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[RiptideX1090]

It got quiet.



Good.

[uhdnrt]

RiptideX1090 wrote...

It got quiet.

Good.

I post a fic, and it finally quieted down.  VICTORY!  What did you think of the fic, Rip?

[Hicrodonma]

Well then maybe this repost won't be lost in the din.

The Dark Cabin



It's been two days since I've been out
of this room. A very long two days. Every nerve in my body is on fire.
Now I'm not a weak man. I've stared death in the face and spit into her
empty eye socket. I've had the galaxies fate in my hands more times
than I care to count. But I now know fear.



Fear is not
a berserking Krogan bearing down on you. It's not being in the middle
of a nest of Thresher Maws. Fear is a petite little Quarian who has
figured out every sensitive part of your body and has you shackled to
your own bed and proceeds to deliver the most insane amounts of
pleasure you have ever felt.



We humans have a saying:
Too much of a good thing. And it's right. There is only so much joy,
happiness, and bliss a man can take before it starts to hurt. Before
every nerve becomes fearful of the next stimuli. Before just the warm
breath of another being against your skin sends you into pleasureful
and painful convulsions. I've been in that state for the past
thirty-six hours.



Here I lay in this dark cabin of
mine. Expectant and fearful of the next touch. Of the next loving
caress. Of the next breath whispering the love and devotion that is
felt for me and my hard heart. I know not when this pleasureful torture
will end. But as much as it pains me I wish it would never stop. I wish
to spend the remainder of my unnatural life in this dark cabin.

Modifié par Hicrodonma, 24 juillet 2010 - 04:03 .

[CptSkull]

*cricket,cricket*

[RiptideX1090]

uhdnrt wrote...

RiptideX1090 wrote...

It got quiet.

Good.

I post a fic, and it finally quieted down.  VICTORY!  What did you think of the fic, Rip?

Distracted. Read it in a few.

[RiptideX1090]

Dominatrix Tali is Dominating.



Fear her with love.

[Hicrodonma]

My next project is going to take awhile I want to do that one right.

[Gre3nham]

ummm... reading previous page and am still wearing my very best O_o face.

[Hicrodonma]

I have no idea how to do that. It looked fine before I posted it.

[Hicrodonma]

They don't show up when I go to edit.

[RiptideX1090]

Much D'awww with that last one Uhdnrt. Very nice.

[RiptideX1090]

Hicrodonma wrote...

They don't show up when I go to edit.

Before pasting it, hit the BBCode button, THEN paste, then hit the button again, THEN post.

Should work fine.

[RiptideX1090]

Modifié par RiptideX1090, 24 juillet 2010 - 04:02 .

[SpatFieya]

Udhnrt. I think I love you. In a bro way.



Very well done, I like how you entered the full quote there. Very touching.



I'm still wanting to do my own version with one of my FF's, have it tie into the 'plot' some how. Regardless, your fic nearly brought man tears. Again, well done.

[Tairis Deamhan]

Even'n Tali thread!

[mikethor007]

Tairis Deamhan wrote...

Even'n Tali thread!

Hello!

[uhdnrt]

Hicrodonma wrote...

Well then maybe this repost won't be lost in the din.

------------
The Dark Cabin
-------------

It's been two days since I've been out of this room. A very long two days. Every nerve in my body is on fire. Now I'm not a weak man. I've stared death in the face and spit into her empty eye socket. I've had the galaxies fate in my hands more times than I care to count. But I now know fear.

Fear is not a berserking krogan bearing down on you. It's not being in the middle
of a nest of Thresher Maws. Fear is a petite little quarian who has figured out every sensitive part of your body and has you shackled to your own bed and proceeds to deliver the most insane amounts of pleasure you have ever felt.

We humans have a saying: Too much of a good thing. And it's right. There is only so much joy,happiness, and bliss a man can take before it starts to hurt. Before every nerve becomes fearful of the next stimuli. Before just the warm breath of another being against your skin sends you into pleasureful and painful convulsions. I've been in that state for the past thirty-six hours.

Here I lay in this dark cabin of mine. Expectant and fearful of the next touch. Of the next loving caress. Of the next breath whispering the love and devotion that is felt for me and my hard heart. I know not when this pleasureful torture will end. But as much as it pains me I wish it would never stop. I wish to spend the remainder of my unnatural life in this dark cabin.

There, fixed it for ya.

[Hicrodonma]

Well thanks for the BBC tip it worked I shall endeavor to remember it.

[RiptideX1090]

From start to finish. All done on one layer.

[uhdnrt]

SpatFieya wrote...
Udhnrt. I think I love you. In a bro way.

Very well done, I like how you entered the full quote there. Very touching.

I'm still wanting to do my own version with one of my FF's, have it tie into the 'plot' some how. Regardless, your fic nearly brought man tears. Again, well done.

Glad everyone liked it! It helped get me out of the funk I was in earlier, so kudos for the idea.

[SpatFieya]

One layer?



That's impressive.