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I'd have never thought of zero gravity sex...that might be worth pursuing writing wise...


Somehow I think that kind of thing might get Mass Effect in trouble with Fox news agains.

Stupid foxs news, that's why we got crappy "sex" scenes in ME2 <_<


Fox news is a blight on the face of the Earth. Maybe we should put them on the chopping block as soon as we finish with Cerberus...


I got my CAIN....

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What was your guess again?


*Spoilersnip*

Hey, watch it!

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Hey, Um Rip....Just began reading chapter five....I really hit the nail on the head with this didn't I.....


What was your guess again?


Slavery.......


Right.

Then, yes, you got it right.

It's a theme touched on multiple times in the games and books. Pel, Liara, Jack, but it's never actually expanded on. For reasons that will make sense at the end of the story, Jones and I felt this was the best route to take.

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Fox news is a blight on the face of the Earth. Maybe we should put them on the chopping block as soon as we finish with Cerberus...


Hey it's Fox and Friends, we're here with out latest poll that surprisingly says 100% of you think you aren't competent thinkers and we should inform you of what to do and say!

I'm amazed Steve Doocy, are you amazed brown-haired-guy who isn't Steve Doocy?

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Strawberry Kiwi wrote...

SenHai wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

What was your guess again?


*Spoilersnip*

Hey, watch it!


Don't want spoilers?

Get to reading. B)

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kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

I'd have never thought of zero gravity sex...that might be worth pursuing writing wise...


Somehow I think that kind of thing might get Mass Effect in trouble with Fox news agains.

Stupid foxs news, that's why we got crappy "sex" scenes in ME2 <_<


Fox news is a blight on the face of the Earth. Maybe we should put them on the chopping block as soon as we finish with Cerberus...


I got my CAIN....


All right, shoot, but be careful with your aim, I don't wanna spend the next five hours looking for enough power cells for a retry.

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Right.

Then, yes, you got it right.

It's a theme touched on multiple times in the games and books. Pel, Liara, Jack, but it's never actually expanded on. For reasons that will make sense at the end of the story, Jones and I felt this was the best route to take.

This makes me a sad panda........ I also had though of Jason commiting suicide....but being sold into slavery...I hate for ever guessing it...MAn this sucks....Unlike other stories that displease me I will actually read this.

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*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


#239259
Strawberry Kiwi

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RiptideX1090 wrote...

Strawberry Kiwi wrote...

SenHai wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

What was your guess again?


*Spoilersnip*

Hey, watch it!


Don't want spoilers?

Get to reading. B)

Oh, no. I read it last night. :innocent:

I noticed someone else mentioned they didn't read it yet when Red started talking about it.

Truthfully, I predicted that happening, too. You and Jones seem to enjoy foreshadowing. :whistle:

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SenHai wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

What was your guess again?


*Spoilersnip*

Hey, watch it!

No U

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Right.

Then, yes, you got it right.

It's a theme touched on multiple times in the games and books. Pel, Liara, Jack, but it's never actually expanded on. For reasons that will make sense at the end of the story, Jones and I felt this was the best route to take.

This makes me a sad panda........ I also had though of Jason commiting suicide....but being sold into slavery...I hate for ever guessing it...MAn this sucks....Unlike other stories that displease me I will actually read this.


Well, I'm glad you're going to stick through it. It's going to get pretty bad though, just a heads up, but I'm sure you know that. As for Jason... well... how that gets resolved is another matter entirely.

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*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Oh my God, please don't even joke about that. He turns off those filters, I put 50 rounds through his skull, and get Tali to a hospital ASAP.

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RedTracer7 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Do i have to go on a tangeant to the horrible things I'd do to him when I get my hands on him? Do I? 'cause I will. I swear to god I will.

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kraidy1117

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Porcupinetheater wrote...

kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

I'd have never thought of zero gravity sex...that might be worth pursuing writing wise...


Somehow I think that kind of thing might get Mass Effect in trouble with Fox news agains.

Stupid foxs news, that's why we got crappy "sex" scenes in ME2 <_<


Fox news is a blight on the face of the Earth. Maybe we should put them on the chopping block as soon as we finish with Cerberus...


I got my CAIN....


All right, shoot, but be careful with your aim, I don't wanna spend the next five hours looking for enough power cells for a retry.


*shoots CAIN*
*MIss's FOX news and blows up Cerberus HQ*
.......

#239265
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RiptideX1090 wrote...

RedTracer7 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Do i have to go on a tangeant to the horrible things I'd do to him when I get my hands on him? Do I? 'cause I will. I swear to god I will.


Please do. I want to hear your version, every graphic detail

#239266
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kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

kraidy1117 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kira Shepard wrote...

I'd have never thought of zero gravity sex...that might be worth pursuing writing wise...


Somehow I think that kind of thing might get Mass Effect in trouble with Fox news agains.

Stupid foxs news, that's why we got crappy "sex" scenes in ME2 <_<


Fox news is a blight on the face of the Earth. Maybe we should put them on the chopping block as soon as we finish with Cerberus...


