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Fireside Tales - Stealth Updated 12/4/2011 Dark Roads to Tread - Part II


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Alright, after some encouragement...here's my first attempt at writing a full-blown story in a few years.  Starting at the beginning (though I swear we're not going to go through everything) and hopefully ending up with a new and orginal post-game story when I'm all done.  We'll consider the first bit as my practice at writing before I get to the new stuff.  :P

This is also my attempt at fleshing out some Dalish lore, since there is such good stuff in the game that I want to see more!

With that, the chapter listing

Prologue - Gathered 'Round the Fire
First Impressions - Part 1, 2
Into the Willds
The Joining - Part 1, 2, 3, 4
To Kill an Ogre
The Witch of the Wilds - Part 1, 2
Roses Never Fade
Dances in the Woods - Part 1, 2, 3
Blood Magic - Part 1, 2
Vir Tandahl
Dark Roads to Tread - Part 1, 2

Pictures - DAO and "DA2"

Yay, Mel_Redux drew me a picture of Kara!

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Prologue - Gathered 'Round the Fire


“Keeper!  Keeper!”

Merrill looked up from her work, a smile on her face.  The children were calling again, wanting more stories, no doubt.  Though the children of her clan had heard her stories dozens of time, there were many more children here at Ven’Arlathan than usual, with the clans gathering again.  Though the individual clans that had settled here in what the humans called the Hinterlands had gone on to establish their own cities, they continued to gather every ten years for the Arlathvhen as they had when their people wandered – a time to meet and share and bond, and a time to greet those clans who had clung to the wandering life, still searching for lost lore.

Her clan had the honor of rebuilding Arlathan itself, capital of the reborn Dalish nation of Halimshiral, a task given them by the human king himself when he had given them this land, because from them,she had come.  The Hero of Ferelden.  The hero of the Dalish, who had won for them a homeland again, second only to Shartan himself.  To Merrill and her clan, though, she had borne titles more important.  Friend, daughter, and sister.

She spread sand upon the page she had been scripting to dry the ink, touching the page reverently.   It would be the culmination of her life’s work, her contribution to the lore of her people.  Four copies existed currently, commissioned personally by the King before his final trip to Orzammar.  Part of a promise, he had said, to never let the Wardens’ sacrifices be forgotten again. 

One had been sent to far away Weisshaupt Fortress, headquarters of the Grey Wardens.  Two were in Ferelden, holding places of honor at the royal library and the study at Vigil’s Keep, home to the Fereldan Wardens.  The last rested here, on the desk before her where she had penned it many years ago.    But those copies were all in the King’s tongue, and it was fitting that her tale also be told in the language she had been born to.    It was half-translated now, carefully written in the reborn script that was one of the triumphs gained in the years since they had come to this land.  But the tome could hold, the children were waiting.

She rose from the desk, smoothed her skirts, and moved towards the window.  A sizeable group of children from many clans had gathered below.  “Is that children I hear?” she called.  “Whatever could they want?”

“A story, Keeper!  We want to hear a story!”  The dark-haired little girl was one of her own clan, Kelia, Merrill thought her name was.  It had become difficult to keep track of all the little ones at times, with the immense growth of her people in the last many years.  It was a welcome problem, to her mind.

“Shouldn’t you be asking Hahren Pol for stories?  That’s what he does, after all,” Merrill smiled, knowing what the answer would be.  It was always the same.  Pol might be the clan’s story-teller, but her husband had not known her as she had, had not grown up with her, having come to the clan later in his life.

“But you tell it best, Keeper!  Please!  Tell us about Karaleyna the Grey Warden!”

“That’s a very long story indeed,” she replied, mock seriousness in her voice.  “Surely we cannot tell her entire story all at once.  I have work to do.”

“Just one story then, Keeper?” Kelia ventured.  “Dennit and the others haven’t heard any of them yet!  Not from you!”  She looked to a boy about her own age, standing by her side, who in turn looked at the Keeper, contriving to make his eyes big. 

Merrill laughed and gave in.  “Very well.  Just one for now.  Go sit yourselves by the fire.  I’ll be right outside.”  She turned from the window back to the desk and the two books upon it, tracing one finger upon the intricate gold vines decorating the cover of the finished volume before gathering it up in her arms.  She made her way down the stairs and out the door.

The children sat about the fire that burned always before the clan elder, the hahren’s, dwelling, a sign of their continuing search for the light of knowledge and an open invitation to share lore.  She took a seat on her customary bench, padded now in deference to her growing age, and set the heavy tome on her lap.

“Alright then, a story, but a quick one.  And we will do this in the King’s tongue.”  The children groaned – they wanted a story, not a lesson!  She remonstrated them gently.  “Keeper Lanaya wishes us to maintain good will with the humans, and we cannot do that if we do not speak their language.  Your hero may have been Dalish, but she loved the humans as well.  She did not fight so that our two peoples would be at war with each other.”  When the children had settled again, she opened the book, switching languages accordingly.

“Now then, da’len.  Which tale shall I tell you today?”

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First Impressions - Part 1


“What tale do you wish to hear, da’len?”  Merrill asked the group of children around her.  The youngsters looked properly thoughtful, though eventually a wide-eyed boy spoke up shyly.

“Is it true, Keeper Merrill, that she was here?  At Ven’Arlathan?” the little boy asked.

“Yes indeed, though it was known as ‘Ostagar’ then. “  Merrill confirmed.   The Keeper motioned to the ruins around them, and the children followed the motion, eyes wide in awe.   “This fortress was ancient even in the days when our hero walked these grounds.  In many ways, this is where her tale began.  Shall I start there?”  She chuckled at their eager nods, and opened up the thick book in her lap.  “Very well.  Our story begins many years ago…”

                                                                                                ****

They were approaching the fortress, at long last.  With the aid of the halla, they had made much better time than he had hoped.  Time was of the essence, now.

The young woman behind him had fallen into restless sleep again.  It was the clearest physical sign of the taint growing in her, the only one the proud warrior let slip.  But he could feel it within her, echoing the taint in his own blood.  Time was of the essence, indeed.  She did not have much left.

Duncan shifted purposefully in the simple saddle, knowing the movement would wake his new recruit without injuring her pride and felt her straighten up slightly.

“We are approaching the fortress of Ostagar, finally.  We should reach the army encampment shortly,” he told her.  He gestured to the few fallen pillars and crumbled walls that spotted the landscape.  “These have been here for many ages, when it was the last line of defense against invading barbarians.  Now it will serve as our battleground against the darkspawn horde.”  She would be looking around with interest now, Dalish to the core, he knew, always seeking any sign of their lost civilization. 

He half-turned in the saddle, twisting around to look at her.  “If we ride on, we will be there in an hour, perhaps two.  But if you prefer, we can stop now and rest while we eat.”  As he expected, she shook her head.

“I’m fine.  We don’t need to stop,” she said.  Many of his recruits warmed to him as they travelled, but his newest protégée had grown increasingly quiet in the days since they had left her clan.  She had begun the journey with many questions about the order she would join and the creatures she would fight, as curious for lore as any proper Dalish should be.  After more than a week of journeying, however, she spoke no more than necessary.  Conserving her strength, he thought, rather than any particular animosity towards him.

