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[mellifera]

If the reactions are any indications I can safely say I'd probably feel 100x worse for Gaia than Alistair

[LadyDamodred]

Sarah1281 wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

Ok, so, I'm probably going to regret this, but cmessaz's Gaia character wouldn't stop bothering me.  This is the result.

It is very NSFW and smutty.  Please, I'm horribly embarrassed about it as it is.  Don't judge me too harshly.  It's more to flesh out the brokenness of the character.  So...yeah.

Chapter Two.

*hides in the corner with some cupcakes and Alistair*

Dude. I just...I don't think there are enough 's in the world to convey how very  that was.

Do you see the problems that are gonna come up with an Alistair romance?!

*cries and hands out cupcakes*

Okay, I just read and reviewed it and I think I'm going to need one of those cupcakes. Possibly more than one.

Great job with it. Juxtaposing the paper with her abuse...it really made her daily molestation just seem like another part of her day instead of the horror that it was. I think the fact she doesn't even realize it is actually the worst part.

That's what I was trying to do.  And the way she treats their clothes versus her own.

*hands out some more cupcakes*  Good thing these were on sale. 

Edit:  And thank you for the review!

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 03 juin 2010 - 04:28 .

[cmessaz]

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Modifié par cmessaz, 03 juin 2010 - 04:31 .

[Serissia]

cmessaz wrote...

I need a cupcake!

I second this motion.

[LadyDamodred]

cmessaz wrote...
I need a cupcake!

Here!


Yuki:  I think the worst part is is that they're both victims of her abuse.  Alistair is no way deserves what's coming, not does she. 

[Lady Jess]

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

What do you do when a character stalls dead early in the playthrough?

I start over

seems like that would just land me back where I'm at now...lol

[cmessaz]

That is why I feel for Alistair. He is guilty of falling in love with her. And he'll pay with his life.

[cmessaz]

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

What do you do when a character stalls dead early in the playthrough?

I start over

seems like that would just land me back where I'm at now...lol

This rp business has helped me get into my characters better. I need help though because my creativity is lacking.

[Lady Jess]

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

What do you do when a character stalls dead early in the playthrough?

I start over

seems like that would just land me back where I'm at now...lol

This rp business has helped me get into my characters better. I need help though because my creativity is lacking.

Good girls are hard to rp with any depth, maybe that's my problem. It's like being a cross between Wynne and Leliana.

[cmessaz]

Lady Jess- I am having a lot more fun now that I am willing to do the questionable things.

[Lady Jess]

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess- I am having a lot more fun now that I am willing to do the questionable things.

I've done most of them, except the wrewolves, blood mage will do that

[mellifera]

LadyDamodred wrote...

cmessaz wrote...
I need a cupcake!

Here!


Yuki:  I think the worst part is is that they're both victims of her abuse.  Alistair is no way deserves what's coming, not does she. 

Oh right, she's the one that's going to have him executed D':

[cmessaz]

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess- I am having a lot more fun now that I am willing to do the questionable things.

I've done most of them, except the wrewolves, blood mage will do that

Both of those cutscenes are awsome.


I just love how my crap takes 4 days to update.

Modifié par cmessaz, 03 juin 2010 - 04:40 .

[Sarah1281]

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

What do you do when a character stalls dead early in the playthrough?

I start over

seems like that would just land me back where I'm at now...lol

This rp business has helped me get into my characters better. I need help though because my creativity is lacking.

Good girls are hard to rp with any depth, maybe that's my problem. It's like being a cross between Wynne and Leliana.

I would hate any character of mine that reminded me of those two far, far too much to ever be able to play them.

[Axekix]

Sarah1281 wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

Ok, so, I'm probably going to regret this, but cmessaz's Gaia character wouldn't stop bothering me.  This is the result.

It is very NSFW and smutty.  Please, I'm horribly embarrassed about it as it is.  Don't judge me too harshly.  It's more to flesh out the brokenness of the character.  So...yeah.

Chapter Two.

*hides in the corner with some cupcakes and Alistair*

Dude. I just...I don't think there are enough 's in the world to convey how very  that was.

Do you see the problems that are gonna come up with an Alistair romance?!

*cries and hands out cupcakes*

Okay, I just read and reviewed it and I think I'm going to need one of those cupcakes. Possibly more than one.

Great job with it. Juxtaposing the paper with her abuse...it really made her daily molestation just seem like another part of her day instead of the horror that it was. I think the fact she doesn't even realize it is actually the worst part.

Just read it, and I'm curious as to why this character would want Alistair executed (following a romance). 

I may rag on Alistair, but he's nothing if not sweet.  He'd probably treat her better than any other man she's ever had in her life.  So... erm... what's her motivation for killing him again?

[LadyDamodred]

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...
This rp business has helped me get into my characters better. I need help though because my creativity is lacking.

Good girls are hard to rp with any depth, maybe that's my problem. It's like being a cross between Wynne and Leliana.

