.

I suppose my memory is not what it used to be.

[Formis_Sage]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Yes. It makes me sad. I also miss the mini-fic swarm.

I'll fill the gap as best as I can.  IGNORE ME and all that.

You're doing quite well. The Venture Brothers crossover is definitely one the best pure humor bits I've read in some time.

Indeed.