Joining the Grey Wardens would potentially save her life, but Duncan was under no illusion that young Karaleyna’s departure from her clan had been anything but unwilling.  Clan ties were all important to the wandering Dalish and it was rare for any of their number to abandon kin and kind – Dalish Wardens were almost unheard of.  But when the Wardens were fortunate enough to entice one away, they always served with great distinction.  He had similar hopes for his newest recruit.  If she survived.  The sooner they completed her Joining, the better.  He nudged the halla to a faster pace.

                                                                                             ****

She saw Tamlen before her.  Tamlen.  Clanmate, fellow hunter, best friend, who would do anything for her, who had done everything for her.  But it couldn’t be – Tamlen was gone, the Grey Warden had said.  She had failed him.  They had entered the caves together, searching for forgotten lore, and had found the mirror.  That thrice-cursed mirror that Tamlen had touched.  They had gone in together, but only she had survived.  Was it the blessing or the curse of the Creators that she always survived while others were lost?

Kara stretched out a hand, as if by touching him she could bring him back when she awoke, for surely it was a dream.  She knew it had to be.  But if she could just reach him, she could amend for not searching hard enough, for not finding him and helping him, the way he had always been there for her.  So close.

The Tamlen-who-could-not-be-Tamlen looked up at her, familiar light in blue eyes.  He smiled at her, and she thought her heart might break from missing him, more than even the rest of the clan she had left behind.  She whispered his name, hand outstretched still.  That smile again, and he reached for her.

His skin turned grey and his eyes empty.  Blond hair became thin and fingers like claws.  The warm smile became wicked, and he lunged at her with a shriek.

                                                                                                    ****

Kara woke with a start.  The dreams were becoming more frequent, more horrifying.  Dreaming of the foul darkspawn creatures was bad enough.  But Tamlen, becoming one of them?  She wasn’t sure her heart could endure that.  She couldn’t bear to think of it now, even knowing it had just been a dream.  Tamlen was dead.   There was no changing that.

 How long had she drifted off this time?  She remembered Duncan saying that their destination was but a short distance away.  The ruins were more intact now than they had been, the walls and road in better repair.  Perhaps soon…

“Ho there, Duncan!”  She peered around the Warden to see the tall blond man approaching, wide smile on a mobile face.  He was flanked by guards and wore golden armor - someone important then.   The man had a bearing about him, an air of authority, like a Keeper who knew his word had weight.  Duncan’s next words confirmed her thoughts.

“King Cailan!  I didn’t expect a – “

“A royal welcome?”  The man, Creators, the King himself! chuckled.  “I was beginning to worry you’d miss all the fun!”

“Not if I could help it, your Majesty.”  The Warden’s tone was serious, but she wondered that he would have such a familiar relationship with the King of Ferelden.  Who was this man that she had travelled with these past days?
“Then I’ll have the mighty Duncan at my side in battle after all.  Glorious!”  The King turned his attention to her then, curiosity evident in his gaze.  “The other Wardens told me you’d found a promising recruit.  I take it this is she?”

Duncan shifted in his seat, half-turned towards her.  “Allow me to introduce you, your Majesty.”

“No need to be so formal, Duncan,” the King interrupted with a charming smile.  “We’ll be shedding blood together, after all.  Ho there, friend!  Might I know your name?”

Kara willed herself to be calm, to steady her voice.  She was the representative of the Dalish, last of the Elvhenan, royalty among the People.  She shifted her shoulders slightly, feeling the comforting weight of her blades at her back.  There was no reason to fear the human king.  “I am Karaleyna of the Mahariel clan of the Dalish elves, your Majesty.”   Right hand held as a fist to her heart, she bowed as best as she was able astride the halla, giving him the salute of her people.

The King’s smile grew broader.  “Pleased to meet you!  The Grey Wardens are desperate to bolster their numbers, and I, for one, am glad to help.  I imagine that you, especially, will be a welcome addition.  I hear your people possess remarkable skill and honor.”

“You know of the Dalish, King Cailan?” she asked.  The man seemed pleasant enough, not as haughty or distant as she had might have imagined a human king to be, had she ever given thought to the matter.

“I wish I knew more, but your people aren’t exactly fond of mine, with good reason.”  She was surprised by the sincerity she heard in the King’s voice.  “I tell you this though, you are very welcome here.  The Grey Wardens will surely benefit from your presence.”

Pattering footsteps behind the King signaled the approach of a human boy.  King Cailan noted the boy’s appearance with a sigh, then turned his gaze back to Duncan.  “I must be off.  It seems Teyrn Loghain wishes to bore me with further talk of strategy and tactics.  Is there anything that you or your Wardens require?”

“No, your Majesty,” Duncan replied.  “We are well-supplied for the moment, but be assured I will inform you should the need arise.  Although…” his voice trailed speculatively for a moment, as though a thought had suddenly occurred to him. 

“Would your Majesty have a suggestion for housing for our fine companion here?”  He patted the halla’s neck, who gave a low call in reply.  “I fear her like is not often seen in these parts and it is thanks to her efforts that we have arrived in such a timely manner.”

“Indeed, I’ve never seen anything quite like it,” the King mused.

“A halla, your Majesty,” Kara supplied.  “Her name is Maera, and she is a dear friend to my clan.”

 “It would hardly be fair recompense if an intrepid hunter decided she would be the perfect trophy for the king’s dinner table, now wouldn’t it?”  King Cailan said thoughtfully.  Kara’s eyes widened in alarm.  It had not occurred to her that her friend would be in potential danger here.  Before she could protest, the King spoke again.

“The picket line would not be sufficiently secure…but if we were to house her with the mabari, I expect she would be safe enough.   Given the order, they would guard your friend here, I think.”  He nodded decisively.  “Yes.  I’ll send word to the kennels and have the masters there keep an eye out.  There’s always someone near the hounds.  Never fear, young Warden,” he said with a smile.  “No harm shall come to your friend.  Now I must be off before Loghain sends out a search party.  Fare you well, Grey Wardens, we shall see each other again soon.”  With that, the king marched away, escort in tow.

Duncan set the halla in motion again, taking a different path through the fortress ruins than the human king.  Kara listened as he detailed their current situation, the coming battles with the darkspawn, but as they approached the army encampment and the sounds of hundreds of hundreds of men drew closer, her attention drifted to the coming meeting.  Humans, so many humans.  She shivered slightly, hoping Duncan would not notice.  Her clan had always stayed as far as possible from the haunts of humans, more insular even than most Dalish clans.

What would it be like, to be among so many humans?  Humans who had murdered her parents, who had slain and tormented so many of the Elvhenan throughout the ages, not just her own clan.  The same race that had enslaved her people, driven them out of their homeland to wander, robbed them of immortality, language, and lore.  She wanted to hate them.  But Ashalle’s voice lingered in her head.  “Not all humans are the same, da’len.  Do not let the actions of some color your view of the rest.”  Her foster mother had always counseled forgiveness, temperance, an open mind.  The clan, Ashalle had said, had decided together to not let sorrow and anger poison their daughter’s heart.  For her clan’s sake, she would try not to hate them.  And for the sake of her people, she would not fear them.

