Merilsell wrote...
Honestly...I never knew that the "Somehow this prince thing is thrilling" line is a romance starter. I think I was equally confused like my PC, lol.
That's a funny one. I hear you can also turn it on late in the game, when talking about the kingship, by telling him that power is attractive. Apparently it never occurred to Alistair before this that being a prince could get him chicks. LOL
And Addai, I have seen the video, save for Alistair's look (Maricstair D: ) I love it. This line started to break the mistrust in Lenya a bit....she was very surprised that he knew something like that. Hearing it made her caught between positive disbelief and 'is he making fun of me'? Poor Alistair, Lenya will give him a hard time xD
Aw, so much Maricstair hate.

I think my PC took him as being sincere. He sounds so sincere, and it's in the middle of a conversation where he is being vulnerable about Duncan. Poor guy, he's trying to have a stiff upper lip, but as soon as you say something reassuring about Duncan, his face just crumples.
About your story...I have started to read it but things got hectically the past few days in RL so I haven't finished it till now. Will do, though. I love the way you write, very clear yet descriptive 
Thank you. It should be shorter/ tighter, but you could edit things forever. If you see anything that seems "off," either lore-wise or story-wise, let me know.
Modifié par Addai67, 25 mai 2010 - 04:43 .