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[vikitty]

I haven't written DA fanfic yet, but I've written some ME fanfic. Mostly I write Doctor Who fanfic. >_>;; But I love writing femslash, especially smutty stuff. *nodnod* I don't think I'd do good DA fanfic just because of the time period/setting. I definitely prefer a more modern setting.



I played through some more Alistair scenes last night -- the romance ones -- so I could try the different dialogue wheels. I even broke up with him. ;_; The voice acting broke my heart so I had to reload and try again. I also upped approval with Leliana to play through the first part of her romance, at the guiding of some of the ladies in this thread. I take what I said back partially -- it is pretty sweet. But I stand by my opinion that the love scene just isn't as good as the f/f love scene from the first Mass Effect. FemShep/Liara ftw

[okiness]

Sorry, guest came over so I couldn't read over it. Do you just want the not read over version?



Dude I can never break up with Alistair it like....kills me D:

[Sarah1281]

okiness wrote...


Sorry, guest came over so I couldn't read over it. Do you just want the not read over version?

Nonread is probably fine but I don't think Kryy is even on right now which is annoying since that means she totally couldn't read the one I put up an hour or so ago.

[okiness]

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

[Sarah1281]

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

[Sandtigress]

Addai67 wrote...

Kryyptehk wrote...

So, I just realized I'm one of the only people on here who doesn't write DA fanfic. I've only written some Shepard/Thane fluff on fanfiction.net.

I wasn't going to do it, and then I decided a Dalish mage PC needed a little back story.  Then I wrote another.  And so on.  It's kind of addictive.  I've been writing Tolkien fanfiction for years, though.

However, I think I'm the only one who doesn't write kinky stuff.  Not my cup of tea.  I don't mind sauciness at all when it's just seasoning to a larger story, but emotion is what I'm really interested in.  Plus smut for the sake of makes me feel... I dunno, cheapened.  But I think some people are more sensitive to that than others, whereas most can probably turn a switch and just see it as good fun.

Hey now, I don't write smut!  I suppose you could consider Worlds Apart kind of kink just with the self-cest aspect of it, but there's nothing explicit in it at all!  

[Addai]

Sandtigress wrote...

Hey now, I don't write smut!  I suppose you could consider Worlds Apart kind of kink just with the self-cest aspect of it, but there's nothing explicit in it at all!  

Are you kidding?!  The Mahariel kinkfest you guys have going on is probably new in the world of kinkfic, and that's saying a lot.  LOL

J/k.  Alright, Sandi, together we occupy the Only Slightly Less Naughty corner of Alistair's harem.  :happy:

[Giggles_Manically]

What counts as kink on here and fanfic.net.



This question I cast out to the enlightened sages atop Mount Fanfiction.

[sabreene]

I don't write anymore, but I used to write fanfic & slash for Ewan movies, especially Velvet Goldmine. Sooo... yes. Smut.

Look, An Alistair!

Modifié par sabreene, 26 juillet 2010 - 01:01 .

[okiness]

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6176431/1/ Here you go! /goes to read

[Sarah1281]

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6176431/1/ Here you go! /goes to read

Yours was so much sadder than mine. And twice as long as you said it was gong to be for that matter. It was just so tragic but I can see Anora handling an illicit attraction to the HNF that way. I like it.

Now I wish you'd have played the DN origin because I'm sure you could do an equally tragic DN/Gorim story.

[okiness]

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6176431/1/ Here you go! /goes to read

Yours was so much sadder than mine. And twice as long as you said it was gong to be for that matter. It was just so tragic but I can see Anora handling an illicit attraction to the HNF that way. I like it.

Now I wish you'd have played the DN origin because I'm sure you could do an equally tragic DN/Gorim story.

Not like I could totally write it anyway like a one shot or something because ILU LOOL

Tragic is my thing, actually. I'm a huge huge fan of EARN YOUR HAPPY ENDING X 50, I think I've mentioned. So my Alistair romance will be tragic a rough all around, my Tamlen one shot I keep thinking of writing will definitely be tragic....I loveee the idea. 

And yeah, on the length...I'm just horrible at writing short. I think 'this will only be like 300 words' then it ends up 1200. I like introspection a TON so any chance to analyze a characters mind is my ideal idea of romance.

Incidentally? I like how yours feels light hearted, it really makes them seem like such good friends. ;_; which is a tragic thing considering where it will end

[Sarah1281]

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6176431/1/ Here you go! /goes to read

Yours was so much sadder than mine. And twice as long as you said it was gong to be for that matter. It was just so tragic but I can see Anora handling an illicit attraction to the HNF that way. I like it.

Now I wish you'd have played the DN origin because I'm sure you could do an equally tragic DN/Gorim story.