The sound of footsteps drew her attention outward again.  She looked up and stiffened at the sight – an elven man approached them.  A flat-eared servant – he had to be, dressed shabbily and bent in a submissive posture.   Outrage and disdain warred briefly, but pity won out – this man had never known the freedom of the hunt, the wild call of the wind, the fierce rush of the river. 

Sorrow swept away the pity as Kara realized that those things were likely forever lost to her as well.  A wave of longing washed over her, making it difficult to breathe for a moment.  Keeper Marethari had said it was her duty to join the Grey Wardens, but duty had never tasted so bitter.

“Kara?”  The Grey Warden’s voice startled her out of her thoughts.  It was clear from the question in his tone that Duncan had been expecting an answer to some question she hadn’t heard.  He looked up at her from beside the halla – he must have slipped down at some point without her noticing.  Where oh where were her vaunted hunting skills now?

 “My apologies, Duncan. What were you saying?” 

The concern in the Warden’s eyes had not faded away.  “There is Grey Warden business I must attend to.  I hesitate to leave you, but this must be dealt with immediately.  Will you be able to find the kennels on your own?”

Kara fought down the panic and the urge to beg him to stay.  All these humans and flat ears, by herself?  Dalish hunters were afraid of nothing, she reminded herself.  She resolutely shoved the fear away and buried it inside, forcing into her voice confidence she did not feel.  “Of course, Duncan.”  Small victory, that her voice did not shake.

Duncan studied her a moment longer before continuing.  “Follow the sounds of the barking, it should lead you to the kennels easily enough.  Should you get lost, ask one of the soldiers on duty.  When you are finished, seek out a Grey Warden named Alistair.  He will be your guide until we are ready to proceed with the Joining ritual.”  With that, Duncan turned and left her.  Alone.

Modifié par Sandtigress, 09 avril 2010 - 04:23 .


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I don't know what you worried about, it's all so well written Sandi. I love the premise (title): Fireside Tales. Kara's character is already quite clear too. Nice job!

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Thanks Sisi. ^-^ We'll see how it keeps going, working on the rest of chap.1 now! Need something to keep me busy at the airport, right? Just under three hours before my flight!

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First Impressions - Part 2


“Alistair?  That was the name of the shem king, right, Keeper?  The Grey Warden one?” asked one young voice eagerly.

“Yes, da’len,” Merrill answered.  The child beamed, until the aging Keeper scolded him. “Don’t interrupt the story, Tenerin.   There are many here who have not heard it before.”

“Yes Keeper,” Tenerin said quietly, chastised.

Merrill struggled to hide an indulgent smile and looking down to the tome in her lap returned to her tale.

                                                                                               ****

Kara followed the sound of barking as Duncan had suggested, though after a while the smell alone could have guided her to what the king had referred to as “kennels”.  The Dalish had never had much use for dogs – one or two of the clans kept them, but overall they were rare.  This though, this was insanity.  Everything here was chaos.  Humans and servile flat-ears running, shouting in their harsh tongue, and the dogs, more dogs than she had ever imagined, barking and barking.  And smelling. 

She led the halla on foot now, hands wrapped tightly in reins to keep herself from bolting as much as her four-footed companion.  “So much noise…” she whispered to Maera as she pressed close to her friend’s side.  She missed the quiet of the forest, the wind over the plains, the song of the brook.  She missed the music of the Dalish language.  

She approached the kennels with some trepidation, even more so when a man stepped forward and made his way towards her.  These humans were allies of the Wardens, she reminded herself.  They were not going to suddenly turn and assault her.  And even if they did, she was not some helpless child.  Dalish hunters fear nothing, she repeated to herself.  They were Tamlen’s words.  How she wished he was here, but his words would have to do.   She chanted them in her head, a mantra against the urge to flee. 

The dark-haired man drew nearer.  “Are you the new Warden?”  At her cautious nod, the man continued.  “I got a message from the king’s man to get a spot ready.  The kennels are full, but I’ve an idea.  I’ll need a favor from you first, though.”  Her eyes narrowed in suspicion as he led her closer to the kennels themselves, and one hand loosened from the halla’s reins, ready to reach for the hunting knife at her back.  She knew what human men often desired of elven women.

The man continued on blithely, unaware of the imminent danger he was in.  “This is a mabari, smart breed, and strong.”  He gestured to an immense hound lying in one of the pens.  “His owner died in the last battle, and the poor hound swallowed darkspawn blood.  I have medicine that might help, but I need him muzzled first.  I was wondering if you might help me with that.”

Kara frowned.  “I don’t know anything about dogs.  Why do you need my help?” 

“It’s not what you know so much as what you are, really.  Even sick like he is, he’s got a mean bite.   But you’re a Grey Warden, or soon will be.  All Wardens are immune to the darkspawn taint.  The most you have to worry about are a few tooth marks.   Will you try?  If you help him, I bet he’d be willing to share some space with the four-foot there. ”

She agreed to at least try and dubiously entered the pen.  She extended a hand to the hound as she would to a halla.  The dog sniffed it then offered a tentative, weak lick.  Kara could see the intelligence in his eyes – not so different than the halla, smart as any elf she’d ever met though they resided in an animal form.  The kennel master handed her the muzzle, and she slipped it over the hound’s head, fumbling with the buckles for a bit until she figured out how they attached.

“This is for the best, my friend, though I know it is not pleasant,” she told the mabari as he whimpered pathetically.  “I know, I feel it too.  Like burning fire in your blood, as if something dark is clawing its way out.  This man says that he has medicine that will cure you.  You’d like that, wouldn’t you?”  The hound’s tail wagged, which she took as a good sign.

“Will you let my halla friend stay with you?  You can watch over one another, keep each other company.”  The tail thumped again.  “Ma serranas then – thank you, in the language of my people.”

She straightened and slipped out of the pen.  The kennel master looked at her with astonishment.  “Most people don’t speak to the mabari like they understand.  They treat them like ordinary dogs.”

She shrugged as she gathered up Maera’s reins.  “He is not unlike the halla – they are comrades and allies to the Dalish, not servants like your horses.”   She led the halla into the pen.  “This is Maera, and she is a dear friend.  Maera, this is…” The elf looked over to the kennel master.  “Does he have a name?”

“I’m sure he does, but I never heard his master use it.  He seems to have taken a liking to you though, maybe even imprinted you.  Why don’t you give him one?”

She thought for a moment.  “Anari.  It means ‘little brother’ in my tongue.  Do you like it?  I’ve always wanted a little brother.”  The hound barked as best he could with the muzzle and wagged his tail even harder.  “Then Maera, this is Anari.  Anari, Maera.  Will you two look out for each other for me?”  A bleating call and a half-bark settled the matter, and Kara moved to divest the halla of her equipment, laying them in the corner of the pen. 
Slipping out of the pen again, she turned to the kennel master.  “I need to find a Grey Warden by the name of Alistair.  Do you know him?”

“I think I saw him head north just a short while ago,” the kennel master replied after thinking a moment.  “Tall blondish fellow.  Head up that way and you should find him.”  The man pointed up a ramp leading to a more enclosed area of the fortress ruins.  “Thanks again for helping the mabari, I can treat him properly now.”  Kara nodded to the man, and headed up the ramp.

