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[SurelyForth]

sylvanaerie wrote...

no I finished at chapter 15.  They had 16 up but I could tell by the way it was going it wsn't going to finish in the next installment so I am deciding to wait a week or 2 to catch up  like a full chapter of it instead of a page at a time.

damn there is a threesome? wtf? it was good...is it just degenerating into mary sue erotica wish fulfillment now?

It's not part of the story as it's going right now, but it is sort of wish fulfillment-y. Still hot, though (and quite explicit). I am biased, however, as I could happily live forever with Anders and Alistair at my beck and call. 

[sylvanaerie]

I'll pass then unless its written as a fantasy in the story sequence. At the point they were at Alistair hasn't even been back more than a couple days. Doing a threesome with Anders (someone he wouldn't even know) seems a little far fetched to me.

[LadyDamodred]

cmessaz wrote...

I like it. Anyone else?

Perhaps something like "Alistair, tonight..."  And then you have your list of 3 "demands".

[sylvanaerie]

Maybe mild could be "Make love to me like its our first time again"

[cmessaz]

sylvanaerie wrote...

Maybe mild could be "Make love to me like its our first time again"

I'm testing now. I'll customize here in a bit, keep the ideas flowing.

[Thor Rand Al]

Lady Jess wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

Alright, to get something going with BSC as soon as I can, I am going to wait on the whole VO thing. For now, I need a line that will lead to a new set. For instance:
Right now it is like this

Although reogranised in the new version

Would it be possible to do it as maybe "About us..." and move the breakup line and never mind to the next screen? that way noone pulls a stupid like me an accidently breaks up with him while trying to get some action...rofl

Other than that maybe a "take his hand" or "moves up against him"  or "look at him adoringly/seductively/longingly" (not saying the physical action, just the suggestion of it) and then have it swap to the options.

I did that once and didn't know how to respond.  It was after the landsmeet and him and I were doing the rule together.  Talk about awkward lmao.

[KnightofPhoenix]

cmessaz wrote...

The new one will put a couple of the romance scene lines in a new set. I need a line that will lead to those options. I could do something like "Alistair": new set comes up, then the new lines for the other scenes. Thoughts?

"Ohhh Alistaiiirrr" *in a sexy voice*. Then you can cue whatever it is you want her to say (like "You shoudl read this book").

Or "Are you busy?" (That's the default thing I always hear anyways).

But face it, it will never reach the awesome of "Tis cold in my tent, all alone".

[cmessaz]

KnightofPhoenix wrote...

cmessaz wrote...

The new one will put a couple of the romance scene lines in a new set. I need a line that will lead to those options. I could do something like "Alistair": new set comes up, then the new lines for the other scenes. Thoughts?

"Ohhh Alistaiiirrr" *in a sexy voice*. Then you can cue whatever it is you want her to say (like "You shoudl read this book").

Or "Are you busy?" (That's the default thing I always hear anyways).

But face it, it will never reach the awesome of "Tis cold in my tent, all alone".

Not as long as I am writing it. I have no creativity.

I am testing the new set now, if it works then we will need to decide on the transitory line.

[tmp7704]

yukidama wrote...

Randomly, is there any way for the action "(Lead him to your tent)" to be italicized? Not necessary at all if it can't just a stylistic choice xDD

It can be done by adding <act> </act> tags around the text which describes the action.

[cmessaz]

tmp7704 wrote...

yukidama wrote...

Randomly, is there any way for the action "(Lead him to your tent)" to be italicized? Not necessary at all if it can't just a stylistic choice xDD

It can be done by adding tags around the text which describes the action.

Thanks.

[LadyDamodred]

Hrm. If anyone who makes custom faces with the toolset feels like helping me with a problem I'm having, please pm me. I was following a tutorial I think cmessaz gave me, but it didn't work. Now when I try load load, it's telling me I need my custom module. >.> I can force load, but am scared. Please help. *tries not to panic*

[cmessaz]

Alright the set was a success and I have moved tmp's scene "c" over to it. Looks great so far. The verdict on the tranistory line?

