Lady Jess wrote...
DahliaLynn wrote...
I have had a male opinion of the video, and he said some pretty valid points. He mentioned that Alistair looks way too secure in this video. The man doesn't really know what to do, and is usually embarrassed.He mentions an example that I should withdraw his gaze for a moment (in embarrassment). It is true..he does look quite secure..although loving to see the fems body for the first time , all his moves turn out too smooth and sure of himself. What do you think?
I think that would be ok, as long as he didn't look like a bumblind idiot. Though I think the fact that he looks so amazed is a must keep thing, but if you want to add some "newb" to that, maybe just add in some more touches, like a guy would do seeing a naked female for the first time. I'm sure thats about as clear as mud, but I'm sure a firt timer would spend some time grinning and exploring. And it would be quite Alistair-like. Cautious, curious, tender but not "DERP!!"...lol
OMG that's hillarious! no no DERP absolutely not.I wouldn't go there. especially not those shots. Adding newb would make the scene more true to it's name. Thanks
Sandtigress wrote:
I can see that point, and actually, personally, I'd love it if he were a
bit (or heck a lot) more shy, because at least for me his lack of
confidence in his own appeal is one of the things I love most about him.
I love all his hesistance and insecurity when it comes to the female
PC, but he's also quite willing to be bold and swoop her for a kiss even
when she's hesistant.
So I guess I'd go for a mix of the two
things - some hesitation, but also a little something to show that he's
willing to be bold to get what he wants sometimes.
I think of him the same way. His shyness is appealing....yet I also felt that he ws quite bold, which was why I was wondering about the combination. I think I know what to do now...to maintain both. Thanks
Addai67 wrote:
He looks much more (appropriately) unsure of himself in your scene than
in the vanilla scene. I dunno, I think the virgin thing can be
overdone. Even virgins who haven't been exposed to reams of porn, like
most teenage boys nowadays I suppose, do figure it out!
Well since this was the mail point of view, I am sure that deep inside they feel extremely awkward as well as the pressure of "performing the right way" so as to not embarrass themselves. they feel that they are supposedly the dominant figures..yet afraid to make the wrong move . Tey figure it out...but we are talking about the first time..so..I really didnt want it to be awkward but still..less confidence would probably be more appropriate. at least in the very beginning.
Gilsa wrote:
I didn't think of it like that until you pointed it out. I would like to
say that I viewed the video as Alistair being with someone he greatly
trusted and thus would be a little more confident about not being
rejected. If anyone is having mercy sex with Alistair so he doesn't lose
his virginity to Morrigan, I would think they're not downloading this
mod in the first place. The people who go through the trouble of having
the Alistair mod are the ones who want to get the most mileage they can
out of the romance. I thought the original was beautiful as it was, but
you have such good taste that I'm sure any first time pulling back due
to embarrassment would be handled just as beautifully. I just don't want
you to doubt your work because a man who doesn't romance Alistair has a
different PoV. =p
Yes that is true, unless the man plays a fem pc...and would want to connect with alistair being a virgin. (as in his own personal experience in life)
Thank you Gilsa.
..I am trying to make it tasteful worthy
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