The sounds of voices drew her attention to the right.  As she drew closer, the words became more distinct – an argument of sorts, it seemed.  Rather than approach, she remained in the shadows.  In order to examine her would-be-companion, she told herself.  It was almost believable.

Both speakers were male, human, one bald and dressed in what strangely appeared to be a skirt.  The second was tall, well-built and armored, hair red gold in the sunlight.  This must be the Grey Warden Alistair she had been told to find.  He carried the sword and shield at his back with the ease of a man accustomed to their use, and though he appeared displeased with the man before him, there was no open hostility about him.  The bald, skirted man stalked away in irritation, removing all excuses she might have for not approaching.  No more stalling then.

The Grey Warden caught sight of her as she drew near.  “You know, one good thing about the Blight is how it brings people together,” he said dryly. 

Kara stopped, perplexed.  “You are a very strange human…” she blurted, surprise stealing her tongue before she could consider the words.  She regretted them as soon as they left her mouth – calling someone strange within moments of meeting them was hardly the way to make a good first impression.

To her relief, the Warden only chuckled and smiled.  “You’re not the first to tell me that.”  He squinted, trying to see her in the residual shadows where she stood and frowned. “We haven’t met, have we?  I don’t suppose you happen to be another mage?”  As she wasn’t entirely sure what a mage was, she shook her head.  “Less being yelled at for me, then, though the day is still young,” he said with a shrug, walking in her direction.
 
As the man drew near, he studied her for a moment and frowned again.  Kara wondered what he saw – one of the wild Dalish, traditional braids in her dark auburn hair and the marks of the Creators, the vallaslin, tattooed across her face.  In Dalish leathers, so unlike any of the clothing she had seen in the army encampment, there was no mistaking her for anything but foreign.

“Wait…I do know who you are.   You’re Duncan’s new recruit, the Dalish.  I should have recognized you right away.  I apologize,” he said, extending a hand.  “I’m Alistair.  As the junior member of the order, I’ll be accompanying you when you prepare for the Joining.”

She took his hand cautiously.  A “handshake”, Duncan had called it.  The customs of humans were so strange, so foreign.  “Karaleyna, of the Mahariel clan of the Dalish.”  Formerly of the clan, she thought with a sudden pang.  Clanless, now.  Homeless, without an identity.  She forced herself to keep talking, to not dwell upon the emptiness, or the growing taint that tried to fill the gaping holes.  “It is good to meet you, Alistair.  Duncan spoke of you.” 

“Nothing bad, I hope,” Alistair said with a smile, and gestured for them to keep moving.  He looked at her, a thoughtful expression upon his face.  “You know…it just occurred to me that there have never been many women in the Grey Wardens.  I wonder why that is?”

Her eyes narrowed in suspicion.  Perhaps offending the man was not what she should have been worried about.  “You want more women in the Wardens, do you?”  She fought against the desire to hiss the words, to give him the benefit of the doubt, that perhaps he was truly just curious.

“Would that be so terrible?   Not that I’m some sort of drooling lecher or something…stop looking at me like that!”  He squirmed a little bit uncomfortably and she made an effort to stop glaring.  He sounded innocent enough.  A part of her wanted to be able to trust him.  No, a part of her needed to trust him, to find in the Grey Wardens something of the clan she no longer had.  But so many instincts insisted that humans were dangerous, unreliable.  It was all so complicated now, so many conflicting emotions and needs.

Something of her thoughts must have been visible in her face – Alistair’s look softened into something like sympathy.  “Come on,” he said.  “I’ll show you around the camp, and then we’ll see if Duncan is ready to start yet.”  He gestured towards the camp, and together, they set off, back into the swarming sea of chaos in the camp.

Modifié par Sandtigress, 09 avril 2010 - 04:24 .


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I <3 the Dalish! I love that your doing this story as lore that the Keeper is telling to the children. ^-^

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Yay! finished the first three chapters. I loved the way you described the way that she looked by wondering what Alistair saw when he met her for the first time. V. clever that! :)

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This is a fabulous tale, I too always prefer Dalish Elves to city elves, the descriptions are so vivid and detailed. I look forward to more, you're a skilled writer.

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Aww, thanks guys. ^-^ I appreciate the compliments! And I have to admit that I find it funny people complementing me on my descriptions - I always think I do those badly. Got some more written on the plane, and hopefully I'll get more up relatively soon. I'm a slow writer, so forgive me if it takes a little while!

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Loving this so far - I haven't played a Dalish elf yet. Must go do that :).



You have a very formal style that isn't stilted - this flows beautifully. Can't wait for more!

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You must go play a Dalish! They are the bestest ever, right Kallian??



I think the formality comes from writing nothing but scientific literature and school papers for years. :-P It works for Kara who would have a more formal use of the King's Tongue, I think since its more of an academic learning for her - Gaider mentions that the Dalish use their own tongue as much as possible, but they know the common language of Ferelden. But it doesn't work so well for Alistair, and we're going to start seeing some things from his point of view. Gotta start channeling Alistair!!

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Miri1984 wrote...

Loving this so far - I haven't played a Dalish elf yet. Must go do that :).


Honestly the Dalish are my absolute FAVORITE!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

YOU MUST GO PLAY ONE NOW!!!

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Damn. Does that mean I have to go and create another character? Blast it!

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Miri1984 wrote...

Damn. Does that mean I have to go and create another character? Blast it!


YES!! You absolutely have too!!

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Miri1984 wrote...

Damn. Does that mean I have to go and create another character? Blast it!


Yes, it most definitely does!

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Work work work.

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>>> He sounded innocent enough.



*shaking head* Hehehe. She just has no idea! :)

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>>> He sounded innocent enough.

*shaking head* Hehehe. She just has no idea! :)


lol I know.  Alistair is exactly the person she doesn't need to worry about.  She'll figure it out, eventually, though it does leave room for interesting misunderstandings, I think.  ;)

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At least part of a chapter, because its taking so long.  My first attempt at an action scene, so have mercy.  :-P  Thanks for reading, and being patient!


Into the Wilds - Part 1

Alistair stood by as Duncan explained the coming mission to his new recruits.  It would be their duty to collect vials of darkspawn blood for use in the actual Joining ritual. Not so different from his Joining, though there hadn’t been nearly as many darkspawn then.  His task was to guide, and ensure that they weren’t easy prey for the foul creatures out in the Wilds.  Duncan had also set him a special job – to find abandoned Grey Warden treaties that had been left long ago in an old waystation.

 As Duncan spoke, Alistair watched the newest recruit, the young Dalish elf Duncan had brought in that morning.  The two others, Daveth and Ser Jory, he had come to know over the past month while Duncan was away – Daveth was a bit shady for his liking, and Ser Jory was a nice enough sort though surprisingly timid for a knight of Redcliffe.

He had been surprised when Duncan had asked him to accompany the recruits, especially as he’d been kept out of the majority of the fighting thus far.  It was supposed to have been Fenric’s job, and far as he knew nothing had happened to his fellow junior Warden to make him incapable.  Meeting this new recruit, however…he thought she might be the reason why.  She stood with her back to one of the pillars surrounding Duncan’s fire, managing somehow to keep an eye on Duncan, on her fellow recruits, and the area around her all at once in a way that made his head spin.

