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I blame Thelacan for this. He asked, and I do.
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Defining Moments
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"Scars are a funny thing," Jack said from her place at the bar. Her turian and human companions turned to the biotic.

She pointed at Garrus, then over to Shepard. "All of us ****ers have'em. And they tell stories. And your new one has a real good story behind it commander."

"Yeah, I guess it does," He said with a soft sigh, looking down at is hand. The new cybernetics were glowing in the light of the Normandy's small lounge.

It was a few hours after he had been released from the med-bay. He, Garrus and Jack were at the bar, while Tali and Kasumi sat on the couch talking softly.

"I hope the Council appreciates it," Garrus rumbled as he drank from his dextro friendly liquor.

"Even if they don't, at least now we have the proof we need to get the ball rolling," Shepard said, with a frown. "Can't play dumb this time." All three raised their glasses and drank.

Kasumi watched them, and turned back to her friend. "So what did happen? I saw the commander get dragged in by Garrus and you. If he hadn't been bleeding so bad, the way you were hovering around him and fretting would have been cute."

"Bosh'tet," Tali said halfheartedly. "We found the prothean data we needed. After looking it over, John thought he could bring it with us since it had a working VI."

Tali dropped her gaze. "Since I couldn't work on the VI without the cypher, he had to do it. And he tripped it's security," she said with a rueful laugh."

"Trust a man to make a mess of things," Kasumi said lightly. Tali giggle in response.

"Well, it looks like there were a bunch of klixen the protheans had set up as guardians," Tali continued. We were doing fine, but one decided to spit at the VI after the VI started letting out a tone mimicking the klixen's sounds. Shepard was closest."

The quarian wrapped her arms around her legs as she looked over at her captain. "He just reacted. Stuck his hand out to block it. It ate right through his armor. Then his tech armor exploded, and it took most of his hand with it."

Kasumi's eyes widened. She looked over at the commander. His hand looked ok now. Tali only nodded.

"Dr. Chakwas repaired it. She does good work," Tali said, choking back a sob. "At least he still has it. Excuse me."

Tali stood and walked over to her commander. she took his hand and pulled him to his feet before leading him out of the bar, to the elevator. While they were waiting, she wrapped her arms around his side and just held him.

It was disconcerting that he only returned the hug with one hand and arm. The one that hadn't gotten injured. She frowned, even as she understood why he was reacting like that.

In silence, the duo traveled to their cabin. They waited patiently while the loft's decontamination unit operated. Tali lead him into the cabin, and down to the couch. She gestured for him to sit. As he sat, she reached up and removed her mask. With a hiss, she was looking at him with her own eyes.

She walked up and sat next to him. She reached for his repaired hand, and the commander flinched it away from her. Frowning, she grabbed a firm hold of it, and studied the work.

"I am glad you didn't lose your hand," she finally said to the darkness.

Shepard scowled. "Didn't I though?" He stared at the hand. He looked up when he heard the snaps from Tali's suit. As he watched, she removed the gloves, and one of the sleeves.

Again Tali grasped his hand, palm up this time. She put a scarred, three fingered hand in his upturned palm. "We all have bad scars John," she said softly. "Did I ever tell you how I got these scars?"

He studied the old injury intently. Finally, he wrapped his fingers around hers and looked into her eyes. He could see an old pain there. "No, you didn't."

"It all started on an place called Ekuna..."
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Credit to Nuke and Rip for the finisher. :P

Modifié par uhdnrt, 20 juillet 2010 - 01:03 .


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Rael: Didn't mean to make you cry

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Rael: If I'm not back again this time tomorrow,
Carry on, carry on as if nothing really matters.

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Nihlus: Too late, my time has come

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Shepard: Sends shivers down my spine

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Shepard: Body's aching all the time

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uhdnrt wrote...
Again Tali grasped his hand, palm up this time. She put a scarred, three fingered hand in his upturned palm. "We all have bad scars John," she said softly. "Did I ever tell you how I got these scars?"


Last time someone asked this to Batman...

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uhdnrt wrote...

I blame Thelacan for this. He asked, and I do.
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Defining Moments
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"Scars are a funny thing," Jack said from her place at the bar. Her turian and human companions turned to the biotic.