Not like I could totally write it anyway like a one shot or something because ILU LOOL

Tragic is my thing, actually. I'm a huge huge fan of EARN YOUR HAPPY ENDING X 50, I think I've mentioned. So my Alistair romance will be tragic a rough all around, my Tamlen one shot I keep thinking of writing will definitely be tragic....I loveee the idea. 

And yeah, on the length...I'm just horrible at writing short. I think 'this will only be like 300 words' then it ends up 1200. I like introspection a TON so any chance to analyze a characters mind is my ideal idea of romance.

Incidentally? I like how yours feels light hearted, it really makes them seem like such good friends. ;_; which is a tragic thing considering where it will end

If you did I would love you forever.

I'm good with reading tragic things but when I try to write them half the time the characters insist on starting to banter which really takes away from the tragedy. I suppose that if you think of how things turn out (especially if Arden becomes Queen with Alistair) then looking back it adds the tragedy for you.

And I have difficulty being concise at times, too. I mean, my story has 8K chapters when I was initially planning on having them be 3K and getting through the origin in one chapter instead of three. Goes to show, I guess... 

Introspection is a lot of fun and I liked how you swithced between the two girls' POV so you could hear both sides of it.

[okiness]

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...

You! Put yours up already! Let's exchange them and squee?

Okay. Mine's here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6176431/1/ Here you go! /goes to read

Yours was so much sadder than mine. And twice as long as you said it was gong to be for that matter. It was just so tragic but I can see Anora handling an illicit attraction to the HNF that way. I like it.

Now I wish you'd have played the DN origin because I'm sure you could do an equally tragic DN/Gorim story.

Not like I could totally write it anyway like a one shot or something because ILU LOOL

Tragic is my thing, actually. I'm a huge huge fan of EARN YOUR HAPPY ENDING X 50, I think I've mentioned. So my Alistair romance will be tragic a rough all around, my Tamlen one shot I keep thinking of writing will definitely be tragic....I loveee the idea. 

And yeah, on the length...I'm just horrible at writing short. I think 'this will only be like 300 words' then it ends up 1200. I like introspection a TON so any chance to analyze a characters mind is my ideal idea of romance.

Incidentally? I like how yours feels light hearted, it really makes them seem like such good friends. ;_; which is a tragic thing considering where it will end

If you did I would love you forever.

I'm good with reading tragic things but when I try to write them half the time the characters insist on starting to banter which really takes away from the tragedy. I suppose that if you think of how things turn out (especially if Arden becomes Queen with Alistair) then looking back it adds the tragedy for you.

And I have difficulty being concise at times, too. I mean, my story has 8K chapters when I was initially planning on having them be 3K and getting through the origin in one chapter instead of three. Goes to show, I guess... 

Introspection is a lot of fun and I liked how you swithced between the two girls' POV so you could hear both sides of it.

 Consider it done, just remind me if I don't get it out soonish

Yeah, I'm a big fun on perspective and I think it's hard to show how deep a feeling or romance is with only one side unless the other side isn't being genuine and I don';t want the reader to know xD 

It's hard to make things short especially when I spend so much time making my characters argue with themselves in their heads.

You know what my biggest (moving to slgihtly OT) problem with the alistair romance was in my original draft for my HN? No conflict, just comfort comfort baam marriage. Now it's...more about growth and earned happiness. I'm enjoying it now xD 

Gotta say, glad to finally write something for Dragon Age. Oh, for the DN, do you want me to use someone else or just something I made up? I could go with Aunn if you want, but I don't want you to hate me if I don't do her justice XD

[Sarah1281]

okiness wrote...
 Consider it done, just remind me if I don't get it out soonish

Yeah, I'm a big fun on perspective and I think it's hard to show how deep a feeling or romance is with only one side unless the other side isn't being genuine and I don';t want the reader to know xD 

It's hard to make things short especially when I spend so much time making my characters argue with themselves in their heads.

You know what my biggest (moving to slgihtly OT) problem with the alistair romance was in my original draft for my HN? No conflict, just comfort comfort baam marriage. Now it's...more about growth and earned happiness. I'm enjoying it now xD 

Gotta say, glad to finally write something for Dragon Age. Oh, for the DN, do you want me to use someone else or just something I made up? I could go with Aunn if you want, but I don't want you to hate me if I don't do her justice XD

Will do. How soon is soonish? A month?

I try to pick one perspective and just stick with it but then, I usually don't write romance. My characters kind of do that, too. Seriously, one day I'll just have Alistair begging my EM Caunira to do the ritual with him instead of Morrigan and she's explaining why she can't and they won't shut up until I write it all down.

My first Alistair romance wasn't really like that since it didn't occur to me that you could harden him and I knew you could be Queen at the end so his refusal to commit to anything when I knew we'd be fine drove me crazy. Still, can't really blame him for lacking metagaming knoweldge, I gues...