It wasn’t that she seemed afraid.  Wary was the more appropriate term, he thought, like a wild animal.  In fact, with the intricate tattoos that ran mask-like across the upper portion of her face, she rather reminded him of a captive cat he’d seen as a child during a winter visit to Denerim in the menagerie of some bann his guardian had visited.  An immense, striped thing, it had paced and prowled with the same contained energy, the same dangerous grace as this young woman before him.  Where the cat’s eyes had been a feral yellow, though, her eyes were a hard grey, like storm clouds, or steel.

She had been almost as cold as steel on their brief tour of the camp as well, immune to his usual chattiness.  He was fairly certain he hadn’t said anything particularly offensive, even inadvertently.  Yet.  Fenric, however, incurable womanizer that he was, would have made trouble from the start.

 That caged wild cat had nearly taken off some fool boy’s hand when he’d gotten too near –it was characteristically wise of Duncan to head off potential danger by reassigning Fen before he could cause trouble with the new recruit.  It was too bad he was the only alternative, Alistair mused to himself.  He rather liked his hands, and his head, where they were.

Duncan dismissed his recruits to arm themselves before their journey into the Wilds, and motioned for Alistair to approach as they left.

“You know what needs to be done,” his mentor said solemnly.  “It is important that those treaties are recovered.”  Duncan hesitated briefly, as if he were reluctant to say something, then continued.  “Do what you can to keep Karaleyna out of any close combat.”

That surprised him.  “Out of combat?  Duncan, if you think she’s incapable of fighting, why…”

The elder Warden sighed.  “I have no doubts she is more than capable.  But I’m surprised you haven’t noticed yet.”

Alistair looked to the elven woman, headed towards the king’s kennels.  What was there to notice that would so concern Duncan?  Not that she was female, that was too obvious.  He studied her departing form for a moment, puzzled, when suddenly a nagging sensation of familiarity about her fell into place.

“Maker, she’s tainted,” he breathed.  He hadn’t recognized it before – with all the Wardens around and the darkspawn wandering the Wilds just outside the fortress, the sick oily pull of the taint had become almost common-place.  But now that he’d identified it, he could feel, almost see the darkness in her blood like it was in his.  Tainted, and badly so.

“How is she even still on her feet?” he asked, turning back towards Duncan.  Soldiers with half the amount of darkspawn plague in their veins were in the infirmary, bed-ridden.  They’d put men with less taint to death, before they became ghouls.

“Much of it is her clan leader, the keeper’s, magic.  Old elven magic, unlike anything I have seen before,” Duncan replied.  “The rest…I think she just refuses to give in.”

No wonder this young woman had impressed Duncan, Alistair thought.  He was a little bit in awe himself.

“But despite that, she is very ill, and growing weaker with every day that passes,” Duncan continued.  “I believe that the Joining ritual might save her through the immunity to the taint, but you know the dangers.  She will need to be as strong as possible if she is to survive.”

“I understand, Duncan.  I’ll do what I can.”

“The Dalish are proud, Alistair,” the Warden Commander warned.  “She will not allow herself to be coddled.  Think of it as an exercise in diplomacy.”  The last he said with a small smile, and Alistair scowled.   The elder Warden’s expression quickly grew serious again.  “Watch over your charges, Alistair, all of them.  Return quickly, and safely.”

“We will, Duncan.”

“Then may the Maker watch over your path.  I will see you when you return.”  With that, he was dismissed, and Alistair went to collect his charges.

He headed for the kennels first, still intrigued by this newest recruit.  He found her crouched in a pen, gently removing a leather satchel from the slobbery mouth of a mabari.

“This is not a toy, Anari,” she gently reprimanded the hound.  Pulling the bag away from the dog, she opened it and pulled out a bound volume of some sort.  Untying the cord that held it shut, she opened the pages.

“See?  These are the sword forms of the Dalish, my father’s notes.  He was my clan’s keeper, before I was born.”  She flipped through the pages as the dog looked intently, for all the world as if he were reading.  “You must guard this very carefully while I am gone,” the elven woman said seriously as she replaced the book in the satchel, the hound watching solemnly.  She scratched his head and stood, apparently noticing Alistair standing there for the first time.  He felt rather like he had intruded on something private.

“Ah, almost ready?” he asked, feeling slightly embarrassed.  She nodded and moved to the back of the pen, around a large white deer-like creature with intricately curved horns, the likes of which he had never seen before.  She paused to lay a tender hand on the animal’s nose, and spoke a few soft words to it in an unfamiliar language – Dalish, he presumed – before moving to a pile of equipment.

She picked up and strung a bow, slinging it over her shoulder.  “I’ve always heard the Dalish were unparalleled archers,” he said, suddenly inspired, to which she nodded.  “Is it true?”

“True enough,” she replied with a small smile.

“Then when we find the darkspawn, I’d like you to stay ranged, cover us from a distance.  They often have archers of their own.”  She nodded again without comment.

He watched as she unwrapped a bundle of arrows, giving each a cursory inspection before sliding it in her quiver.  “So, I’m curious, have you ever actually encountered darkspawn before?”

“Yes, just recently,” she replied, still focused on her task.

“I’ve only fought them once up close, and that was before the battles here started.”  He shuddered, remembering.  He’d nearly soiled his drawers, though he’d never admit it out loud.  “Tell me, did you find them as monstrous as I did?”

“Hideous.  Dangerous.  But killable.”  She shrugged.  He wondered if she could really be as nonchalant as she seemed.  If so, maybe she should be leading this little expedition.  In the pen, the elf straightened and swung the quiver over her head, adjusting it over the sword and dagger already there.  She looked up at him expectantly. 

 “Right, let’s go get the others.”  She left the enclosure and fell into step behind him.

                                                                                                        ****

They’d been wandering the Korcari Wilds for several hours now, with no sign of anything more tainted than a pack of blight wolves.  But now, Alistair could feel the skin-crawling filthy wrench of darkspawn ahead.  He motioned Karaleyna back – the Dalish elf had taken point shortly after realizing how inept her companions were moving in the wilderness.

Alistair looked at his assembled team as the elf drew near.  She had held her own in the small skirmish with the wolves and kept a level head, as had the rogue Daveth.  He trusted their instincts in the fight to come – but their fellow recruit, the knight Ser Jory, concerned him.  Rather the opposite of what he had expected.
 
Jory was fidgety now, nervous and all-together un-knightlike from what he remembered of the knights of Redcliffe, where he had spent his childhood.  But darkspawn were enough to unnerve the bravest souls.  It was why this part of the ritual was necessary – it took not only skill but a particular brand of courage to join the Wardens.  Or a particular brand of crazy, depending on which of the Grey Wardens you talked to.  Either way, it was time for Ser Jory to prove himself.

“There are darkspawn just ahead,” Alistair said, observing their reactions.  Ser Jory paled and gulped nervously.  Daveth hid it better, only fingering the daggers at his belt.  And Karaleyna…impassive as always, tattooed features hiding what emotion there might have been there, except for maybe a sharpening of the steel in her eyes, almost as if she were looking forward to the coming fight.