It depends how you rp.  My canon HNF is a good girl, but she struggles with a lot of stuff.

[cmessaz]

Wynne makes head hurt. Leliana is good. (I have to say that so she will be mistress to consort-Cousland)

[mellifera]

I dunno, I don't dislike good characters on their own. I dislike them when they're good without faults and never make mistakes and everyone loves them for no particular reason other than the light that shines out their holy bum lol.

[Sarah1281]

Axekix wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

SurelyForth wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

Ok, so, I'm probably going to regret this, but cmessaz's Gaia character wouldn't stop bothering me.  This is the result.

It is very NSFW and smutty.  Please, I'm horribly embarrassed about it as it is.  Don't judge me too harshly.  It's more to flesh out the brokenness of the character.  So...yeah.

Chapter Two.

*hides in the corner with some cupcakes and Alistair*

Dude. I just...I don't think there are enough 's in the world to convey how very  that was.

Do you see the problems that are gonna come up with an Alistair romance?!

*cries and hands out cupcakes*

Okay, I just read and reviewed it and I think I'm going to need one of those cupcakes. Possibly more than one.

Great job with it. Juxtaposing the paper with her abuse...it really made her daily molestation just seem like another part of her day instead of the horror that it was. I think the fact she doesn't even realize it is actually the worst part.

Just read it, and I'm curious as to why this character would want Alistair executed (following a romance). 

I may rag on Alistair, but he's nothing if not sweet.  He'd probably treat her better than any other man she's ever had in her life.  So... erm... what's her motivation for killing him again?

Because she has severe issues.

[Lady Jess]

Sarah1281 wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Lady Jess wrote...

What do you do when a character stalls dead early in the playthrough?

I start over

seems like that would just land me back where I'm at now...lol

This rp business has helped me get into my characters better. I need help though because my creativity is lacking.

Good girls are hard to rp with any depth, maybe that's my problem. It's like being a cross between Wynne and Leliana.

I would hate any character of mine that reminded me of those two far, far too much to ever be able to play them.

She's more Wynne than Leliana. Which is easy to believe, since well, she's a mage. I just wonder if I should replay my first mage from the landsmeet on and make HER chancellor, and give this one the warden ending. Evielle was pretty selfish...not bad, just went after what she wanted more naturally. This one is all Hooah Grey Wardens, and would very much pray to the maker as she stabbed a genlock in the face.

[Sarah1281]

yukidama wrote...

I dunno, I don't dislike good characters on their own. I dislike them when they're good without faults and never make mistakes and everyone loves them for no particular reason other than the light that shines out their holy bum lol.

So just Mary Sues then. Most people do hate them.

[LadyDamodred]

Axekix wrote...
Just read it, and I'm curious as to why this character would want Alistair executed (following a romance). 
I may rag on Alistair, but he's nothing if not sweet.  He'd probably treat her better than any other man she's ever had in her life.  So... erm... what's her motivation for killing him again?

B/c she is broken in the head.  She doesn't understand love, or that he's really in love with her.  She doesn't even realize herself that she loves him.  She has no context to gauge those feelings.  It's something she's never, ever known.  And she changes during the Blight.  She starts off very compliant, willing to do whatever.  She sort of grows a backbone during that year and comes to realize just how jacked up her lfie has been.  There is a lot of rage and resentment there and Alistair ends up the focus of it.

The Landsmeet is the trigger because she's deciding something and he challenging it and telling her what to do.  Something in her kind of snaps.  It is not sane, it is not rational.  It's not supposed to be.  She is broken in so many ways that she will probably never be whole again.  It's a decision she will regret later when she comes to truly understand what she had, but by then...  Yeah.

That sum it up, cmess?

Heh, I also told cmess she needs to make a seperate save and give her a happy ending.  And if she doesn't I will probably write one anyone.  XD

Edit:  Sarah, I replied to your review to answer some of your questions.  If you have more, feel free to ask.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 03 juin 2010 - 04:54 .

[Lady Jess]

yukidama wrote...

I dunno, I don't dislike good characters on their own. I dislike them when they're good without faults and never make mistakes and everyone loves them for no particular reason other than the light that shines out their holy bum lol.

[Addai]

LadyDamodred wrote...

Addai67 wrote...
Someone who spares Loghain and marries him to Anora?  The tapestries would be too good for them, let alone the real thing!  My husband just did that in his DEF game.  Unhardened Alistair, even. 

*whimpers*  Why is everything in my life pain tonight? 

This is how differently my Anora-lovin' husband sees the game.  To him this is giving Alistair the good life without any responsibilities.  Ugh.  Don't ask me, I can't account for his taste in women.  LOL

[mellifera]

Sarah1281 wrote...

yukidama wrote...

I dunno, I don't dislike good characters on their own. I dislike them when they're good without faults and never make mistakes and everyone loves them for no particular reason other than the light that shines out their holy bum lol.

So just Mary Sues then. Most people do hate them.

Pretty much xD