She pointed at Garrus, then over to Shepard. "All of us ****ers have'em. And they tell stories. And your new one has a real good story behind it commander."

"Yeah, I guess it does," He said with a soft sigh, looking down at is hand. The new cybernetics were glowing in the light of the Normandy's small lounge.

It was a few hours after he had been released from the med-bay. He, Garrus and Jack were at the bar, while Tali and Kasumi sat on the couch talking softly.

"I hope the Council appreciates it," Garrus rumbled as he drank from his dextro friendly liquor.

"Even if they don't, at least now we have the proof we need to get the ball rolling," Shepard said, with a frown. "Can't play dumb this time." All three raised their glasses and drank.

Kasumi watched them, and turned back to her friend. "So what did happen? I saw the commander get dragged in by Garrus and you. If he hadn't been bleeding so bad, the way you were hovering around him and fretting would have been cute."

"Bosh'tet," Tali said halfheartedly. "We found the prothean data we needed. After looking it over, John thought he could bring it with us since it had a working VI."

Tali dropped her gaze. "Since I couldn't work on the VI without the cypher, he had to do it. And he tripped it's security," she said with a rueful laugh."

"Trust a man to make a mess of things," Kasumi said lightly. Tali giggle in response.

"Well, it looks like there were a bunch of klixen the protheans had set up as guardians," Tali continued. We were doing fine, but one decided to spit at the VI after the VI started letting out a tone mimicking the klixen's sounds. Shepard was closest."

The quarian wrapped her arms around her legs as she looked over at her captain. "He just reacted. Stuck his hand out to block it. It ate right through his armor. Then his tech armor exploded, and it took most of his hand with it."

Kasumi's eyes widened. She looked over at the commander. His hand looked ok now. Tali only nodded.

"Dr. Chakwas repaired it. She does good work," Tali said, choking back a sob. "At least he still has it. Excuse me."

Tali stood and walked over to her commander. she took his hand and pulled him to his feet before leading him out of the bar, to the elevator. While they were waiting, she wrapped her arms around his side and just held him.

It was disconcerting that he only returned the hug with one hand and arm. The one that hadn't gotten injured. She frowned, even as she understood why he was reacting like that.

In silence, the duo traveled to their cabin. They waited patiently while the loft's decontamination unit operated. Tali lead him into the cabin, and down to the couch. She gestured for him to sit. As he sat, she reached up and removed her mask. With a hiss, she was looking at him with her own eyes.

She walked up and sat next to him. She reached for his repaired hand, and the commander flinched it away from her. Frowning, she grabbed a firm hold of it, and studied the work.

"I am glad you didn't lose your hand," she finally said to the darkness.

Shepard scowled. "Didn't I though?" He stared at the hand. He looked up when he heard the snaps from Tali's suit. As he watched, she removed the gloves, and one of the sleeves.

Again Tali grasped his hand, palm up this time. She put a scarred, three fingered hand in his upturned palm. "We all have bad scars John," she said softly. "Did I ever tell you how I got these scars?"

He studied the old injury intently. Finally, he wrapped his fingers around hers and looked into her eyes. He could see an old pain there. "No, you didn't."

"It all started on an old ship called the Ekuna..."
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Credit to Nuke and Rip for the finisher. :P


Wait, what? We didn't scar her hand that badly did we? And Ekuna is a planet...

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Wait, what? We didn't scar her hand that badly did we? And Ekuna is a planet...

Damn. I missed the planet thing,thought it was a ship corrected. And no, you didn't indicate it scarred badly. I just felt that it was a fun little addition to the story. I don't recall you mentioning specifically how bad the scarring was. I just ran with it for dramatic effect.

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Shepard: Goodbye, everybody
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Gianna: I've got to go
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Shepard: Gotta leave you all behind and face the truth
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Tali: Mama, oooooooh
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Merc: I don't want to die

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Merc: Sometimes wish I'd never been born at all

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and I thought only women wrote bad fics and poetry

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Mecha Tengu wrote...

and I thought only women wrote bad fics and poetry

Nah I've got a few thousand poorly written haikus.