“It’s a small group, just on the other side of that rise, I think,” he continued.

“Small group?  Just how small is small?”  Ser Jory asked.  The knight was sweating visibly, and his rogue companion looked at him with some disgust.

“Come now, ser knight, it can’t be all that bad.”  Daveth grinned, in what was probably supposed to have been a reassuring manner, though it had little effect on the knight.  “The Warden there doesn’t seem too worried.”
Ignoring Daveth, the knight continued to press Alistair.  “How many of them are out there?”

Alistair sighed.  “I can’t say for sure.  Some Wardens could tell you number and kind, but I haven’t been one long enough.  Somewhere between 10 and 20 maybe.”

The knight’s eyes grew wide and his mouth moved, but flustered, no coherent words came out.  The voice that spoke instead was soft and feminine.  “You’ll want me on top of the rise, I assume?”

Alistair nodded and turned to the men.  “You two, let me lead, guard my back.”  Two more nods, and more nervous gulping from Jory.  “This is what Grey Wardens do,” the junior Warden reminded them.  And himself.  “Duncan wouldn’t have recruited any of you if he thought you couldn’t do this.”

Over the hill they went, Karaleyna finding herself a vantage point as they moved forward.  A copse of trees greeted them beyond the rise and from there, the darkspawn came.

They met in a collision of metal and flesh.  Alistair crashed his way through the darkspawn, knocking one down with his shield and spinning to skewer another on his sword.  He went through the mental count as he cut his way through - a mixture of genlocks and hurlocks, melee.  An arrow ricocheted off his shield and he altered the count to include archers. 

He turned his head to shout an order only find an arrow already in flight, which buried itself in the hurlock’s chest shortly afterwards.  Two more followed in quick succession, and the darkspawn archer was down.  He flashed a quick smile of thanks Karaleyna’s direction, just in case she was looking, before turning his attention back to the battle.

He fell into the patterns made familiar by practice – bash an opponent to the side, parry and strike.  Side-step, drop a genlock to the ground.  Behind him, he could hear, sometimes glimpse, Daveth and Ser Jory battling, taking out the foes he left behind him.  Jory at last was acting like the warrior he was supposed to be.  And around them, the whistle of arrows felled more until half the darkspawn were down.  It was almost fun, if one ignored the smell and the guttural cries.  And the oil-slick feel of the taint that made you want to vomit.

The rain of arrows had stopped at some point, and Alistair looked back to find the Dalish archer, arrow notched, aimed to the left of their position.  He was momentarily confused, until that nauseating pull began again – Andraste’s ashes, a second group of darkspawn.  Most likely their presence had been masked by the larger group they had engaged.  Not that it mattered now.  They were headed straight for the elf’s position, and she was dead if they got there.  And so was he, because Duncan was going to kill him for losing a recruit.

He was torn only for a moment.  “Stay here!” he shouted to the other two, and set off at a run.  He just hoped he could get there in time.

Arrows dropped two genlocks and a larger hurlock was pinned to the ground with a clever shot through the creature’s leg.  He realized though with a sinking heart that the darkspawn would reach her first. 

The first darkspawn to reach the top was dropped with an arrow to the throat, the second stabbed through with an arrow by hand.  The third fell to a knife she pulled from the back of her belt, and then the monsters descended upon her in earnest.  She dropped the bow, drew sword and dagger, and began to dance.

He couldn’t think of another word to describe it.  There were better fighters amongst the Wardens, it was true, but none of them moved like that.  Like she was…dancing.  His steps slowed as he watched her spin to avoid a hurlock blade, using the momentum to spit another darkspawn on her sword.  She transferred the dagger to her right hand, slipped to the side, and finished off the hurlock.   Maybe she didn’t need help after all.  The Dalish recruit seemed to be doing fine on her own.

A blur of motion to the side caught Alistair’s eye.  “Your left!” he shouted.  She had enough time to give a forearm to the blight wolf’s jaws instead of her throat when the tainted creature launched itself at her, bearing the woman to the ground and burying her under its weight.  He cursed under his breath for slowing and raced the rest of the way up the hill, slamming shield-first into a hurlock prepared to skewer the prone elf.  The blight wolf lay to one side, dagger buried in the side of its head, but Karaleyna had yet to gain her feet again.

Three more darkspawn, and his foes were defeated.  A quick glance down the hill showed that Daveth and Ser Jory were working together to finish off the last of their opponents as well.  All the recruits had survived.  Alistair paused for a moment to catch his breath and utter a small thanks to the Maker before stowing sword and shield.

He returned to where the Dalish recruit still lay, slightly stunned.  “Are you alright?” he asked with some concern.  She sat up slowly and nodded, though he noted the slight wince when she moved her head too quickly and the way she held her left wrist close.

“Here, let me see that,” he said as he bent to kneel at her side.  He dug around for the bandages in his pack and reached for her hand.

She pulled away from him.  “It’s fine, you don’t need to…”

“If it’s fine, you won’t mind me taking a look then, will you?” he interrupted.  “Indulge me.  Besides, you’re bleeding.”

With a sigh, she held out her arm and helped him undo the bindings that held the leather bracer in place.  The armor, light as it was, had taken the brunt of the damage, though there were already dark bruises forming the length of her forearm from animal’s powerful jaws, and a jagged cut where a tooth had cut through.

“This doesn’t look too bad,” he commented as he gave the wound a cursory inspection and began bandaging her arm.  “Though you ought to have a healer look at it when….”  He trailed off when he realized that she wasn’t listening, her expression distant.

“Do you hear it?” she asked.

“What?  Hear what?”  He listened, but heard nothing.  Even the local wildlife seemed to have been scared into silence by the recent battle.

“Something…like a song.  Beautiful, and yet terrible, all at once.”  She frowned and shook her head, suddenly more present than she had been moments before.  “I can’t explain it.”

A song…that sent shivers down his spine.  Some of the older Wardens, nearing the end of their time, had talked about hearing a song.  The archdemon, they said it was, calling the darkspawn to war.  But the only ones who heard it were the older Wardens at their Calling or those on the verge of becoming ghouls.  Which meant they needed to hurry.

                                                                                                   ****

“You won’t stop there, will you, Keeper?”  Big, wide eyes from all around met Merrill’s as she paused in her tale.

“You asked about Karaleyna’s start as a Grey Warden,” she answered, amused.  She already knew what the answer would be.

“But she isn’t even a Grey Warden yet!  You can’t stop there!” came the indignant response from one small child.

“Are you asking for another story then?”

“YES!” the chorus of children answered.

“Very well, I suppose we can do one more,” Merrill chuckled, and the children cheered.

Modifié par Sandtigress, 17 avril 2010 - 06:40 .


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Ooh, the song of the archdemon! Nice touch. Your combat is fabulous, by the way. Really enjoying this.



(PS, started my Dalish elf - having a ball!)

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Goodness you read fast. :-P Glad you're enjoying your Dalish! They're so much fun! Thanks for the compliments. ^-^

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Yes it's a talent and a curse I'm afraid. Very useful for marking during exam times, but means extra trips to the bookstore and library. One of the reasons why I'm really enjoying my online reading at the moment!

