TK Dude wrote...
I also liked your way of fleshed out Shepard's feelings in the story.
In the game, he acts like nothing but a man who gets the job done no matter what. That's what irks me.
Your fanfic is amazing Tairis.
Thanks, can't turn down praise like that. Shepard is a little... focused in the game. I think part of it is that 'you' are supposed to be Shepard, so they dont want to ascribed too much lest they contradict the player's point of view.
I've been trying hard to make Shepard still a man. He may be a great one, but he's not the flawless machine of death he is in the game. He's a slightly flawed machine of death. And he does always get the job done, the question is just what it costs him.
Titanium: Yea, they're insidious things. You'll find out in the next game that they're all actually part of the Shadow Broker's network.