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Garrus: [guitar solo]

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Runescapeguy9 wrote...

Mecha Tengu wrote...

and I thought only women wrote bad fics and poetry

Nah I've got a few thousand poorly written haikus.


Yellow bird I see.
Gray dragon hides wisely.
Honor is duty.

10 points to whomever gets that reference :P

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Merc: Sometimes wish I'd never been born at all


PFFFFFFFFFT.  Oh, poor "Oh Sh*t Salarian".

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Also on a random note since I'm on Tali's trial in my fic, I was almost tempted to somehow get Kal'Reegar exiled so he could join the crew. Gotta love that guy.

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uhdnrt wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
Wait, what? We didn't scar her hand that badly did we? And Ekuna is a planet...

Damn. I missed the planet thing,thought it was a ship corrected. And no, you didn't indicate it scarred badly. I just felt that it was a fun little addition to the story. I don't recall you mentioning specifically how bad the scarring was. I just ran with it for dramatic effect.


Just a little puncture from the needle, and possibly from a lesion around the infection.

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Garrus: I see a little silhouetto of a man

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Gang: Scaramouch, Scaramouch, will you do the Fandango

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Shepard: Thunderbolt and lightning, very, very frightening me

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Gang: (Galileo) Galileo (Galileo) Galileo, Galileo Figaro

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^ see what I mean?

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Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Also on a random note since I'm on Tali's trial in my fic, I was almost tempted to somehow get Kal'Reegar exiled so he could join the crew. Gotta love that guy.


Well, you're the one cramping your story's manliness by not allowing him in.

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http://social.biowar...1894/blog/7054/
Read. Comment. I am aware of formatting issues.

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Titanium Man wrote...

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Also on a random note since I'm on Tali's trial in my fic, I was almost tempted to somehow get Kal'Reegar exiled so he could join the crew. Gotta love that guy.


Well, you're the one cramping your story's manliness by not allowing him in.


I like to think I'm letting the idea age, like a good scotch.

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Legion: Magnifico-o-o-o-o
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Jacob: I'm just a poor boy nobody loves me
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Thane: He's just a poor boy from a poor family
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Tali: Spare him his life from this monstrosity

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Jacob: I'm just a poor boy nobody loves me

Chuckles

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RiptideX1090 wrote...

People seem to mostly like it.

****ed up with the Red Sand though... apparently... which is sad... the Wiki article didn't say anything about withdrawal symptoms... typical...

:D
Pretty sure withdrawal is an issue. In ME: Ascension, Grayson was a red sand druggie and I'm pretty sure it mentioned a decent bit about red sand, and how he always craved another hit. It was a good chapter, I hate to say I predicted it before it even happened to a T in my own mind though. Maybe I'm just that used to depravity.

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RiptideX1090 wrote...
Just a little puncture from the needle, and possibly from a lesion around the infection.

Figured.  I just thought it was a good lead in. :P

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El-Destructo wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

People seem to mostly like it.

****ed up with the Red Sand though... apparently... which is sad... the Wiki article didn't say anything about withdrawal symptoms... typical...

:D
Pretty sure withdrawal is an issue. In ME: Ascension, Grayson was a red sand druggie and I'm pretty sure it mentioned a decent bit about red sand, and how he always craved another hit. It was a good chapter, I hate to say I predicted it before it even happened to a T in my own mind though. Maybe I'm just that used to depravity.


The fact that Jones and I have alluded to it both here, in the art, the artbook, and in the story had nothing to do with you guessing the outcome, I'm sure. :lol:

I take it you like the story?

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uhdnrt wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...
Just a little puncture from the needle, and possibly from a lesion around the infection.

Figured.  I just thought it was a good lead in. :P


Fair enough.

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The fact that Jones and I have alluded to it both here, in the art, the artbook, and in the story had nothing to do with you guessing the outcome, I'm sure. :lol:

I take it you like the story?

Yup, checking back for new chapters every few days, since I'd probably miss thread posts since I'm busy doing other stuff. Even though I know Xen obviously survived, I'm damn curious to find out how. And how many more scars she'll end up with along the way.