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Yes it's a talent and a curse I'm afraid. Very useful for marking during exam times, but means extra trips to the bookstore and library. One of the reasons why I'm really enjoying my online reading at the moment!


I'm a fast reader too, which is a good thing considering how much reading I generally have to do for work!

Nice chapter, Sandi. I'm with the children: More please!

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A/N  I see these as something like Brian Jacque's Redwall stories - Merrill is telling the children a different version of the same story, one which excludes things like details of the Joining ritual.  Just in case you were wondering why it is that a number of Grey Warden secrets would be written down for all to see.

The Joining - Part I



“What happens next, Keeper Merrill?” inquired one of the children from a visiting clan.

“Next is the Joining ritual!” Kelia answered authoritatively.

“What’s the Joining ritual?” another visiting child asked.

“It’s the ritual that makes Grey Wardens what they are,” Merrill replied.  “It’s very secretive, but I will tell you what they would share with me.”

She allowed the children to whisper amongst themselves about the nature of secret rituals for a time before gently clearing her throat.  When she had their attention, she began the tale again.

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The journey through the rest of the Wilds had become a blur, wrapped in the mounting noise of seductive song without and the incessant burn of darkspawn disease within.  The call had come in fleeting snatches since leaving the clan, but now it was clear, and had grown in volume with every step into the wilderness.  It was tempting to listen and follow, but that part of her that refused to submit rebelled.  Stubborn, intractable as a badger, Tamlen always called her.  Dalish, she’d always retorted.  Somehow, she knew – if she succumbed to the sweet, awful song Karaleyna of the Dalish would cease to exist, and that was unacceptable.  So she fought within, and continued to put one foot in front of another.

She vaguely remembered finding the Grey Warden outpost they had been seeking, and the empty chest that should have held important documents.  Encountering the witch Morrigan and her mother, who had taken the documents, was slightly clearer – the meeting was marked more by curiosity than fear, like her fellow recruits.  Those trained in the humans’ ways of the arts of the Beyond were susceptible to the lure of demons, she learned, but the Dalish had never had cause for such anxiety.  The superiority of the old ways, that they resisted even the power of the spirits in the Beyond.

They had spent the night in the ruins of the outpost – a concession to Ser Jory and the approaching darkspawn horde that no one wanted to encounter unawares in the darkness.  The men had arranged the watch among themselves and though their junior Warden guide claimed it was because they needed her well-rested to lead them back through the Wilds, Kara knew better.  It was galling that he thought her weak and tired.  It was worse because he was right, and she hadn’t even the strength to argue.  And though her sleep had been plagued with dark dreams, she did indeed feel stronger for the night’s rest.

The return to Ostagar through the Wilds was unremarkable.  Taking point allowed her to focus on something other than the song, and spared her the idle chatter she could hear from behind.  It wasn’t so much that she thought her companions uninteresting – it was simply becoming too hard to make sense of words past the noise.

She worked hard to focus now, though, as Alistair led them through the fortress, first to Duncan’s fire with the vials of darkspawn blood they had gathered, then to an old temple in the ruins to begin the mysterious ritual that Duncan claimed would save her from the taint.

Ser Jory fretted to one side as they waited for Duncan to join them, Daveth alternatively poking fun at the knight or trying to reassure him.  Alistair watched over them quietly, pensive.  He looked apprehensive, which said more than any of Jory’s grumbling that what was to come was unpleasant at least.

Finally Duncan approached, a large silver chalice in his hands.  “At last, we come to the Joining.”  He looked each of his recruits in turn, capturing them with his gaze.  “The Grey Wardens were founded during the first Blight, when humanity stood on the verge of annihilation.  So it was that the first Grey Wardens drank of darkspawn blood and mastered their taint.”

Daveth paled.  Ser Jory looked sickened and aghast.  “We’re…going to drink the blood of those…those creatures?” 

Kara remained quiet – it was no less than she had expected after gathering the vials of blood, knowing that the Grey Wardens were immune to the taint.  What better way than to take it into themselves, even as she and Tamlen had done, though in a form that would sicken and not empower?

Duncan regarded Ser Jory seriously, as if by the stare he could embolden the cowering knight.  “As the first Grey Wardens did before us, as we did before you.  This is the source of our power and our victory.”

“Those who survive the Joining become immune to the taint.  We can sense it in the darkspawn and use it to slay the archdemon,” Alistair added.

“We speak only a few words prior to the Joining, but these words have been said since the first,” Duncan said.  He looked to the junior Grey Warden beside him.  “Alistair, if you would?”

The young Warden bowed his head.  “Join us, brothers and sisters.  Join us in the shadows where we stand, vigilant.  Join us as we carry the duty that cannot be forsworn.  And should you perish, know that your sacrifice will not be forgotten and that one day we shall join you.”

“Daveth, step forward.”  The Warden Commander’s voice was firm, undeniable.  The rogue took the chalice into his hands and lifted it to his lips.  As Duncan took the chalice back, Daveth choked with a horrible retching noise, his hands moving to his throat.  Only the whites of his eyes were visible, and his face contorted in agony.  The rogue fell to his knees, then collapsed upon the ground, body spasming.

“I am sorry, Daveth.”  There was great sorrow in the Warden Commander’s voice, the weary tone of a man who had put many to such deaths and would again.  Alistair too, looked dismayed, but resigned.  Ser Jory, however, backed away from the scene, horror written in his every movement.

“Step forward, Jory.”  Duncan moved towards the knight, who continued to retreat.

“But…I have a wife.”  Jory, panicking, drew his sword.  “A child!  Had I known…”

Duncan’s eyes were implacable as he pulled his own knife free of its scabbard.  “There is no turning back.”

Jory further backed away.  “No!  You ask too much!  There is no glory in this!”  He swung the weapon at Duncan, who parried it easily with his knife.  The blade plunged into the knight’s belly, and he fell, staring horrified into the Warden’s face.

“I am sorry.”  His voice was heavy as he lowered the slain knight to the ground.  He rose, and turned solemnly towards his final recruit.  “But the Joining is not yet complete.  You are called upon to submit yourself to the taint for the greater good.”

Duncan faced her, dark eyes meeting hers.  The question was clear.  In answer, she unfastened the harness holding her weapons, allowing them to drop to the ground along with bow and quiver.  This was her duty, what Keeper Marethari and the clan had sent her to do.  She would not shrink from that, no matter the price.  Duncan nodded soberly, and extended the chalice.

“From this moment on, you are a Grey Warden.”  She took the cup, brought it to her lips, swallowed.  The taint in her blood flared in response, and darkness surrounded her.  And in the darkness, the dragon rose to meet her, and swallowed her whole.

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Two more deaths.  He understood the necessity, but it didn’t make it any easier to watch.  Daveth’s death at least had been an honorable one, but Ser Jory’s…what a waste.  Alistair wondered how Duncan could do it, over and over again.  The elder Warden was made of far sterner stuff than he was.

At least one of the recruits had survived.  He watched the shallow rise and fall of her chest as the long minutes passed.  Alistair remembered waking from his own Joining, disoriented and sick, released from the grip of the first of many darkspawn dreams.  But it hadn’t taken this long, had it?