I got my CAIN....


All right, shoot, but be careful with your aim, I don't wanna spend the next five hours looking for enough power cells for a retry.


*shoots CAIN*
*MIss's FOX news and blows up Cerberus HQ*
.......


Ehh, close enough. Maybe they'll all be screwed from the fallout

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And of herself. The Daro going into the story is not the same one coming out at the end. Losing her suit works to symbolically show that change, and the different suits she gets reflects who she becomes.

As for whether soiled doves can work fully clothed, you might be surprised by what Jones and I have  come up with. I won't spoil anything though.


Yeah, I mentioned my... intrigue... into that subject, of how such "actions" could be sustained, in one of my reviews.  

((Giggi-:sick:  <== Thats a morbid thought))

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Strawberry Kiwi wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

Strawberry Kiwi wrote...

SenHai wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

What was your guess again?


*Spoilersnip*

Hey, watch it!


Don't want spoilers?

Get to reading. B)

Oh, no. I read it last night. :innocent:

I noticed someone else mentioned they didn't read it yet when Red started talking about it.

Truthfully, I predicted that happening, too. You and Jones seem to enjoy foreshadowing. :whistle:


We did make it rather predictable, but we wanted to. This is VERY sensitive subject matter, and we want readers to know what they're getting into. The art helps with that too. Jones and I have gone on at length about it. Neither of us are really comfortable about writing it, but we've resolved that for reasons that become apparent later, it makes the most sense, and allows us to get Xen to where she needs to be at the end of the story in the most impactful way possible.

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Well, I'm glad you're going to stick through it. It's going to get pretty bad though, just a heads up, but I'm sure you know that. As for Jason... well... how that gets resolved is another matter entirely.

Do a 'mean while' scene with him blowing out his brainsImage IPB

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RedTracer7 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Miranda knows where Timmay's hidey hole is.  And that there a swan dive right off the moral event horizon, something I'm sure even Miranda would find horrendous.

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Porcupinetheater wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

RedTracer7 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Do i have to go on a tangeant to the horrible things I'd do to him when I get my hands on him? Do I? 'cause I will. I swear to god I will.


Please do. I want to hear your version, every graphic detail


Depends.

Does Tali die?

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Do i have to go on a tangeant to the horrible things I'd do to him when I get my hands on him? Do I? 'cause I will. I swear to god I will.


Hell, if he does that, I'll  start hating Cerberus...

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RedTracer7 wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

And of herself. The Daro going into the story is not the same one coming out at the end. Losing her suit works to symbolically show that change, and the different suits she gets reflects who she becomes.

As for whether soiled doves can work fully clothed, you might be surprised by what Jones and I have  come up with. I won't spoil anything though.


Yeah, I mentioned my... intrigue... into that subject, of how such "actions" could be sustained, in one of my reviews.  

((Giggi-:sick:  <== Thats a morbid thought))


We're definately going to twist the idea around, but probably not in the manner you think. It'll be interested to see your reaction.

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RiptideX1090 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

RedTracer7 wrote...

Porcupinetheater wrote...

Kikaimegami wrote...

*TIM keels forward, his head missing and a huge shotgun blast through his chest*

*reveals Tali and Legion standing behind him, weapons smoking*

Aw yeah.


Gotta love cliched death scenes. *Sighs, imagining the beautiful sight*


The vidscreen slowly flickered to life, its harsh glow forcing Shepard to shield his eyes as the screen slowly became something other than static.  As his eyes adjusted, the human Spectre could just make a face, but the blue eyes were unmistakable.

"Illusive Man."  Shepard growled, his hands tightening into fists.  "Where is she?"

Smiling, the Illusive Man waited until the last of the static dissapeared before answering.  His tone matched his smirk.  "Right here."

Stepping aside, the well-clothed human revealed the a figure behind him.  She was unconcious, her head drooped, but Shepard would have recognized her suit anywhere.  Tali.  She was bound to a post, thin chains keeping her upright despite her state.

Returning into view, the Illusive Man ignited his omnitool, its orange glow filling the screen as he lifted it into view.  "I have here her suits Master Controls."  The Man said.  "You continue to follow my orders, you avoid any more mistakes such as destroying that Collector Base, and I won't turn off her helmets filters.  You do as I say, and she doesn't die a fever-wracked death...."


Do i have to go on a tangeant to the horrible things I'd do to him when I get my hands on him? Do I? 'cause I will. I swear to god I will.


Please do. I want to hear your version, every graphic detail


Depends.

Does Tali die?


No, only the Illusive Man. Slowly.

#239275
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Well, I'm glad you're going to stick through it. It's going to get pretty bad though, just a heads up, but I'm sure you know that. As for Jason... well... how that gets resolved is another matter entirely.

Do a 'mean while' scene with him blowing out his brainsImage IPB


No. Nothing like that.

But there will be some resolution.

Or rather, there won't be.

You'll see.