Either one is fine, really. If you do Aunn the only things to really remeber is that she doesn't hate either of her siblings or being a Princess, she doesn't want to get married or have children as she thinks it would ruin her life although she feels she'll probably have to at some point because of duty, that she loves Gorim but knows it can't last, tries to be mature about their breakup, and would not, under any circumstances, risk being caught. Plenty of potential for tragedy right there.

[okiness]

Sarah1281 wrote...

okiness wrote...
 Consider it done, just remind me if I don't get it out soonish

Yeah, I'm a big fun on perspective and I think it's hard to show how deep a feeling or romance is with only one side unless the other side isn't being genuine and I don';t want the reader to know xD 

It's hard to make things short especially when I spend so much time making my characters argue with themselves in their heads.

You know what my biggest (moving to slgihtly OT) problem with the alistair romance was in my original draft for my HN? No conflict, just comfort comfort baam marriage. Now it's...more about growth and earned happiness. I'm enjoying it now xD 

Gotta say, glad to finally write something for Dragon Age. Oh, for the DN, do you want me to use someone else or just something I made up? I could go with Aunn if you want, but I don't want you to hate me if I don't do her justice XD

Will do. How soon is soonish? A month?

I try to pick one perspective and just stick with it but then, I usually don't write romance. My characters kind of do that, too. Seriously, one day I'll just have Alistair begging my EM Caunira to do the ritual with him instead of Morrigan and she's explaining why she can't and they won't shut up until I write it all down.

My first Alistair romance wasn't really like that since it didn't occur to me that you could harden him and I knew you could be Queen at the end so his refusal to commit to anything when I knew we'd be fine drove me crazy. Still, can't really blame him for lacking metagaming knoweldge, I gues...

Either one is fine, really. If you do Aunn the only things to really remeber is that she doesn't hate either of her siblings or being a Princess, she doesn't want to get married or have children as she thinks it would ruin her life although she feels she'll probably have to at some point because of duty, that she loves Gorim but knows it can't last, tries to be mature about their breakup, and would not, under any circumstances, risk being caught. Plenty of potential for tragedy right there.

Soonish for me is a few days, if this fic is any education. I can typically write 10,000 words in a day if I bust my ass (I could write a real novel in a month! hah!) 

   LOL! That will be funny! Poor Alistair, he and Morrigan are my favorites and they just don't mesh well. xD

  See forever I was like NO IT WILL RUIN HIM because the line of dialogue to initiate it...is not any of my characters. I think saying "You need to stick up for yourself or you'll never be happy" is a lot nicer, IC of more PCs, aand it would have the same effect. So that's how I'm going to write it :innocent: Then again the entire fic I wrote has my PC starting off the story not feeling emotions herself, so it's very long, tedious, lots of camp trips..oh the camp trips...I'm writing this fic as if I was on hard mode, so the trips will be necessary  

  See, that's how I'd like to write my DN, mostly, but if I used Aunn I'd feel like a jerk for stepping on your territory so I'll think on it! 

  I'd insert a screenshot but I'm not far enough in this playthrough, giggle

[Sandtigress]

Zyanic wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

The Mahariel kinkfest

@ Sandi
That is now what your fic will be forever known as in my head.

Also I don't think I've ever written smut, The thought of typing out certain things just makes me giggle. I've written some suggestive stuff but I don't think it really counts as smut.  I like to try and avoid graphic description  ( giggling again)

  lol But there's nothing kinky going on in it...I swear!!

[Sarah1281]

Sandtigress wrote...

Zyanic wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

The Mahariel kinkfest

@ Sandi
That is now what your fic will be forever known as in my head.

Also I don't think I've ever written smut, The thought of typing out certain things just makes me giggle. I've written some suggestive stuff but I don't think it really counts as smut.  I like to try and avoid graphic description  ( giggling again)

  lol But there's nothing kinky going on in it...I swear!!

I think the premise is kinky enough as is.

[Sandtigress]

Sarah1281 wrote...

Sandtigress wrote...

Zyanic wrote...

Addai67 wrote...

The Mahariel kinkfest

@ Sandi
That is now what your fic will be forever known as in my head.

Also I don't think I've ever written smut, The thought of typing out certain things just makes me giggle. I've written some suggestive stuff but I don't think it really counts as smut.  I like to try and avoid graphic description  ( giggling again)

  lol But there's nothing kinky going on in it...I swear!!

I think the premise is kinky enough as is.

But....but...it's not!!  

[SurelyForth]

Sandtigress wrote...

But....but...it's not!!  

It's creepy/kinky (crinky?) in theory, but not execution. 

[okiness]

I haven't read it, where would I find it? xD

[SurelyForth]

okiness wrote...

I haven't read it, where would I find it? xD

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