“Shouldn’t she be waking up soon?” he asked Duncan.  From the frown on his mentor’s face, Duncan agreed.  Alistair knelt at her side, reaching out to check her pulse.  “Maker…Duncan, she’s burning up!”  A high fever was one of the symptoms of advanced exposure to the taint.  It wasn’t supposed to happen after the Joining.

The Warden Commander sighed.   “I had hoped it would not come to this…”  The man appeared to have aged in moments.   “Tainted for too long.  Combined with the taint from the Joining…she battles against it now.”

“Battles the…you mean, she survived the Joining and the taint might still kill her?”
“Let us hope it does not come to that.  If she overcomes this now, she will have the immunity from the taint like all Grey Wardens,” Duncan said, rising.  He motioned to Alistair.  “Shall we see to it she wakes somewhere more comfortable?”

Alistair looked at the unconscious elf uneasily.  How exactly did one pick up a woman without touching…things?  He slid his arms gingerly under her and settled her to his chest before trying to rise.  He only hoped he didn’t drop her or fall or some other embarrassing thing in front of Duncan.

It was easier than he’d expected, rising with her in his arms.  “Maker, she’s light.  Half her weight must be in weapons,” he muttered under his breath.  Duncan moved to gather her weapons from the temple floor, glancing curiously at the blades.

“Ironwood,” he mused, drawing the sword partially from its sheath.  “The Dalish sometimes make weapons out of it.  Wood, as hard as steel but much lighter,” he said, in answer to Alistair’s curious look.

He followed Duncan as he made his way out of the ruined temple, ordering the pair of Wardens outside to tend to the two fallen men behind them.   They made their way to the Grey Warden camp by a circuitous route – it wouldn’t do to stir questions about the Joining ritual.

“Lay her here for now, while I arrange for something more suitable” Duncan said, ducking into his own tent.  Alistair followed him in, intrigued.  He’d never been inside Duncan’s quarters before.  He was a bit disappointed to find it quite ordinary.  Larger than his own tent that he shared with Fenric, Duncan’s had room for chests and a table where he laid Karaleyna’s weapons.

Duncan indicated a cot half-hidden behind a wooden screen off to one side and watched gravely as Alistair laid her down.   “I fear it was perhaps a mistake to recruit her.  Had she not been tainted…”  He had never before heard so much regret and weariness in Duncan’s voice before.  “The Dalish are long-lived - to her clan, she is still but a child.  Even should she survive, the taint will rob her of all but a fraction of her life.”

Alistair wondered if Duncan felt this way about all his recruits.  Personally, he’d been happier in the past six months since he joined the Wardens than he had been his entire life, and it was in large part due to Duncan – the Warden Commander was the first person to care about what he wanted.  Alistair had begun to think of him as something like the father he’d never had, but he’d never expected Duncan to consider him anything more than just another Grey Warden, even knowing his little secret.  He was touched that Duncan would confide in him now.

“I’ve never regretted my Joining, Duncan.  Becoming a Grey Warden was the best day of my life, darkspawn blood and all.”

His mentor nodded, and some of the weight seemed to lift from his shoulders.  “Watch over her, Alistair.  I’ll return shortly.”  With that, Duncan slipped outside the tent again.  His voice came again from outside.

“King Cailan!”  Alistair winced inwardly and prayed fervently that they would stay outside the tent.  He had no desire to come face-to-face with his half-brother any time soon.  Or ever.  He’d been avoiding Cailan ever since they had both gotten to Ostagar.

“The other Wardens said that the Joining ritual was complete.”

“Indeed it is, your Majesty.”

“And?  How are the new Grey Wardens?”

“One, your Majesty.”  Duncan sounded uncomfortable – Cailan was coming close to prying into Grey Warden secrets.  “She is…resting at the moment.”

“She?  You mean the Dalish recruit then, most excellent news.  This calls for a celebration!”

“I’m not sure that’s such a good idea, your Majesty, with the upcoming battle….” 

“Nonsense.  It will be good for morale.”  A pause – Duncan must have given in.  “Outstanding.  Tonight then!”  The voices faded as Cailan elaborated on his plans for the evening.  It seemed there was a timeline on her recovery now.

He looked down at the unconscious elf lying on Duncan’s cot, watching the shallow but steady rise and fall of her chest, until he realized that doing so meant also staring at…other things.  Blushing, he looked away and turned his attention to the inside of the tent.  The walls were simple, unadorned canvas however, and rather uninteresting.

His eyes fell upon the weapons lying atop the assorted papers and maps strew across the table.  He knew little enough about bows, though hers was an impressive looking weapon.  The wood looked old, well-worn, adorned with a simple ivy pattern.  The blades were like nothing he’d ever seen before – curved and incredibly light, as Duncan had said, when he hefted one in hand.

Alistair started at a rustle from behind the screen – it wasn’t exactly polite to paw over someone else’s weapons.  He looked over to find the Dalish Warden still abed, in the throes of a fever dream.   Duncan had told him to watch her, but what exactly was he supposed to do?

He pulled one of the chairs from the table to the cot and sat with a sigh, feeling rather helpless.  She looked fragile, lying there like that – a word he would not have thought to use earlier in the day.  Delicate, perhaps – she was slightly built like most elves he had seen.  But there was a surety and strength in the way she held herself, a pride that was missing in the elves that lived with the humans.

She muttered and tossed in her sleep, and before he knew what he was doing, he had reached out to brush a braid away from her face and sooth her back to more peaceful dreams.  Alistair froze in the middle of the act, her skin feverishly warm beneath his fingertips.  Was he allowed to do something like that?  The tent flap opened and he snatched his fingers away as if burned and scrambled to his feet.

“Hello?  Grey Warden?”  The voice was feminine, kindly, and he looked around the screen to find an elderly woman making her way into the tent.  And a mage – his templar training made that abundantly clear.  “My name is Wynne, I am a healer with the Circle.  The Warden Commander asked me to see to someone?”

“Um, yes, over here.”  He shifted nervously as the healer examined the elven Warden.  She knelt next to the cot, eyes closed and hands extended as she concentrated – Alistair could feel the magical energies emanating from her hands.

“Young man, why are you fidgeting?”   The mage’s eyes remained close, but her voice was stern.

He scrubbed a hand through his hair uneasily.  “Well, I guess you should know…before I joined the Grey Wardens, I used to be a templar.”

“Are you going to smite me where I stand?”

“Um, no?”

“Then I have nothing to worry about, do I?”  Wynne withdrew her hands and opened her eyes to look up at him.  “There’s little I can do.  This is darkspawn related, yes?”  Alistair hesitated before responding – that recruits drank darkspawn blood at the Joining was a closely kept secret.  The elderly mage looked at him a moment before continuing.  “No, never mind.  I don’t need to know.”

She pulled a vial from the pouch slung over her shoulder and eased their contents past the Dalish Warden’s lips and down her throat.  “This may help with the fever.  It’s the best I can do.”  The mage looked up at him.  “Cool cloths, try to get fluids in her.  But if it’s the darkspawn plague, it’s only a matter of time.  I’m sorry.”

Wynne gave him a sympathetic look and a pat on the shoulder, then slipped out of the tent again.  With another sigh, Alistair sat back down in the chair to wait.

Modifié par Sandtigress, 26 avril 2010 - 06:48 .