[Axekix]

LadyDamodred wrote...
I showed my friend that scene, and her response was "Wrong hole!  Wrong hole!"

There's no such thing as a "wrong" hole. 

[LadyDamodred]

Axekix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
I showed my friend that scene, and her response was "Wrong hole!  Wrong hole!"

There's no such thing as a "wrong" hole. 

With that facial expression, clearly there is. 

[Lady Jess]

LadyDamodred wrote...

Axekix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
I showed my friend that scene, and her response was "Wrong hole!  Wrong hole!"

There's no such thing as a "wrong" hole. 

With that facial expression, clearly there is. 

Or this one...

Thats apparently more painful than killing the Archdemon

Modifié par Lady Jess, 19 avril 2010 - 01:23 .

[sylvanaerie]

Lady Jess wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

Axekix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
I showed my friend that scene, and her response was "Wrong hole!  Wrong hole!"

There's no such thing as a "wrong" hole. 

With that facial expression, clearly there is. 

Or this one...

Thats apparently more painful than killing the Archdemon

Almost looks like Velanna

[mellifera]

Lady Jess wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

Axekix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
I showed my friend that scene, and her response was "Wrong hole!  Wrong hole!"

There's no such thing as a "wrong" hole. 

With that facial expression, clearly there is. 

Or this one...

Thats apparently more painful than killing the Archdemon

That... is terrifying.

[ejoslin]

Heh, zesty Zevran I see.

[sylvanaerie]

Could someone who knows how to look into the toolset at dialog do me a favor? For my Fanfic I need to know something about Teagan. The VO directions when you first meet with him in Redcliffe chantry. Is it genuine pleasure at seeing Alistair alive? or does he have ulterior motives at this point like his brother? I always assumed he wasn't feeling anything ulterior, just pure happiness at seeing Alistair alive. (I think the line is "Alistair...it IS you. You're alive! This is wonderful news".

[Lady Jess]

ejoslin wrote...

Heh, zesty Zevran I see.

lol yes, Thats really the only part of that scene I just hate. The rest is Zev being all gentle and loving and adoring. It's perfect, except for THAT part...*shudder*

Same with Alistair's scene, beginning...oh adorable, then a couple skeevy parts, then adorable again. Sigh, the sacxrifices I suffer for the sweet parts.

And OMG he JUST initiated the tent with my redhead elf...Awww! And all I gave him was Brandy...lol Man I got the tent, every conversation AND his last mission story with one gift...lol

And see? End...sweetness

[LadyDamodred]

sylvanaerie wrote...

Could someone who knows how to look into the toolset at dialog do me a favor? For my Fanfic I need to know something about Teagan. The VO directions when you first meet with him in Redcliffe chantry. Is it genuine pleasure at seeing Alistair alive? or does he have ulterior motives at this point like his brother? I always assumed he wasn't feeling anything ulterior, just pure happiness at seeing Alistair alive. (I think the line is "Alistair...it IS you. You're alive! This is wonderful news".

On it.

[ejoslin]

Bann Sexy: Covered in mud? ...Alistair? You're alive! This is wonderful news! ("Covered in mud?" said with confusion, and then he suddenly realizes who it is and is overjoyed)

[sylvanaerie]

ejoslin wrote...

Bann Sexy: Covered in mud? ...Alistair? You're alive! This is wonderful news! ("Covered in mud?" said with confusion, and then he suddenly realizes who it is and is overjoyed)

Woot!  Thanks Ejoslin!  Another reason to absolutely adore the Bannhammer.  Got two fanfics going on right now, one has the rough draft done I just have to pull it out in actual prose. The second is a Teagan/PC fanfic (as friends not lovers).

Modifié par sylvanaerie, 19 avril 2010 - 01:52 .

[cmessaz]

Still needin that "Bann Sexy romance mod" there ejoslin.

[LadyDamodred]

Nm! Ejoslin is faster than me! There are other vo comments that indicate teagan and Alistair are friends, also.